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For Formality 10

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Date: March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)


Author's Note:

Paumanhin sa boring na ending ng Part 9. Hindi ko kasi alam kung paano mag-sugarcoat ng simpleng eksena. Hindi maaksyon, walang bangayan o kahit ano'ng nakakakulo ng dugo. In this part, ikukwento ko na lang 'yung nangyari (as is) and I'll give you guys an update about the side characters and where we are today.

This part will purely be story-telling, there will be no sex/steamy scenes here. This is a closure. Para sa'kin at para sa inyo.



I got home early. Around 2PM. Wala namang tao sa bahay. Nilapag ko ang backpack ko sa gilid ng sofa. Naglakad ako sa bandang kusina kung nasaan ang ref. I was looking at the pictures sa ref, mga bakasyon namin, college pics, at mga seminars na pinuntahan namin. It's been fun. Naligaw naman ang tingin ko sa ibabaw ng ref, kung saan nakapatong ang isang framed picture naming dalawa. Sa dorm lang ako ni misis nag-propose, pinalabas ko pa siya sa dorm para lang isuot ang mumurahing alahas na pinag-ipunan ko.

...CONTINUATION

I lit the fire, a fire no one can put out. A fire that will consume everything we had... including us both.

Biglang sumikat ang araw, tumama ang sinag nito sa kurtina at sahig na nagsabog ng iba't ibang kulay. Nagliwanag ang buong bahay, mabagal na nagliliparan ang mga alikabok. Bumalikwas ako at tiningnan ang bawat sulok ng bahay. I'll surely miss this house. Naglakad ako papunta sa sofa. Muli kong nilibot ang paningin ko at umupo. I guess there's just no way to break it to her gently. I'm holding onto something I don't need, itong nararamdaman ko. This has to go. Hindi ko pa man nasasabi kay Keisha, pakiramdam ko mag-isa na lang ako. That wherever I go, I will be alone... but I can't stay with her anymore.We can't unbreak what's broken. To be honest, I don't have any regrets between me and Keisha except the time we wasted. Parang nagsayang lang kami ng aming kabataan. But it's done, it's something na hindi na naming mababawi. We'll just have to move forward.

This is the part where I should feel glad 'di ba? Dapat masaya ako, dapat kahit paano ay masasabi ko sa sarili ko na nagtagumpay ako. Pero hindi eh, I should be mad, I should be angry. Do I really have to feel anything? May specific ba akong dapat maramdaman? Hindi niya pa alam kung ano'ng sasabihin ko sa kanya... and I feel so empty already.

Tumayo ako at pumunta sa telepono, tinawagan ko siya.

Ako: "Hi... hello?"

Keisha: "Hey..hi, bakit nasa bahay ka?"

Ako: "ahh umuwi ako, sorry... namiss ko lang ang bahay"

Keisha: "hah?"

Ako: "haha, yaan mo na. Ano'ng oras ang uwi mo? Pwede ka ba umuwi ng maaga?"

Keisha: "yeah, 5PM siguro"

Ako: "Please come home early, magluluto ako ng hapunan"

Keisha: "okay... sarapan mo ha"

Ako: "sige, bye now. I'll see you later"

No. I can't tell her over the phone. Kailangan konog sabihin ng personal sa kanya.

I want to be a good husband one last time. I want to cook her dinner.

Kumuha ako ng mga ingredients sa ref, kinuha ko ang kutsilyo at sangkalan. Hinanda ko ang mga gagamitin ko. Naghugas na ako ng kamay at naghiwa, nagsaing at nagluto.

5:20PM. Narinig ko ang gate na bumukas. Si Keisha. Tamang-tama, luto na at mainit pa ang hapunan. Kaya kumuha ako ng mga plato at bowl. Nagsandok na ako ng kanin at ulam. Pagpasok niya ay tumingin agad siya sa'kin habang naghahain ako sa lamesa.

Keisha: "woooww! Ang bango naman nyan!"

Ako: "oh nandyan ka na pala, maghugas ka na ng kamay... kumain na tayo"

Keisha: "Sige babe"

Nilapag niya ang mga gamit niya sa sofa at pumunta sa kitchen sink para maghugas ng kamay. I stood by a chair, hinihintay ko siyang matapos maghugas ng kamay para makaupo na. Nang matapos siya ay inasikaso ko ang upuan niya.

Keisha: "bait naman babe"

Ako: "....."

Kumain na kami. Lumilipad ang isip ko habang kaharap ko siya sa sa lamesa.

Ako: "kumusta ang trabaho?"

Keisha: "okay lang naman, hindi naman masyadong marami ang ginawa ngayon"

Ako: "Did you know about Steven?"

Keisha: "'yung katrabaho mo?"

Dahil wala na akong maisip na pag-uusapan namin over meal ay nag-tsismis na lang ako. I turned out good naman. Natapos namin ang hapunan while talking about Steven and Finn. Nang matapos na kami kumain ay tumayo na ako at binuhat ang mga plato at mangkok na hugasan.

Keisha: "Leave it there, ako na maghugas mamaya"

Ako: "ah hindi na, ako na. Magpahinga ka lang dyan, galing ka sa trabaho eh"

Tumayo si Keisha at pumunta sa sofa. Umupo siya at nag-cellphone muna. Ako naman ay nag-umpisa na maghugas ng pinggan. Ilang minuto ang lumipas, natapos ko ang ginagawa ko. Nagpunas ako ng kamay gamit ang damit kong suot habang papunta ako sa sofa. Tumabi ako sa kanya...

Ako: "Keisha, I filed an annulment case... Sorry"

Keisha: "hah?"

Hinding-hindi ko makakalimutan ang hitsura niya, she was confused. But from the look in her eyes, it says a lot. She knew that I knew what was going on.

Ako: "I know about you and your manager"

Keisha: "....."

Ako: "It's done. A lawyer will file an Annulment case"

Nangilid ang luha sa kanyang mga mata. Nakatungo ang kanyang ulo at nakatakip ng kanyang mga kamay. I felt sorry for us. There, I broke it. Para akong nagbato ng isang galong gasolina sa apoy at pinanood itong magalit. Dahan-dahan na kaming tinutupok ng apoy na sinimulan ko.

Tumayo ako at lumabas sa driveway. Umupo ako sa gutter. Para akong sasabog. Malalim ang bawat hinga at nanginginig ang bawat hibla ng katawan ko. Parang gusto ko na lang talaga mawala that time, gusto kong bumukas ang lupa at lamunin ako. Nakapangalumbaba lang ako na nakaupo gutter ng driveway namin. Biglang nag-ring ang cellphone ko sa bulsa ko.

--RRRIINNNNGG-- RRRIIINNNNGG--

Ako: "...."

Keisha: "..... ano'ng mangyayari sa'tin"

Ako: "... I don't know"

Keisha: "I'm sorry babe. Please, patawarin mo ako"

Ako: "Sorry din"

Keisha: "I'm really, really sorry. I--ah.. I wish I coul--"

Ako"--it's okay. We'll be fine."

Keisha: "...Sorry Kent. I'm sorry, I'm sorry"

Ako: "........."

Hindi maitatama ng "sorry" ang lahat nang ginawa niya. Hindi ko na siya pinatapos, hindi ko kailangan ng dahilan niya. What she did was wrong. 'Yun na lang. I was angry, gusto ko siyang murahin. Gusto ko siyang sumbatan. Gusto kong ipamukha sa kanya na siya ang nagkamali. Is there a reward in doing that? Masa-satisfy ba ako kung gagawin ko 'yan? I had so much to tell her but it's done. I chose to let it burn in silence.

Binaba ko na ang tawag dahil wala namang dapat na pag-usapan.

Unti-unting nawala ang liwanag ng hapon. Sumapit ang gabi, 8:30PM, nasa driveway pa rin ako at nakaupo. I kept thinking about the good ol' days namin. 'Nung una kaming nag-lease sa bahay na 'to, tuwang-tuwa kami. We had so many plans. Una kaming nagsama sa isang maliit na kwarto, 'nung pareho pa kaming unlicensed college graduates, napakaliit ng kwarto na inupahan namin. Pagtayo mo lang sa kama ay kusina at banyo na agad. Everything we own was packed in cardboard boxes, mga damit at mga review materials. But we made it, we were so happy when she passed the licensure exam, sumunod ako, tapos pareho kaming nagkatrabaho. Until we can afford the "wants" at kinaya na rin namin makakuha ng malaki-laking bahay.

This driveway never had a car on it, naaalala ko pa dati maaga akong lumalabas sa trabaho para lang sunduin si Keisha. We only had a motorcycle back then. Sobrang hassle ng alikabok sa lansangan, papasok at pauwi. Nangarap kami ng 4-wheels, and here we have it kahit secondhand, we had to sell the motorcycle para makakuha ng sasakyan.

There were so many memories.

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KentPent
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Hi guys! Thanks for reading!

She's more myself than I am. Whatever our souls are made of, hers and mine are the same.

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Jefrey25
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Thank you sor sa ending. Hindi kami naghuhula sa ending..hehe hope you found someone new now to cheer up you life

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Almartinez04
April 8, 2021 (3 months ago)

Sa una nalilibugan p ako.. pero ng tumgal.. wla n akong paki s mga sex scene.. mix emotion n ksi ung nararamdman ko.. thumbs up sir.. ang ganda ng pgkakakwnto mo sir. Goodluck s bagong buhay sir.

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mhia123
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

thanks otor

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Addy_Lanzon
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Thank you for sharing us your story Sir Kent. Sorry that you have to endure all of it.

"ain't gonna give a crap to dummies"

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KentPent
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Thanks for reading! I hope you enjoyed it!

She's more myself than I am. Whatever our souls are made of, hers and mine are the same.

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herryandme
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Thanks po...

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KentPent
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Hehehe 'wag kayo magpasalamat. You guys deserve this part 10

She's more myself than I am. Whatever our souls are made of, hers and mine are the same.

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officeman
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Nice chief. very fine. u did not leave us hanging. it was a good ride.

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KentPent
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Hehe thank you for patiently waiting. I hope you enjoyed it.

She's more myself than I am. Whatever our souls are made of, hers and mine are the same.

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officeman
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Very much. mejo bitin pa rin pero enough naman.Kudos bro

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User Not Found
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Thank you poh sa pagshare ng story.. perfect ending cya para sa akin... Thank you tlga idol😁😁😁

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KentPent
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Thanks for reading!

She's more myself than I am. Whatever our souls are made of, hers and mine are the same.

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Awitized23
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Wala na bang kasunod? Galing mo grabe parang roller coaster rides of emotion 💪

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KentPent
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Hehe, sorry for stirring your emotion! Thanks for reading!

She's more myself than I am. Whatever our souls are made of, hers and mine are the same.

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cjeromet
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

nice. worth it to read
5 star autor

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KentPent
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Uy salamat sa rate! Thanks for reading!

She's more myself than I am. Whatever our souls are made of, hers and mine are the same.

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tulayri
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

akala ko di maghihiwalay e

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KentPent
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Ako rin eh! Akala ko rin hindi maghihiwalay! Hehe thanks for reading!

She's more myself than I am. Whatever our souls are made of, hers and mine are the same.

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Regeo
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Thanks, ang galing mo author.

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KentPent
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Hehehe Thank you! I hope you enjoyed the story!

She's more myself than I am. Whatever our souls are made of, hers and mine are the same.

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Lost_Hope
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Usually nagsskip ako ng mga lines sa stories na nababasa ko. Especially those that are predictable. But this one, wala kong pinalagpas.

Tahimik na ending and satisfying. Kudos author

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KentPent
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

:) Thanks for reading! I hope you enjoyed it! Because you guys deserve a closure!

She's more myself than I am. Whatever our souls are made of, hers and mine are the same.

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Asty_0220
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Kaya pala walang POV ni Keisha Kasi Hindi mo na pinakinggan Ang dahilan nya at Kung bakit nya ginawa yun boss now I know hehe pero Tama ka Naman boss e what she did is wrong so all in all Mali talaga..pero I just got curious boss baka Kasi na blackmail lang si Keisha for example is Yung nilasing sya and din Yun maynangyari and then blackmail tapos ayun as time goes by nagustuhan nya na Rin Kasi baka biktima Lang din sya Ng panyayari hehe

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KentPent
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Thanks for reading! I hope you enjoyed it. So far, wala namang ganung nangyari. It was a mutual agreement between sa kanila.

She's more myself than I am. Whatever our souls are made of, hers and mine are the same.

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Asty_0220
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Awww so sad Naman boss sayang Yung ilang years na pinagsamahan nyo ,Kaya pala ni hindi ka nya hinabol man Lang hayyy at Parang wala Lang sa kanya nung court hearing nyo pero ask ko Lang boss nagkatuluyan ba sila nung lalaki nya na SI William?

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Red_devil
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Tnx otor

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andot11
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

salamt author...bilib po ako sa inyo the way you handle the situation..gudluck po sa inyo

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Dredtan
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Ganda ng istory, naawa din ako sa asawa nya nung nag makaawa sya ng wag siyang hiwalayan at sory sya ng sorry, pero deserve nya talaga ang nangyaring hiawalayan, masakit man sa part ng asawa nya ginawa nya, pero tama lang yun, para sakin opinyon kolang po yun hehhehe
Kasi yung asawa nya natapakan talaga ego nya syempre lalaki sya sino ba namn asawa ang papayag na kinkana ng iba,masakit sa part ng asawa nya ang ginawa sa kanya
Thank you sir 👍

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KentPent
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Hehehe, I understand you! Thanks for reading! I hope you enjoyed it.

She's more myself than I am. Whatever our souls are made of, hers and mine are the same.

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FRACK123
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

so sad author but u have the right desesyon, masasanay karin nyan, bitin ang ang story mo.. hehehe thumps up

sana sundan mo to?

may tanong ako nag aasawa ka ba ulit or wala na?

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KentPent
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Hehehe kung nabitin ka, last part na po ito. Thanks for reading! I hope you enjoyed it! and Yes, mag-aasawa po ulit ako kung favorable ang decision sa annulment. May aasawahin na rin po ako :) Sana mabasa mo 'to hon!

She's more myself than I am. Whatever our souls are made of, hers and mine are the same.

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FRACK123
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

sana ma share mo yung loveSTORY nyo, hehehe!!!

so ano na ang nagyari kay keshia? may balita ka parin bah sa kanya?

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andryan
March 22, 2021 (4 months ago)

best wishes sa new relationship mo author!

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AFrusciante
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Thanks for this closure ending, Sir Kent! Sad reality for what had happened sa marriage nyo. Tho on the otherhand, I wonder Keisha's emotions nung nagtaksil siya and the part na nabisto na siya, damn, it hurts! Salamat sa obra mo at sa mga susunod pang darating, Sir.

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kuatog
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

sana ganyan ako din ako katatag kung sakaling mangyari s akin ang ganyan..ty boss ayos ang kwento ..iba talaga ang sakalam lodi !!

basta masarap go !!!

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tagabasa_123456
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Thanks sir! Ang ganda ng story kahit nakakalungkot.

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KentPent
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Thanks for reading!

She's more myself than I am. Whatever our souls are made of, hers and mine are the same.

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Club21
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Aww ang sad it comes to an end mamimiss ko tong for formality niyo boss Wishing you a brighter future sanay may nag patibok ng puso at tite niyo ngayon whahahaah

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KentPent
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Thanks for reading! I hope you enjoyed it! Hehe, meron na po!

She's more myself than I am. Whatever our souls are made of, hers and mine are the same.

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jackstone
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Everything needs a closure, every story deserves an ending whether happy or sad.

You got your closure with Keisha.

Thank you for sharing with us.

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KentPent
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Thank you! I hope you enjoyed reading it!

She's more myself than I am. Whatever our souls are made of, hers and mine are the same.

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jackstone
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Yes, I did.

Waiting for your next story.

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deathlove27
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

believe ako sayo sir. dahil dinaan mo sa tamang processo ang lahat. ganda ng story marami akong napulot na aral mga legal terms na pwedeng gawin hindi yun mag papatalo ka sa init ng ulo marami talagang nang yayari katulad sa story mo sir kaso yun iba nilalagay nila ang batas sa kamay nila aabangan ko yun next story na ilalabas mo..

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KentPent
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Thanks for reading! I hope you enjoyed it!

She's more myself than I am. Whatever our souls are made of, hers and mine are the same.

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deathlove27
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

enjoy na enjoy sir. lalo na un unexpected reveling moments kala ko talaga c steven na yun sa part na pupuntahan ka nya sa hotel at may sasabihin sya sayong importante. naaliw at nabaliw ako na iba pala ang suspect.

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Robert_
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Sir good ending,sana ganahan ka pang magsulat,abang ulit ako thanks

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KentPent
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Thanks for reading! I hope you enjoyed it!

She's more myself than I am. Whatever our souls are made of, hers and mine are the same.

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Nitz001
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Now thats an ending.. bittersweet. I feel you sir kent. Been there.. that feeling.. damn.
Thanks for sharing that tho.. looking forward sa fiction mo. Hehehe

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KentPent
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Thanks for reading! Yes!, may fiction po ako though hindi ko pa alam kung kailan ko siya mapa-publish :)

She's more myself than I am. Whatever our souls are made of, hers and mine are the same.

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unholysaint
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

thank you for giving it its proper ending.

Impies Santo

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Ifyouseekamysogood
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

I hope the judge renders a favorable decision para you can be happy with the person who can make you happy.

I wish you well, sir! 😊

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KentPent
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Thanks! Ikaw din! I hope life smiles upon you!

She's more myself than I am. Whatever our souls are made of, hers and mine are the same.

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J.-_.-_
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Silent reader pero subrang nagandahan ako sa storry nato kaya mag cocomment na ako..

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KentPent
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Uy! Salamat! Thanks for reading!

She's more myself than I am. Whatever our souls are made of, hers and mine are the same.

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otkep
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

salamat sa pagbahagi ng kwento ng buhay mo. malungkot, mapait at madaming bakit. saludo ako sa katatagan mo. on to the next!

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knight_walker
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Thank you otor sa for formality mo, talagang masakit ang isang bagay n mahal mo n mawawala sau,pero may kapalit nmn itong kaligayahan sa buhay mo kung minsan gusto mo man magpatawad ay hindi mo nmn kaagad magaws dahol nandyan pa rin ang sakit ng iniwang sugat

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james2400
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Thank you bro...

Reap what you sow

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knight_walker
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Sana tinanggal din si william sa trabaho nya at  pati benifits nya  para matoto syang pagpahalaga sa mga empleyado nya

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KentPent
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Tinanggal naman sila :) Thanks for reading!

She's more myself than I am. Whatever our souls are made of, hers and mine are the same.

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Fapulous
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Thanx for the conclusion author. It was a nice ending, very civil, pero parang kulang ang hagupit sa putang inang William na yun, haha

-Some of the best moments in life are the ones you can't tell anyone about-

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KentPent
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

True! Hahaha pero wala eh. Minsan hindi na tao ang gaganti para sa'yo. Baka universe na lang ang bahala.

She's more myself than I am. Whatever our souls are made of, hers and mine are the same.

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Dolpi0728
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Tama sir... kasabihan nga e "Vengeance it's not ours, it's God's". Konsensya na lang nila ang uusig sa kanila!

Dolpi0728

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jersonuchi
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

bakit naluha ako sa ending..  thnx otor.. mixed emotions.. 😢

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KentPent
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Sorry! Hala :( Thanks for reading!

She's more myself than I am. Whatever our souls are made of, hers and mine are the same.

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jersonuchi
March 22, 2021 (4 months ago)

sulit pagbabasa ko..  
Salamat

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Dolpi0728
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

It's the right decision sir! Simple pero mas masakit kay Keisha lalo na sa sumbat ng konsensya. Di na kailangang may makialam pang ibang tao, sabi nga e bahala na ang Diyos! Salamat and Goodluck! Silent reader lang... Finale na kaya kailangan ng mag-comment!

Dolpi0728

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KentPent
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Uy! Hehe, salamat sa pagtangkilik! I hope you enjoyed it!

She's more myself than I am. Whatever our souls are made of, hers and mine are the same.

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Jim181965
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Thats the best thing you do, mabait ka pa nga eh dahil hindi adultery case ang  ibinigay mo para kulong silang dalawa. But anyway you got the revenge you need, natangal silang pareho sa trabaho and they cant find a decent job they had before because of what they did. Thanks author for sharing your story to us!👍👍👍👍👍

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KentPent
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Thanks for reading! I hope you enjoyed it! Hehehe, nakaka-stress gumanti sa totoo lang, I jsut don't want anything to do with them.

She's more myself than I am. Whatever our souls are made of, hers and mine are the same.

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Asty_0220
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

May balita ka pa ba boss sa ex wife mo? Nagkatuluyan ba sila nung William? Ang sad Lang sayang Ang ilang years na pinagsamahan nyo boss , nawalan ba sya Ng pagmamahal sayo boss Yun ba dahilan nya? Nakapanghihinayang talaga hayyyss

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KentPent
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Hi! Thanks for reading! I hope you enjoyed it. Wala na akong balita sa kanya/kanila.

She's more myself than I am. Whatever our souls are made of, hers and mine are the same.

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thegreatemperor
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

I enjoyed a lot sa story mo sir Kent. Pero un lang? Ang ending? Parang bitin? Nandun na tayo sa nalaman na ni Keisha ung secrets nya, but hndi man lang sya nag effort para bawiin ka? What a shame sa kanya, sorry ha? But i enjoy. Ituloy mo na agad ung story mong kasunod nito. Hahahaha

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Jamesss
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Sad ending to a great story. Kudos Author!

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MidLifeCrisis
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Grabe ang sakit. Etong part lang na ‘to ang binasa ko pa pero sobrang tagos sa buto ang emosyon. Galing ng pagkasulat. Napaiyak mo ako. I hope you’re okay now.

Don’t be fooled. Behind this wanton body, there’s a heart deeply in love.

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KentPent
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Sorry for stirring your emotions! Thanks for reading! I hope you enjoyed it!

She's more myself than I am. Whatever our souls are made of, hers and mine are the same.

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bogsgwaps
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

I tip my hat to you author. What you have done was very gentleman even to the end. A man of culture indeed. Hope you be well always and find someone worth it soon. 😷👏👏.

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KentPent
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Thanks for reading!

She's more myself than I am. Whatever our souls are made of, hers and mine are the same.

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Hotwife2010
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Congratulations author...
Mmm mukang ok ung next Series mo ... keep it up...

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KentPent
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Thanks for reading! I hope you enjoyed it.

She's more myself than I am. Whatever our souls are made of, hers and mine are the same.

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over_jack_all
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Sinubaybayan ko ang storyang to para malibugan, hindi ko akalain na it will bring back all the memories that was happen 3 years ago.

Naramdaman ko yung sakit, yung feeling na hindi ka mapakali habang binabasa ko yung hiwalayan part.

I've been there.

Yung di mo sya magawang pagbuhatan ng kamay kahit na alam mo ng naiputan ka sa ulo.
Yung pinipigilan mo umiyak.
Yung feeling ma gusto mo syang yakapin at bumalik sa nakaraan at baguhin ang nangyari na.

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KentPent
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Sorry for bringing back old memories! Thanks for reading! I hope you enjoyed it!

She's more myself than I am. Whatever our souls are made of, hers and mine are the same.

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User Not Found
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

i was moved with the story.... i wonder anong reason ni keisha... actuly gusto ko na maayos ulit kayo... anyways tnx author

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jerikho
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

All I have for you now is RESPECT brader...when you drop the "bomb" to Keisha was an epic- no nonesense what so ever, nung nagsabi siya ng sorry tells it all. Unang-una hindi na siya nagpaliwanag kung bakit siya humantong sa kalagayan niyang iyon dahil ginusto niya at walang pumilit sa kanya based sa mga binitiwan niyang mga salita...

Forgive me for saying this but when she said na huwag mo siyang iwan dahil sa ginawa niya I feel disgusted  dahil nung ginawa niya ang mga bagay na iyon eh matagal ka na niyang "iniwan" sa ere at hindi iyon gawain ng isang taong totoong nagmamahal sa iyo...

The ending was very satisfying although alam kong marami dito sa atin ang nakukulangan sa "parusa" sa mga nagkasala, para sa akin eh sapat na  maipamukha sa kanila at sa buong madla ang kamaliang nagawa nila...I'm very sure na dadalhin na nila ang "mantsa" sa pagkatao nila habangbuhay...

I hope for you all the best at sana matagpuan mo na talaga ang tunay na kaligayahan...Maraming Salamat sayo Bro👍

Retiradong Playboy...pwedeng TUMINGIN pero never ang TUMIKIM 😉

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KentPent
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

For me, aywa ko lang ma-stress sa pagganti and ayaw ko rin 'nung anxiety kung sakaling bigyan ko ng chance. Ayaw ko na silang kasuhan or kung ano man, I just don't want anything to do with them.. kasal lang kasi kaya kailangan ng annulment

She's more myself than I am. Whatever our souls are made of, hers and mine are the same.

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Hermaniac
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

So sad ang ending but i am happy for your right decision. God bless you.

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Kevinpongz
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Thank you sir sa tapos na story. Sad ending lang. Hope you find your new inspiration.

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MisterND
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Nice story sir and congrats sa story mo. Nakakalungkot pero naniniwala ako masaya ka na kahit mag Isa ka na. Looking forward ako na makakatagpo ka pa ng someone na mas hihigit Kay Keisha.

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Bumblebee24
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

life goes on. thanks for the conclusion

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boss_jun2
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

true story ryt?probably got 95% of the ending ryt,just so happen that i once met someone in my line of work who were in the same situation,the slight difference are that the couple had kids and its the husband coworker who is the one who has an affair with wis ex wife, but all in all, the story,looking forward to your next stories sir

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pokoy
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Thank you for putting a final chapter on your story.  Wishing you all the best!👍

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keenan_tote
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Galing. Salamat ng marami.

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Byutifoolly
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

salamat po story mr. kent isa ito sa mga stories na inaabangan ko ang update. Abang ulit sa susunod po mga kwento nyo pa.

Sana mahanap nyo yung talagang magmamahal sa inyo ng tapat, baka nga meron na kasi 2021 na

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maxtorotot
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

As expected mixed emotion. Sometimes we need to give ourselves dignity. At least the move is not for humiliation of marriage. Sometimes we should sacrifice to avoid damage to parties. I love the ending. How can the marriage be successful if one party is cheating for the long time without telling the other of the missing obligation. Faith and trust in marriage is everyting... First time ko na apektuhan ng story. Good work

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animalism
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

galing po sir kent. maraming salamar po sa story.

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animalism
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

sana may prequel sa story side ni keshia. hehehe. sana lang po.

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dragon_knight
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

There was a part of me that hope that everything will be alright but the title gives a big hint that this one won't have a happy ending.

So much respect for you, bro. You have shown class and being a gentlemen despite everything that you're going through at the time. You chose to take the high road and not take revenge. It was not easy to keep calm and not burst into a rage because of the pain. This shows how much you love and respect your ex wife. You have a good point that you will gain nothing if you seek revenge and besides all you want was a fresh start and piece of mind.

Keisha's reaction says it all. All she can do was to say sorry. This tells that she willingly and wholeheartedly participated in the affair. Still don't understand how she kept playing the good wife and says she loves you while keeps stabbing you in the back. That really disgust me.

Anyway, thanks for this well written, intense and detailed story. Good luck in your future stories. Double up top high five.

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gamer1
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

I hope youre doing well, tanong lang sir if you dont mind, magkasama pa rin ba si ex wife at william?

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OKDH22
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Grabe. :( I was hoping na magkakaayos kayo. I mean, ang dami n'yong pinagdaananan e, ta's natapos lang dahil sa "isang" pagkakamali? Hayst. Pero ganu'n talaga e. I hope magkaayos kayo in the near future, maging friends ulet. And who knows? Malay mo naman. Love is sweeter the 2nd time around.

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Graceinnor
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

I followed this story out of "libog", I never really thought that I will feel emotions and feel your pain bro. Good luck to new chapter of your life.

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Ilovekiki2
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Bravo! totoong obra maestra! Kaabang abang mula umpisa hanggang katapusan!

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whiteblood
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

i never thought i could get to read something na worth it after years...salute to you bro 👍 im still hoping though marealize ni ex mo yung worth mo and you could get back together hmmm maybe its just me na medyo ayaw ng sad ending but still kudos to you for not letting revenge get the better of you. Keep strong bro, hope you find happiness 😊

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Sungit_moh
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

As of now this is the best story of 2021

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jeanvaljean
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Now that's somewhat a great turn of events.. pinag iisipan ko nung FF9 na ipm ka brother if somehow okay ka lang, or if may someone new ka. Andun yung pitty ko para sayo, but after reading this man I'm so glad that you're moving on! Start a new adventure po at least enjoy your life alone for a while

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X06hunter
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Isang nppkalupet n story. Pero sn my sunod p ung tipong nging friend pdin kayo khit hiwalay n at mkkita mo n ngbago sya at mgkkbalikan dhil mhal nyo tlga isat isa

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lustnaito
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Great job Kent thank you

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lebron019
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

thanks sir kent sa pag share ng story ganda waiting sa next story mo!

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Fafaphee21
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Ang sad nung ending. Hay. Di talaga mawawala yan. May nga ganyan talagang pangyayari. Nakakalungkot lang sa dami ng pagsubok na pinagdaanan nyo, tawag ng laman lang sisira sainyo. Hays.

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Asty_0220
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Ang sad talaga buti nalang Wala pa kayong anak nyan boss ..Ang ganda talaga Ng story mo boss excited na ako sa next story mo 😁

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Puloboys
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Hang ako sau Sir nagging mahinahon ka at Para sakin tama lang ang desisyon at ginawa Mo na makipaghiwalay na lang. Ganda ng storya Mo Kaya kaya lang malungkot at magkasakit ang ending nito Sa buhay mo

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moyzko
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Theres never a right time to say goobye.. 😁👍 nice author..

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krau55
March 21, 2021 (4 months ago)

Nice story

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kupalord
March 22, 2021 (4 months ago)

I hope na makahanap ka ng mas magmamahal sayo ng sobra sir

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Bluzombii
March 22, 2021 (4 months ago)

Dahil sa story na ito, naglalaan na ako ng oras para magbasa dito sa fss. Hindi puro libog, may lesson at sense. Salamat po.

(Love ko na yung author) 😘😅

It hurts, but it's ok.

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KentPent
March 22, 2021 (4 months ago)

Ay! Thanks for reading! I hope you enjoyed it! Silent-reader mo din ako :) Hehehe

She's more myself than I am. Whatever our souls are made of, hers and mine are the same.

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raldske
March 22, 2021 (4 months ago)

sana may karugtong pa maganda yung kwento kulang pa yung ganti nya sa asawa nya masyadung mababaw dapat yung mag lumuhod sya sa kasalanan nyang hinawa hehehehe salamat sir ganda nang kwento tyaka mukhang kakaiba nananaman yung new title na kwento

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User Not Found
March 22, 2021 (4 months ago)

enjoyed reading this story, sis kent. na sad ako sa ending. pero that was the best decision. fiction o hindi ang story, parang realistic ang ending. thank you very much

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mroneside
March 22, 2021 (4 months ago)

ganda lods salamat shinare mo haha, anyways kaya mas mainam magka divorce dito eh no para di pahirapan sa ganyan

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Stockholm8
March 22, 2021 (4 months ago)

Thank you for sharing this. I hope this comment finds u well! Waiting for your next story.

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jarhead18
March 22, 2021 (4 months ago)

Nice one! Good job! Ganda ng story sir

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Jackjones
March 22, 2021 (4 months ago)

Tnx sa ending sir..saludo ako sa isang katulad mo.. napakatindi mo mag pigil ng galit..subrang rare n ang isang tulad mo na nakipag hiwalay ng d man lang gumamit ng dahas..buti n lang tlgah wla pa kaung anak. Kasi kung meron man. Naku sya tlgah ung pina ka kawawa.. kakaiba din ang libog ng asawa mo grabi.. my kalaliman din ang kati ng puke non.. dpat sa knaya 3 BBC ang papakantot ng madala..

What you see is what u get

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Datuputi
March 22, 2021 (4 months ago)

Saludo ako sa sayo sir. Napakatibay mo! 👌👌

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gunblue30
March 22, 2021 (4 months ago)

Very nicely done Sir. And shall I say congratulations because you would have not done it this good kung hindi ka pa naka pag move on. God bless and stay safe.

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KentPent
March 22, 2021 (4 months ago)

Salamat po sa pagsubaybay!

She's more myself than I am. Whatever our souls are made of, hers and mine are the same.

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ikabod
March 22, 2021 (4 months ago)

Pinakamagandang ending ,pero noon sa Baguio sabi ng asawa nya bakit napakabait mo sa akin Kent siguro nakokonsensya na yun kaso young nga ang Mali ay Mali mahirap ng magbalikan yun dahil lagi lang mauungkat ung pangangaliwa ni keisha..taking 💯👍👍👍

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KentPent
March 22, 2021 (4 months ago)

Thanks for reading! I hope you enjoyed it!

She's more myself than I am. Whatever our souls are made of, hers and mine are the same.

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joseph2013
March 22, 2021 (4 months ago)

Salamat po. Tulo luha ko. I was hoping for a more brutal response.. Pero mas gusto ko ending nito. Hanggang sa susunod pong kwento

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bellates
March 22, 2021 (4 months ago)

Hi sir Kent. Sorry for the lost relationship. And congrats for the result of the case. The srory was gkod and satisfying. Daming mtutunan. Daming aral. Lalo n sa mga bitter. D po lahat ay gnun. Sdyang minahal lng nla ang partner nla. Sir Kent, maganda sana if ngawaan mo ng POV. khit sabihin n lng ntin n fiction. At etong last ay dun mo nlagay aftee ng POV. Or pwd ka p dn mg gawa ng fiction ng POV nto. N my twist. Mgnda kc ang story mo. Kya mgnda sana f habaan or dugtungan. Once again sir, tnx for sharing this story of u. Gud luck for the new beginning and future.

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dowel
March 22, 2021 (4 months ago)

I very much appreciate the final chapter. I had mixed emotions and this definitely brought me back to that point of my life, only I did not choose to end my marriage, I usually say because of the kids, but naaah I am just too afraid to let go of what we have. I chose to swallow my pride and forgive. Life is a matter of choices and we just need to live with what comes along with the choices we make.

Much respect to you Sir Kent! Thank you for sharing your story.

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Stibayan
March 23, 2021 (4 months ago)

Whoah.. Relate na relate ako sa last 2 parts ng story mo sir. Yung mga feelibgs na hindi ko kayang maisa boses or mai describe itong ito yun.. Maraming samalat boss.

Don't flirt with me.. I'm flamable

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aiken316
March 23, 2021 (4 months ago)

Curious ako otor ano ba laman ng tax 2017 mas swabe ba keysa sa tax2016 e yung convo nila na ni record no agent D sana na latha mo.yung laman at convo curious reader otor pero galing swabe sa emo nakadala talaga congrats good job more story

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kiterc
March 23, 2021 (4 months ago)

Salamat po!! Pde po makahingi ng copy ng video kung pde.

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An_Onimus
March 23, 2021 (4 months ago)

Kudos author.. Ganda ng hatag tho sad ending, worth reading talaga

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Yunabelle40
March 23, 2021 (4 months ago)

Curious lang ako author...ano po nangyari kay keisha at william? Naging sila ba after ng annulment nyo? Thanks.

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bluetrident99
March 23, 2021 (4 months ago)

Delikado tlga pag vini video... Dpat kc laging maingat...

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Ronimaru
March 25, 2021 (4 months ago)

Thanks author! Nawala dn sakit ng dibdib ko sa ginawa mo hahaha , salute bro!

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richard_tan
March 26, 2021 (3 months ago)

thanks otor.....................

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axelace0029
March 26, 2021 (3 months ago)

thanks sa pag share ng story mo author medyo bitin lang ako sa ending pero thumbs up pa din ngayon nalang ulit ako na excite sa story na binabasa ko keep it up sa susunod na mga chapter ng story mo.

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jerbyramirez23
March 27, 2021 (3 months ago)

That's a man many likes!!!!

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March 28, 2021 (3 months ago)

Yosi mode muna.....

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Jxhn0303
April 2, 2021 (3 months ago)

Pumunta ko dito sa FSS para magjakol. Bakit ako naiyak?

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KentPent
April 3, 2021 (3 months ago)

Hahaha! Sorry! Thanks for reading the story! I hope you enjoyed it!

She's more myself than I am. Whatever our souls are made of, hers and mine are the same.

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Tagahanga
April 3, 2021 (3 months ago)

Ganyan. Ang estorya completed gayahin nyo lodi ang lupet mo...

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ImmYourss
April 4, 2021 (3 months ago)

Totolng story ba yung For Formality, if totoo, naawa talaga ako ng tuluyan kay Kent. Kudos sa pagkukuwento mo, I thought talaga na si Steven yung may affair kay Keisha eh. Aabangan ko yung mga new story mo na i-upload mo.

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Vannie_Fanta
April 23, 2021 (3 months ago)

Oh, Author! Ang ganda ng story mo! 🥺🥺 Nakakaiyak. I feel you an a spiritual level sir Kent. More stories to come, I love you! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Adventurous.

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KentPent
April 24, 2021 (3 months ago)

Grabe ah. Salamat sa pagbabasa.

She's more myself than I am. Whatever our souls are made of, hers and mine are the same.

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Faye11
April 25, 2021 (3 months ago)

Ang galing lang 👏👏
Super enjoyed the story. Satisfying at dami ko natutunan. Sobrang naappreciate ko yung final chapter. Ramdam na ramdam ko ang emotions.. Thanks for sharing this nice story😀.  Abangers sa mga next stories mo.  😊😘

Love/ Lab what makes me happy ❤😁

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