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Jade's Theme. . . Conclusion

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Date: September 22, 2014 (8 years ago)


Napatayo ako sa narinig ko.

Me :
Julianna Amanda Dy Eulogio! If you're practicing your comedic skills,let me tell you this,you're so off the target. I am not laughing.

Jade: Chill! Chill! Nagbibiro lang. *Tumayo siya sa couch, sabay gaya sa drama ni Chichay*
Sorry po!

Sa totoo lang, nag-iinit yung buong katawan ko sa bwiset sa kanya ng sandaling yun. Sarap unatin at i-digiperm yung buhok ng paulit-ulit. She probably realized how furious I was dahil nakita kokung paanong nagrehistro sa mukha niya yung takot at worry.

Jade: Sorry... seryoso, sorry talaga. *bumaba siya sa upuan, sabay yakap sa akin*

Hindi ako nagsalita. Kinakalma ko yung sarili ko. Ayaw kong may masabi o magawang pagsisihan ko. I think I counted twenty sheeps, no i think reached counting to fifty fucking sheeps bago ko nakarecover.

Jade : Okay ka na? Bes, sorry.

Me: Okay na ko, pero utang na loob kapatid, wag mo na ulit pagtangkaan hawakan hello kitty ko. Hindi yan para sa babae. Lalong hindi para sa iyo.

Jade: Sure? Di nga. Grabe ka, kung ditalaga yan para sa babae, atlalong hindi para sa akin, bakit ang stiff stiffpa rin aber? Paki-explain in details...And correction, its far from being a hello kitty right now. More like an angry bird, yung red.And a very angry one.

Saka ko napansin na may point si bakla.

Me: Leche ka, lumayo-layo ka nga sa akin. *sabay alis ko sapagkakayapos niya*

Jade: Hahahaha! Umamin ka nga sa akin,all these years, nagpepretend ka lang na juding noh? Para mapalapit ka sa akin!Confess!

Me:Anong inorder mo sa bar na iyon at ganyan ang epekto sapersonality mo teh? Shit ka ha. Minolestya mo na ko at lahat, kinukuwestyon mo pa ngayon ang pagsapi ko sa federacion. Let me remind you na ikaw ang lumapit sa akin dati. You made the first move.*i confidently said with matching cross arms and taas kilay*

Jade : Wow!Ang kapal mo ha.

Me: Ikaw ang umamin ngayon. May gusto ka sa akin eversince you laid eyes on me. Kung hindi mo lang nakitayung hubad na poster ni Tom Cruise sa kuwarto ko, hindi mo pa titigilan ang pagpapantasya sa akin...Oh you little bitch! You worked your way to be close to meso you cantake advantage of my oozingly delicious body. Ha! I knew it!

Jade:Wrooong! I knewyou were gay the moment you knocked on our gate that day.Amoy na amoy ko ang pagiging bakla mo pagbili mo pa lang ng bus ticketpaluwas ng Maynila!*Sabay pamewang ng loka loka*

We stared at each other with our hilarious poses with our eyes squinting as if we were chinese. And minutes after,we burstinto laughter. Tonsand tons oflaughter.Sakit ng panga namin at tiyan kakatawa. Fuck, it was a fun night out. Fun indeed. Hinang-hina ako pagkatapos ng tawanan namin. And then we both found ourselves lying on the floor. Staring atthe ceiling.

Me: Pootah wag na tayo bumalik dun sa metrowalk hahaha.

Jade:Oo nga, wala naman steamy sex dun haha

Me: Leche tigilan mo kakabanggit sa steamy sex na yan ha.

Jade : hahaha, perofriend...kidding aside,ayaw mo batalaga?

Me:Tang-ina naman Jade.

Jade : Nagtatanong lang ako. Di mo kailangan magmura.


Mahabang mahabang mahabang katahimikan. Actually parang yung pinakamahabang soap opera, yung mara clara.


Me:
Kidding aside, gusto mo ba talaga?

Jade: Yes, kung papayag ka
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Mr.M
September 22, 2014 (8 years ago)

Huwwwwwaaaaaaw!Ang Tames na mapaklang katapusan nangyari na!

Minsan na namatay pero muli nabuhay

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heater
September 22, 2014 (8 years ago)

atleast walang namatay diba hehehe

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Bebeko
September 22, 2014 (8 years ago)

Hahahaha love, sana may pinatay ka na lang

"You learn nothing from life if you think you're right all the time." - Prof. Richard Feynman

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inang.grasya
September 22, 2014 (8 years ago)

Ikaw na heat! Parang nasa harap ko sina jade at nakikita facial expressions nilang dalawa.

Ayan hindi na TBC si heat.

Amazona kung tagurian pero malambing naman.

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maria
September 22, 2014 (8 years ago)

Thanx author.... thumbs up.. galing ng kagawa

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September 22, 2014 (8 years ago)

Loveeee it, heat! ang husay, daming emosyon ang na keri, pati yung paragraph na yun ng sex scene, ramdam ko why should it inevitably happen... and i repeat, it was indeed, convincing!

“I'm a fool to become a writer. My only compensation is absolute freedom. I've no master except my own soul, and that, I'm sure, is why I do it.” (R. Dahl)

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somebodyuused2know
September 23, 2014 (8 years ago)

Sarap magkaroon talaga ng friend na gay. :-D And I love the song, 2 additional songs in my playlist courtesy of you.  I so love the story Heat, natural na natural ang pasok ng laff moments and I love most na hindi mo nilagyan ng ohhhs at ahhhs ang lovemaking, feeling ko it would have just desecrated the act and why it happened. :-D

One kilig, feel-good read to the highest level.

I'M A NICE PERSON. JUST DON'T PRESS THE BITCH BUTTON.

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heater
September 24, 2014 (8 years ago)

thanks some :)

the oohhhs and the aahhs would ruin it all, hindi rin kasi yun ang alam kong sound ng ''making love'' hahaha

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heater
September 24, 2014 (8 years ago)

trivia :

i had so many options how to end the story

1) make the ''storyteller'' the child of the two , either as eulogy on his/her parents death
2) make it the ''storyteller's'' first manuscript to be published, in a contest about  unusual kind of relationships
3) make it storyteller's story of how the kid was conceived lol

eh ayoko ng pumatay sa story ko saka gusto ko ng mejo light & happy vibe na ending...and then i came across savage's garden playlist. i was playing affirmation, anima* song, crash and burn except truly-madly-deeply and i-knew-i-loved-you-before-i-met-you (errr because i find it too emo for me to handle lol). and so crash and burn triggered how this entry was ended :)

and to make it short, i ended with this hehe :D i'm not very known in fss to make stories with the honest,steamiest,detailed sex scenes. kahit hindi ko naman personal experience, its just weird and challenging on my part as a writer, to narrate something that i consider ''private''...

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heater
September 24, 2014 (8 years ago)

should be *hottest not honest

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Mr.M
September 24, 2014 (8 years ago)

Dig deep into yourself and you can.Just don't mention who saw and enjoyed your charms.

Minsan na namatay pero muli nabuhay

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