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Date: July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)


(Non-erotic story)

Sa lahat halos ng bagay ay magkasama kami ni Jerry. As bestfriends ay open naman kami sa isa't isa dahil magkaklase kami since grade school at magkababata pa.

Marami kaming kaibahan ni Jerry. Matangkad, guwapo at lapitin siya ng babae. Ako yung kabaligtaran. Siya ang tipong di na kailangang manligaw lalo pa na magaling sa basketball. At ako? Bumabawi na lang ako sa academics dahil top of the class ako. Sikat din naman kahit papaano basta huwag nyo na lang alamin ang hitsura ko. 'Unassuming' sabi nga ng iba. In short, hindi boyfriend material ang hitsura hahaha.

Saksi ako sa mga kalokohan niya. Kasama na sa samahan namin ang takipan sa bawat kapalpakan at kabulastugan ng bawat isa.

"Tol, dyan ka lang sa labas at kanina pa mainit si Monette hehe." Bulong nya sakin.

Lookout na naman ako sa di na mabilang na pagkakataon. Panay ganun na lang. Minsan naiinggit na rin ako kase ang dami na niyang karanasan sa babae samantalang ako ay wala pa. Virgin na virgin pa!

"Hayaan mo Dennis," sabi nya para pumayag siguro ako, "ako ang bahala at may nakuha na akong bibinyag sayo hehe."

Syempre natuwa naman ako. Gusto ko na rin makatikim ng sex. Pakiramdam ko na 'aanhin mo ang matalino ka nga pero wala naman magkagusto sayo?'

Sumilip ako ng bahagya sa pinto. Bukas na ang butones ng blouse ni Monette habang abala sa paglamas si Jerry. Napahanga ako sa laki ng suso ng kaeskuwela namin. Nanginginig ang kalamnan ko sa ginagawang pagdukot ni Jerry sa loob ng panty.

"Ang init at dulas siguro nun," bulong ko sa sarili, "hayop ka talaga Jerry ang swerte mo."

Luminga-linga muna ako at baka biglang bumaba sa basement ang mommy niya then balik pamboboso ulit. Nakita ko na binabayo na ng patayo ng kaibigan ko yung babae. Nakataas ang isang paa ni Monette habang naglalabas-masok si mokong sa pagkababae niya. Sa loob lang ng sampung minuto ay tapos na ang labanan. Pagkaalis ng babae ay kwentuhan at tawanan kami sa mga nangyari. Sanay na sanay ang loko.

Isang Sabado ay pinapunta akong muli ni Jerry sa bahay nila para raw tapusin ang school project. Akala ko kami lang dalawa ang nasa basement dahil wala siyang nabanggit na may kasama kami kaya laking gulat ko ng madatnan ko si Mika, ang long time crush ko! Napakaganda at amo talaga ng mukha nya. Tulo bigla ang laway ko sa beauty niya.

Sa tagal naming magkaibigan ay hindi ko man lang nabanggit na si Mika ang gusto ko dahil sa una pa lang na makilala ko siya ay nagpakita na agad ito ng interest kay Jerry. Puzzled ako noong una dahil di ko alam kung bakit nandun siya pero malakas ang kutob ko sa maitim na balak ng bestfriend ko. Namutla ako.

Si Mika ay hindi lang maganda kundi very popular din sa school. Oo, alam kong suntok sa buwan na magustuhan niya ako pero masama ba'ng mangarap? Unassuming man ay maayos pa rin naman ako pumorma bukod sa brains pero tanggap ko naman na malabo pa rin. Malay mo kung magkaroon ako ng chance at talagang susunggaban ko.

"Tol kami na." Bulong ni Jerry sa akin.

Kinilabutan na ako. Halong niyerbos at selos ang tumama sakin. Natatakot ako para kay Mika dahil kilala ko ang kaibigan ko pero minabuti ko na lang na ilihim ang nasasaloob ko. In the first place ay wala rin naman akong magagawa kundi magpaubaya pero nakiusap ako kay Jerry na sana ay huwag naman paglaruan si Mika.

One day, dumating na lang ang araw na kinatatakutan ko. Umiiyak si Mika na lumapit sakin. Shocked ako dahil buntis daw sya. Yumakap siya sa akin at tinatanong kung ano raw ang gagawin niya. Naaawa man ako pero di ko maiwasan na kiligin at masarapan sa ginawa niyang pagyakap sa akin. Para akong nasa langit!

"Wala pang nakakaalam.., ano ang gagawin ko?!!!" Nalilitong tanong niya.

Galit ako na kinausap si Jerry nang magkita kami. Nagtalo kami sa solusyon niya na ipalaglag ang bata. Halos gusto ko na siyang suntukin sa galit. Apektado talaga...

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Mr.M
July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

Sigh...You could have,but alas out of your respect for her.You did'nt.A true gentleman as always.Nice post!

Minsan na namatay pero muli nabuhay

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Bebeko
July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

Thanks for reading panyero.

"You learn nothing from life if you think you're right all the time." - Prof. Richard Feynman

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antoinette
July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

hehe you are a damn good writer... di ko alam madami kang stories... the first story i read sa blog pa ng isang member... its about 'Secretary'... then just now I read yong 'bawal na pagmamahal 1-9'... haaah!!! nag init ako ng sobra....

i wanna run to you... ohhhh

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Bebeko
July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

Thanks antoinette. Have fun reading it!

"You learn nothing from life if you think you're right all the time." - Prof. Richard Feynman

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mikaela
July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

ganda sir bbk wala ba karugtong to hehehe hay...ang love nga naman mapag paraya hehehe....thanks sir.....

learn to love your self before you love others...

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Bebeko
July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

Kapangalan mo pa pala ang isang character.., thanks for reading.

"You learn nothing from life if you think you're right all the time." - Prof. Richard Feynman

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femmeoir
July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

hays.........life......i hate women na nagpapalaglag....makikipagsex at kapag nabuo ipapalaglag...para sa akin kung gagawa ng milagro sa buhay panindigan...di lahat sarap....matuto ring harapin ang kaakibat na responsibilidad......sabi ko nga palagi......riskponsibility.....

a nice story.......

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Bebeko
July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

Yes femmeoir, ww have the same principle when it comes to "riskponsibility". Thanks sa comment.

"You learn nothing from life if you think you're right all the time." - Prof. Richard Feynman

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inang.grasya
July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

Iyak agad Pakner? Hmmmm.... Di bale tuturuan ka naman bilang pasasalamat sa pagkalinga mo sa kanya.

Next plsss...

Amazona kung tagurian pero malambing naman.

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Bebeko
July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

No more next pakner. It ends there.., sad but i hope they learn from it.v

"You learn nothing from life if you think you're right all the time." - Prof. Richard Feynman

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leeganda
July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

Ang magmahal ay di matatakasan db sir bebe..may nakalaan pa rin pra sa kanya.

Leeganda

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Bebeko
July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

Thanks for reading

"You learn nothing from life if you think you're right all the time." - Prof. Richard Feynman

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July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

Ayyy sad :( Pero ok lang, Dennis, baka maghiwalay si Mika at Jerry after ilang years edi pwede mo ng ligawan si Mika.  Me sequel ka na agad ;)

I always believe in second chances kasi :)

It’s okay if you don’t like me. I was not born to impress you.

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Bebeko
July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

If i'm in Dennis' shoes, Panyera, no more Mika.

"You learn nothing from life if you think you're right all the time." - Prof. Richard Feynman

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pilyangpasaway
July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

so sad :( pero ganun talaga sa tunay na nagmamahal....lahat ibibigay sa abut ng mamakaya pati ang lumalayo at pagtahimik para sa ika liligaya ng minamahal... not even single word.....

may next pa ba ito sir Bebe?

You never know how Strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have.

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Bebeko
July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

PP, relate na relate ka naman yata hahaha

Thanks for reading.

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pilyangpasaway
July 7, 2014 (8 years ago)

sir Bebe, i always try to put my feet on the shoes of the character of each story i've read, para pag comment ko feel na feel dilang relate, di ba? lol

You never know how Strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have.

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Bebeko
July 7, 2014 (8 years ago)

Ewan ko sayo hahahahaha

"You learn nothing from life if you think you're right all the time." - Prof. Richard Feynman

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pilyangpasaway
July 7, 2014 (8 years ago)

hahahah ganun din sa pag susulat di ba dapat ma feel mo ang bawat feeling ng character mo (wink! wink!)

You never know how Strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have.

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July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

Sir Bebeko, can't imagine that happening to me in person.

Dare me and I'll make you pay.

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Bebeko
July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

Which part sweet?

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July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

after doing all the effort, being set aside and see that they are back together without batting an eyelash to think she was pushed aside by Jerry after knowing about the pregnancy.

Dare me and I'll make you pay.

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Bebeko
July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

Well, isn't that crazy? Merong mga babae na nakakalimutan ang lahat dahil head over heels sa lalake. May mga guys din naman na ganon. Three characters with different views in life in handling life's issues and feelings.

"You learn nothing from life if you think you're right all the time." - Prof. Richard Feynman

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HONEY_7
July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

Kung nagkamali learn to accept it, the important is you learned from your mistake. Dapat pag aralan kung paano mababago ang sarili para hindi na pagdaanan ulit yun.

But Mika is choose to do the same mistake in the same person nung pinili nya ulit si Jerry.(grrr, kakainis.)

If I'm in Mika shoes, i will be thankful kasi may taong tumanggap sa akin kahit nagkamali ako and he taking care of me pa, ipapakita ko kay Jerry kung ano yung pinakawalan nya pag naka recover ako.

If you do not know where you are going, you will probably end up somewhere else.

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HONEY_7
July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

Note*
1. But Mika CHOSE...
2. If I'm in MIKA'S shoes...
3. ...and HE's taking care of me pa.

If you do not know where you are going, you will probably end up somewhere else.

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Bebeko
July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

Revenge for me is always pointless honey.

"You learn nothing from life if you think you're right all the time." - Prof. Richard Feynman

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HONEY_7
July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

For me kasi ang hirap ng pinagdaanan ni Mika nung iwan sya ni Jerry so the best solution para maramdaman ni Jerry yun, ipakita sa kanya kung ano yung iniwan nya. But in reality, i agree with you, revenge is pointless.

If you do not know where you are going, you will probably end up somewhere else.

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Bebeko
July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

But Mika chose a different path. In short, di na natuto sa mistake niya.

"You learn nothing from life if you think you're right all the time." - Prof. Richard Feynman

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HONEY_7
July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

Yeah kaya nakakainis sya, porke gwapo si Jerry binalikan nya? It's unfair.

If you do not know where you are going, you will probably end up somewhere else.

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Bebeko
July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

I think it's more about craziness na after what Jerry did to her ay binalikan pa rin. Poor girl. Mental breakdown.

"You learn nothing from life if you think you're right all the time." - Prof. Richard Feynman

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HONEY_7
July 7, 2014 (8 years ago)

She is a person na ayaw mag grow dahil ayaw nyang matuto sa mistakes nya.

If you do not know where you are going, you will probably end up somewhere else.

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somebodyuused2know
July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

Di naman siya masyadong user at paasa. Ganyang-ganyan ang mga masarap pagbuhulin.

If I were Dennis, no more Mika and no more Jerry too. I'm way too good for them they both dont deserve me. As for  their affair, both are cut from the same cloth, they definitely deserve each other.

Twas as usual a worthy read, pero I dont know why parang nakulangan ako, or maybe the more appropriate term is nabitin. Para kasing you have tried to put all the emotions, twists and turns in one compact package. Nabitin tuloy ako kc feeling ko you could have added more highlights if you tried to lenghten it just a wee bit. Still an A+ thou.

"Go find someone else to feed your ego. I'm busy."

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Bebeko
July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

Parang ang sarap mambitin paminsan-minsan.., i'll leave it to the reader's wild imaginations (non-erotic kase Sam kaya di ka uminit hahaha)

"You learn nothing from life if you think you're right all the time." - Prof. Richard Feynman

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red...
July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

...wawa naman si dennis...pede bang akin na lang siya? *wink**wink*
......love talaga, nakaka-tanga ng pagkatao...sana ma-realize ni mika real soon na dennis is far better than jerry...a love more than skin deep...

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red...
July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

...on the other hand..hindi pala kawawa si dennis, he was able to express real love sa totoong lalabs nya...and felt the excitement of experiencing mga kilig moments nya with mika...ending is...si mika at si jerry ang totoong kawawa...both of them do not know what they are doing...

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Bebeko
July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

You hit the nail right in the head. Good POV Red! Writers also learn from readers.

"You learn nothing from life if you think you're right all the time." - Prof. Richard Feynman

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red...
July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

i knew it...hehehe :P

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July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

thanks thanks :D

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Bebeko
July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

Thanks for reading.

"You learn nothing from life if you think you're right all the time." - Prof. Richard Feynman

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July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

you're welcome...

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July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

Mika gising din pag me time..! Jowskooooo..anubey..?.Nice story Bebenila.

Anything worth having for is worth waiting for.., even it takes a lifetime.

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Bebeko
July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

Thanks for reading Carla.

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July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

Your welcum.

Anything worth having for is worth waiting for.., even it takes a lifetime.

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Fiction-Factory
July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

Boss, unassuming ba tlaga c den? Mukhang assuming xa eh. Hehe
Welcum back sa Bebeko (theWriter)!
Cheers! :)

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Bebeko
July 6, 2014 (8 years ago)

Mukha nga hahahaha. Maraming ganyan FF di ba? Thanks for reading.

"You learn nothing from life if you think you're right all the time." - Prof. Richard Feynman

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teaSe.mE.eXe
July 7, 2014 (8 years ago)

kakainis naman...waaahhh...pero saludo ako sau again for the nth time BBK...way to go bro!

Inang naging birhen muli

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Bebeko
July 7, 2014 (8 years ago)

Salamat tease pero bakit ka naiinis?

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jason_the_jackal
July 8, 2014 (8 years ago)

Isumpa! Yaong mga walang puso at mapanakit sa marupok na damdamin ng mga barakong lalake! hehe. Jowk. Nice Kap. ;-)

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Bebeko
July 8, 2014 (8 years ago)

Yung babae ba ang isusumpa Jason? Marami na naman papalag nyan hahahaha

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jason_the_jackal
July 8, 2014 (8 years ago)

haha. wag naman. Sa story lang. ;)

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July 9, 2014 (8 years ago)

...hindi nako nabigla sa twist ng ending, pero nabitin ako! nyways, magaleng ka, at gusto ko lng ibahagi na sa kasalukuyan ay isang NERD, ang hinahanap na ngayun ng mga kababaihan! laos na ang robin padilla style, smarty nerd ang mabagsik!...

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July 9, 2014 (8 years ago)

I'd say the main idea of the story is for the reader to make a conclusion. There is more to it than meets the eye.

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