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Heaven Or Hell Ep V ( Act Xvix ) Finale

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Date: July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)


Act XIX: Legend
By: Balderic

"Bitawan mo sya? Um! " "Pak! " sinuntok ng batang si Karen ang isang malaking bata na umaapi kay Gabriel.

"Araaaayyy, walang hiya ka Karen, di porke't pulis tatay mo, nagmamatapangan ka na! Isusumbong kita kay inay! " sabay takbo ng bata.

"Utot mo! Isama mo pa tatay mong panot! Hahaha! "

Napatingin si Karen sa paslit na si Gabriel.

"Hay Gab-gab bakit ba di ka marunong lumaban? " tinulungan nito ang kaibigan.

"Nakita mo ngang ang laki nun di ba? " palusot ni Gabriel.

"Mataba lang yun."

"Eh ganun na rin yun."

"Nakalimutan mo ba yung tinuro ko sayo? Dapat yun ang ginawa mo! "

"Alin? Yung sipain sa bayag? Ayoko nun. Masakit."

"Eh dapat lang masakit. Alangan namang masarap? Sira ulo ka ba? Tara na nga. May biling Joybee si inay. Hihihi tara kain tayo."

"Um…" napahinto si Gabriel at hinde sumunod kay Karen.

"Oh bakit? "

"Karen… ano kasi…"

"Ano? "

Napatingin si Gabriel kay Karen.

"Sa tingin mo ba lalakas pa ako? "

Napangiti si Karen.

"Oo naman! Darating ang araw na mas malakas ka pa sa akin! "

"Ta.. Talaga? Edi maliligtas kita kung ikaw ang nasa panganib? "

Umiling si Karen at tumingin kay Gabriel.

"Hihi mas marami pang tao! "

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By: Balderic

Nagkaharap muli sa wakas si Gabriel at SAMAEL. Saksi ang buong mundo sa kaganapan. Animo'y tumigil ang oras nang makita nila live sa screen ang isang matindeng labanan na mangyayari sa dalawang magkatunggali.

"Whose the young guy? " tanong ng isang heneral habang nanonood sa screen. Lumapit sa kanya ang kasama nyang opisyal.

"That's Gabriel Marasigan." Sagot nito.

"The Gabriel Marasigan? The man behind the capture of Cifer Black?"

"Yeah. He's also the one who stopped the rampage of the Silent Eight and one of the few people that defeated SAMAEL in a one on one battle."

"So he's our last hope huh."

"Here's us hoping."

Dumating ang isang platoon ng mga COS sa likod ni SAMAEL at tinutok ang mga baril kay Gabriel.

"Hiding behind your men?" tanong ni Gabriel na may halong pang aasar.

"ANY ONE WHO CAN DRAW BLOOD ON THIS MAN WILL BE REWARDED HANDSOMELY. NOW GO! "

"GRAAAAHHH!! " sigawan ng mga COS members at pinagbabaril si Gabriel.

"SHOOOM!!" sumugod at naglaho sa sobrang bilis si Gabriel. Nag iwan ito ng after images sa bawat isang COS member na madaanan nya.

Nag slide ang mga paa ng binata sa lupa matapos ang napakabilis na atake nang daanan nya ang buong hukbo ng COS. Hinde agad naka galaw ang mga tauhan ni SAMAEL.

"S.. So… ss… troonggg… uuunngghh!! " isa isang bumagsak ang mga myembro ng COS.

Tinitigan ni Gabriel si SAMAEL. Nakita nya ang expression ng mukha ng emperor. Mukha itong na susurpresa.

"That really surprised you? " nakangiting tanong ni Gabriel.

"YOUR LIGHT STEP HAS TREMENDOUSLY IMPROVED. I ALMOST BARELY LOST YOU DURING YOUR ATTACK ON MY MEN. BUT REGARDLESS OF THAT, NOT EVEN YOUR SPEED CAN SAVE YOU FROM MY MURAMASA."

"the infamous katana of the Ashura. Not a bad weapon Emperor."

"HE WAS THE STRONGEST WARRIOR WHO EVER LIVED AND I SURPASSED HIM. MY POWER, MY STRENGTH, MY SKILLS, ALL WILL BOW BEFORE ME."

"you're an abomination SAMAEL. An evil that will destroy this world. Your sixth realm, the Asura. I know all about it."

"GOOD! THEN YOU KNOW YOUR TRUE NIRVANA IS INFERIOR TO THE ASURA. I HAVE MASTERED THE CYCLE OF LIFE AND DEATH. COMBINED WITH MY LIMITLESS POWER, I HAVE BECOME A TRUE IMMORTAL! A GOD! HAHAHAHAHA!!!! "

"Give me a break. The Asura realm grants its user the ability to revive the five realms it lost. That means I will have to kill you six more times now in order to stop you permanently. You're not a God, you're just a man obsessed with immortality and you only delayed the inevitable. "

"ENOUGH TALK! YOU SHOULD BOW BEFORE A GOD!" nag stance si SAMAEL at hinawakan ng maayos ang katana sabay atake.

"PHOOOMM!!!" nag dash ito head-on. Mabibilis na mga taga ng Muramasa ang ipinamalas ni SAMAEL. Tumagingting ang blade nito nang masalag ni Gabriel ang bawat atake gamit lamang ang dalawang daliri ng kanang kamay nya habang nakatayo lang. Mas pinabilis ni SAMAEL ang mga taga at animo'y lumalagpas lang sa katawan ni Gabriel ang katana dahil after images na lamang ang kanyang nakikita dahil sa bilis ni Gabriel.

"THIS IS MASTERED ZERO POINT FOCUS TECHNIQUE!!" bulong ni SAMAEL nang ma mangha sa talas ng bawat kilos ng binata.

"KTANG!!! " nahawakan ni Gabriel ang blade at hinde ito maigalaw ni SAMAEL.

"WHAT!?"

Ngumiti si Gabriel.

"Octa Dragon Strike. " simpleng wika ni Gabriel.

"BRAGAM BRAGAM BRAGAM BRAGAM BRAGAM BRAGAM BRAGAM BRAGAM!!!!! " "SHRRRIIIIEEEEEEKKK!! " parehong napa atras ang dalawa nang magbanggaan ang kanilang mga kamao.

"THAT WAS CLOSE. IF I DIDN'T USE MY HELLZONE, I WOULD HAVE BEEN DONE THERE. " bulong ni SAMAEL. Nabigla ito nang maglaho si Gabriel. Nanlaki ang mga mata nya nang maramdaman ang presensya ng Positive Karma sa likod nya.

"Looking for me? "

"WHA!?" "KRAAAGAAAMMMMM!!! " tinanggap ni SAMAEL ang isang malakas na sipa mula sa likod at tumilapon sya palayo. Biglang lumitaw si Gabriel sa paroroonan nya at sinundan ito ng suntok.

"BRAKKK! !" "UURRRGGHHH!!! " bumalik ang talsik ni SAMAEL at sinundan sya ni Gabriel. Parang tennis ball ang katawan ng Emperor sa pag bounce nang sunod-sunod itong suntukin ni Gabriel at mas lalong lumayo ang distansya ng pagtilapon nito.

Tinusok ng Emperor ang katana sa lupa para mahinto ang momentum nya at gumawa ito ng malalim na linya sa lupa. Nasundan sya ni Gabriel at nagtapon ng kamao. Ginamit ni SAMAEL ang Dark Step para mailagan ang suntok kasabay ng mabilis na counter attack nang tagain nito ang binata. Nahawakan muli ni Gabriel ang blade. Dalawang swiping kick ang tumama sa maglabilang pisngi ni SAMAEL at kasunod ang isang frontal kick sa dibdib nya. Nasalag nya ito gamit ang kabilang braso.

Hinablot nya si Gabriel para e headbutt pero naunahan sya ng binata. Hineadbutt ni Gabriel si SAMAEL. Tinapik ang katana at umikot-ikot ito sa ere at nang bumagsak ay sinipa ito ng binata.

"TSAAAGGGG!!!" "AAARGGHHHHHH!!!" baon ang katana sa dibdib ni SAMAEL. Kumukuryente pa ang blade nito nang dahan-dahang hugutin ng Dark Emperor.

"That's one realm gone SAMAEL."

"HAH! THEN I SHALL PAY YOU IN THE DOUBLE! " hawak muli ang sandata nya, umugat ang buong katawan nya at mabilis itong nagtata-taga sa ere kung saan biglang lumagablab ang blade at naghagis ng mga apoy patungo kay Gabriel.

Katulad ito ng technique ni Himeko pero mas malakas na version. Inilagan ng binata ang doble dobleng mga apoy na tinatapon sa kanya. Namangha naman ang mga nakakakita sa pangyayari.

"How is SAMAEL doing that? Is that magic? " pagtataka ng heneral.

"SAMAEL'S attacks are so fast and strong that it made friction with the dust and small stones in the air as he slashes it. That resulted in the blade igniting fire and throwing it to Gabriel." Paliwanag ng isang babae. Napatingin sa kanya ang mga heneral.

"Who are you? "

"Class S Sting Agent Mindy Bond. "

"How old are you? "

Nagroll lang ang mga mata ni Mindy.

"You're one of Talia's people. Why are you here? I thought the Stings are out there fighting."

"I supported the rear units. But after the retreat command came, I've been assigned in the war room as an assistant adviser."

"Heh, really? You're too young to be playing with the big boys here." Mayabang na wika ng matandang mataba na general.

"I've been in the front lines fighting alongside Gabriel Marasigan during the Black Rebellion. My team also assisted various key missions that resulted in the defeat of the biggest crime organizations like the Silent Eight and we've also infiltrated Purgatory a couple of weeks ago. I'm no stranger to tactics General. I suggest you leave your ego at home to your mamma and focus on the mission at hand because once SAMAEL managed to break in here and see you eye to eye, I doubt you and your loud mouth will be enough to stop HIM."

Hinde nakasagot ang heneral. Napa punas nalang ito ng panyo sa panot nyang ulo. Tumalikod ito at humarap sa screen. Matalas namang pinanood ni Mindy ang mga pangyayari.

Makikitang umaapoy ang paligid matapos ang mabibilis na mga atake ni SAMAEL. Walang ni isang tumama kay Gabriel. Masyado itong mabilis gamit ang Light Step. Magaan ang katawan nito at matalas ang focus.

"YOUR MASTERY IN THE ARTS OF THE LOTUS IS COMMENDABLE. SERAPH WOULD BE PROUD."

"he's already proud of me even before he died. My master taught me well."

"BUT YOU COMPLETED YOUR TRAINING WHEN YOU RETURNED IN KUNLUN. I THOUGHT I HAD DESTROYED THE PLACE. THOSE WRETCHED MONKS AND THEIR STUPID NEUTRAL MINDSET. THE LOTUS SHOULD BE CONQUERING THE WORLD. AND I BROUGHT IT HERE ALONG WITH THE SAMSARA."

"they believed in equality and peace. You only bring chaos and destruction."

"I BRING STABILITY AND PROGRESS. LOOK AT MY EMPIRE! YOU SEE HOW FAR IT CHANGED SINCE THEN? THIS VERY SOIL WAS NOTHING BUT A BARREN WASTELAND, ROTTING AND USELESS. A MERE SHADOW FROM ITS FORMER GLORY DURING THE COLD WAR. AND I CAME HERE, AND I SAVED THEM FROM POVERTY AND DEATH! "

Napa isip si Gabriel. Malaki nga ang pinagbago ng Ukraine simula nang sakupin ito at nang kumalat pa ang borders ng Emperyo ay mas lalong naging progresibo ang kaharian nya. Napangiti si Gabriel.

"Your glorious Empire's foundations are made of the million corpses of your victims and your crime is being a plague of humanity itself! "

"THEN TRY AND STOP ME OF YOU CAN!!! GAAABRRIEEEEELLL!!!" sumugod si SAMAEL at sinalubong sya ni Gabriel.

"KRAGAM!! BRAGAMMM!! BAKAAMMM!!! " sabog-sabog ang lupa at konkreto sa malalakas na mga atake ng Katana ng Emperor. Ubod ng bilis na naiilagan ito ni Gabriel. Kumunekta ang mga malulutong na mga suntok ng binata sa bodega ni SAMAEL. Bawat suntok ay tila nahirapan makahinga ang Emperor. Bumagal ito ng kilos. Naging open ang depensa nya. Na elbow block ang kamay ni SAMAEL na may hawak ng katana at bumukas ang dibdib nito. Nanlaki ang mga mata ng Emperor sa paparating na combo ni Gabriel.

"BRAGAM BRAGAM BRAGAM BRAGAM BRAGAM BRAGAM BRAGAM BRAGAM BRAGAM BRAGAM!! " sumabog ang malalakas na mga suntok ni Gabriel sa katawan ni SAMAEL. Buga nang buga ng dugo ang Emperor sa matitindeng impact sa katawan nya. Nagliyab ang mga mata ni SAMAEL. Sinakluban ito ng sobrang galit.

"GGGRRAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!!!!" tinaga nya si Gabriel gamit ang buong lakas nya. Sinalubong naman ito ni Gabriel ng isang kamay.

"KPAK! " nahawakan nya ang blade.

"KTAANNGGGG!!!!!" naputol ang katana sa lakas ng palm strike ni Gabriel dito. Tumilapon ang dulo ng katana sa ere. Naghanda ng counter strike si Gabriel. Pero bigla syang niyakap ni SAMAEL.

"NOW YOU'RE MINEEEEE!!! GRAAAAAAARRR!! " sinalo ng bibig nya ang dulo ng naputol na katana nang bumagsak ito at agad itinarak sa kanang balikat ni Gabriel.

"TSAAAGG!!!" "AAAAAAGGHH!!! " sigaw ng binata. Napangiti naman si SAMAEL at isang mabilis na hiwa ang ginawa nya para mas malaki ang sugat na ibibigay nya.

"SSHRRIIPP! " "UURRGGHH! " "KTAAGG! " hineadbutt agad ni Gabriel si SAMAEL at nakahiwalay silang dalawa.

Hinihingal na binunot ni Gabriel ang talim. Nag fighting stance si SAMAEL. Isang stance na familiar si Gabriel. Gagamitin ni SAMAEL ang Deathzone. Isa sa pinaka deadliest na technique ng isang samsara user. Bawat atake nito ay nakadesenyo para tapusin kaagad ang kalaban. Naghanda rin ng sariling Lotus stance si Gabriel.

"SSHHOOMMMM!!!" naglaho ang dalawa sa isang pikit-mata. Kasunod nito ang malalakas na shockwaves ng mga suntok at mga atake sa iba-t ibang dako. Hinde masundan ng mga mata ang bilis nila at animo'y invisible na ang mga ito. Laglag ang mga panga ng mga taong nanonood sa laban. Tanging ang mga mandirigma at bihasa sa labanan ang tanging nakaka kita sa dalawa pero kahit sila ay hirap ding sundin ang kilos ng magkatunggali. After images nalang ang naaabutan nila.

"KRAGAMMM!! KRAAAAGG!! " wasak ang mga pader at nagsitalsikan ang debris nang mahagip ito ng dalawa. Nagkaroon ng streaks ang lupa sa bawat dash at galaw ng dalawa. Lumitaw si SAMAEL at dinampot ang isang kotse saka hinagis. Nahati ito sa gitna nang daanan ni Gabriel at naglaho muli ang dalawa.

"Holy shit! What the hell is going on!? They're practically disappearing! How can they move so damn fast? " mangha ng heneral. Napatingin sila kay Mindy.

"Don't look at me. I have no idea what the fuck I'm watching right now." Sagot ng dalaga. Napa iling nalang sila.

Samantala, sa loob naman ng Medical Bay, tahimik na nanonood si Yumiko habang may oxygen mask ito at nakahiga sa kama. Napaluha ito habang pinapanood ang laban ni Gabriel at SAMAEL. Hinde nya mapigilang mapapiga ng kamao at nanginginig ang kanyang braso.

"Master….please… .do your best… .don't lose!! " bulong nya sa sarili.

"KRAKOOOOMMMM!!!" sumabog ang isang pader nang bumangga dito ang katawan ni Gabriel pero agad itong tumayo at sumugod. Nagtagisan muli ng mga atake ang dalawa. Parehong naka activate ang malalakas nilang technique. Ang Deathzone ni SAMAEL at Mastered Absolute Zero.

Tinamaan ng tadyak si SAMAEL at tumilapon ito sa isang gasoline truck.

"BRAAAGGOOOOOMMM!!!! " sumabog ang truck at nagdulot ito ng malakas na bolang apoy na makikita ng ilang kilometro. Mula sa apoy ay lumabas ang nasusunog na katawan ni SAMAEL. Dahan dahang nagregenerate ito matapos matupok. Isang realm nanaman ang natanggal ni Gabriel.

Ngumiti lang ang EMPEROR kay Gabriel.

"PERHAPS I'VE BEEN UNDERESTIMATING YOUR SKILLS BOY. HEH! YOUR MASTER DIED AFTER USING NIRVANA BUT YOU'RE KEEPING UP WITH ME USING ITS HIGHEST TECHNIQUES. HOWEVER, UNLIKE ME, YOUR BODY DOES NOT REGENERATE ONCE ITS EXHAUSTED OF POWER. SO MY QUESTION IS, HOW LONG CAN YOU KEEP THIS UP BOY? "

"long enough to kill you."

"HAHAHAHA! WE SHALL SEE."

Biglang naramdaman ni Gabriel ang kakaibang negative karma. Narealize nyang nasa loob sya ng range ng Deathzone. Nagawa nyang maiwasan ang bawat atake ni SAMAEL sa paghaharpa nila dahil sa Mastered Absolute Zero at ang bilis nya gamit ang Light Step, subalit ngayon ay nakatayo lang sya at walang kadepe-depensa.

"Shit." Bulong nya at agad syang umatras pero nasa likod na nya si SAMAEL.

"GRAAAAH! !" isang wild arm swing mula sa likod ang nailagan ni Gabriel pero nasundan ito ng isang suntok sa tagiliran nya.

"BRAAGG!!!" "AARRGH!! " tumalsik si Gabriel at nagpagulong-gulong sa lupa. Ramdam nya ang pag crack ng tatlong ribs nya. Mabilis na nakalapit ang Emperor at tinadyakan sya pero agad nya itong na block at lumayo. Nakalabas sya sa Deathzone para magrecover. Hinawakan nya ang tagiliran. Ramdam nya ang hapdi nito at hirap ng paghinga.

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By: Balderic

Sa kabilang bahagi ng labanan ay patuloy ang gyera ng NWA at COS. Isa sa mga tumutulong sa NWA ay si Alexia. Nasa likod ito at patuloy ang pag snipe sa mga kalaban. Napasok na nila ang teritoryo ng Purgatory at tila alon na walang hinto sa pag atake. Dahil sa tinde ng mga pinsala ng Emperyo at ang dami ng napatay sa hanay nila, nawawalan na ng morale ang COS.

Subalit, nang makapasok ang NWA ay sinalubong ng QWAD units ang mga sundalo. Umulan ng bala sa paligid. Light armor vehicles versus QWADS. Gamit ang high velocity penetrating bullets ni Alexia, wasak ang bawat ma target nyang mga QWAD units. Pero sadyang mobile ang mga artificial anti personnel weapons na mga ito. Mabibilis at ang advanced AI mainframe nila ay kayang makareact ng kilos at desisyon sa laban sa loob lang ng ilang nano seconds.

Marami ang napatay na mga sundalo. Masyadong accurate ang QWAD units. Umatras at gumawa ng oerimeter line ang NWA para hinde sila mapalayo ng atras. Isa isang bumagsak ang mga tanke na dala nila. Nabuhayan naman ng loob ang COS at sumugod muli.

"We're pinned! We need artillery support now! Tag the targets and radio the coordinates!" utos ng ground commander. Gamit ang mga red lasers, tinutukan ng mga ito ang targets nilang QWAD units at tumawag ng support.

"Negative on the artillery support commander, our rear forces were decimated by SAMAEL earlier. We will however bring additional local militias to support your forces. Hang tight."

"What the fuck? Local militias? What the hell can they do? Throw garbage bottles at these damn things!? "

"This is Alexia Romanova, hold your forces in line Commander. I'll destroy QWAD units as many as I can. Meanwhile, mobilize your demolition team and create a funnel so the enemy forces are forced to attack you in a limited space. Proceeding on foot will be too dangerous as long as these robots are on the way."

"Okay….thanks for the advice. We're on your mercy now Alexia."

"Roger that Commander. " sabay asinta ng isang QWAD. Napadila ng labi si Alexia at binaril ang QWAD unit. Tinamaan ito sa main body at sumabog. Tumagingting ang malaking basyo ng sniper rifle ng babae nang ito ay magreload.

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By: Balderic

Mainland China

Isang malaking kahihiyan para sa Chinese army ang hayaang mapasok sila ng NWA forces sa Asian War Theater. May kalakihan na ang porsyento ng teritoryong nasakop ng NWA forces. Mas marami man ang mga sundalong tsino, mas advanced naman ang kagamitan at skills ng NWA forces.

Upang maiwasan ng NWA forces na ma overrun sila ng napakaraming sundalong Tsino, hinati ng NWA forces ang mga tropa nito para mapilitang hatiin din ng Tsina ang mga pangkat nila at sa isang short duration firefight at mine maintain ang mobilization ng NWA para hinde sila ma stuck sa iisang lugar lang.

Masyado namang kompyansa ang mga Tsino dahil teritoryo na nila ito at daan daang pambobomba ang ginawa nila gamit ang mga fighter jets sa kinaroroonan ng mga NWA forces. Hinde ito masyadong epektibo dahil nakakapag tago ang mga ito sa mga gusali.

Ipinag utos ni Pres Guang Han Yang na ubusin ang mga NWA forces at walang ititirang buhay. Isang malaking hukbo ng mga Tsino ang nakasagupa ng platoon ni Aidan. Bukod sa laki ng pangkat, may mga kasama pa itong armored division at QWAD units mula sa Emperyo.

Alistong nag set up ng ambush site ang grupo ni Aidan. Sa isang highway na may matataas na mga gusali nagtago ang grupo. Dumaan ang malaking pangkat ng mga Tsino at nang nasa mismong kill zone na sila ay pinagsabog nina Aidan ang pillars ng mga gusaling nakapaligid. Animo'y parang mga dagang nagsipulasan ang mga Tsino dahil sa pabagsak na malalaking gusali. Buong natabunan nila ang Armored Division na nasa unahan ng convoy.

Matapos ito ay nabalot ng makapal na usok at alikabok ang paligid pero hinde ito naging hadlang sa grupo at rinatrat nila ito ng mga machine guns. Marami ang napatay na mga kalaban habang hirap ang mga itong makarecover ng formation. Pinalibutan ng grupo ni Aidan ang mga ito at isang matindeng sweeping assault ang inilunsad. Makalipas ang ilang minuto ay wala nang nakitang gumagalaw sa mga debris at ang nasa huling hukbo ay walang nagawa kundi ang sumuko. Daan daang tsino ang napasuko ng grupo.

"Goddammit Lt. Torres, this is one hell of an accomplishment." Wika ng isang amerikanong officer na kasama sa operation. Nag radio sila sa nagawang mission at agad nag mobilize ng mga tropa para kunin ang mga POW nila. Samantala, nagpatuloy naman sina Aidan na pumasok sa teritoryo ng Tsina.

Forbidden City

"This cannot go on! We lost an entire army from a small group of NWA forces. If it keeps up, we will lose not only our reputation but our influence to the entire country! " wika ng isang adviser.

Tahimik lang na nakikinig si Pres Guang Han Yang habang patuloy sa pagbabangayan ang kanyang inner circle.

"How do we stop the NWA? They've proven their effectiveness in frontal assaults and their operations are being done in almost guerilla type tactics that avoids our main forces and attacks in fast and short confrontations."

"Use the Black Sun." maikling wika ni Pres Yang. Napatingin sa kanya ang mga tauhan nya.

"You mean, the Tetragrammaton Bomb?"

"Use it on their main forces and wipe them off the planet."

"But the NWA forces are scattered in different locations. And targeting them could potentially kill our own troops as well."

"I don't care! I want them all killed! " sigaw ng presidente. Nagkatinginan ang mga advisers nya.

"Mr. President, if I may…."

"BLAM! " isang bala ang tumapos sa adviser nang barilin ito ng bodyguard. Tumayo ang Presidente.

"Don't forget who you're talking to. I command the entire people's republic red army. If I say, use the Black Sun then do it. Destroy all those who oppose us and make them all suffer."

Tahimik ang inner circle. Takot para sa mga buhay nila. Hanggang biglang bumukas ang isang pinto at pumasok ang grupo ng mga armadong pangkat.

"What is this!? " gulat ng presidente. Pumasok ang isang babaeng tsino na naka general uniform. Mukhang bata pa ito para sa kanyang ranggo.

"General Ling Gong Li?" gulat ng presidente at ng mga kasama nya. Tinutukan sila ng baril.

"President Yang, in the name of the People's republic of China, you are under arrest for your crimes to the people." Wika ni Gen Li.

"You dare to arrest me? Guards! Kill them! " utos ng Presidente subalit hinde nakapalag ang mga bodyguards nya nang tinutukan na ang mga ito ng baril. Walang nagawa ang presidente kundi ang sumuko. Hinuli ito at pinusasan.

"You'll pay for this treachery Gen Li. I swear it in the name of my family." Wika ng presidente.

"Your failures in containing the conflicts has led the republic to replace you as its supreme leader. You are a weak leader Pres. Yang."

"And who will replace me? You? What a pathetic excuse for your coup d etat."

"The people will decide, not me." Sabay ngiti ni Gen Li.

"The people, hah! You're going to sacrifice me for your own political ambition."

"The sacrifice is necessary to save the republic."

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By: Balderic

Bumulusok ang isang steel bar na parang palaso at inilagan ito ni Gabriel. Bumaon ang bakal sa isang pader. Tatlo pang mga steel bars ang magkakasunod ding inilagan ng binata at pare-parehong tumuhog sa pader. Isang malaking tipak ng semento ang hinagis pa ulit papunta sa kanya. Hinugot ni Gabriel ang steel bar at mabilis na tinapik ang semento. Durog ito sa impact at mabilis na winawasiwas ni Gabriel ang steel bar na parang bo staff ng isang shaolin monk at nag stance ito.

Lumipad ang ilan pang debris patungo kay Gabriel. Bawat isa ay pinalo nya ng steel bar. Isang dagger ang biglang hinagis ni SAMAEL kay Gabriel at tinapik nya ito sa ere at agad sinipa. Bumalik ito kay SAMAEL pero iniwasan nya ito. Nagulat sya nang makitang nasa gilid nya na si Gabriel at akmang papalo gamit ang steel bar.

"KTANGGG!!!" hinampas si SAMAEL ng steel bar sa likod at bumagsak ito sa lupa. Malakas naman ang vibrate ng bakal dahil sa impact. Inikot ni Gabriel ang steel bar at ang kabilang dulo na nasa lupa ay paitaas na papalo sa Emperor.

Nahawakan ito ni SAMAEL at binali ng isang mabilis na palm chop. Nahati sa gitna ang steel bar. Kinuha ni Gabriel ang kaputol at ginamit ang dalawang parte ng steel bar bilang pamalo. Sumugod muli si Gabriel at mabilis nitong pinagpapalo ang Emperor. Sinalag naman ni SAMAEL ang bawat atake at hinuli ang mga kamay ng binata. Isang drop kick ang binigay ng binata at tinamaan sa dibdib si SAMAEL.

Napa atras ang Emperor at nagulat ito nang hatawin ang likod ng tuhod nya gamit ang steel bar. Natumba si SAMAEL at sinalubong ang isang pababang palo sa katawan. Pina ikot-ikot ni Gabriel ang mga steel bars at sinaksak sa nakatumbang Emperor.

Sinakal bigla si Gabriel at tumayo ang Emperor. Sinubukan nyang saksakin ang katawan nito pero umilag si SAMAEL at hinampas sya sa isang pader. Nag crack ang pader at isang backhand ang pumalo sa mukha nya. Tinadyakan nya sa tagiliran at panga ang Emperor para makawala pero ibinagsak sya sa lupa. Inagawa ni SAMAEL ang mga steel bars at hinagis.

"I KNOW THE FEELING, BOY!" hinablot ni SAMAEL si Gabriel at binuhat lampas sa ulo nya.

"THAT'S THE FAMILIAR FEELING OF DEATH! FACE IT! " binagsak nya na parang sako ng bigas ang katawan ng binata sa lupa. Kasunod nito ang pag apak nya sa ulo ni Gabriel. Pinigilan ito ng binata git ang buong lakas nya.

"Ungghhh!!!" ungol ni Gabriel habang nakikipagtagisan ng lakas. Napasilip sya sa steel bars na nasa gilid.

"IT ALL STARTS WITH PAIN, THEN YOU START DOUBTING YOURSELF, YOUR MOVEMENTS TURN SLOW, AND YOU REACT POORLY TO PRESSURE. THAT'S WHEN YOU'LL FACE YOUR MORTALITY! "

"shut up!! " "KTAG!! " tinadyakan ni Gabriel ang tuhod ng kabilang paa ni SAMAEL. Na dislocate nito ang tuhod ng Emperor at nakawala sya. Inabot nya steel bar at bago pa maka recover si SAMAEL ay sinaksak nya ito sa gilid ng tenga.

"TSAAAG! " tagos sa kabilang tenga ang steel bar nang matumba si SAMAEL. Medyo mahina si Gabriel na umatras sa katawan ng Emperor. Dito nya narinig ang malagim na tawa ni SAMAEL.

"GAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! EXCELLENT PERFORMANCE BOY! BUT THE DAMAGE ONLY MADE ME MUCH STRONGER! THE MORE TIMES YOU KILL ME, THE STRONGER I...

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Waters
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Salamat sa finale Sir Bal :)

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Balderic
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Welcome po

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angdakila
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Nice

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Balderic
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Thanks 😁😁

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Gentlemanghost007
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

An end of a breath taking series....😥😥😥😥

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Balderic
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Thank you po 😇

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tenten690
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

❤️❤️❤️

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July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

😇😇😇 hehe

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chrimespayce
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Salamat idolo

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Balderic
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Salamat din po

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Rotsen678
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Sir hindi po ba talaga mabasa yung ch.73?

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Balderic
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Let me check

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kantaloy
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Maraming salamat idol... Napakaganda ng iyong gawa/akda..
Been your avid follower .More POWER

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Balderic
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Thank you po 😇😇

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momoshiie20
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Thank you boss bal sa magandang story

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Balderic
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Welcome po 😃😃

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hokage
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Thank you idol

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Balderic
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Thank you din po 🤗🤗🤗

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Jhaylee6
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Salamat sa Finals chapter Sir Eric, sana po sunod naman yong Agnas🔥🔥🔥

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Balderic
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

I will work on it 😊😊

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MarkLee21
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Master thank you!!!

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Balderic
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Thank you din po 🤗🤗🤗

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Jhaylee6
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Salamat sa Final chapter ng HoH Sir Eric, sana po sunod naman po yong Agnas🔥🔥

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Balderic
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Agnas let's see hehe

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jack_oler12
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

salamat boss sa pagtatapos ng isang magandang obra.

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Balderic
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Salamat din po sa pagbasa 😀😀

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badong1975
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

thank you po..your whole effort is very much appreciated..keep on writing inspiring and lesson laden stories..

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Balderic
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Thank you po. I appreciate the readers like you din po 😊😊

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kantaloy
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Thank u idol

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Balderic
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Welcome po 😀

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Balderic
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Thank you too 😁😁

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Balderic
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Putek nag double reply 😂

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gainax_jin
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Damn. Napakaepic ng ending. Handsdown talaga ako sa mga story mo SirBalderic. Thank you!!!

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Balderic
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Maraming salamat po 😇

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sharmfaker
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Sana maraming iyutan sa sunod na obra mo sir..yung ben 12 sana then ashley at karen

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Balderic
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Hehe titignan natin yan Ben Dose

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jero1978
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

MARAMING salamat SA napakagandang pagtatapos Ng iyung obra sir Bald , obrang tatatak SA isipan Ng bawat magbabasa , napakalufet mo boss

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Balderic
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Maraming salamat po hehehe

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Addy_Lanzon
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Wow. Oh wow. What a fantastic finish! Grabe Sir B, ilang taon rin ang ginugol ninyo sa pagsusulat ng istoryang ito, definitely worth it talaga ang ending grabe.

Wala pang pandemya nung nagsimula ang series na ito, and now fast forward, 2021, nandito na tayo, wow, what a journey, a great milestone for you Sir B. Congratulations po! 👏👏👏

"ain't gonna give a crap to dummies"

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Balderic
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

A huge milestone for me for sure.

Thank you sir 😁

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CallmeCeekei
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Sobrang ganda boss thanks po sa pag share ng magaganda mong stories 😊

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Balderic
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Thanks din po 🤗

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kanton123
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Lupit mo lodi

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Balderic
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Hehe thanks

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gil251975
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Nice sir balderic

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Balderic
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Thank you 😊😊

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jeff888
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Galing Sir

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Balderic
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

😁😁 thank you

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Tazman_ic
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Bravo! The Heaven and Hell series is a modern day epic at par with Filipino classics like Biag ni Lam-ang. Ang husay ng utak nyo sir!

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Balderic
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Matindeng comparisons yan ah hehehe salamat po

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Benjie_Fixer
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Salamat lalabas naba ang agnas

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Balderic
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Titignan ko pa po

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GeorgeLapayag
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Thank you for sharing this atory. Am avid fan of yiurs. Hoping that you'll continue to share your gift to us.
Once again, thank you very much!

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Balderic
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

I will keep writing as long as I can
😀 thank you po sa comments

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mamangan69
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Isa sa the best story na pinakaaabangan ko ito... Maraming salamat idol sa napakagandang istorya na iniambag mo sa amin mga readers... God bless idol.. ❤️❤️❤️

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Balderic
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Salamat po. Sana'y suportahan nyo pa ang iba ko pang isusulat 😄😄

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palahabal87
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

wow! salamat sir, napakagandang obra. gawan mo rin ng kwento ang anak ni gabriel sir 😊

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Balderic
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Maybe hehehe

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McLovinLovin
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Everything has it's end.. tapos na ang mission and story ni gab but his legacy lives on thru his daughter angela..

Thank you sir balderic sa sulit na obra looking forward sa adventures ni angela and if ever yun pagbabalik ng iba mo pang obra katulad ng agnas etc

More power, more classic stories to come

Too Horny to Sleep, Too Sleepy to Fap

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Balderic
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

The legend never ends hehehe

Thank you sa pagtangkilik at pagsubaybay 🙂🙂

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erotiko
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

salute to you author Balderic and thank you for the entertainment that HoH brought to us. its your story that i get hooked up in FSS, patiently waiting every episode no matter how far in between. i hope you can share more interesting stories in rhe near future. salamat ulit!

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Balderic
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

I will do my best to keep writing 😇

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rgul79
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

thanks sir Bald sa yung obra..sa susunod ulit..keep safe

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Balderic
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Yup hehe sa uulitin 😁

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RedDragon
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Ending theme para sa ating napakagiting na bayani na si Gabriel Marasigan
🎶I’m living through these days to bring you tomorrow’s smile, rather than yesterday’s tears. Burning the hot flame of life into my eyes, I risk for the one I love. Ah! Man is a soldier wandering alone within unending time Ah! Hold to those days that won’t return…so far away.🎶
Grabe tanda ko pa nung sinimulan ko ito wala lang ako maggawa nung araw na iyon hanggang sa inabangan ko na ito ngayon sa point na ito talagang from start to finish Heaven or Hell is a modern erotic/action webnovel masterpiece series imo.
Ngayon payapa na si Gabriel na may ngiti sa kanyang mukha magkasama na sila ni Karen sa huli kung nasaan man sila gagabayan at babantayan si Angela.

Napakalaking Thank You sa iyo BALDERIC isa ka talagang Alamat!

"Imagination is a weapon. Those who lack it are first to die."

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Balderic
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Memories my man. Memories. I love it. 🤗🤗🤗

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nhivs23
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Isa to sa mga story na kahit natapos na eh uulit ulitin kong basahin.......

A salute to you SIR BAL........
Job well done.......
A masterpiece has ended but I'm sure there will be new stories that will unfold in the coming days........

More power sayo SIR

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Balderic
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Mahaba sya kung uulitin hehehe pero salamat ng marami at hinde kayo nagsasawa sa pagtangkilik

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kuatog
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

yoooownnnnn !!!!! nice paking ina nemennn bangis mo boss !!!! sana e may sequel ulit ito hahaha alam ko meron e nu ...thanks salamat agyamanak sir 👊👊👊👌👌👌...

basta masarap go !!!

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Balderic
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Sequels could happen. Depende din hehehe

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PilyongPapa1220
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Salamat author!

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Balderic
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Walang ano man po 😊

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Shuishui
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

The Tale Of Gabriel Marasigan~

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Balderic
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

The Legend

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Rendezvous0828
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Wow..... Just wow boss idol balderic❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️... Maraming maraming salamat po sa napakalupet na masterpiece ng obra mo.... More powers po and keep safe always.... God bless you more boss idol 🙏😇🙏

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Balderic
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Salamat din hehehe 😊😊😊

Keep safe din sayo and the family. Always

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cornets23
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Parang goku vs jiren yung labanan haha. Nice boss cloud at natapos na din mauumpisahan kona ang agnas. Sana complete series sya sa page na ito yung iba kasi na dedelete

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Balderic
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Hinde ako si cloud sir ahehehe pero salamat din sa support as always 😁

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pinoyiniho2012
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

thank you very much sir balderic for the update. tahnks again author and hope to read more of your masterpiece story. more power and god bless. . .

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Balderic
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

More stories to come na dapat abangan hehe 😊

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diegomadara
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Hail to the king!

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Balderic
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Hehe salamat 😅😄😄

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Migbert12
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Anu na nagyare kay ben at anu magaganap sa parallel dimension may twist kaya aabangan ko ang kasunod na yugto

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Balderic
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

The quantum universe continues maybe next time

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thugslines
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Salamat idol sa napakagandang soty series ang iyong nilikha sana magkaroon ng bagong series  n aabangan sa mga susunod n mga araw lingo o buwan maraming salamat sa iyo kaibigan

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Balderic
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Thank you din at hayaan mo marami pa tayong e sheshare na story

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simple_manyakis
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

You are legend! More power Bal.  Best story i've read in this site. Waiting for more

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Balderic
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

More are coming hehe abang nalang ulit

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BladeMaster_Elven
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

What a great series, a great mind Para mabuo ang story na ito. Sa bawat line ng story parang nanonood ako ng isang movie na talagang susubaybayan ng mga manonood.

Salamat lodi sa isang magandang obra

Kung kaya nila, kaya ko din

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Balderic
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

I try to keep vivid details para mas ma immerse ang readers hehe

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unseenmeh
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

maraming salamat sa finale sir bal....grabe sulit yung haba sa ganda ng kwento....

sa muling pagkikita Angela Marasigan...🙂🙂🙂

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Balderic
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

We shall see

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Alyasgwapo
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Daya mo boss bald namatay si gabriel kala ko sasama pa sya sa dalawang galing sa ibang mundo hays anyway ang ganda ng story mo boss bald aabangan ko yang sa anak ni gabriel HAHAHAHAHAHA

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Balderic
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Things didn't turn out the way it should be hehe

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simplemeh
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Parang nakakalungkot lang na tapoa na ang istorya ni gabriel, pero sir bal sana may.part din na.naexplain kung anung nangyari sa ibang character.. Anyway ilang taon ko to sinubaybayan

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Balderic
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Open ended ang ibang parte ng story so maybe in time, magkakaroon din ako ng pagkakataon para ma venture ko din kung ano ang nangyari sa ibang characters

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simplemeh
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Ok sir bal.. Maraming salamat

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Balderic
July 4, 2021 (21 days ago)

No probs 😊

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rhadz2467
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Salamat sa walang tigil na pagsulat sir Bal. Hanggang sa susunod mong kwento.

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Balderic
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Sa susunod ulit. Iba naman hehehe

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bystander
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

OMG. End of an era.

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Balderic
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Yes it is. Kaya kakaibang emotion ko ngayon eh 😄

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37West42
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Thanks you sa sobrang angas na ending Sir B! Parang si Iron Man lang a. Hahaha. Waiting nalang sa next installment ng story mo kung ano mang kasunod. Kahit ano pa yan, babasahin ko yan! Thank you Thank you 😁🥳
Stay healthy and keep safe sa inyo ng family mo Sir 💪💪💪

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37West42
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Pero naalala ko may nakita akong draft sa group Ben12 or HOH 6 Requiem ba yun. Dko sure HAHAHAHAHA

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Balderic
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Yes may draft nga ako about that hehehe

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Balderic
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Medyo hawig nga sa endgame haha pero naplano ko na ito before pa marelease ang endgame. 😁

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Edzone
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Salute sayo lods BALDERIC.. Agnas naman idol or ung kay ben at Ashley naman hehe..salamat ng marami pang movie talaga ung ginagawa mo..hehe

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Balderic
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Pag paplanuhan ko pa hehehe

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Edzone
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Salute sayo lods BALDERIC.. Agnas naman idol or ung kay ben at Ashley naman hehe..salamat ng marami pang movie talaga ung ginagawa mo..hehe.. salamat ulit

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Balderic
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Welcome 😇😆

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malupet25
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Thank You Boss sa lahat.

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Balderic
July 4, 2021 (21 days ago)

My pleasure 😊

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sta7k3r
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Salamat, Sir Balderic! Pwede na pangNetflix. Galing talaga.

Cogito, ergo sum.

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Balderic
July 4, 2021 (21 days ago)

Hehe yayaman ako nyan kapag ma netflix na 😀

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reicool
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Thanks boss. Napakaganda ng stories mo. Babalik balikan ko pa din at imamarathon ng pagbabasa😊 looking forward sa next series mo boss. Cheers 🍻🍻🍻

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Balderic
July 4, 2021 (21 days ago)

Mahaba-habang marathon din yun 😀 thank you

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krismille
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Salamat sa stories mo sir. Hopefully we'll see more from you.

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Balderic
July 4, 2021 (21 days ago)

We will I guarantee that 😇

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BumpandGrind
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

HANDS UP & HANDS DOWN! 🙌 Grabe, wala akong masabi sir B. Hindi na ako makapag-hintay 'pag nabasa ko 'to with animation. Maraming salamat! 🙂

READY. AIM. SHOOT. BANG. HIT.

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Balderic
July 4, 2021 (21 days ago)

Hands up hands down

Kala ko exercise eh hehehe
Thank you 😁😀

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Jack0519
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Its been a long journey for Gabriel. Im glad that's its finish so you can start a new one with his daughter.

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Balderic
July 4, 2021 (21 days ago)

A long journey indeed 😊😊 dumating din sa katapusan

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Tahimiklang
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Salute and Thank you so much sir Idol..

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Balderic
July 4, 2021 (21 days ago)

Thank you very much 🤗

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blacksun20
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Salamat sir bal nakakagandang ending, salamat sa oras at effort pra ishare sa amin. Looking forward sa mga bagong aming aabangan muli.pero dapat rest muna sir  stay safe and healthy and refresh goodluck dito lang kame sor bal. Godbless salamat ulet. Rip . Gab gab the legend..

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Balderic
July 4, 2021 (21 days ago)

Maraming salamat din 😊😊😊

Yup tama ka,rest muna ako. Lalo pa naka quarantined pa ako. Babalik din ako with new stories to make

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kokeishi
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

yung lovelife naman ni ben idol

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Balderic
July 4, 2021 (21 days ago)

Love life at sex life ahehehe

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yhanz15
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Salamat lodi sa pagshare ng magandang storya. Pang movie tlaga. Waiting for the next stories to come..

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Balderic
July 4, 2021 (21 days ago)

Abang abang ulit tayo hehe

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jerome143
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

I salute you sir for being a magnificent Author.

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Balderic
July 4, 2021 (21 days ago)

Thank you for the undying support

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Cumming69
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Maraming salamat at ibinahagi mo ang kwento ni gabriel. Natapos man ang kwento nia may aabangan pang bagong kwento. thank you author

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Balderic
July 4, 2021 (21 days ago)

Walang ano man po.
And yeah, maybe it's time for the new breed to make their own journey too

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Lenovo29
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Wow hayop ganda ng ending sobra  napaka lupit . Ano na nang yari kay ben

Weeeee29

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Balderic
July 4, 2021 (21 days ago)

Ben survived the war. Ahehe

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LonelyMan032813
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Maramkmg marami ng salamat idol bal... Isa Kang henyo sa larangan ng pagsusulat... Sana po ay marami kpang magawang obra maestra.... Kudos po sa susunod mo pa na isusulat.....

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Balderic
July 4, 2021 (21 days ago)

I will try as many as I can. And this time, medyo iba naman

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simplemeh
July 3, 2021 (21 days ago)

Paano nga plang mangyayari kasi dba nirerecruite c gab ni elias, kaso dedbols na.. Hmm

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Balderic
July 4, 2021 (21 days ago)

Well considered what happened, mag iiba ng plano si Elias

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simplemeh
July 4, 2021 (20 days ago)

Sinira mo naman agad ung idea ko boss bal.. Ahahaha akala ko magkakaroon pa ng twist eh..

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Balderic
July 5, 2021 (19 days ago)

Ganyan talaga 😁😁

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peralta18
July 4, 2021 (21 days ago)

Ben 12 sana idolo

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Balderic
July 4, 2021 (21 days ago)

Here's finger crossing 🙂🙂

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edzpastoral
July 4, 2021 (21 days ago)

na paiyak ako don ahhh, salamat sir ganda talaga ng mga likha mo , waiting sa susunod mong ubra, sana ben 10 hahahhah

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Balderic
July 4, 2021 (21 days ago)

Hehe sensya na at napa iyak kita. Ako man ay emotional din sa pagsulat ko ng huling bahagi 😄

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Bubots
July 4, 2021 (21 days ago)

Boss balderic lang sakalam..
Salamat po sir. Sa update..

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Balderic
July 4, 2021 (21 days ago)

Hehe salamat po

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icephantom11
July 4, 2021 (21 days ago)

Awesome! Kahit naluha ako sa bandang huli! Mote power to you author!

Malibog ako kahit tanong mo pa sa jowa mo!

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Balderic
July 4, 2021 (20 days ago)

Ako man ay naging emotional hehe malaki ang naging bahagi ng stories na ito sa buhay ko

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kuhol
July 4, 2021 (21 days ago)

You’re a legend and truly gifted. Please continue sharing the “gifts” to your loving fans. I followed this novel for years.

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Balderic
July 4, 2021 (20 days ago)

Thank you for your kind words. 😊😊😊 of course I will keep sharing my gifts to everyone as long as I can

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HAROHARO
July 4, 2021 (21 days ago)

thank you idolens..

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Balderic
July 4, 2021 (20 days ago)

You're welcome po 🤗

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Ross789
July 4, 2021 (21 days ago)

Salamat sa napakagandang pagtatapos boss bal ❤️

May panibago nnman aabangan, Angela and raiden 😊

Keep safe always and Godbless boss bal ❤️

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Balderic
July 4, 2021 (20 days ago)

Ahehe we shall see what happens if ever. My doors are open for an expanded universe

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SisigAdobo
July 4, 2021 (21 days ago)

SALAMAT BOSS BALDERIC!!

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Balderic
July 4, 2021 (20 days ago)

My pleasure sir 😀

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killer_thugs
July 4, 2021 (21 days ago)

nakakaiyak mababawasan na naman ung inaabangan ko huhuhu. pero napakalupit mo idol pakiss nga

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Balderic
July 4, 2021 (20 days ago)

Ay hehe

Thank you sa kiss 😅

But yeah, mababawasan pero may dadagdag naman as always

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Jacum
July 4, 2021 (20 days ago)

Salamat sa napakagandang pagtatapos master. Marunong ng lotus stance si angela kahit walang nagturo sa kanya? Kaabang-abang...

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Balderic
July 4, 2021 (20 days ago)

Well that's just a hint. The question is as surprising as Yumiko's reaction hehe

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Abet_29
July 4, 2021 (20 days ago)

Thank you master
Sana di ka magsawang mag share ng bagong obra
Lahat kaming avid readers mo nag aabang sa bagong obra na ilalabas mo
Hanggang sa, muli master
Aabangan namin ang bawat obra na iyong ilalathala

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Balderic
July 4, 2021 (20 days ago)

Maraming salamat sa pag tatangkilik ng mga obra ko. No worries, darating din tayo sa iba't ibang titles hehe

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Robert_
July 4, 2021 (20 days ago)

Thanks sa story ni Gabriel frm to start to finished and also ky Adam Marasigan,sana matuloy ky Ben at Ashley Sir

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Balderic
July 4, 2021 (20 days ago)

Nasa plans ko na yung karugtong ng Ben Dose

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jaxx098
July 4, 2021 (20 days ago)

Salamt sir sa story Looking forward sa next story

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Balderic
July 4, 2021 (20 days ago)

Looking forward din ako hehe 🤗

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jjo_farm
July 4, 2021 (20 days ago)

Nice looking forward to the next one.

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jjo_farm
July 4, 2021 (20 days ago)

Thanks btw

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Balderic
July 4, 2021 (20 days ago)

Welcome po 🙂🤗

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Balderic
July 4, 2021 (20 days ago)

Next story will be different naman hehe

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mhonster
July 4, 2021 (20 days ago)

Thank you for the wonderful stories you have made. More stories to come. Keep safe always and healthy. God Bless you and your family.

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Balderic
July 4, 2021 (20 days ago)

Thank you. God bless din po sa inyo

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altom02
July 4, 2021 (20 days ago)

Wooh panalo!!! Mga labanan akala mo dragon ball!!!

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Balderic
July 4, 2021 (20 days ago)

More like dragon bold 😅😅😅

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Acehardon
July 4, 2021 (20 days ago)

The best story written.
Kasing legend mo si Gabriel author.
Salamat sa Obra mo

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Balderic
July 4, 2021 (20 days ago)

Hehehe salamat po

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Smiley_face
July 4, 2021 (20 days ago)

Ang duga mo sir bal. pinatay mo master ko. Inaasahan ko pa naman na pagdating sa ibang universe magiging parang magiging dragon ball na maglalaban si goku mula sa kasalukuyan at yung goku mula sa nakaraan. Sa mundo nila trunks kung napanood mo yun sir bal. Pero hindi e Tangina iyak ako

At yung isang bagay pa sir bal. Biglaan kang mag upload kala ko pa naman july 17 kapa.

Well ngayon ko na tatapakan yung tinapakan ni gabriel baka posible mangyari.
Pero wag naman lahat

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Balderic
July 4, 2021 (20 days ago)

Haha yun talaga ang naka draft eh. La tayo magagawa. 😅

Anyway, may mga susunod pa namang stories. Abangan nalang

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Smiley_face
July 5, 2021 (20 days ago)

Oo nga pala sir Bal. Yung sa ben12 ikukuwento mo ba mga nangyari sa mga mandirigma pagkatapos ng giyera. Si Himeko ba naging jowa ni Cifer?

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Balderic
July 5, 2021 (19 days ago)

We shall see kapag matuloy ko na story

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jerome1216
July 4, 2021 (20 days ago)

Thanks sir for the finale

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Balderic
July 4, 2021 (20 days ago)

Walang ano man po

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juju63
July 4, 2021 (20 days ago)

tnx otor sa magandanh finale ng story, abangan ko ang nct story mo, siguro kay angela naman.

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Balderic
July 4, 2021 (20 days ago)

😊 thank you po

Of course, abang ulit tayo sa next na story
Kita kits nalang

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Politejohn
July 4, 2021 (20 days ago)

Pure Genius! A Master's piece. A true Light works.
I salute the Divinity in you.
Go forth Light Warrior/Light bearer.
Light and Protect the path.
Divine Light, Love and Power keep growing in you.

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Balderic
July 4, 2021 (20 days ago)

Napakaliwanag namang papuri yan hehe salamat po

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Grxhyll
July 4, 2021 (20 days ago)

Salamat idol sa magandang story. God bless po always.

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Balderic
July 4, 2021 (20 days ago)

Maraming salamat din po sa komento at pagbasa

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axl.blq
July 4, 2021 (20 days ago)

Kumbaga sa RK, this is The Final & The Beginning. Sinundan ko ito mula Act 1, masasabi ko lang, di basta erotica lang, sinapuso ang nakagisnang action genre plus mga comic & anime influences.

This maybe Gab's curtain call but he's been Baldeverse's Kal El (hanggang sa mga huling linya). Now, it's Angela's turn to be "Alexandra"...

Kung anuman next offering/plan mo ssob Bal, dito lang kami. Stay safe & well. Looking forward to another 👍👍🤟 epic.

Karen Babaylan... FOREVER!

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Balderic
July 4, 2021 (20 days ago)

Kakaibang finish din sya unlike sa nakagisnang happily ever after ng mga pinoy.

For me, this is the epitome of a Balderic story style. Anything could happen at any time and you might get surprised as to why or how.

Next story, iba naman hehe

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EvilSatyr101
July 4, 2021 (20 days ago)

Ganda ng Ending Boss B. Baka yung sunod mo na isulat yung kay Elias na or yung Agnas? 😁

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Balderic
July 4, 2021 (20 days ago)

It's highly possible considering I revealed the quantum universes

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Barcon
July 4, 2021 (20 days ago)

Wow kahit sa finale talagang na aksyon pa rin, thanks boss B. Aabangan namin ang bagong story mo. The best as always

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Balderic
July 4, 2021 (20 days ago)

Thank you for the support 😇

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Westjhoko
July 4, 2021 (20 days ago)

Salamat po

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Balderic
July 5, 2021 (19 days ago)

Welcome po 😇

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orenvelciterx
July 5, 2021 (19 days ago)

I’ve been with you Sir! Since day 1. I’m proud to say I’ve read all of your stories. And this one is the most phenomenal.

Congratulations Sir!

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Balderic
July 5, 2021 (19 days ago)

Thank you so much for the support 😇😇😇

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KAWAYANAN
July 5, 2021 (19 days ago)

Thank you sir Balderic, totally worth reading

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Balderic
July 5, 2021 (19 days ago)

Salamat din po 😁😁😃

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otkep
July 5, 2021 (19 days ago)

bravo. epic. wow. feels like watching goku attains ultra instinct. maraming samalat sir, sa kabila ng iyong pinagdadaanan ay tinapos ang napakagandang kwento ng legend na Marasigan… saludo!

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Balderic
July 5, 2021 (19 days ago)

I have to finish it for the fans 😊😊😊

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rommel_lopena
July 5, 2021 (19 days ago)

Sna sir balderic gawan mo ng kwento si Angela at Raiden with a twist of little.incest with yumiko and her son Raiden plz ....

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Balderic
July 5, 2021 (19 days ago)

Uhh not sure 😅

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Istupher
July 5, 2021 (19 days ago)

Thank You, Master Bal... A magnificent masterpiece indeed...

Nemo Dat Quod Non Habent

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Balderic
July 5, 2021 (19 days ago)

Thank you so much 🤗

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Xzcute
July 6, 2021 (18 days ago)

Sa lahat ng nabasa ko na erotic action scene ito ung pinakanagustuhan ko.. Silent readers lang ako pero ngaun napacomment na ako.. Sobrang ganda nga mga stories mo sir Balderic.. Wating sa continuation nyo ng agnas.. Tingin ko madudugtungan pa ang kwento na ito. Salamat ulit and keep safe sir..😎👍

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Balderic
July 6, 2021 (18 days ago)

Hehehe buti at napa comment ka. Maraming salamat po 😇😇

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naisetco
July 6, 2021 (18 days ago)

Agnas naman lodi

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Balderic
July 6, 2021 (18 days ago)

We'll see hehehe

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demonpage
July 7, 2021 (17 days ago)

Langya ka boss B pinaiyak moko!!!!! Boss B maraming salamat sa HoH series.

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Balderic
July 7, 2021 (17 days ago)

😇😇😇 ganun talaga ang estorya

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Kentooot
July 8, 2021 (16 days ago)

Salamat sa magandang story Sir. Kaabang abang talaga bawat chapter. God bless Sir.
More Stories to Come. Angela will now continue the Legacy of Gabriel :D

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Balderic
July 12, 2021 (12 days ago)

Thank you too for continuing supporting my works 😇

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animalism
July 9, 2021 (15 days ago)

Una sa lahat po. Maraming salamat at hindi mo kami mo kami binigo sa taon naming pag subaybay sa mga writings nyo po.
Muntik na aku mapaiyak sa pagka wala at pag tatapos ng sinubaybayan ku. peru sa last part ay nasabi ku 'hindi pa pala tapos' may Book 2 pa pala. hehhee

PS: ML account name ku po ay Gabriel Marasigan. No. 1 niyo akung tagahanga.

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Balderic
July 12, 2021 (12 days ago)

Marami pa tayong pagdadaanan hehe.

Also, it's an honor for me na pinangalanan mo ml accgt mo ng based sa character na naisulat ko 🤗

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richard_tan
July 10, 2021 (15 days ago)

thanks otor.......wala na akong masabi kasi na sabi na nila........

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Balderic
July 12, 2021 (12 days ago)

Hehe okay lang yun. You're welcome btw

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Ioutpouh30
July 10, 2021 (15 days ago)

Solid ending sir bald. Simula palang sa p** ka nag popost ng stories mo binabasa ko na, hanggang nagtransition ka dito sa fss sana gumawa ka pa ng ganitong mga obra sir bald. Cheers for more stories!!!!!

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Balderic
July 12, 2021 (12 days ago)

Tagal na rin yung last na nagpost ako dun hehehe. Goes to show gaano ka katagal nag follow sa stories ko. Thank you

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glitchdoctor2017
July 15, 2021 (9 days ago)

Really really great masterpiece, Master Balderic!!

Followed every chapter and enjoyed each one immensely!

Napagaling!!!  Maraming salamat at sana may iba pang bago!!

Ingat!

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Balderic
July 17, 2021 (8 days ago)

Thank you thank you 😊

Destiny is an illusion created by people who has no dreams in life.

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