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Into Paradise Book 2 Ch 22: Critical Condition – Karl's Decision: Heaven or Earth?

Nagkakagulo ang mga tao sa ospital, di gaya ng kaninang mga atake ni Karl na parang mga shock lang sa system ng binata ay ngayon eh nag flat line nanaman ang binata, this time mahabang flat line na ito dahilan para magkagulo ang team ni Bianca at Charlotte sa pagligtas sa buhay ni Karl.

Napaupo naman si Gia sa nakikita niya, ang kaisa isa niyang tunay na apo ay wala ng pulso at ang kulang na lang ay mahimatay ito, si Megan naman ay pumasok ng marinig ang gulo matapos niyang tawagan ang mga pulis para bilisan nila ang kaso at paghanap kay Greg, nakita niya ang ina niya na nanghihina at hinawakan niya ang kamay.

"Ma, calm down" sabi ni Megan na nalulungkot na din "Meg… anak… find that man and make sure he pays, all the bets are off, pagdating ng team ni Joanne ay dapat may progress na, ayaw kong patayin niyo si Greg, dapat pahirapan ko siya, maghihirap siya hanggang sa gustohin na lang niyang mamatay! Naiintindihan mo ba?!" Sabi ni Gia na may galit na damang dama ni Megan dahi siya din ay galit na galit kay Greg.

"Yes Ma, I will take care of it all, dito na muna kayo ni Joanne, keep him safe okay? Candy pakibantayan silang dalawa, aalis muna ako ah ah" sabi ni Megan at tumango naman ang mga magkakapatid at si Denise kumuha ng tubig habang si Klarisse naman ay tinabihan si Gia at si Megan naman ay lumapit kay Joanne na kanina pa nakatitig sa kaguluhang nangyayare sa loob ng ICU.

"Heart rate is failing can you pump the heart Doc Cruz" sabi ni Bianca at tinitignan nila ang chart ni Karl habang tumango si Charlotte at nag pump iito "1… 2… 3…" sabi ni. charlotte "No Pulse Doc" sabi naman ng nurse at tumango si Charlotte "1… 2… 3…" sabi ni Charlotte at nag pump ang dalaga sa dibdib ng binata.

"No Pulse Doc" sabi ng Nurse naman at tumingin si Bianca dito "Ready Adrenaline 0.3mg, give him now!" Sabi naman ni Bianca at inenjectionan siya ng isang hiringgilya ng adrenaline para mag restart ang pulso niya ngunit walang epekto ito at natakot na si Charlotte at Bianca dito.

"Defibrillators! Now! 180 Volts!" Sigaw ni Charlotte at tumango si Bianca "Ready it Nurse" sabi ni Bianca at kinuha ng lalaking nurse ang Defibrillators at nagsalita ito "Clear!" Sabi ng nurse at kinuryente si Karl at wala ito kaya naman nag pump ulit si Charlotte "Come on Karlson! Wag kang ganyan!" Sabi ng dalaga at tinaggal niya ang kamay niya.

"Clear!" Sabi ng Nurse naman st kinuryente niya ulit ang katawan ni Karl pero Flatline pa din ang binata. Sa labas ay nakikita nila ang nangyayare, naka-kapit si Joanne sa isang guard rail at piniga ito ng dalaga na nagdadasal sa sarili niya na mabuhay si Karl "Don't you dare let go you Dumdum! Don't you dare!" Sabi ni Joanne na nakita ni Candice at hinimas nito ang likod ni Joanne.

"Raise voltage to 200 Volts, one more time!" Sabi naman ni Bianca at tumango naman ang nurse habang tinaasan niya ang voltage at nagsalita ang nurse "CLEAR!" Sigaw naman ng nurse at kinuryente ulit nila si Karl at nagkaroon naman na ng maliit na pulso ang binata, huminga naman ng malalim ang dalawang doctor na nanghihina na ang tuhod sa pagiisip na nag flatline ulit ang binata.

"Good we have a pukse, inject Mr. Ortega again with the adrenaline and make sure all vitals are stable for now, also make sure na may team na ready to help him okay?" Sabi ni Bianca at tumango naman ang mga nurse at tumingin si Charlotte kay Joanne na halatang stressed na stressed sa nakita niya.

Habang maayos na ulit si Karl ay naramdaman ni Joanne na nanlambot ang tuhod nito, pagod sa biyahe at stress sa nakita niya, di na kinaya ng matapang na Koreana ang nakita niya at naiyak naman na siya, iyak na alam ni Candice na nakakapanghinang makita lalo na kung kilala mo Joanne, iyak na walang magawa para mailigtas si Karl.

"Oppa…" sabi lang ni Joanne at umiyak ito, hawak ni Candice ang dalaga at dinala niya muna ito sa upuan, umiiyak ang dalaga at alam ng mga kapatid ni Karl ang feeling na walang magawa para mailigtas si Karl, napagdaan na nila ito ilang oras lang ang nakakaraan pero di pa rin mawala sa isip nila ang nangyayare lalo na at eto ang mga bato ni Karl, ang poste na lagi niyang iniiyakan o nilalabasan ng sama ng loob ay parang bumigay na din.

Sakto naman at dumating si Samantha, nagpahinga lang ang dalaga at bumalik ito na may dalang pagkain para sa mga kapatid ni Karl at nakita niyang nagche-check sila Bianca at Charlotte sa loob ng ICU, alam na ni Samantha ito, nag shock or flatline si Karl at alam ni Samantha ang takot na dulot nito malamang kay Joanne at sa Lola Gia niya.

Tumayo naman si Gia at tumingin ito kay Karl, naawa sa apo pero alam ng mga kapatid ni Karl na walang makakapigil sa lola niya para maghiganti, isang nakakatakot na imahe kung ikaw ang paghihigantihan ni Gia. Lumapit naman si Samantha sa matanda at tumingin dito.

"Lola, mag-mano lang po ako, may dala na din po akong pagkain para po sa lahat" sabi ni Samantha at tumango naman si Gia habang nagmano ang dalaga dito. "Salamat Samantha, kumain na kayo,kami na muna ang magbabantay kay Karl" sabi ni Gia at tumango na lang ang mga kapatid ng binata pero nagulat sila.

Tumayo na kasi si Joanne at nagpunas ng luha, ang titig niya ay may galit habang naawa kay Karl "Go eat and rest, I will be by his side, thank you all of you for being with him" sabi ni Joanne at kinabahan naman ang lahat sa sinabi ni Joanne lalong lalo na si Candice dahil walang kahit anong galak sa boses niya.

Nakatitig lang ang dalawa at halatang galit na galit, kinailangan lang ni Joanne na ilabas ang luha niya pero ngayon parang nagtransform ito, isang babaeng nagbago ng anyo sa harap nila mismo, isang babaeng halos mawala ang mahal sa buhay at wala siyang magawa pero plano nitong maghiganti, maghiganti para sa sarili at para sa mahal niyang si Karl.

"Candice, please make sure that Clariz is safe, I want her to be here when Karlson wakes up" sabi ni Gia at tumango si Candice "Lola, will Kuya even-" sabi ni Candice at tumango si Joanne "He will, he promised me, and he never breaks his promises, you all know this, what ever he says he delivers and I won't doubt him now" sabi ni Joanne na nakatingin lang kay Karl.

"Okay Ate" sabi ni Candice at tumango si Gia "You heard your ate, magiging okay ang kuya niyo, for now you should go and eat na muna, sayang ang food na dala dala ni Samantha" sabi ni Gia at tumango naman ang lahat at umalis na muna sila sa viewing area.

"Joanne, when they arrive I want you to lead them and make sure you get him, I'll go and get our secret weapon as well" sabi ni Gia at tumango naman si Joanne "Yes Mam, I won't let anyone survive after they did this to my Oppa, they will die and they will die in a slow and painful way" sabi ni Joanne at tumango si Gia dito.

"I told you in Japan the endgame for this after all, his endgame to make sure everyone is happy and the two if you will be together, but with this we would need to ensure that the endgame happens early, ako ng bahala magpaliwanag sa mga dapat paliwanagan" sabi ni Gia at tumango naman si Joanne na tumunog ang cellphone niya.

"Its Scarlet" sabi ni Joanne at tumango si Gia "Hello Red?" Sabi ni Joanne dito, "Hey Jo, what the heck? I thought we would be joining everyone here? How come Ms. Megan says to get the team and come here? What about the board?" Sabi ni Scarlett at tumingin ang dalaga kay Gia at tumango ang matanda.

"Red, this is a code Black, I want you all to come here, the COO has been in a planned accident by someone, so we need the entire team here to get him" sabi ni Joanne at tumango naman si Scarlett "What?! Black?! We never had that! Alright I'll tell the board to shove it and give the evidence immediately to the Board meeting, there are more important things right now" sabi Joanne at tumango si Scarlett dito.

"Alright Jo, no worries I'll take care of the board and make sure the team is in transit today" sabi ni Scarlett at tumango naman si Joanne "Yes please Red, I'm sorry about this" sabi ni Joanne at tumango si Gia "Tell them to take his plane over, its been a while since you last used it" sabi ni Gia. "You heard that Red?" Sabi ni Joanne st tumango naman si Scarlett "Copy that Mam!" Sabi ni Scarlett at nagpaalam na ito.

"I pray that you are right Joanne, I hope and pray that Karl pulls through or else everyone involve with this matter will be dead and I will bring hell on earth" sabi ni Gia at tumingin lang si Joanne sa kanya "You don't need to do that Lola… I will do it now" sabi ni Joanne kay Gia na nakakatakot ang tingin sa mga mata niya.

Sa isip naman ni Karl ay makikitang nakayakap pa din si Megumi kay Karl pero may napansin ito kaya naman humiwalay agad si Megumi sa anak niya at huminga ito ng malalim naman at ngumiti ito sa anak niya pero malungkot ang mukha niya dito.

"Haaaaaay, anak, I think you should decide as soon as possible dahil mukhang delikado habang nandito ka pa" sabi ni Megumi at pinakita niya ang nangyayare kay Karl sa isang kumpas lang ng kanyang mga kamay ay lumabas ang eksena sa hospital naman.

"Ma ano ito? When did this happen?" Sabi ni Karl at natawa naman si Megumi "Grabe ah nag english bigla? Parehas kayo ng lola mo" sabi ni Megumi at ngumiti ito ng pinakita ang ina niya kasama si Joanne "You both speak in english when surprised, your Lola, si Mama" sabi ni Megumi na nalulungkot naman.

"Ma, okay ka lang?" Sabi ni Karl ng nakita niyang nalungkot bigla ang ina niya. "Yes anak, namiss ko lang si Mama, pero I know naman she is happy there, anyways this is happening now, Mama and Ryujin just got to hospital and nag flatline ka, Charlotte and Bianca saved you but the more we touch the more times you will be gone" sabi ni Megumi.

"Hindi ka kasi dapat nandito, di ka dapat andito pa habang buhay ka, and the more we touch the more it goes bad for you down there, gustong gusto kita g hawakan at yakapin pero di ko magawa dahil alam ko na ikama mamatay mo lang iyon kaya I will let you decide now what you want to do" sabi naman ni Megumi kay Karl.

"Ma wait, before that di ko maintindihan ah, Joanne and Lola should not be there, papunta silang america, I've been here for what? 10-20 minutes simula nung nagising ako?" Sabi naman ni Karl at ngumiti naman si Megumi at umiling naman ito at tumingin sa mata ni Karl.

"Its not like that anak, time here moves slower kumpara sa babaa, for us maikli lang ito pero sa babaa eh siguro isang araw na ata or dalawa na siguro, if you stay here any longer eh baka bumigay ka na talaga sa lupa and whatever your choice eh it won't matter at all kung mawala na ang katawan mo" sabi ni Megumi at tumango naman si Karl.

Tumingin si Karl na umiiyak si Joanne, never itong nagkakaganito ang girlfriend niya pero nakita niya ang mga tingin sa mata nila Gia at Joanne, alam niyang delikado ang tingin nila sa mata at nakita ito ni Megumi "Haaaaay si Mama pasaway pa din, I think you know what to do anak" sabi ni Megumi naman.

Huminga naman ng malalim si Karl at tumingin ito kay Megumi "Ano sa tingin mo ang dapat kong gawin Ma?" Sabi ni Karl at ngumiti si Megumi dito "Anak, alam mo naman ang gusto kong sagot mo, at alam mo din ang sagot na dapat mong gawin" sabi naman ni Megumi at ngumiti ito sa anak.

"Pero Ma, nakakatakot ang pagpili na ito, I want to do one thing and the other is also good din, nakakatakot, paano kung mali ang piliin ko? Paano kung mali ang piliin-" sabi ni Karl pero ngumiti si Megumi "No my dear anak, you can never decide wrong here, tandaan mo lang lagi si Clariz, my apo" sabi ni Megumi at ngumiti si Karl dito.

"Hmmmmm ang batang iyon, you really like her no Ma?" Sabi ni Karl dito at natawa lang si Megumi "Well anak, yung apo kong iyon ay parehas ko nung bata ako, feisty siya at cute na cute like me" sabi ni Megumi naman at natawa naman si Karl sa sinabi ni Megumi "Ma, you are beautiful and if Clariz would be like you eh one hundred percent eh mas gusto ko yun" sabi ni Karl at natawa si Megumi.

"Kaya nga feeling ko favorite yan ng lola mo Karlson eh, Clariz is definitely like me, siguro yung shyness ko lang ang hindi nakuha nung batang iyon pero I'm sure she will be a great person in the future" sabi naman ni Megumi at ngumiti muna ito kay Karl bago nagsalita "Especially with you guiding her in her growth" sabi ni Megumi at ngumiti ang binata.

"Ma… I'm sorry ah" sabi ni Karl at natawa naman si Megumi "Don't be, you need to choose your happiness and my happiness can wait, I've been waiting naman na for a long time so no need to worry for me, you my son is my one and only happiness, and you living would make me the happiest woman and mom ever!" Sabi ni Megumi at ngumiti ito.

"Ma, salamat… pero sure ka ba na yun ang nararamdaman mo po? I mean Ma, I did-" sabi ni Karl at ngumiti si Megumi "Ssssshhhhhh tama na yan anak, you know I never did blame you, not once did I ever thought that it was your fault" sabi ni Megumi at tumango si Karl.

"Anak, nanay mo ako, and if I could do it again, I would! I will do it a hundred times and still do it the same way, you are my light and my happiness, you are my star in the night sky and I will never let anything bad happen to you because I love you, mahal na mahal kita anak, always remember that, you are my greatest achievement in life" sabi ni Megumi at ngumiti ito.

"Ma, I'm really sorry… I love you too Ma, I love you so much… I love you and I miss you… your hugs and kisses when I was a kid, your happy stories at night to make me sleep nung bata ako, I always longed for that, I always wanted that… Mahal kita Ma, Mahal na mahal" sabi ni Karl at ngumiti naman si Megumi dito.

"I am so proud of you Anak, so so proud… pero before you make your decision, I have a simple request lang sana" sabi ni Megumi at ngumiti naman si Karl "Anything Ma! Anything" sabi ni Karl at ngumiti si Megumi "Can you stay here? Kahit ilang minuto lang? Give me just a few more minutes with you anak?" Sabi ni Megumi at tumango naman si Karl dito at ngumiti sa ginang "walang problema Ma, I'll wait here with you" sabi ng binata naman.

Samantala habang nangyayare iyon sa isip ni Karl ay unti unti ng nag stabilize ang katawan at vitals ng binata, unti unti na ding nabawasan ang mga naka kabit sa katawan niya pero may life support pa din ito, gumagaling na din ang sugat niya, tatlong araw na kasi simula ng pumasok si Karl sa ospital ngayon.

Sa tatlong araw na iyon ay gumalawa sila Gia at Megan, si Megan ay pinahanap lahat ng pulis na may koneksyon kay Greg habang si Gia naman ay inabangan ang team ni Karl at Joanne na dumating sa pampanga kung saan sumakay sila ng private jet. (Abangan ito sa next chapter)

Ngunit sa tatlong araw na iyon ay si Megan lang ang tanging hindi umalis sa ospital, dinalan lang siya ng damit ni Candy at pagkain ng mga kapatid ni Karl pero hindi ito umaalis sa tabi ng binata, nilagay na din sila sa private suite ng umayos na ang vitals ni Karl pero hindi pa din nagkakaroon ng kahit anong galaw si Karl ngayon.

Ngumiti na lang si Joanne ng hinihimas niya ang ulo ng binata at ngumiti naman ito "Karlson, my Honey, my Oppa, please wake up, I know you can hear me because they say the last thing a person loses is their hearing so please wake up? Please come back to me? I'm here now, I won't leave your side ever" sabi ni Joanne at naiyak ito.

"I know I left so suddenly and I'm so sorry, promise I won't do that again, promise I will be by your side, promise I will protect you, promise I will be with you, because you are my soul mate Oppa, my Honey, my Karlson…" sabi ni Joanne sa binata habang tulog ito at di pa alam ang nangyayare sa kanya.

"You've been always with me Honey, you've been with me when my Daddy died and when ever I am lonely you are always there to cheer me up, when my mom told me to marry you I told her I would, I know you also asked her already if I could marry you and she said yes! And yes she doesn't keep secrets so please, you need to wake up now" sabi ni Joanne at ngumiti ito.

"Cause when you wake up I will be marrying you, I will be taking care of you, and I will make sure that everything that I am will be all yours, I wants us to make a big family, you, me and Clariz, its our goal right? To give Clariz a sibling? Well you need to wake up and make sure we do it! Please Honey, snap out of it and comeback to me" sabi ni Joanne sa binata at tumingin ito sa kanya.

Nakita din niya sa heart monitor na tumunog ito, para bang nag skip ng isang beat ang puso ni Karl sa sinabi niya. "Honey?! Are you liking this? Honey? You want me to keep on talking to you? I would definitely! I will answer anything you ask or wait I will tell you our story?" Sabi ni Joanne na na excite dahil parang kausap niya si Karl ngayon.

Lumukso ulit ang heartbeat ni Karl at natuwa si Joanne, hinawkan niya ang kamay ng binata at ngumiti ito "Okay Honey, let me take you back to how we bought got started, all those years ago when we first met, the day I fell for the nerdiest guy I've met and the day I said that the guy was the coolest man ever!" Sabi ni Joanne at nag simula na siyang mag kwento dito.

FLASHBACK…

College pa lang sila Karl at Joanne ng magkakilala sila, isang business ad student ang binata sa University of California Berkeley habang si Joanne naman ay isang Marketing student sa parehong eskwelahan. Di man sila parehas ng major ay nagkakilala sila sa isang klase nila sa marketing naman kung saan nakagawa sila ng first impressions nila sa isa't isa naman.

Tingin ni Karl kay Joanne ay isang tomboy ito, palaging naka pants ang dalaga at maliban pa dun ay ang pantaas nito ay naka tshirt lang siya at sneakers, boyish ang pormahan niya kaya naging memorable ang itsura ng dalaga kay Karlson naman.

Si Karl naman ay usual nerdy guy sa unang tingin, naka salamin at tahimik ang binata, usually nag-iisa lang ito at ang hilig niya ay tumugtog ng gitara niya habang mag-isa ito, ngunit nakilala naman niya si Karl na may iba pang mga hilig naman gaya ng polo, shooting at hand to hand martial arts.

Naging mag-kaibigan naman ang dalawa at naging close sila sa panahon nila sa kolehiyo. Ang isang nakakatawang eksena pa nga ay nangyare ng sila ay nag-aaplay sa isang trabaho, well si Joanne ang nag-aapply naman sa Rae Marketing Corporation naman.

Isang Marketing Executive ang planong applyan ni Joanne sa kumpanya na ito at sa pintuan pa lang ay nakasabay niya si Karl, naka suit and tie ang binata at ngumiti si Joanne dito "Karl?! My God how are you?!" Sabi ni Joanne ng makasalubong si Karl, ilang buwan na din sila nung huling nagkita ng binata.

"Oh! Joanne! Hi there!" Sabi ni Karl at niyakap niya naman ang kaibigan niya at ngumiti naman si Joanne dito "So you work here?" Sabi ni Joanne at tumango naman si Karl "Yeah my Lola, sorry, Grandma, got me to work here so I'm just happy that I got a place to work in, I've been here since graduation" sabi ni Karl at tumango naman si Joanne dito.

"Oh really? I was going to have an interview here and I'm happy that you are working here so that I'd have company" sabi ni Joanne at ngumiti naman si Karl dito "Well I hope you get in, you are applying for the Marketing Executive position right?" Sabi naman ni Karl at tumango ang si Joanne at ngumiti ito "Lets go then?" Sabi ni Karl at ngumiti naman si Joanne.

Sabay silang pumasok pero agad agad na may bumati kay Karl at sinabihan niyang tulungan si Joanne na magpunta sa meeting niya at agad siyang inalalayan ng tao ni Karl at ngumiti si Karl dito "Do well alright? I want you to be part of the team after all" sabi ni Karl at nakita sila ni Gia na pinuntahan sila nito.

"Karlson you're here today? I thought you were still in Chicago to talk to that baseball team" sabi ni Gia at natawa naman si Karl "La, I told you I got back last night remember? I sent you a text message" sabi ni Karl at natawa naman si Gia at umiling ito "I forgot about that, anyway who do we have here?" Sabi ni Gia at ngumiti si Karl.

"Oh I almost forgot, this a friend from college, she's really nice and hardworking, Joanne Shin" sabi ni Karl bilang pakilala kay Joanne naman kay Gia. "Joanne this is my Grandma, Gia Cruz, the CEO of Rae Marketing" sabi ni Karl at natawa naman si Gia at umiling ito "this will be yours anyway Karlson, I'm just holding down the fort for you, nice to meet you Joanne, are you applying for the marketing Executive position?" Sabi ni Gia at nagulat si Joanne sa pagpapakilala ni Karl sa lola niya.

"Uhm yes Mam, I mean I do hope to be part of the team of course if needed I would also learn the culture of the team" sabi ni Joanne at ngumiti si Gia sa itsura ng dalaga, halatang jinujudge ng lola ni Karl ang dalaga at ngumiti ito sa kaniya at tumango ito dito.

"Hmmmmm I see" sabi ni Gia at tumingin ito sa tao ni Karl "Please bring her to the HR department, I want her in the team and put her in the same division as Karlson" sabi ni Gia at ngumiti ito kay Karl naman "I'm putting her against your team Karlson, let m...

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krismille
May 10, 2022 (16 days ago)

Sakto pag open ko ito agad. 1st comment muna bago basa hehehe. Thanks sa update boss.

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May 10, 2022 (16 days ago)

Hahaha Congrats naman po

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May 10, 2022 (16 days ago)

thanx sa update kookie... god bless

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May 10, 2022 (16 days ago)

Thank you din po

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May 10, 2022 (16 days ago)

2nd

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May 10, 2022 (16 days ago)

3rd po

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kuatog
May 10, 2022 (16 days ago)

naluha ako e .. isa to s peyborit kong chapter tnx boss 👍👍

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May 10, 2022 (16 days ago)

Ako din naiyak ng sinusulat ito hehe

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Yopehj
May 10, 2022 (16 days ago)

Wow thank you sa update author. Grabe, sobrang na touch ako dun sa mother and son bonding, wala talagang makakatalo sa pagmamahal ng isang nanay.

Pero bitin ako dun ah hehehe ... Sa tingin ko magiging okay na si karl at mapupuno ng iyakan na may dalang galak sa next chapter. At tingin ko yung secret weapon ni Gia ay si Godzilla haha joke lang...

Inaabangan ko ding malaman yung secret ni Karl n nalaman ni Joanne. Hehe.

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May 10, 2022 (16 days ago)

Hahaha Syempre si Godzilla or si Mothra ang secret ni Karl hahaahaa

Bitin din ako pero need na natin pakawalan si Megumi, tahimik na siya sa kabilang buhay ngayong nakita na niya si Karl hehe

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May 11, 2022 (16 days ago)

Salamat po sa update...

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May 11, 2022 (16 days ago)

Salamat po

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kabayan
May 11, 2022 (16 days ago)

We have the same sentiments im a part of what they the parliament of the street I’m really disappointed 😢 to the people who put the guy in power. But nice 👍 chapter again idol

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May 11, 2022 (16 days ago)

Yeah, its a sad day for us but we need to respect the choice of the people, if they want him to return we can't do anything about it, if they want him to comeback then we need to swallow our pride and accept it, accept that the Philippines chose the Dynasty and Patriarchy of that person as opposed to someone that would break the wheel of oppression in the Philippines, A sad day but we all need to move on...

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nelnel829
May 11, 2022 (16 days ago)

hi sir matagal n akong nag babasa s fss pero d ko binabasa ang into paradise pero last monday ( may9) na curious akong basahin ang chapter 49at nagustuhan ko kya inulit kong basahin mula chapter 1 to 50 at nagustuhan ko ag istorya good job kookie 29 fan mo n ako at lagi ko ng aantayin ang karugtong ng nobela mo thanks and god bless you

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May 11, 2022 (16 days ago)

Maraming salamat po! I'm glad you enjoy my story po

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mandoy
May 11, 2022 (16 days ago)

salamat sa update author.

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Kookie29
May 11, 2022 (16 days ago)

Salamat din

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doodle1991
May 11, 2022 (16 days ago)

Salamat author. Sana ganyan mindset ng iba no? Tangapin kung sino na mamumuno. Taong bayan na nagluklok sakanya.

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Kookie29
May 11, 2022 (16 days ago)

Well its hard to accept the fact that people still chose someone from the old ways as oppose to a person who is intent is to do Good and change the system, it just shows that the Philippines is still back minded as they choose leaders who only steal from  them with a smile

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zilong
May 11, 2022 (16 days ago)

sana maabot na lagi yung goal para tuloy tuloy hahshshs

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Kookie29
May 11, 2022 (15 days ago)

Lagi naman naabot

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leigh_aire
May 11, 2022 (16 days ago)

Ganda Ng update idol. Transition chapter. Lagot na Sila. Ayan na si karlson.
More power po

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Kookie29
May 11, 2022 (15 days ago)

Di pa transition ito, yung next yun hahaha

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joseph020
May 11, 2022 (16 days ago)

nice update sir magigising n sia humanda n ang dpt humanda sna masundan kagad slamt sir

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Kookie29
May 11, 2022 (15 days ago)

Kaloka ang humanda haha

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Jorge94
May 11, 2022 (16 days ago)

thanks for the update author... really like your stories, i always read it. :-)

jm94

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Kookie29
May 11, 2022 (15 days ago)

Friday po ulit hehe

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Francyr
May 11, 2022 (15 days ago)

Such a very heartfelt update. Very touching.

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Kookie29
May 11, 2022 (15 days ago)

May pinanghugutan hahaha

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Mojodeux
May 11, 2022 (15 days ago)

Emotional! Ganda as usual, salamat!

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Kookie29
May 11, 2022 (15 days ago)

Salamat po

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Datuputi
May 11, 2022 (15 days ago)

Thanks sa update author! 👏👏
Waiting sa hell on earth na ibibigay nila kay greg!

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Kookie29
May 11, 2022 (15 days ago)

Hahah medyo matagal pa yun haha

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Mr.Loverboy
May 11, 2022 (15 days ago)

Nice chapter boss kookie

Heavy drama sa umpisa  super sweet romance sa flashback
At sa huli miracle nabuhay si karl


Next chapter ang umpisa ng impyerno ni Greg  
Makikilala na natin ang mga new character ang team ni karl

Ano kayang klaseng parusa ang magandang gawin kay Greg hmmmm..🤔🤔🤔🤔

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zooeymama32
May 11, 2022 (15 days ago)

Salamat sa update boss kookie.wag sana tayong advanced mag isip boss.bigyan sana natin nang chance ang new president at vice president natin.malay  mo uunlad Pilipinas sa kanila.

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Wolf1978
May 11, 2022 (15 days ago)

Tnx s update  idol..

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mamongskie
May 11, 2022 (15 days ago)

maraming salat sa update author ikaw na hahaha,anyway yun pala
angbsimula nila ni Joanne,hmm maganda na naman ang mga susunod na kabanata iba talaga bangis ng kamanda ni Karl at Joanne lalo na ang mga alipores yari na si gregy ngayon hahaha,

anyway let accept sino man ang nanalong kandidato and let's pray for them and bilang mamayang pilipino magkaisa tayo bilang isanag bansa

hearts and likes na mga kareaders

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superfranky
May 11, 2022 (15 days ago)

Crossover ng characters sa next chapter?  Hmm

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lebron019
May 11, 2022 (15 days ago)

ang sweet ng mag ina muntik na masundo si karl haha yare kana greg kupal ka a hahaha leader dn pala to ng parang mafia sila karl katu.ad nila khel mahirap talaga kalaban hahaha thank you sa update my idol kookie 👌🏻

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jofranc
May 12, 2022 (15 days ago)

babalik na sa lupa ang ating bida! sana mahuli na ang may atraso sa kaniya, para matuloy na ang maliligayang araw! thanks author!

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Jhong2583
May 14, 2022 (12 days ago)

Slamuch lods sa mga bagong update

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