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Netorare, Part One

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Story: Fiction, Taglish · Categories: Erotic Couplings, Romance, One Night Stand · Tags: , , ,
Date: December 10, 2020 (1 month ago)


Disclaimer: the following story is fiction. All similarities to people, places, objects, or pets is coincidental and unintentional. That being said, enjoy!
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I met Gabriel back when I was in first year college. Not at the school itself, but during my moving phase into the city. See, I came from one of the provinces up north, but I had to move to Manila so I can continue my studies and hopefully get a good job. Y'know, support the family back home. And the family overseas. Or not. Mom isn't really in contact with us anymore when she met that rich Taiwanese guy in Japan around twelve years ago. So it was just me, my dad, and my little brother.

But now I have to leave them, and live here in the big city. Hate that I have to be alone, but I can't exactly take my dad and Timmy over here. We're not exactly rich.

But anyway, back to the topic. Gabriel. Oh, he was a sweet, sweet guy. Just around my own age. We met at the most inconsequential of times.

Near my apartment was a sort of walking bridge spanning a small creek. It was a nice summer day, and the wind was cool and soft. I wore a hat that day to keep the sun off my eyes, and carried a small umbrella to keep the heat off my skin. It was a very idyllic afternoon.

Then the wind picked up, and my umbrella was blown away. The breeze carried it over to the creek, and it landed upside down, fortunately. A rapid set of footsteps suddenly sprang to life behind me, and a person suddenly leapt up and over the bridge barricade. A splash of water later and I found a man not older than me, sitting down on the shallow water, my umbrella safely on his hand.

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"Alam mo, you didn't need to get my umbrella like that." I said, preparing some crab and corn soup for the man that saved my umbrella. "You could've gotten yourself hurt."

Gabriel was in my bathroom, taking a proper bath.

"Eh, di hindi mo ko mapapansin pag di ganun ginawa ko." His voice came muffled, echoing over the sound of the shower.

"Hay nako. Bilisan mo dyan, the soup is almost ready."

Gabriel went out of my bathroom in a towel. He was handsome. So handsome. It's like he glowed too. But that's probably because the afternoon sun shined on his bare chest. I couldn't look at him directly because I was afraid he'd see my increasingly reddening face.

I poured a bowl and set it down on the table. "Here."

Gabriel sat down across from me. "Thanks!" He sniffed the steam and savored the smell.

I watched him take spoonful after spoonful of hot soup straight to his mouth, seemingly untouched by the heat of the meal. Halfway through, he stopped and cleared his throat.

"So, Jean, you said you came here for studies?"

I nodded. "I'm taking up management in the university."

"That's where I'm going too! So, you live alone?"

I nodded again.

"Fair, fair. You be careful ah? Medyo delikado dito pag gabi eh, especially a for pretty lady like yourself."

I blushed so hard when he said that. I looked down and fidgeted with the hem of my dress. I muttered a word of gratitude and stood up, pouring myself some water. In truth, I really just didn't want him to see my scarlet cheeks.

I heard a final clink of a spoon and the apparent noise of a chair's legs being dragged backward. The silent pitter patter of his bare feet. I can feel him close in from behind me, and th...

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jeffie
December 10, 2020 (1 month ago)

Mali mali Grammar Cringy 😂

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KathRina96
December 10, 2020 (1 month ago)

I guess I have room for improvement then. :)

As bright as the sun.

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TreyMercer
December 11, 2020 (1 month ago)

though your english is a bit supbar it's not as horrendous as the other writers here.  Pero, why not do your next chapter in filipino?
Tingnan mo kung mas madadaliaan ka sa pagpapahayag ng gusto mong sabihin at kung mas maganda yung magiging komento ng mga mambabasa mo

Goodluck!

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Mrs_Mai_Leebogacu
December 10, 2020 (1 month ago)

Its relaxed conversational tone would be spoiled by strict grammar, I wouldn't want to ruin the moment by finding faults, its clear to me and very easy to read.  Good job Ms.Author.  I enjoyed the love in it. Waiting for more.. Thanks

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blipper
December 11, 2020 (1 month ago)

Up dito. Basta hindi "English Carabao" (di ko alam ang tamang term haha) Okay na. I do not find it cringy, on contrast dun sa sabi nung naunang nagcomment.

I want to. But I don't know how.

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Jhong91
December 10, 2020 (1 month ago)

Paano naging Netorare ito?

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KathRina96
December 10, 2020 (1 month ago)

Part one. :)

As bright as the sun.

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Jhong91
December 10, 2020 (1 month ago)

akala ko netorare talaga....

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