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The Last Song Syndrome

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Story: True Story, Tagalog · Categories: Romance · Tags:
Date: August 19, 2014 (8 years ago)


(Wanna feel the pleasure while reading? Relax your mind. Take your time, read it slowly. Do not skip lines, understand the plot. Use your imagination. Get your senses involved. Try to feel what those characters felt, to see what they saw.)

"The Last Song Syndrome"
by: Fiction-Factory

--I remember the days when you're here with me,
those laughter and tears we shared for years,
memories that we have for so long just you and me,
but now you're gone away and left me all alone.--

Be known that a man's tears ought to be hid somewhere depth in the heart, for it's not easy to flaunt something which is obviously a distraction.
Falling in love is not an easy task while being departed is the only way to get out. Escaped from the fate of pain. Untill he swim-drunk in a glass of sorrowed wine, but still shut and drownin' in silence.
No other man nor a woman could totally understand why the feeling has gone, only a certain dull-consideration of a bit judgemental eyes could see the appearance of a fully broken-soul'd man.

The name is Will.
The first time I saw her was like a magical land of fairytales, the next glance was most-alike hell disaster era.
I truly love her, I know she loves me, saying love is all that matters, but sometimes love just ain't enough.
But I still love her!

Walang-wala sa isip ko nang tapikin ni Jack ang balikat ko para ituro ang isang babaeng nakaupo sa isang bench-park sa harapan ng Simbahan dito sa amin. Nakatayo kami sa parteng gilid, sa madilim na gate kasama ang ibang barkada.

"Pare, tignan mo yung chicks! Ang ganda diba?"
nakangiting sambit nya.

Paglingon ko isang babaeng maganda nga ang nakita ko. Isang tipo ng sosyal, na ni minsan hindi ko natipuhan.

"Oo nga noh! Lapitan mo na!"
sagot ko nalang.

Napansin kong may isang babae na naman ang lumapit sa babaeng 'yon, atsaka umupo sa tabi nito.
Sya ngayon ang babaeng kumuha ng atensyon ko. Ang itim nyang buhok na parang kaylambot haplosin, angelic face ngunit mala-diwata ang kagandahan, samahan pa ng balingkinitang pangangatawan.

"Teka Pare! Ako'ng babanat!"
pagyayabang ko kay Jack at ang puntirya ko ay ang kasama ng itinuro nya.

Hindi ko alam kung bakit bigla kong nasabi 'yon, gayung saksakan ako ng eprot at ang mga daga sa dibdib ko tunay na nagsisiksikan.
Lakas-loob ko silang linapitan, at isang tipikal na banat ang aking binira.

"Miss, pwede bang magpakilala?"

At tulad ng inaasahan ko, hindi nya ako pinansin! Shit! Deadma! Shy-to-death ang inabot ko pagbalik ko sa barkada sa tindi ng kanilang hiyawan at tawanan.

Hindi ako nawalan ng pag-asa, na-challenge ako ng babaeng 'yon! Hanggang sa prosisyon ng Patron sinundan namin sila. Ang dalawang babaeng 'yon na pumukaw sa amin ni Jack. Ang prob...

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I dreamt of being a published writer of inspirational and motivational stories, cause I want to inspire those who have physical disabilities and less fortunate people whom are downhearted. I want to bring hope into their hearts and I want them to see a beautiful world that's full of dreams.I also want to share my thoughts about unconditional love, life's regrets and marital failures through Erotic stories. I may not change your world, but I wish, with my simple works, i've touched your hearts.
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somebodyuused2know
August 20, 2014 (8 years ago)

Hmmm, malapit na kita putulan ng antenna Plankton! Alam ko spin off to ng story mo na Grace, but you didn't tell me na putol din to. Lakas mambitin lang talaga oo!

Aymisyu Plankton. Just keep in touch, alam ko you're doing something that you really want to do. And Im sure it would also be a blast. Way to go, you got my support. Hugs.

I'M A NICE PERSON. JUST DON'T PRESS THE BITCH BUTTON.

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Fiction-Factory
August 20, 2014 (8 years ago)

Wow! Nawindang ako sa comment ko! I did'nt expect na ang isang tulad mo na tinawag akong 'bastush' at 'unsavoury image' sa kauna-unahang pagkakataon sa buong talambuhay ko, maririnig ang mga yan. Hehe maraming salamat sa pagtyatyaga sa'kin. Konti na lang, mahal na talaga kita! Kabit nga lang sa isa't-isa ^_^

To be honest, i'm a liar. ♥♞♬♂⚄☜†∇

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somebodyuused2know
August 20, 2014 (8 years ago)

Hahaha kaadikan mo! At hoy sinabi mo na nga love mo ko, ibig sabihin lie yun? Tsk, putol antenn talaga hanap mo. :-))

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Fiction-Factory
August 20, 2014 (8 years ago)

*comment mo :D

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inang.grasya
August 20, 2014 (8 years ago)

Hoyyyyyyyyyy

Amazona kung tagurian pero malambing naman.

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somebodyuused2know
August 20, 2014 (8 years ago)

Hahaha inang taksil yang si Plankton eh. Pag ikaw kausap sayo lakas tama. Pero dami naman binubulungan. :-))

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