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Into Paradise Book 2 Ch 28: For the Future – The Battle for Karlson Ortega

Nakatingin si Martha ngayon may JJ, binanggit kasi ng ginoo na wala naman talagang relasyon si Karlson sa mga anak niya kaya naman nagukat siya "Mahal… anong ibig mong sabihin diyan? Wala kang anak sa kanila?" Sabi ni Martha at ngumiti si JJ at tumango ito sa kanyang asawa naman at natawa siya.

"Ganun na nga mahal, I hid from Karlson the last thing he needs to see sa isang vault sa Vineyard natin, it was supposed to be a secret but I suppose you should know mahal ko" sabi ni JJ kay Martha na nagulat pa din ang ginang sa sinabi na detalyeng ito ni Martha, matapos ipaglaban niya at ng mga anak niya ang mana nila, ay wala pala dapat mana ang mga ito.

"Mahal kalma lang ah, walang kapatid si Karlson doon dahil anak sila ng iba, ngunit mahal, di ko sila tinitignan as anak ng ibang lalaki, anak ko pa din si Denise, Christian at Klarisse, gaya ng anak ko si Lottie kahit di naman kami magka-ano ano, pero anak ko pa din sila, yan ang tatandaan mo Martha ah, asawa kita at ang mga anak mo ay anak ko" sabi ni JJ at tumingin si Martha sa kanya.

"Salamat Mahal ko… pero sorry din, di ko alam bakit ganun, samantalang kung tirahin mo ako nun game na game ka, pero bakit ni isa wala man lang akong anak sa iyo?" Sabi ni Martha at natawa lang naman si JJ dito "Mabagal ata ang mga swimmers ko Mahal, pero okay lang yun, at least alam mo na hindi sila mawawalan ng pera" sabi ni JJ at natawa ito.

"Pero Mahal, bakit ganun? Unfair ata dahil si Candice ni isa walang nakuha, ni isang kusing wala man lang napunta sa kanya pero siya kasi anak mo siya talaga at wala akong masasabi kung hindi magagandang bagay tungkol sa kanya pero wala siyang mana mahal" sabi ni Martha at ngumiti naman si JJ.

"Wag ka ng mag-alala, inayos na namin ni Karl, may mana naman na siya, kayo kasi eh puro mana ng mana nung buhay pa ako, tapos ikaw pabago ng pabago" sabi ni JJ at tumungo naman si Martha dito. Si JJ naman ah nangiti sa kanya at inangat ang ulo nito "Kaya mula ngayon eh kakantutin kita ng matindi dahil binayaran naman kita eh" sabi ni JJ at natawa naman si Martha "Oh Daddy talaga!" Sabi ni Martha.

Ngumiti naman si JJ at Martha sa isa't isa naman at ngumiti "Parehas talaga kayo ni Karl mag-isip tungkol diyan, I told him whst if nga na si Greg ang tatay nila, sabi niya wala daw siyang pakialam, dahil para sa kanya eh anak mo daw lahat ng kapatid niya so wala akong magawa" sabi ni Martha at ngumiti naman si JJ dito "Buti naman, at least he treats them like family" sabi ni JJ at ngumiti kay Martha.

"Pero asawa ko ah, dadalhin natin ito hanggang kamatayan, wag natin sasabihin sa kanila, sana ikaw din naman kay Karl wag mong sabihin" sabi ni Martha at tumango naman si JJ "Mahal, nakatago ang resulta ng DNA test, kahit mahanap pa ni Karl yun eh okay lang naman kasi importante sa akin eh maging masaya si Karlson sa mga kapatid at asawa niya" sabi ni JJ at tumango na lang si Martha.

"Okay Po Daddy ko, should I let them go with Karlson na lang no? I mean he has been like you din naman sa pag disiplina sa kanila and they don't mind ata if he sleeps with them" sabi ni Martha at natawa na lang si JJ sa kanya "Hay naku ikaw asawa ko, trust in Karl, he will lead them naman, he is a good man and a great loverkaya naman" sabi ni JJ at ngumisi ito.

"Ako na lang muna ang pag tuunan mo ng pansin asawa ko" sabi ni JJ at nangisi naman si Martha "Uy akala ko tapos ka na Daddy eh" sabi ni Martha at ngumisi ito kay JJ dito "May Cancer ako pero walang erectile dysfunction, so titigas at titigas yan" sabi naman ni JJ at ngumisi si Martha "Good Daddy kasi papagurin ko yang titi mo na yan tonight!" Sabi ni Martha kay JJ naman.

"Talaga ba Mahal ko? Sige, kung ready na ang puta ko then lets get in on!" Sigaw naman ni JJ sa asawa niya at agad agad naman na umibabaw ang ginang at ngumisi "Yes Daddy!" Sigaw ng ginang at isang gabing punong puno ng libog ang nilabas nila sa isa't isa na para bang mga teenager ang dalawa.

Samantala sa main house ay nagpaalam muna si Clariz na maliligo kasama ni Candice, ngumiti ang dalaga sa ama niya "Daddy, samahan mo lang po si tita Candy Maligo po kasi nag cry cry po siya eh okay lang po ba?" Sabi ni Clariz at ngumiti lang naman si Candice at tumango "Sige anak, you make tita Candy feel better okay?" Sabi naman ni Karl at ngumiti si Clariz at nag thumbs up "Mommy make daddy po stay ah! Baka umalis ulit eh" sabi ni Clariz kay Joanne at natawa naman ito "Okay Baby I got you" sabi naman ni Joanne.

Ngumiti naman si Clariz kay Candice "Babysitter Candy is up and running!" Sabi ni Candice at natawa is Clariz at niyaya na niyang maligo ang dalaga naman at natawa naman na ito at ngumiti habang naglalakad, dito nabigyan ng much needed alone time ang dalawang magkasintahan at ngumiti naman si Joanne dito.

"Is my Honey alright?" Tanong naman ni Joanne sa binata at pinulupot niya ang mga braso niya sa leeg ng binata pero di sumagot si Karl sa kanya at tinignan lang siya ng binata at umiling ito "I'm okay but I'm not alright" sabi ni Karl at natawa naman si Joanne dito at ngumiti ito "Whyvm? Whats wrong?" Sabi ni Joanne at ngumiti ito.

"You… you are hiding things from me na ah" sabi ni Karl at hinimas naman ni Joanne ang pisngi ni Karl at natawa ito at kinurot niya ang pisngi nito "You're so cute! Kyeopta! (Cutie!)" sabi naman ni Joanne at ngumiti naman ang dalaga sa binata at tumingin ito sa mata mismo ni Karl.

"You know I will tell you everything, I was just finding the best time for this announcement to you Honey" sabi ni Joanne kay Karl at nangiti naman ang dalaga sa kay Karl naman at ngumiti ito "I have two announcements that involve us, I wanted to talk to you cause I realize that when you were out with your accident, I was really out of it" sabi ni Joanne kay Karl at ngumiti ito.

"I realize then and there that I really wanted to be with you, that I couldn't ask you to do things for me anymore, cause you gave me all of you already, your time, money, body, and soul" sabi ni Joanne at ngumiti ito "That's why I decided that now its my turn to give you everything you want and need" sabi ni Joanne at ngnumiti naman ito kay Karl.

"That's why Lola asked me if we would want to stay here in the Philippines, if we wanted to be here with your family and your Daughter, if I would be okay in staying here" sabi ni Joanne sa binata at tumingin naman si Karl sa kanya "And what did you say to her?" sabi ni Karl at ngumiti si Joanne.

"I told her Yes, but I want to get the answer from you, because I told her Honey that I would go wherever you want to be, whether its America, the Philippines, Japan, Korea, or where else, I will go with you and be with you because I love you so much and I don't want to let you go anymore" sabi ni Joanne at ngumiti naman siya.

Nagulat naman si Karl at ngumiti siya "What if I wanted to go to the dessert? You know the hot sun that you hate so much?" sabi ni Karl kay Joanne at tumango si Joanne sa kanya "Hmmmmm I might get a tan and I'd have to find the proper clothes and you should try and be okay with me wearing revealing clothes" sabi ni Joanne at ngumiti ito "But I will go there with you if that's where you want to be" sabi ni Joanne at ngumiti ito.

"Why the change in you Honey?" sabi naman ni Karl at ngumiti naman si Joanne dito "My sweet Honey, you are not the only one who changed since coming here" sabi ni Joanne at tumingin naman si Karl sa kanya "Changed? Who Changed? Me? I didn't" sabi naman ni Karl at natawa naman si Joanne dito.

"You! You Pabo! (Idiot)" sabi ni Joanne kay Karl at natawa naman ang dalaga sa kanya "When we got here you were mad at everyone, you don't message your sisters and you don't talk to them, some are even begging for you to contact them but you always say no, you were mad at both Mia and Samantha, plus you ghosted Doc Bianca, you only ask Charlotte for updates on the house and worse is you keep on visiting Clariz in the Philippines yet you don't even go here" sabi ni Joanne kay Karl at ngumiti ito.

"But now, its all changed! You talk to your siblings, hell you even talked to Christian of all people, you're not mad at them any more and more so you have four girls gunning to be part of your Harem! Not to mention you and Candice too! You've changed and the funny thing is you're not the only one who changed!" sabi ni Joanne at ngumiti ito.

"I also changed, being with Clariz made me feel love for her, deeper than I did before, also your sisters, I look as them as my own you know? Being alone or being an only child, I wanted sisters that's why I-" sabi ni Joanne pero pinigil na siya ni Karl ng halikan siya nito sa labi at ngumiti naman si Karl dito.

"You need not say more my dear, I will be happy to see and be with you as you are with me" sabi ni Karl at ngumiti naman si Joanne dito at natawa ito at ngumiti naman Joanne dito at nagpunta ito sa kanyang bag at ngumiti si Joanne sa kanya at may kinuha naman ito sa bag niya.

"Honey? May question pala ako sayo" sabi naman ni Karl at ngumiti ito naman "What is it Honey" sabi naman ni Joanne habang may hinahanap ito naman. "Uhm what about the company? Our business? If we would be staying here what about our company naman? We leave it too?" sabi ni Karl naman at natawa naman si Joanne sa kanya.

"Well honey, you forget that Scarlett made sure to clear out the oldies, no more oldies now because of the scandals they were involved in, they pushed lola and now they have no more positions in the company and you what that means" sabi ni Joanne at ngumiti ito kay Karl.

"Hmmmm that means we can change the business then?" sabi naman ni Karl at ngumiti si Joanne at tumangoito "Well according to Lola Gia, with the old croons gone we can change the way the business is done and we can have the COO here in the Philippines" sabi ni Joanne naman at ngumiti siya "And his wife, the VP for Marketing, the future mother of your children can stay here with you" sabi ni Joanne at ngumiti ito.

"Plus I have my sister wives here too so there's that" sabi ni Joane naman kay Karl at ngumiti naman si Joanne dito. "So all in all my first announcement is basically, lets stay here in the hot Philippines and be together wherever you want to be" sabi ni Joanne at tumango naman si Karl dito at ngumiti ito.

"And the best part is? I can really bond now with my future sisters-in-law and my sister wives too so win-win for me" sabi naman ni Joanne at ngumiti naman si Karl dito "Whats your second announcement then?" sabi naman ni Karl at pinakita ni Joanne ang daliri niya na may suot ng engagement ring.

Nagulat si Karl dahil ito ang engagement ring na binigay ng ama niya sa kanya at ginamit niya ang singsing na ito para magpropose kay Joanne last year, ang singsing na originally kay Megumi na pinama kay Karl, suot suot ito na ito ni Joanne ngayon at nakangiti siya kay Karl.

"You remember why I hid this right? A few months ago when you propose?" sabi ni Joanne at ang ngumiti ito kay Karl at tinignan niya "This ring, I told you I'll wear it when I'm ready to get married to you, I told you that you need to talk to your siblings first before I wear it so now I'm going to wear it so people would know we are going to get married" sabi ni Joanne kay Karl at ngumiti ito kay Karl.

"Joanne you mean you want to get married already? Okay na?" sabi ni Karl at ngumiti naman si Joanne at tumango ito kay Karl "Yes Karlson, I am saying yes to you and your proposal Karlson, I will love you til the end of my life and I will hate you if you decide to betray me but I won't leave you, you will have to carry everything with you, anything and everything you do to me and our Aegi (Baby)" sabi ni Joanne.

Natawa naman si Karl pero natigil ang binata sa sinabi ni Joanne "Wait, did you just say… Aegi? (Baby?)" sabi ni Karl at natawa din si Joanne "You only got the Aegi Part Honey?" sabi ni Joanne at natawa ito at ngumiti si Karl sa kanya naman "Well I agree with your point, I'll do the same with you, if you cheat I won't fight with you but I would stay with you to get you back naman, but what is with the Baby thing" sabi ni Karl at ngumiti si Joanne sa kanya.

"Well my dear sweet honey, I was supposed to be due for a menstruation cycle two weeks ago but it didn't came, I took also this" sabi ni Joanne at binigay niya ang isang pregnancy test kay Karl at ngumiti ito dahil nakalagay ay positive ito "I took that three days ago but I'm not yet sure my Honey, congratulations Daddy" sabi ni Joanne kay Karl.

Tinignan ni Karl ang pregnancy test at tumingin ito at nugmiti ito kay Joanne at niyakap niya ito "Honey! I'm gonna be a dad?!" sabi ni Karl at natawa naman si Joanne dito at tumango ito "Yes Honey, only you can be the father! The prayers really worked!" sabi ni Joanne at natawa naman ang binata dahil sa sinabi ni Joanne kay Karl.

"My God! Yes!" sabi ni Karl at natawa naman si Joanne pero pinalo niya ito ng marahan "YOU! You got me preggy in the car in the woods ah! I told you!" sabi ni Joanne at natawa si Karl "How did you even know that?" sabi ni Karl at natawa si Joanne dito. "Cause I counted Dumdum! Yah! You better think of a good way to explain it to Clariz and our future baby!" sabi ni Joanne at natawa naman si Karl dito.

Hinalikan naman ng binata ang dalaga at ngumiti ito sa knaya "Thank you Joanne, my Ryujin, you seem to surprise me every single time" sabi ni Karl at ngumiti si Joanne dito "Well I am your best girl remember so I need to make sure that I keep my title for it" sabi ni Joanne naman dito.

Ngumiti naman si Joanne at para bang nag cutie mode ito ngayon naman "Cause Honey wants a cutie Ryujnie right? The best girl Ryujinnie is here for her Oppa" sabi ni Joanne at ngumiti naman si Karl dito at binigyan niya ng halik ang dalaga naman at ngumiti ito sa kanya.

"I'll asking you to fulfill one thing though my oppa" sabi ni Joanne at ngumiti si Karl dito "Yes Honey, what is it?" sabi ni Karl, ngumiti naman si Joanne dito "Hmmmm I want to have the life you promised me, you told me you'll give me the world before but I only wanted to be happy with you, can you give me that happiness Oppa?" sabi ni Joanne at ngumiti naman si Karl dito.

"I will give you the world and all the happiness that comes with it, I will love you with all my might and make sure you and my children are happy" sabi ni Karl at yumakap naman si Joanne sa kanya "That's all I want Honey, I love you" sabi ni Joanne at ngumiti naman si Karl dito "I love you too Honey" sabi ni Karl.

"Now then, lets stay here Honey okay? Lets go and stay here so that we would be with people we love, Mom can just go home to see us or we can go to the US too, I mean its easier to live here cause money is better plus our company can function with us here as well, right?" sabi ni Joanne at ngumiti ito "Plus our little angel can be with her unnie/noona in Clariz and Oppa /Hyung in Karlito too!" sabi ni Joanne at natawa naman si Karl dito.

"Then lets do it Honey, it would be easier for us to see Clariz, easier for you to have your baby here, easier for my siblings to ask support right?" sabi ni Karl naman at tumango si Joanne dito "Yes and our Harem needs their Daddy and Mommy to do well" sabi ni Joanne at nagulat naman si Karl dito.

"Wait what? You Still serious with that?" sabi ni Karl at ngumisi si Joanne "Absolutely! You See Honey, Thinking about Mia and Bianca in bed, plus we have also Charlotte and Samantha, my Gosh! I want that! Plus Candice too? I'd love to be there Honey, plus it's a nice way to bond with them right?" sabi ni Joanne at natawa naman si Karl at umiling na lang ito "Hay fine, lets do it!" sabi naman ni Karl at ngumiti si Joanne.

"Yey! Nice one Honey! Don't worry honey, I'll make sure you have a nice time with that Harem" sabi naman at natawa ito "Plus I'll tell them that they can now have kids with you since my Baby is made already" sabi naman ni Jaonne at napatingin si Karl dito at "WHAT?!" sabi ni Karl at natawa naman si Joanne dito "Well I told you, I plan to share you as long as I am the legal wife!" sabi ni Joanne at natawa ito ng malakas.

Di naman nila napansin na bumalik na si Clariz at ngumiti naman si Clariz sa dalawa "Mommy, Daddy, mag pray ba kayo tonight po?" sabi ni Clariz at ngumiti ito sa kanila at tumingin naman si Karl dito at natawa "Hmmmm papayag ka ba na mag pray kami ng Mommy mo?" sabi naman ni Karl

"Okay lang naman Daddy, basta po dapat successful ka na po ah!" sabi naman ni Clariz at natawa Naaman si Karl at niyakap niya ang batang dalaga, "Its okay Baby pero may sasabihin kami ni Mommy Joanne mo sa iyo sana" sabi naman ni Karl at tumango naman si Clariz dito.

"Ano po iyon Daddy?" sabi naman ni Clariz at ngumiti ito kay Karl "Sweetie ko, my beautiful Baby Clariz, I want to marry your Mommy Joanne would you be okay with that?" sabi ni Karl kay Clariz at ngumiti naman si Clariz at tumango ito.

"Kasal Daddy?" sabi ni Clariz at tumingin ito kay Joanne "Yeah Baby, would it be okay if I marry your Daddy? I promise that-" sbai naman ni Joanne pero yumakap si Clariz kay Joanne "Yes Mommy! Mommy na po kita eh! So okay lang po! You can marry po basta po need ko po maging Ate ah!" sabi naman...

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Strawhat13
May 26, 2022 (1 month ago)

Salamat s update lods..

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May 27, 2022 (1 month ago)

Salamat po

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Lackadaisical
May 26, 2022 (1 month ago)

Looking forward sa finale! More power po.

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May 27, 2022 (1 month ago)

Baka po next weekend po

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May 26, 2022 (1 month ago)

Da best talaga boss. Salamat po sa maganda nanamang chapter

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Kookie29
May 27, 2022 (1 month ago)

Salamat din po

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Hanasaaan
May 26, 2022 (1 month ago)

Yown author salamat sa update! May tanong lang po ako, may mga special chapters pa ba to if natapos na story? Anyway always waiting for your update!

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May 27, 2022 (1 month ago)

Meron po hehe

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May 26, 2022 (1 month ago)

Salamat sa update.boss kookie.more to cum

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Kookie29
May 27, 2022 (1 month ago)

Yes naman po

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Dongkiekong2022
May 26, 2022 (1 month ago)

Ganda ng update lods.. parang roller coaster talaga ang buhay maraming ups and down and unexpected turn in life... thanks talaga lods..

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May 27, 2022 (1 month ago)

Syempre din naman eh ganun dapat para mahirap hulaan

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xylebitz13
May 26, 2022 (1 month ago)

thanx sa update lodi Kookie,,,  puno ng sorpresa,, napakaraming pasabog na di mo iinaasahan,, more power and God bless

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May 27, 2022 (1 month ago)

Salamat po! Pasabugin ko lahat hahaha

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May 26, 2022 (1 month ago)

Salamat po sa update...

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May 27, 2022 (1 month ago)

Salamat din po

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May 26, 2022 (1 month ago)

salamat sa update author

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May 27, 2022 (1 month ago)

Thank you po

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Dutch0930
May 26, 2022 (1 month ago)

Kaya di nakakasawang abangan at basahin story mo author di mo talaga binibigo mga readers mo! The drama, the twist... Parang nanunood klng din ng movie...
Nice wan again author! Cited na sa nxt chapter..😁

"naughty mind w/ a good heart."

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May 27, 2022 (1 month ago)

Excited na ba sa next story? Got lots of ideas for that eh hahaha

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Yopehj
May 27, 2022 (1 month ago)

In life, what really matters most is FAMILY. That's everything that we need in order to keep us in our feet.

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May 27, 2022 (1 month ago)

Astig di ba? hahaha dapat Family lang hahaha

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Mr.Loverboy
May 27, 2022 (1 month ago)

Who said family???(Dominic T.)

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gwapo7836
May 27, 2022 (1 month ago)

Salamat sir! Enjoy your trip

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May 27, 2022 (1 month ago)

Shalamat po

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Tegs_medina
May 27, 2022 (1 month ago)

Sad 3 chapters na lang pala
Thanks sa update boss

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Kookie29
May 27, 2022 (1 month ago)

Three na lang ba? hahaa

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Kyriejames
May 27, 2022 (1 month ago)

Swerte tlga ni karl dami nyang chika babes
Ty po s update

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Kaplog69
May 27, 2022 (1 month ago)

Malapit na matapos..sana matikman muna ni karl c bunso..tsaka ung harlem ng mga kabit ni karl...

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Mr.Loverboy
May 27, 2022 (1 month ago)

Nice chapter boss Kookie

Congrats Karl my Anak na sa reyna
Now sa mga. Harlem naman ni karl hehehe

Matagal na bitin to have a safe trip pasalubong naman jan at use hahaha...

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superfranky
May 27, 2022 (1 month ago)

Safe trip!!

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Datuputi
May 27, 2022 (1 month ago)

Thanks sa update author!
Abangers sa finale! Have a safe trip po.

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Waters
May 27, 2022 (1 month ago)

Safe trip Sir kookie Salamat sa update:)

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Johndave
May 27, 2022 (1 month ago)

Salamat sa pag update boss
At ingat Sana din soon makapag abroad ako I'm 20 years old pangarap ko kasi makapag abroad
Mas piliin ko Lang Mag trabaho Kay sa Mag aral sa hirap ng buhay

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lebron019
May 27, 2022 (1 month ago)

Happy na happy na ang ortega family haha sana talaga wala ng kupal hahaha thank you sa update my idol kookie 👌🏻

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nekky619
May 27, 2022 (1 month ago)

Really good story awtor!
Thank you.

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tarogi
May 28, 2022 (1 month ago)

thank you sir sa update

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radwin67
June 2, 2022 (1 month ago)

update author.. bitin na bitin na.. hehehehehe

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tarogi
June 2, 2022 (1 month ago)

Thank you sir sa update

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mikmik0903
June 6, 2022 (26 days ago)

Wala pa po bang update otor salamat godbless

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macubex07
June 9, 2022 (23 days ago)

antagal ng update magto two weaks na!!😡😡

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June 12, 2022 (20 days ago)

Still waiting for the update...

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Dongkiekong2022
June 19, 2022 (13 days ago)

Sulit mag antay lods basta maganda nman ang update... patiently waiting.

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EducatedGuy
June 20, 2022 (12 days ago)

Musta po author? Hope nasa mabuting kalagayan kayo. Waiting po sa update

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mandoy
June 23, 2022 (9 days ago)

Kumusta po author. wait lang ako ng update kung kaila.

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Russel143
June 23, 2022 (9 days ago)

Lods...saan ka na!!!..hehehe...waiting din ako sa update mo...

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Darkmaneks
June 25, 2022 (7 days ago)

Author kung nsan ka man sana okay ka lng and sana maka update kna din..

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Yopehj
Sunday, 26 June 2022 (6 days ago)

Author kamusta ka na po? Asan kana po? Hope you're doing good po. Sana safe ka po. Balik ka na po, namimis na namin update mo po. God bless you.

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