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Author's Note: Hello, it's me Balderic. First of all, I would like to greet you a Merry Christmas of 2020. I hope you are doing well. Second, I would like to thank you for picking my story to read. Out of all other stories here, you picked mine, so I would personally want to give you my deepest appreciation.

I have been writing nonstop for 5 years and Heaven or Hell is one of my all time favorite. I had been working on this story and through all these years, as the story progressed, so did my writing style. I would never be the Balderic you know me of today if it were not of Heaven or Hell. This book series has become my flagship story and I am very proud to be able to get this far with this series.

All of these were nothing without my dear readers such as yourself. You may be a silent reader, a commenter or an avid fan, but you stick with me up until this day. So now, I would like to present to you the next installment of the series. The story that I had dreamed of since I started creating it. The story that I had planned and kept to myself for all these years.

Enjoy the reading.

Act I: Remember The Name
By: Balderic

Lahat ng bagay ay may panimula. Mga bagay na sa kasalukuyan ay may sariling papel. Mapapa isip ka at mapapatanong kung bakit ganito? Saan ba ito nagsimula? Paano ba ito nagsimula? Si Gabriel Marasigan ay tinaguriang pinaka malakas na agent sa buongkasaysayan ng Sting. Subalit saan ba sya nagsimula? Ang mga kasagutan sa mga katanungan iyan ay nagmula, apat na buwan matapos ang paglalayas ni Gabriel sa kanilang bahay.

Isang binatang umibig ng lubos. Isang pusong nasaktan. Isang katotohanang kanyang natuklasan. Binigo sya ng kanyang iniibig. Pinili ni Karen Babaylan ang isang lalakeng hinde karapat-dapat na umangkin ng kanyang puso't pagkatao. Dahil dito, minabuti ni Gabriel ang umalis, ang lumayo.

Nawalan ng landas ang buhay nya. Apat na buwan syang naglakbay at sa kanyang paglalakbay ay napadpad sya sa isang lugar na kung saan nabubuhay ang mga halimaw. Mga halimaw na kumakain ng kapwa nilalang. Mga halimaw na nananamtala ng kahinaan ng iba.

Hong Kong

"UAAARRGH!! " nabuwal ang isang duguang lalake. Bumagsak sya sa ilang drums at napahiga ito ng patihaya sa kalsada.

"KROOM!" sigaw ng kulog at kidlat sa kalangitan. Patuloy ang pagbuhos ng malakas na ulan.

Lumapit sa lalake ang ilang armadong kalalakihan. May dalang iba't ibang armas. May isang may hawak na baseball bat. May isang may hawak namang tubo. Ang iba, may hawak na punyal at itak. Isang naka puting polo shirt ang lumapit sa duguang biktima. Pa upo itong humarap sa lalake.

"You're out of the Triple X, Shen. I'm sorry." Wika ng lalakeng naka polo. Hinde sumagot ang duguang biktima. Sumenyas ang naka polo sa isang kasama nya. Lumapit ito at binigyan ito ng isang maliit na revolver.

"This is the new guy. Gabriel, that's his name. I want you two to be well acquainted."

Tumayo ang lalake at tumingin ng maayos kay Gabriel na tila kinakabahan. Tinapik nito ang pisngi ng binatang si Gabriel.

"Hey… relax man. This is your moment. Seize it. You're gonna make Mr. Tang proud. Okay? "

"O. .Okay… "

Hinawakan ng lalake ang kamay ni Gabriel na may baril at itinutok ito sa ulo ng biktima nila.

"Now, squeeze it, don't pull it. Remember.. Squee.. "

"BLAM! " biglang nakalabit ni Gabriel ang baril at tinamaan sa ulo ang biktima nya. Nagulat ang lahat pero nagsimula silang magtawanan.

"HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Here's my guy! Hey! I'm proud of ya' Gabriel. Welcome to the Triple X, Mr
Baby faced assassin hahaha! " tuwang tuwa ng lalake habang inaakbayan si Gabriel. Natulala naman ang binata at nakatitig lang sa unang taong napatay nya. Dilat ang mga mata ng lalakeng nabaril nya at nakatitig din sa kanya.

"Hhuurrgghh! " bulwak ng suka ni Gabriel sa loob ng isang banyo sa isang Motel kung saan sya pina pahinga ni Li Jun Tau, ang lalakeng nagrecruit sa kanya simula nang maging stowaway ito sa isang barko mula sa manila papuntang Hong Kong.

"Heeyy. .how long are you gonna be there? " tanong ng isang prostitute na naghihintay sa kama. Ibinigay ito ni Jun Tau kay Gabriel bilang reward sa kanyang pagiging myembro ng gang.

"Sorry to keep you waiting." Lumabas si Gabriel ng banyo at nakitang nakahiga na ang babae. Naka panty nalang ito na kulay violet. At nakabuyangyang ang maliit nitong mga suso. Hinihimas ng babae ang sarili habang nakangiti.

"It's true. You really are cute for a filipino hihihi." Wika ng babae.

Naalala ni Gabriel si Karen. Nalungkot ang mukha nito at kumirot ang dibdib.

"Others don't think so."

"Hah! Fuck them. What matters is right here and now." Tumayo ang babae at nilapitan si Gabriel.

Nilapat nito ang mga kamay sa balikat ng binata at sumayaw ito. Umikot-ikot ang bewang at pwet ng babae habang pababa ito ng pababa. Ibinaba nito ang pantalon ng binata at hinablot ang nag gagalaiti nitong pagkalalake. Inilabas ng prosti ang titi ng binata. Napangiti si Gabriel. First time nya itong maranasan.

"ummnhh. .shluurpp!! " sinipsip ng prosti ang burat ni Gabriel at napa nga-nga ito sa sarap. Ganito pala ang pakiramdam ng chinuchupa. Nakaka kiliti at napakasarap. Bawat hagod ng dila at labi ng prosti ay nagdadala sa kanya sa kalangitan.

Halos labasan si Gabriel nang bigla nyang makita ang sarili sa salamin ng isang aparador sa motel. Nawala ang libog sa kanyang katawan. Hinde ito ang imahe ng kanyang pagkatao.

"I'm sorry! "

"Blag! " sinara ni Gabriel ang pinto ng motel matapos nyang palabasin ang prosti. Bayad na ang babae kaya umalis na lamang ito.

Tumihaya si Gabriel sa kama. Nakatingin ito sa kisame at na-alala ang matamis na mga ngiti ni Karen. Pero imbes na ligaya, napalitan ng poot at pighati ang puso nya. Sa iba napunta si Karen. Sa iba nabaling ang loob nito. Hinde sa kanya na isang mahinang klaseng lalake. Isang lalakeng tinuring lamang ni Karen na isang kaibigan at kapatid. Umikot si Gabriel at tumaob sa kama.

"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! " napakalakas nitong sigaw. Inilabas ang galit at bigat sa dibdib.

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By: Balderic

Nagising si Gabriel habang nasa loob ng isang kubo sa malamig na lupain sa paanan ng kabundukan sa hilagang bahagi ng Nepal. Nasa gateway na ito papunta sa lupain na tinatawag nilang Mountain Valley of the Kings.

Lumabas sa kubo si Gabriel at nagsimulang maglakbay. Ilang kilometro na rin ang nalakad nya sa mabato at manyebeng daan. Mula sa makapal na ulap ay lumitaw ang isang monk na naka suot ng dark orange na kasuotan at may straw hat. Hawak nito ang isang mahabang tungkod na may mga nakasabit na mga palamuti sa dulo.

Huminto ang monk nang magkaharap sila ni Gabriel. Tahimik na nagtitigan ang dalawa.

"You must be Gabriel."

"How do you know my name? "

"Lord Jinna sent a message to us that you will be coming."

"That was fast."

"E-mail."

"uh.. Okay… " tila na awkward sandali si Gabriel pero nanatiling seryoso ang kanyang tayo.

"I'm afraid you are far from ready Gabriel Marasigan."

"Yeah, I heard that before."

"Your eyes shows fear. But not of me. Of someone else."

"Heard that too. Are you gonna show me the path? "

"The path is within you brother. It is but covered in your doubts and fear. Clear your mind so you may see the truth."

"I am trying."

"Trying is doubting. Doing is everything." Naglaho ang monk at lumitaw ito sa harapan ni Gabriel na kung saan umatake ito ng palm strike sa sikmura ng binata.

"KPAK! " na block ito ni Gabriel at tinulak palayo ang monk.

"I don't wanna hurt you old man." Babala ni Gabriel.

"Pain is part of this world, brother. It is but of earthly feelings. Let it go."

"As you wish." Umatake naman si Gabriel ng isang napakabilis na suntok.

"BUUFFTT!! " "UURRGHH! " kumonekta ang kamao ni Gabriel sa monk at napa atras ito at bumangga ang likod sa isang bato.

"Oh God! I'm so sorry! "

"You didn't have to be so hard about it boy… unnghh my body feels like it's been hit by a truck! "

"But you said to let go."

"That's not what I meant, stupid. I said, to let go of your earthly attachments. Your eyes are filled with nothing but desires. You must learn to let it go. That is the path of the Lotus."

"You could have told me that clearly." Tinulungan ni Gabriel tumayo ang monk. Tinuro nito ang daan paakyat sa kabundukan.

Dito nagsimulang maglakbay muli si Gabriel.

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By: Balderic

Hong Kong

"Are you sure about this? " tanong ng binatang si Gabriel kay Jun Tau habang nakatago sila sa loob ng mga sasakyan sa harapan ng isang night club.

"Are you nervous? Remember, the Boss will only trust you if he sees your dedication to the group. We're a family here Gabriel. Remember, I trust you. I let you in. The Boss has high expectations of you. Don't let me down now." Sagot naman ni Jun Tau. Naka ngiti ito at inakbayan ang bata nya.

Sa isang signal, sabay na lumabas sina Jun Tau at ilang kasamahan nya papunta sa Night Club. Nang mapansin ng bouncer ang dami nila ay wala itong magawa kundi ang papasukin sila habang napagilid naman ang ilang costumers na nakapila sa labas dahil sa takot.

Pagpasok ng grupo ay sumalubong sa kanila ang isang techno beat at sayawan ng magkakahalong mga tao. May ilang platforms sa loob at sumasayaw ang mga naka bikini at topless na mga babae. Habang patuloy ang kasayahan at gumuguhit sa dim lights ang ilang disco beams, hinanap ng grupo ang may ari ng establishment.

Lumapit sa kanila ang manager at hinarap si Jun Tau.

"Good evening. I'm Lou."

"Yeah, I don't care. Where's your fat boss?"

Halatang na bastos si Lou pero nanatili itong naka ngiti. Sinubukan nitong kontrolin ang sitwasyon.

"I'm afraid my Boss won't be seeing you, acting rude like that." Sagot nito pero mas lalo lamang uminit amg sitwasyom dahil humugot ng baril si Jun Tau at tinutok ito kay Lou.

"This is not a request." Wika ni Jun Tau. Naghanda na rin ang grupo nya.

"Enough! " bumaba mula sa hagdan ang matabang boss ni Lou. May kasama itong mga armadong bodyguards.

"You're late of your payment old man."

"I don't have to pay you anything." Maangas na sagot ng may ari ng night club.

"Mr. Tang won't like that kind of tone Mr. Chin." Babala ni Jun Tau.

Lumapit si Mr. Chin kay Jun Tau at nanlilisik ang mga mata nito.

"Tell Eric Tang, he is not the big dog of this town anymore." Sabay talikod nito kay Jun Tau.

Ilang hakbang pa lang ito at biglang binaril ni Jun Tau sa likod si Mr. Chin.

"BLAM BLAM BLAM BLAM! !" nagkaputukan kaagad ang magkabilang grupo at nagsimulang magsitakbuhan ang mga costumers at mga tauhan ng club.

Agad nakapagtago si Gabriel habang nakikipagbarilan ito. Ilan sa mga kasamahan nya ang napatay kaagad. Sumagot ng mga putok si Gabriel at may mga tinamaan din ito.

Nagsimula namang maglaban si Lou at Jun Tau. Nagtagisan ang mga ito ng martial arts. Palitan ang mga suntok at sipa ng dalawa sa gitna ng barilan. Tinamaan si Jun Tau ng ligaw na bala sa hita matapos nitong masapak sa pisngi si Lou. Napadura ng dugo si Lou pero tinutok nito ang baril kay Jun Tau.

"BLAM BLAM!! " "AAARRGH! " tinamaan sa dibdib si Gabriel ng sya mismo ang sumangga ng bala para maproteksyonan si Jun Tau. Sinagot naman ito at pinagbabaril ni Jun Tau si Lou hanggang mamatay.

"Gabriel! Wake up! Wake up man! " tinapik ni Jun Tau ang pisngi ni Gabriel pero nawawalan na ito ng malay.

"Jun Tau! The cops are coming! Let's go! Leave him! " wika ng isang kasamahan nila.

"No! Help me carry him!"

Ilang oras din ang nakalipas at nagising si Gabriel sa isang kama sa loob ng penthouse ng Triple X gang.

"Good, you're awake." Nakangiti si Jun Tau na sinalubong ang pag upo ni Gabriel. May mga benda ito sa hita at si Gabriel naman ay may benda sa dibdib.

"Gabriel, it's good that you're awake boy." Si Eric Tang. 33 years old na Gang leader ng Triple X. Naka suot ito ng maputing suit at naka brush up ang buhok. Nakipag kamay ito kay Gabriel.

"Boss… " hinde makapagsalita si Gabriel sa takot kay Eric.

"I would like to thank you for saving my little brother. If it were not for your sacrifice, he would be dead by now."

"That was.. Nothing… boss… I'm only helping a fellow brother."

"That's good. That's what I want to hear. See Jun Tau, this boy right here, he has potential."

"I know Boss. He's my man."

"SPAK! " sinampal ni Eric Tang si Jun Tau sa mukha at nagulat ito sa nangyari.

"Wh.. Why? "

"Why? Are you stupid? Killing Mr. Chin right in front of many people!? Do you know how much money we are paying those fat cock sucking cops just to leave our operations alone!?"

"But Boss, Mr. Chin disrespected you. We have to make an example of him."

"Can you please use your brain first before your itchy fingers? I can deal with Mr. Chin myself. All I needed was confirmation if he's still with me or not. But what you did was go out there guns blazing like somekind of a maniac! Now you're wounded, some of my men are dead and you left Mr. Chin into a fuckin stiff. Do you have any idea, any fuckin idea how big his revenue is? How much he gives us? Do you? "

"I'm sorry Boss. It won't happen again."

"Of course it won't happen again. We may be half brothers Jun Tau, but I assure you, blood is never thicker than water in my family." Sabay alis ni Eric Tang at iniwang tulala si Jun Tau.

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By: Balderic

Sinalubong ng malakas at malamig na hangin si Gabriel habang inaakyat ang kabundukan. Wala siyang makita kundi ang makapal na ulap mula sa ibabaw ng mga bundok. Balot na balot ang katawan nya pero ramdam nya parin ang napakalamig na klima.

Bawat hakbang nya ay napakabigat. Bawat lakad nya ay tila pasan nya ang bigat ng mundo. Napakaraming tao ang nanganga-ilangan ng tulong nya. Napakaraming tao ang nagdudusa sa kamay ng kalaban nya. Hinde ito ang oras para magpadala sya sa hirap ng kanyang dinaraanan.

Sa kabila ng lamig at nyebe, nakuha nyang baybayin ang isang maliit na kweba. Pumasok sya dito at naglatag ng masusunog na mga kahoy at dahon. Siniga nya ito at nagsimula sya ng maliit na apoy. Isang napakaliit na liwanag sa gitna ng matindeng unos. Liwanag at apoy na nagsisilbing pag-asa na sya lamang ang may hawak.

Habang nakatitig sya sa mumunting apoy ay nagflash back muli sa kanya ang kanyang nakaraan.

"We will not fail this job! We cannot afford to fail now! Do you understand!?" sigaw ni Jun Tau sa kanyang mga kasama sa loob ng isang private plane papunta sa isang secluded na lugar sa Nepal. Tumango sa kanya ang mga kasamahan at isa na dito si Gabriel.

May dala silang ilang rockets na edi deliver nila sa isang warlord sa northern Nepal. Ang mga rockets na ito ay ipinagkatiwala sa kanila ni Eric Tang para dalhin at para na rin makabawi sila sa nangyari sa Night Club.

"Hey." Tumabi si Jun Tau kay Gabriel. Naki fist bump pa ito sa binata sabay ngiti. Tumango naman si Gabriel at hinahawakan ang dibdib nya. Naka suot ito ng jacket na may hoodie.

"How's your wound? "

"It's itchy."

"Well, it's just the cold. You'll get used to it. Besides, once we are done here, the Boss will give us a better position on the gang."

"Yeah. "

"Still nervous?" ngiti pa muli ni Jun Tau.

"A little bit but I can take it."

"That's my man. You're my baby faced Assassin brother. You have my back and I have yours."

Naglanding ang eroplano sa isang maliit na airstrip kung saan sinalubong sila ng isang truck ng mga military na tagasunod ng warlord. Bumaba ng eroplano si Jun Tau at Gabriel, kasama ang ibang bodyguards at lumapit din sa kanila ang kukuha ng mga rockets. Isang lalakeng bombay na may dalang rifle ang lumapit. Sa likod naman nya ay ilang mga armado ring lalake.

"You're late." Wika nito.

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bebok
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

1st hahahaha

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Balderic
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Ay ambilis haha

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Roockky
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Parang nakalaban na ni ben12 yun isang agent ng sting,  di ba boss?
Ito yun mga kwwnto na napakainteresado.. Up boss

When words fails…Music speaks… .

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Balderic
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

I think Silent Eight member yun nakalaban ni Ben

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BlueSky
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Welcome back for the one the legendary writer's of FFS Mr. Balderic 🙌

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Balderic
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

You give me too much credit hehe thank you

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Lenovo29
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Wow ganda talaga sana malaman narin kung ano nangyari kay ben

Weeeee29

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Balderic
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

We can only speculate hehehe

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Peers
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Next n kagad sir..  Bitin..  Hehehe

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Balderic
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Working on it

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Jacum
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Ayos! Salamat sa isa na namang aklat ng HOH master...

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Balderic
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Yes hehe

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Jacobgavin
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Isa ka po sa dahilan sir bakit napunta ako dito sa fss. Salamat po sa mga likha mo nakaka adik talagang basahin. Ingatpo lagi nd more story to come pa po nd merry Christmas sayo at sa pamilya mo po

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Balderic
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Thank you.
Merry Christmas to you and your family aswell

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Alyasgwapo
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

WhoOp angas talaga boss balderic

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Balderic
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Salamat po

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Neo88
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Anu ng ngyri ky ben12 boss???mkkblik p b sya??!

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Balderic
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Hold your horses hehehe makakarating din tayo sa mga yan

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otkep
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

one of my favorite series. thanks otor.

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Balderic
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Welcome po

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Benjie_Fixer
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Ayan na ang aabangan

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Balderic
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Hehe thanks

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Abet_29
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Merry 🎄 christmas sir balderic
Isa ako sa masugid mong reader kahit sa kabilang site inaabangan ko ang iyong mga obra
God bless
Stay safe

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Balderic
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Thank you
Merry Christmas din

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Abet_29
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Merrry Christmas sir balderic
Isa ako sa mga avid reader ng iyong obra kahit sa kabilang site
Godbless
Stay safe

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Balderic
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Mas active na ako dito kesa sa kabila

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diegomadara
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Si ben10 ba naka virgin kay karen? Sir balderic

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Balderic
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Nope

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kanton123
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Will cum back idol

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Balderic
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Thanks 😃

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brugzkie
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Comment bago basa hahaha
Welcome back John Wick ng Pinas..
Salamat sa pag update sir Balderic ..

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Balderic
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Ahehe john wick ng pinas talaga

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Foreman1983
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

First merry christmas den boss Balderic at s lahat ng mga k ffs advance gift n samen mabasa ang
next book V ng heaven or hell
maraming salamat po more power stay healthy sir bal..may bago n n man kame aabangan.thank You👍

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Balderic
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Merry Christmas din

Enjoy the new installment hehe

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Kristina26
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Thanks for the update.. This is the first story that i read and hook up with...   Best christmas gift to your loyal reader...

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Balderic
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Good to hear you liked the series
Thanks for the support

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RenoRoah
December 17, 2020 (1 month ago)

better to catch up the previous chapters. Its amazing.

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Balderic
December 17, 2020 (1 month ago)

You got a lot of reading to do hehe

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Karog2
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Bago ko basahin idol, merry christmas and thank you for another masterpiece, hindi ko na makita sa wattpad ang story mo, gusto kong basahin uli mula simula, thank you master lodi

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Balderic
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Wala na ako doon. Lagi kasi nirereport account ko ng mga inggit

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Batangpalaboy
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Keep it up boss idol,,
Merry Christmas,,

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Balderic
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Thanks 😇

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Thorn22
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Heaven and Hell together with Agnas are both classics

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Balderic
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

They are what I am known for today hehehe

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rxxx1005
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Galing sir hanggang ngayon sinusubaybayan ko panrin ang mga obra mo salamat po

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Balderic
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Thank you for your dedication

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Ash2ash
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

isa s mga inaabangan qng basahin d2 s fss ang stories mo sir..kip it up sir balderic

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Balderic
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Happy to hear that 😇😇😇

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jhenyl1987
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

salamat idol.. keep it up

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Balderic
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Oh I will

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Gabriel_666
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

welcome back idol balderic.

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Balderic
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Thanks 😁

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pipoy007
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Yoko magmura pero boss balderic lodi nman poh kc talaga lhat ng akda moh..,..tinalo moh c anino ng carnal isa din alamat sa pag susulat iba ka tlaga

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Balderic
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Ahaha I cannot say na may tinalo ako. Syempre iba iba rin ang style ng bawat author at iba iba rin ang opinion ng readers. But thanks sa suporta

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earl1925
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Tnx sa update idol.matagal tagal din bago na update etong kwento na e2. Sna masundan agad.

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Balderic
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Yes, last year pa yung ep iv eh hehehe

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ElTorodeBarako
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

sa wakas. salamat lodi balderic

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Balderic
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

No probs

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kathmike07
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Jun Tau??  Kalaban ni Jackie Chan s Rush Hour 1..

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Balderic
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Di ako aware although napanood ko na yan matagal na hehehe

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kathmike07
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Jun Tau?  Kalaban ni Jackie Chan s Rush Hour 1

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Balderic
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Hehe bat nag do double post

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cornets23
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Thank you boss bald sa Christmas gift.
Matapos ko lang tong HoH babasahin ko yung agnas. Hehe buti at tapos na story ng agnas.
More power

Jefferson

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Balderic
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Well matagal tagal pa bago ko ito ma kompleto hehehe hang tight

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cornets23
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Okay lang kahit matagal. At least napapasaya at napapanabik mo kaming mga readers ng stories mo.

Jefferson

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Balderic
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Hehehe yeah yun nMan ang mahalaga ang makapasaya ng nagbabasa

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killer_thugs
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Di pa tapos ung agnas

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Balderic
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Medyo mahaba din yun eh

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killer_thugs
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Idol balderic nagbabasa na ko ng stories for more than 2 or 3 years na ata. So sulit na sulit na ko. Is there a way to give support or token of appreciation?

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Balderic
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

You can always follow me on my fb group Balderic World

I do have a plan of a manga version of Heaven or Hell. That one, I will publish and sell to the public once the first book is done

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kendik123
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Agang pamasko idol bal 😇

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Balderic
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Yes hehe

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krismille
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Good to see you're back boss balderic. Im one of your avid readers at inaabangan ko talaga mga gawa mo. Mula ng una ko mabasa ang Agnas na-hooked na ako sa mga stories mo. Well done sir. 👏👏👏👏

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Balderic
December 10, 2020 (1 month ago)

Thank you very much 😊😊😊

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Foreman1983
December 9, 2020 (1 month ago)

Boss bal, p join s group mo s fb balderic word fan mo ko salamat...

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Balderic
December 10, 2020 (1 month ago)

Sure 😃

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Tazman_ic
December 10, 2020 (1 month ago)

I am effin giddy with excitement hehe
Eto pala origin story ni Gabgab. Salamat Sir Balderic!

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Balderic
December 10, 2020 (1 month ago)

Everything goes full circle

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demon969
December 10, 2020 (1 month ago)

`kwality like always!

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Balderic
December 10, 2020 (1 month ago)

Quality over quantity hehehe

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Dotaimba
December 10, 2020 (1 month ago)

Medyo nalimutan ko na kung saang part o mali rin pagkakaalala ko? Nabasa ko kasi noon na hindi naman umalis lang sa Bansa niya si Gabriel, na kinuha na agad siyang miyembro ng sting at hindi siya naging palaboy noon. Basta sa pagkakatanda ko kasi ganoon nalimutan ko lang kung saang part iyon. Pasensiya na po, medyo naguluhan lang ako sa back story o mali lang yata ako ng pagkakaalala. Gayunpaman, inaabangan ko palagi ang update nitong serye at isa sa paborito ko. Maraming salamat sa pagbabahagi, padayon po!

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Balderic
December 11, 2020 (1 month ago)

Close to none kasi ang reveal ng back story ni Gabriel. More or less, either galing sa iba ang info or most likely tinatago ni Gabriel ang lahat.

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Dotaimba
December 11, 2020 (1 month ago)

Salamat sa paglilinaw. :)

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Balderic
December 12, 2020 (1 month ago)

No probs. Hehehe

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animalism
December 10, 2020 (1 month ago)

Salamat po sa update sir

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Balderic
December 11, 2020 (1 month ago)

No probs 😁

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jess3344
December 11, 2020 (1 month ago)

Sir balderic yung wings of the valkyrie po ba karugtong siya ng hoh4?

May ben12 book 3 na po?

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Balderic
December 12, 2020 (1 month ago)

Continuation ito ng wings of the valkyrie

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Badman
December 12, 2020 (1 month ago)

Yown finally sir b nag update na ulit.maraming Salamat sir

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Balderic
December 12, 2020 (1 month ago)

You're more than welcome sir

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Smiley_face
December 12, 2020 (1 month ago)

Ganda ng obra Yung last lines ng story nato halos may similar sa last lines ng agnas 3 Yung about sa piraso ng chess kaya napapa isip ako Kung mag sasama ang heaven or hell and agnas sa iisang story na tagal ko ng inaabangan to e pero ngyon ko lang nakita to FB page Kasi ako magbabasa e pero ang galing

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Balderic
December 12, 2020 (1 month ago)

Well may pagkakahawig sa style kasi iisa lang author hehehe pero iba parin ang Agnas sa HoH

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Smiley_face
December 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

Oo nga Naman iisa lang Yung author pero Sana masundan agad to Ito talaga pinaka aabangan ko kaya ko napunta sa site nato dahil sabi may HoH 5 na e Di nako makapag hintay kulang nalang mangyari sa tunay na buhay para malupit hahahaha pero salamat sa the real balderama maligayang pasko☺️

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Balderic
December 17, 2020 (1 month ago)

And a happy new year hehe

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nahtanojamaryag
December 12, 2020 (1 month ago)

isang npakagandang obra boss bald un Lang ranging masasabi ko boss thank you

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Balderic
December 12, 2020 (1 month ago)

Thank you so much 😊

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badace316
December 12, 2020 (1 month ago)

idol merry x-mas
request lng idol
patira mu uli si karen s iba 😁😁😁

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Balderic
December 17, 2020 (1 month ago)

Hahaha malabo yan

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RenoRoah
December 17, 2020 (1 month ago)

next idol hihihi tagal ko inantay kasunod🤗

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Balderic
December 17, 2020 (1 month ago)

On going hehe

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