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The Fiancé 5

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Story: Fiction, Taglish · Categories: BDSM, Erotic Couplings, Romance · Tags: ,
Date: August 21, 2014 (8 years ago)


"Akala ko fetish mo lang yung itinali mo ko sa kama using my panty when we first made love. But now you're using real handcuffs. Don't get offended but, do you practice BDSM with other girls?"
Hindi nakasagot si JC. He didn't expect that Aimee would ask him such question. Wala siyang planong sabihin dito ang tungkol sa BDSM practices niya. Nakaunan pa rin ito sa braso niya ngayon, looking so innocent yet so fucking sexy. Her chinky eyes are just looking at him, as if waiting for him to respond.

"Babe," wala siyang ibang masabi.

Aimee's facial expression went blank. He knows she's disappointed. Tumayo ito at nagbihis. Napatayo na rin siya at niyakap ito. He doesn't want her to get mad at him. Kumuwala ito sa yakap niya.

"Aims..."

"I just want you to be honest with me. That's all. That's the least thing I could expect from you. I'm not stupid to expect that you love me. We're trapped in this fixed marriage. Might as well expect mutual trust and respect from each other para naman magwork ang relationship na `to."

Hindi siya nakapagsalita. He's trying to assess kung tama ba na malaman nito ang lahat. Paano pag nalaman na nito na ganun nga siya at bigla itong mag-back out sa kasal nila?

Nakapagbihis na si Aimee. Nakatingin lang ito sa kanya. Napapailing. Laughing sarcastically. "I'll go ahead. Call me up if may gusto kang sabihin sa`kin."


Aimee felt betrayed. Alam niya naman na hindi siya dapat mag expect na maging open sa kanya si JC. But she was kinda hoping that he would be, since she felt the connection between them.

Connection? You're so stupid, Aimee!

Nagmamadali siya umuwi. She got her bag and hastily headed towards the door. Alam niyang hindi siya mahahabol ni JC sapagkat hindi pa ito nakabihis. She's going down and the elevator door started to close when suddenly, a man stuck his hand to prevent the door from closing. It was JC. He went in and stood beside her. Hinawakan nito ang kamay niya at hinalikan siya.

The nerve!

She doesn't want to create a scene because they were not the only ones inside the elevator. May kasabay silang mag asawa na sa tingin niya ay nasa mid-40s. Nang makalabas na sila ng elevator, inalis niya ang kamay nito sa baywang niya. She then kindly asked the security guard to get her a taxi.

"No need," sabi nito sa guard. "Ihahatid na kita," he said when he turned and faced her.

"Don't you get it? I don't wanna talk to you right now. So, please leave me alone."

"I'll tell you everything," he said in a low voice.

Pumayag nalang siya. Kawawa rin kasi itong tingnan. They went to a high end Japanese restaurant where they could dine in a separate and secluded room. Ang dami nitong inorder pero wala siyang gana. Gusto niya lang malaman ang totoo.

"`Di ka ba kakain?" tanong nito.

She just stared at him.

"Okay," he cleared his throat. "Yung handcuffs, wala lang yun compared sa mga sex toys na nasa kwarto ko," he confessed.

Matagal bago nag-register sa utak niya ang sinabi nito. Nanghina siya. She's quite sure that he practices BDSM pero iba pala talaga kung sa bibig na mismo nito nanggaling ang katotohanan.

"Ayaw mo na sa`kin?" he asked while looking at her intently.

Hindi siya nakasagot. Nakatitig lang siya sa sushi sa harap niya at nilalaro ang kanyang chopstick.

"Aimee…" hinawakan nito ang kamay niya. For them, it's a disgrace to play with chopsticks while eating.

When she gained back her composure, he looked at him and said, "No problem with me. Basta from now on, you practice it with me and not with other women."

"Pero, babe…"

"Take it or else hindi ako magpapakasal sa`yo."

Okay lang naman sa kanya na mahilig ito sa BDSM or sexual roleplays basta wag lang sumobra, to the point na macocompromise na ang safety nila.

"No hanky panky with other girls, copy Mr. Yu?"

"Copy, Mrs. Yu." Napangiti ito.

She started eating as if disregarding what they've just talked about.


She's one heck of a woman. Sa isip ni JC.

Nung hinabol niya ito sa elevator, tinanggap niya na sa sarili niya na kung sasabihin niya ang totoo kay Aimee, baka mag-back out ito sa kasal nila. Malaking problema yun. Patay siya sa mga magulang niya. Ngunit hindi siya nag-expect na maiintindihan nito ang sitwasyon niya.

Two days before her birthday ay mainit na ang ulo ni JC. Wala kasi siyang maisip na regalo o sorpresa para sa birthday nito. He thought of bags, shoes, dresses but he doubts that Aimee would appreciate it. He saw her walk-in closet and he doesn't think she needs an addition to her collection. Candlelit dinner, perhaps? Nah. Cheesy. Hindi pa nga siya nag "I love you" rito. Beach? He's not a beach bum and so is Aimee.

Nabulabog ang pag-iisip niya nang pumasok sa office niya ang secretary niyang si Marie at sinabing, "Boss, may client sa labas. Nagrerequest if pwede ipasara ang Index this Friday . Para raw po sa birthday party ng fiancee niya. Magbabayad daw po kahit magkano."

He owns Index. It's an exclusive bar/club which caters to the party cravings of yuppies like him. It's got the best bartenders and disc jockeys. In fact he invites international DJs once a month para humatak ng customers.

Napangisi siya. Sorry `tol, maaagawan ka talaga ng brilliant idea.

"Marie, sabihin mo sa client na booked na tayo this Friday." And he felt so ecstatic.


Friday came and he's so excited because it's Aimee's birthday. He made sure that all of her friends were invited for the surprise party that he prepared. Mamayang hapon susunduin niya ito sa school. Sinabihan niya ito na kakain sila sa isang restaurant para i-celebrate ang birthday nito.

At 4pm, he picked her up at school. She requested that they go home first para makapagpalit daw ito ng damit. When they arrived at her place, she headed straight to her room at naiwan siya sa sala kasama ang mga magulang nito. They knew about his surprise for Aimee and supportive naman ang mga ito. They already had lunch with her earlier to celebrate her birthday. He turned and faced the stairs when he heard Aimee's footsteps. She looks so stunning. She's wearing a tight red dress and high heeled pumps. Nakaponytail ang itim at tuwid na tuwid na buhok nito which, in Chinese, means that she's ready to be submissive. Hindi niya alam kung anong nararamdaman niya. She looks so beautiful. He wants to kiss her right there and then but her parents are around.

"Let's go," sabi ni Aimee.

Nagpaalam na sila. They went to Index rightaway. Before they got out of the car, Aimee complained.

"Akala ko ba magdi-dinner tayo? Naka-condition ang utak ko na kakain tayo ha? Gutom pa naman ako," she pouted.

Naalarma siya. "You don't like it here, babe?" He guided her as they entered the club. "May pagkain naman. Magpapaluto tayo."

She pouted again.

"Kagatin kita," pananakot niya. "Sige na, pasok na," he kissed her lips.

Madilim ang loob ng club. Maingay. The music's loud and everyone seems to be having fun. He held her hand and guided her papunta sa baba ng stage. Nakita sila ng bestfriend nito na si Chin and she announced their arrival.

"Let us all welcome, the birthday girl, my bestfriend, Aimee Chua!" it was the followed by screams and loud music. He urged Aimee to go up on stage. Halatang clueless ito sa mga nangyayari. Pero hindi ito spoilsport kaya umakyat agad ito sa stage at niyakap ang bestfriend nito.

"May we request JC Yu to come up on stage," announce ni Chin.

He went up. Hinawakan niya sa baywang si Aimee.

"So, what's your birthday wish for Aimee?"...

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August 21, 2014 (8 years ago)

JC, JC, akin ka na lang...

In utter loneliness, I tried so hard to explain the inexplicable.

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August 21, 2014 (8 years ago)

Chi Diyosa! :)) Bilis magcomment. Di mo naman yata binasa eh. Hmmp. Haha :D Share mo si JC sa iba ha? ;)

xoxo,
shobe♥

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August 21, 2014 (8 years ago)

Mabilis akong magbasa noh? Si JC yan eh. Hahahaha. Fantasy ko rin yang BDSM pero ako yung dominant. Hahaha.

In utter loneliness, I tried so hard to explain the inexplicable.

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shobe.sheen
August 22, 2014 (8 years ago)

Nag-skip reading ka noh and you jumped to the BDSM part? Haha kidding. Mwah thanks for dropping by Chi D!

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August 21, 2014 (8 years ago)

Nice... this is indeed, a twist from the popular stories of fixed marriages... oo nga naman, if wala pang love sa umpisa, pwede ngang may libog naman... pero, revelation na ba ang part na ito? Hehe, yoko maging spoiler, but mas looking forward na ako sa next page, shobe...
(Too much info: actually, out of curiosity, I'm just reading 50 Shades of Grey now; but, if ever your story unfolds in the same theme, special pa rin itong story mo, coz mas ramdam ko ito dahil gawang pinoy, lol).... hugs

"The erotic is rarely nudity. It is subtle, a feeling, a gesture, mood, a story frozen in the moment that holds you breathless waiting for the next moment. Understand this & you understand erotic."

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August 22, 2014 (8 years ago)

Chi TPM, this won't be a 50shades rehash (wow defensive lang?haha) but seriously the BDSM aspect of this story is not justified through the childhood/teenage experiences of the male character just like 50shades. In JC's case, BDSM is just merely a lifestyle and not a product of any psychoanalytic/psychosexual flaw.

xoxo,
shobe

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August 22, 2014 (8 years ago)

ah, i guess, i cannot further comment about the book, hehe nasa chapter five pa lang ako e... but, sorry, i didn't mean to compare or meant that way haha, nasa positive pa rin ako... and you really have my 'thumbs up' for such a good story here...

"The erotic is rarely nudity. It is subtle, a feeling, a gesture, mood, a story frozen in the moment that holds you breathless waiting for the next moment. Understand this & you understand erotic."

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August 22, 2014 (8 years ago)

No biggie, Chi. Hugs! ;)

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August 21, 2014 (8 years ago)

Made me wish I were Aimee. Super like ko ang story mo. Thanks and more stories po sana. :-)

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August 22, 2014 (8 years ago)

Thank you po! ;)

xoxo,
shobe

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August 22, 2014 (8 years ago)

Glad you liked it! :*

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August 21, 2014 (8 years ago)

Whoa, the best part so far. Naimagine ko ang eksena while she was chained and was being eaten, ang hottt!  Move over EL James and Anne Rice! :-D

I'M A NICE PERSON. JUST DON'T PRESS THE BITCH BUTTON.

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August 22, 2014 (8 years ago)

So, u like chains??

"You learn nothing from life if you think you're right all the time." - Prof. Richard Feynman

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August 22, 2014 (8 years ago)

LOL! Don't put me on the spot Diesel. :-))

I'M A NICE PERSON. JUST DON'T PRESS THE BITCH BUTTON.

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August 22, 2014 (8 years ago)

Thanks so muchie much much, my ever supportive Jiejie! Happy that you liked it. Mwah!

xoxo,
meimei

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August 22, 2014 (8 years ago)

Shoobs pinainit mo umaga ko. Bed weather pa naman.

Next chapter na. :D

Amazona kung tagurian pero malambing naman.

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August 22, 2014 (8 years ago)

Weehhhhh lagi ka namang mainit hahahaha

"You learn nothing from life if you think you're right all the time." - Prof. Richard Feynman

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August 22, 2014 (8 years ago)

Just snuggle beneath the sheets, Fairy godmother! ;) hehe

xoxo,
shobe

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August 22, 2014 (8 years ago)

I like this!!! :D

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August 22, 2014 (8 years ago)

Glad you liked it, Sir! :)

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August 22, 2014 (8 years ago)

magaling ka magsulat, ayaw kogn isipin na yung idea at plot nito ay base sa book, kaya lang may mga eksena talaga na napapatugma silang dalawa, sa tingin ko sa galign ng flow ng panulat hindi mo na nid ang 50 shades.

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shobe.sheen
August 22, 2014 (8 years ago)

Actually, Sir, i've just decided to incorporate BDSM when i was already writing the second part. And honestly, i'm doing my best to steer clear from 50shades. I hope i managed to do achieve that. :(

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edvvin
August 23, 2014 (8 years ago)

Parang Christian Grey lang ang peg

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shobe.sheen
August 23, 2014 (8 years ago)

Yeah but just on the BDSM aspect and not on the entire personality per se. ;)

Xoxo,
Shobe

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August 23, 2014 (8 years ago)

nice story!!! mam... u r good

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August 23, 2014 (8 years ago)

Glad you liked it. Thanks for the appreciation, Sir! :)

Xoxo,
Shobe

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shobe.sheen
October 27, 2014 (7 years ago)

At gumana rin ang utak ni shobe. Haha :))

UPDATE:

Part 6 of "The Fiance" is already posted. Enjoy reading! *wink*

shobe♥

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