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Date: July 5, 2014 (8 years ago)


I had been standing outside the door for what felt like the longest time.The coward in me wanted to turn back and just leave, but I finally had the courage turned the key and went in.

It was like I never left.The apartment looked exactly the same.I basked in the familiarity of it all.Every nook and cranny reminded me of Him, of Me, of Us, and what used to be.With no warning, the tears that I have been holding for what seemed like forever flowed freely as memories rushed in.

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"I want to taste you!"I heard him say.He just got home from work.He held me in an embrace, and I felt his lips on my left shoulder.

"I thought you were hungry.The food's almost done."I smiled as I tell him.I love the feel of his arms around me.

"I am, but that can wait…I crave for something else."I feel his breath on my neck.He is in the mood.

"And what would that be?"I asked him.

"Your pussy juice."I heard him reply.To make his point clearer, his left hand traveled downwards and I felt him pinch my pussy.

"Oh that can be arranged!"I laughed and took his hand intently leading him out of the kitchen.

"Where are we going?"

"Bedroom.Didn't you just say…"

"Yes.Yes I did but we can do that here."He gave me that mischievous boyish grin of his.The kind

"Here?The kitchen?"I looked at him questioningly.He is kidding, right?

"Yes.The table looks inviting.You'd be delectable on it."

The idea of me lying on the table and him feasting on me sent shivers down my spine and excitement down my clit.

He moved a few things out of the way and helped me up the table.He helped me lie down and get comfortable.I felt the hardness of the table against my back.My butt was over the edge of the table with my feet dangling. He settled between me and sat on his usual chair.

He parted my legs.He fumbled with undoing the ribbons of the panties I was wearing and managed to get that out of the way too.I saw him smile when he saw how wet I was.

"All for me."I heard him say."All mine."And I felt him flick his tongue on my clit.

"Ohhhhh!!"What's a girl to do but moan?

I felt a finger go inside me, teasing my pussy walls, penetrating me slowly while his tongue continued its flicking tease on my clit.

And one finger became two.Deep it went.I felt it go deep inside me.

"I want you wetter.I want your juices overflowing when I put my mouth on you, slide my tongue inside you, and fuck you with my tongue."

"Oh honey…please…"My breath became shallow.I swear I could see spots lights dance in front of my eyes.The anticipation of having his mouth really on me, to have his tongue deep inside me is killing me.I was literally begging him.Those teasing fingers – they are driving me crazy!

An eternity seemed to pass before I felt his mouth make contact.He traced my pussy lips with just his lips.I fisted my hands and dug my heels into the table and pushed my hips up.Damn this guy!Damn him for knowing exactly what I wanted and how I wanted it.

He ran his tongue against my pussy lips.He went back to my clit and sucked it harder this time.

"Oh god,"I groaned, raggedly breathing."God Jace, I am so-"

The sensations he is creating with my clit on his mouth is sending me near the edge.So close to that explosive moment.

He lapped at my pussy and I creamed for him.I trashed on the table and my back arched.He ate me deeper, drove his tongue into my wet cunt until I screamed his name as I fell over the edge of orgasm.

I tried to push him away.The sensation was just too much for me to handle but he wouldn't have any of that.I felt him bit down on my clit – not too hard but enough to keep me motionless and breathless.

He gave my cunt one last lick and then smiled as he stood straight up and looked down at me."Now let's have dinner."

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Too many memories. How do you get away from them?

I went inside our bedroom. The room smelled faintly of his cologne. I noted his watch on the side table and smiled. How natural of him to forget! Of course, I wasn't around to remind him of stuff he has a habit of forgetting.

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He just came out of the shower when I entered the bedroom. With just a towel wrapped around his waist, he was standing in front of the closet picking out what to wear.

"Babe, I already had your work clothes prepared. It's in the other closet. Tie is there too and your socks."

He turned and gave me a big grin. "Thank you, Babe."

I sat on the edge of the bed and watched him. God, he's still sexy as ever! I watched as he unraveled the towel from his waist and revealed his butt. My nipples harden at the sight of his muscled buns. This man's a walking sex object. He turned sideways then as if giving me a faint view of his cock. I bit my lip and saw a playful grin flash on his face. "Perv. Stop ogling me."

"Well can I help it if my guy's hot and sexy and oozing with sex appeal?"

He laughed a rich laugh. "Stop that."

"Stop what?" I challenged him. The robe that I was wearing now parted at the top and the swell of my breasts showing. Without breaking eye contact I slowly placed my right hand inside my robe and gave my nipple a pinch. I groaned and closed my eyes. "Ummnn.. I'm not doing anything to you."

"You're such a tease." I heard him say. I opened my eyes slowly. He was facing me now. His cock jutting out – it was as if his cock was asking me to give it a lick. I licked my lips. I want to taste him. I want his cum in my mouth.

He must've known what I wanted because he tilted my chin up, just enough that my mouth was positioned just a few centimeters near his cockhead. Oh he is such a tease! He was staring down at me with a challenging look on his face, daring me to take that cock in my mouth and suck it. And he knew I would give in.

I leaned a bit closer, not breaking our eye contact, and flicked my tongue over his cockhead and noted its wetness. His precum. "Ohhhh.." I heard his low moan as I saw him close his eyes. I knew he liked what I did.

He tasted sweet. I sucked the head of his cock wanting to take all of his precum in my mouth. "Oh yes Babe… That's it… You know just what to do to please me."

I opened my mouth wide and he knew just what to do. He surged inside in one swift move – all of his cock inside and nearly choking me with his haste but I began to move and let his cock slide in and out of my mouth. One hand tightened around the base while I used the other one to explore his sac. He was panting. I noted how he was holding my hair now. I continued my play. I let his cock pop out of my mouth and I started to run my lips all over its length. I ran the tip of my tongue over his balls before I sucked one into my mouth. I heard him let out a string of curses and he grabbed my shoulders.

"Enough." He sounded breathless.

"You seriously want to stop?" I asked him. I noted I was as breathless as he was.

He laughed. "You tease!"

He sat on the edge of the bed and he pulled me over him until I was straddling his hips. His cock slid effortlessly inside my wet opening. We both sighed and shuddered at the pleasure of it. I grinned.

"I wasn't done." I told him.

"I was nearly over the edge. You're such a tease Babe."

And then he was kissing me, effectively clearing my mind of anything I wanted to say. I felt his hands everywhere on my skin. The next thing I know I was under him. He moved too fast. He held my legs up and positioned it over his shoulders. Deep, I knew he wanted it deep. And he knew just how that drove me crazy. He started to thrust – slowly, deeply, precisely enough to drive me mad.

I was panting, begging incoherently. "Please… oh please… I want… I need…"

"What do you want Babe?"

"Fuck me."

"I am fucking you."

I was so close. I needed more.

"Hard… Fast… I want it hard… fast… and deep…" I was gasping for air.

I didn't have to tell him again. He knew I was close. He did just what I asked. I felt his teeth on my shoulders as he quickened his pace just enough to bring me close to the edge. I cried out in pleasure.

He gripped my legs with both of his hands. I heard him groan out aloud as he came in one deep final thrust.

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I noticed the faint dent on the wall and remembered. Our last fight – the fight we had a few weeks ago. I remembered throwing something at him out of frustration. He ducked and the vase hit the wall instead. It wasn't the first fight we've had that week. Come to think of it, I have already forgotten what we were fighting about. It's the littlest of things; molehills that had been exaggeratedly turned into mountains.

Maybe all is not lost. Maybe we can still be saved. Maybe…

Out of the corner of my eye, I saw a post-it note on the side table and recognized my handwriting on it.

"Jace,

Dinner reservations. You know where. 6 PM.

I love you. R."

Our anniversary. Today's our anniversary. It would've been our 3rd year of marriage – if we are still together, that is. I made the reservations 3 months ago. It was our favorite restaurant – first date, his proposal, first year anniversary – almost every special occasion we celebrated as a couple we did there.

I checked my watch. It's 4:30 PM. Knowing how particular Jace is with time, I know he would be there by 5:30. If I hurry, I can be there before 6 PM. I stripped down and headed to the shower.

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February 14, 2008

"Babe...I need to make a call.I'll be right back."Jace whispered in my ear.I smiled at him and nodded.He kissed me on the forehead before he stood up and left.

We were having our annual Valentine's Day "party" with a couple of friends in an acoustic bar.Tara, my closest female friend in the group was sitting beside me with her husband Norm.She was glowing, as most pregnant women do.

"How far along are you?"I asked Tara.

"Nearly three months.I am so excited!"Tara smiled and I reached for her hand and squeezed it.

"You, my friend, are going to be one great mom."I told her.

Norm and three other male friends excused themselves from the group.

"Where are the guys going?"I asked Tara.

Before Tara could answer the lights in the bar dimmed.

"Performance night."I heard one of our girlfriends say and she winked at me.

"Good evening everyone."A deep nervous voice I recognize said over the microphone.

"Jace??!"He was on the stage with the guys."What are they doing?"I asked loudly.The girls just smiled at me.

"Oh my god."Jace.He was on the stage.Is he going to sing?He doesn't sing in public.In fact, he never sang in public.

"This is for you, Rein."He looked my way and grinned sheepishly.

And I heard the familiar opening strains of the song.

"It's her hair and her eyes today
that just simply take me away
and the feeling that I'm falling further in love
makes me shiver but in a good way"

My heart just skipped a beat.I was in awe.My guy.My song.That's my guy singing my song.He knew just how I loved this song.There was one time a few months ago when we were lying next to each other, and he thought I was asleep.He kissed me on the forehead and sang me this song.I pretended I was asleep then and just listened to him – my heart overflowing with emotions.The feeling that I had then was just as intense as the feeling that I am having now.

The girls were teasing me.I can't even hear what they were saying.All I could hear is Jace – my Jace.

"It's a masterful melody when she calls out my name to me
as the world spins around her she laughs, rolls her eyes
and I feel like I'm falling but it's no surprise
"

"Rein!"I heard Deb say."You have to go onstage."

"Yes!"Another friend piped in."Let's get her onstage!"

"What?"I looked at them as they all stood up.I heard Tara laugh."Come on you lucky girl…"She said as she helped me up.

"I can't go on stage!"

"But you have to, Re...

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inang.grasya
July 5, 2014 (8 years ago)

Kumpleto rekados. More stories DDD.

Amazona kung tagurian pero malambing naman.

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dropdeaddiva
July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

Thank you for reading and for commenting, Inang. More stories to cum in the near future. :)

Let there be pleasure on earth and let it begin with me.

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July 5, 2014 (8 years ago)

Ayyy tumulo luha ko dito :(

I remember a Thai music video that really fits the story... Hindi rin aware ang girl na namatay pala sya nung naaksidente sila ng hubby nya.  Nagtaka nalang sya kung bakit di rin sya nakikita nito nung magkaharap sila sa dinner table in their anniv din ata.  Then napansin nya yong reflection sa mirror, hubby lang nya ang nakikita nya. Right there, naalala nya yong aksidente :( ... Tragic :(

It’s okay if you don’t like me. I was not born to impress you.

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dropdeaddiva
July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

I like things tragic. While a part of me still believes in happy endings, there's this other part of me that craves for tragedy. Plus tragedies are more challenging to write. :D

The idea of this story actually came from a scene from The Sixth Sense. I dunno if you watched that movie.

Let there be pleasure on earth and let it begin with me.

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July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

Yep but that was ages ago I could hardly remember the scenes :D

I'll try to search for that Thai mtv and will post it here for you :)

It’s okay if you don’t like me. I was not born to impress you.

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July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

I was just about to ask you kung anong Thai MTV yun. Haha. I wanna watch it sana.

The scene I was talking about was one of Bruce Willis' character and his wife sa movie.

Let there be pleasure on earth and let it begin with me.

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July 5, 2014 (8 years ago)

Naalala ko yung pinost kong story dito with the same theme, kaso pangit yun kumpara dito sa story  mo,  Ate DDD. You really are a great writer. Kudos with this one! :)

They said my head is big. I asked them back, "Which HEAD?"

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July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

Thanks Sci! Anong title nung story mo? Makikibasa din ako. Or hanapin ko na lang after ko magcomment dito. :)

Let there be pleasure on earth and let it begin with me.

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July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

Walang steamy parts dun. Nyahaha. I based my writings mostly on experience...

They said my head is big. I asked them back, "Which HEAD?"

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Mr.M
July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

Whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!Papaabutin mo sa rurok nang ligaya at saka saya.Tapos...(hibik!)ending matitigok?You're such a heart breaker with this one.But it's good.Really good!

Minsan na namatay pero muli nabuhay

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dropdeaddiva
July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

Thanks Mr. M. You didn't see that coming, didn't you? Haha. This is actually one of my favorites sa mga sinulat ko. Experimental lang. Next time, I want more gore. :)

Let there be pleasure on earth and let it begin with me.

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Mr.M
July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

As in ala Stephen King?Ok,hiw about a collaboration of a story.

Minsan na namatay pero muli nabuhay

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dropdeaddiva
July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

Or Edgar Allan Poe. :D

A collab! Wow... Sige that's something worth discussing. :D Teka... If tagalog, mahihirapan ako. Haha.

Let there be pleasure on earth and let it begin with me.

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Mr.M
July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

The macabe....hmmmm...Sex and death.Like the way of the black widow or of the Praying Mantis who eat their male partners.Though it is a sad fact that is their way in continuing their kind.Sure 3D lets talk and see what story we 2 might just weave and draw in the readers of FSS in another level of tickling their wits in reading.

Minsan na namatay pero muli nabuhay

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dropdeaddiva
July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

Yes, yes, and yes. Sex and death. That is one deadly erotic combination. Pun intended. Me likey! I am definitely looking forward to this.

Let there be pleasure on earth and let it begin with me.

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July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

Daming emotion.. galing talaga, ms DDD.

Life's short. Have fun.

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dropdeaddiva
July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

Thanks Ms. Bella. I remember having a friend read this piece and after he read it he said and I quote, "Four words - a smorgasbord of emotions."

Let there be pleasure on earth and let it begin with me.

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July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

hello all sino couple dito pede ako for 3some sagot ko gastos ,male here..pm nyo ko calabarzon area

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antoinette
July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

Ang galing ng pagkasulat...!!! Pero bakit mo pinatay! huwaaaa!!!!  Gusto ko itanong if 'I love you' nga ba yong mga last words ng isang mamatay na.  Probably love would be the last feeling that a dying person would have.  Inisip ko lang pagmalalapit na mamatay... there is no fight anymore... love is an emotion that makes people want to live and fight for.

i wanna run to you... ohhhh

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July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

Hi Ms. Antoinette! :)

You asked if "i love you" ba yung words ng isang taong mamamatay na. I think it depends kung ano yung mga last few thoughts nila and yung situation itself be it a peaceful death, a suicide, or one stemmed from a tragedy or an accident.

I lost both my parents to Yolanda early November last year. I was trying to call them nung morning na yun to check how they were. My call never came through. And I have been dying to know what happened to them minutes before Yolanda struck, you know? I could only assume the best and the worst.

But I got my answer when one of my brothers got to talk to a cousin who was with my parents when it happened. The seawater had gotten inside of our two-storey house. My parents were hugging each other tight. My dad was trying to calm my mom down and my mom was crying and calling out our names. That was their last few minutes.

Let there be pleasure on earth and let it begin with me.

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July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

:-(

Life's short. Have fun.

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antoinette
July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

Ohh DDD.. i am sorry for your loss.  It must have been hard.  Tulo luha ko.  Mahirap ma-contact yong place na yan on the day of Yolanda.. To learn that the person you love are gone... that is difficult.... i cannot imagine that... i think i will also die if my parents die. If only we can give a part of our lives so they can give longer...

I don't know you as a writer.. but I am beginning to like your work.  Welcome to FSS...

i wanna run to you... ohhhh

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July 7, 2014 (8 years ago)

Hi Ms. Antoinette. It had been hard. It still is. Losing a parent is bad enough. Losing both is twice the hurt and the pain. It's still a struggle. I'm glad I have a good support system.

You just have to spend the most of what you can with your parents and make memories.

Thank you sa warm welcome. :)

Let there be pleasure on earth and let it begin with me.

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dropdeaddiva
July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

Everything happened so fast, my cousin claimed. One minute the water was waist-level, the next minute she was almost drowning. I just hoped death was quick for my parents and their suffering  mere seconds.

I have read somewhere that in those last few moments before dying, your whole life flashes in your mind like a slideshow of sorts. I don't know if it's true though. But that definitely makes sense to me.

Let there be pleasure on earth and let it begin with me.

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daffodil
July 7, 2014 (8 years ago)

I've always hated tragic stories, and deaths. As much as possible, ayoko binabasa. But I got hooked, first lines pa lang. And I must say, you are really a very good writer miss Ddd. Salamat sa pagkurot sa puso, at pati na rin sa puson. Hope to read more and more and many more from you!! :))

"I prefer to be crazy and happy rather than normal and bitter" -Paulo Coelho

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July 7, 2014 (8 years ago)

I am glad to know you liked this piece, Daff. Next time, gagawin ko nang happy ending. Promise. :D

Let there be pleasure on earth and let it begin with me.

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jason_the_jackal
July 7, 2014 (8 years ago)

Magnum Opus.

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dropdeaddiva
July 7, 2014 (8 years ago)

JTJ, I had to google what this meant. Haha.. Akala ko new flavor ng Magnum ice cream. Thank you, my friend. Your works along with the other writers before me have been such an inspiration.

Let there be pleasure on earth and let it begin with me.

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Bebeko
July 7, 2014 (8 years ago)

Very sad. I felt it.

"You learn nothing from life if you think you're right all the time." - Prof. Richard Feynman

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dropdeaddiva
July 8, 2014 (8 years ago)

Thank you Sir Bebe.

Let there be pleasure on earth and let it begin with me.

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Shymalandi
March 24, 2017 (5 years ago)

DDD!!!
Wow! I did not expect the ending.
Bravo!

Kamusta my friend?
Sorry at nagMIA ako for a couple of years
Miss you much
*hugs*

To love is a decision.

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