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Ang Aking Perfect Girlfriend S (chapter 11)

by: cloud9791

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Ned...

"I'm beating you up! Huh! Huh! UMMM!!" Si Jess habang ambilis kakapindot

sa controller.

HINDE!! Ang sigaw ko sa isip. Matatalo na naman yata ako sa asawa ko!

YOU WIN!! Ang sabi sa screen ng TV namin. Napasandal nalang ako sa sofa namin. Pagdating sa console games may unting pagdaramdam ako.

"Haaayyy!" Ang mahabang buntong-hininga ko.

Simula nung na-ospital ako. Parang mahina na ko mga fighting games at sa NBA. Kung dati lagi ko natatalo si Bebe Jess ko. Ngayon lagi na nya ako natatalo! Ewan ko ba dati naman hindi manalo-nalo sakin tong kaygandang asawa kong to.

"Ow! Did I broke you heart again Baby Neddie!? Poor you…" Ang pang-aasar

pa ng misis ko sakin.

Yung pang-aasar na hindi ka magagalit ba. At inihagis nya ang controller nya sa sahig na may carpet, sabay daluhong sakin.

"Are you still angry baby? Hmmmm?" Sabay dila nya sa may kaunti kung

nakabukang bibig.

AHHHHH!! SARAAPP! Nang nag-dilaan kami ng kaygandang misis ko. Napa-

kapa ako sa may makinis na likod nya. Suot lang ni Jess ang t-shirt ko na

malaki, pero sa loob ay walang bra!!

"UMMMMM!!! That feels so good baby!" Nang sabay ko kapain ang dalawang

nagtatayugang mga utong nya.

Na-miss ko to!! Pagkatapos kung lamas-lamasin ang mga perpektong suso ni Jess…

"You want this baby!?" Si Jess na mismo ang naghubad ng kanyang suot na

t-shirt!

OWW PUTAH!! Eto na naman ang mala-diyosang katawan ng misis ko! Ang

mga suso nyang kay puti at perpekto ang pagka-bilog. Pinkish ang mga

utong!! Ano pa bang hahanapin ko sa isang asawa!?

Ipina-suso nya sakin ang kanang utong nya…. Habang nagmamadaling mag-hubad ng shorts nya!!

"OOOOOHHHHHHH!!"Ungol ni Jess ko nang supsupin ko yung utong nya!!

SUP!SUP!! SOP!! Ang mga tunog na gawa ng paghithit ko sa pink nips ni

misis!!

Paghubad ng short nya… Sumama na rin ang kanyang vhictoria's secret na panty at…

SHET!! Nakita ko na naman ang magandang puke ng asawa ko!! Parang feeling ko matagal na kaming hindi nag-sisiping ni Jess simula ng mag-away kami! Yung mga pussy lips nyang pinkish din, mamasa-masa na sa katas! Para kong lalagnatin sa sobrang kasabikan!!

Wala pa ring nagbabago kay Jess. Malibog pa rin talaga ang misis kong to!! Sa labas may pagka-astig at boyish ang kilos ni Jess. Pero pag kami nalang dalawa. Lumalabas ang pagiging nymphomaniac nya!! Lulubusin ko na to!! Di ko pa masyado nakakantot ang asawa ko simula nung kinasal kami!!

"I've missed this baby…"Si Bebe Jess ko, paghila nya pababa sa shorts ko.

Umigkas kaagad ang tigas na tigas ko ng tite!! Yumuko agad ang napakagandang asawa ko… Parang uhaw sa etits! Sabay subo sa pinakang-ulo!!

"AAAHHHHH!!!!" Ungol ko napa-angat pa ang puwit ko sa tindi ng pagsupsop

ni Jess!

Taas-baba agad ang ulo ng asawa ko! ANSARAAAPP!! Expert na expert na si Jess sa pag-suso ng tite!! Parang hinihigop yung ulo sa loob ng mainit na bunganga nya! Tapos papatamain nya sa may pisngi nya. ANG HOT!!

"AAAAHHHHH!! BEB!!"Napapa-kadyot na ko sa bibig nya!

Sisiguraduhin ko pagsasawaan ko ngayon ang hot at perpektong katawan ng misis ko.

"Halika na beb!" Hila ko kay Jess.

Parang feeling ayaw pa papigil ni Jess tsupain ang titi ko! Para syang nabitin sa pag-blowjob! Pero wala na rin sya magagawa, sunud-sunuran lang sya sakin. Ako ata ang lalake!! Nagmamadali na kong tinutok ang ulo ng titi ko sa basang-basa na nyang puke!!

"AAAHHHHHH!!!"Nang dumulas patuhog ang kahabaan ng batuta ko sa

masarap na lagusan ni Jess!!

Yung dahan-dahan lang muna ang banatan namin ng asawa ko. Luwa-lulusong ang mahabang batuta ko sa masarap na hugpungan… Walang sabit!! Swabe ang dulas at hugot!!

"OOOOOOHHHHH!!"Ungol ko tuwing dumudulas patuhog ang etits ko sa

mainit at madulas ng lagusan ni Jess!!

"That's it baby! I love your big fat cock!!" Ang dirty talk ni Jess.

Ipinatong nya ang mga kamay nya sa may mga hita ko, sabay gumiling sa ibabaw ko.

"OOOHHHHHH!!!!"Habang umiikot-ikot sa masarap na lagusan ni Jess ang

kahabaan ng titi ko!!

Pagliyad ni Jess nanlaki ang mga mata ko sa perpektong mga dede nya… Inabut ko agad ang mga yun sabay nilamas-lamas pati utong!!

"UMMMM!! YEAH BABY!!" Si Jess na parang lalong naging wild sa ibabaw ko!

Puputukan ko nalang si misis nang...

TOKTOKTOK!! KUYA!! KUYA!!!

TANGINA! SINO NA NAMAN YUN!!?

"KUYA!! Si GRACE TO!!"

Ang kapatid kong dalagang magaling talaga tumiming!! Lagi nalang pang bitin pag nag-kakantutan kami ni Jess! Agad tumayo na asawa ko. Nahugot-pumitik ang titi kong bitin sa ere! Basang-basa pa rin yun dahil sa masabaw na puke ng misis ko!!

Nakita ko sumilip ang bunso kong kapatid na babae sa may bintana namin.

"UYYY PUT!! SAGLIT LANG!" Ang naihiyaw ko at turok na turok pa titi ko sa

ere!

Mabilis naka-suot ng pang ibaba si Jess.

"I'm coming Grace!" Ang asawa kong may malokong ngiti. Bubuksan na nga

talaga yung pinto!

Binilisan ko nalang itaas ang pang-ibaba ko! Sabay tiningnan ko ang sofa. May bakas ng katas namin ni Jess dun! Inayos ko agad ang sapin nun.

"Hi Kuya!" Ang bati ng dalaga kong kapatid.

Ang ngiti nyan parang nakakaloko din. Baka kapatid din ito ng asawa ko??

"Kuya bakit parang may pawis ka a. Ano bang ginagawa mo?"

"Wala." Ang maiksi ko lang sagot, pasimangot pa.

"Uy defensive! Tsaka teka bakit nakasimangot ka?" Si Grace.

Pagtingin ko sa likod ni Grace ang asawa ko, padila-dila sakin. Isa pa to!! Pero sa loob ko masaya ako at dinalaw ako ng bunso kong kapatid. Ilang buwan na rin nang umalis na ako ng bahay namin pamilya. Para sa solong buhay namin ni Jess at makabuo ng sariling pamilya. Na-miss ko pa rin ang mga kapatid ko. Na-miss ko rin sina Nanay at Tatay. Kamusta na kaya sila??

"Kuya dito muna ko ha!"

"Ha!? Bakit?" Napansin ko may dalang bag si Grace.

"Ayaw mo? Ayaw mo bang makasama ang bunso mong kapatid?"

"Di naman… Tinatanong lang kita."

"It's okay Grace. Para may kasama ka rin dito baby pagwala ako." Biglang

singit ng maganda kong asawa.

"Ahahaha!" Tawa ni Grace.

Alam ko nang-aasar na naman ang kapatid kong to.

"Babyyy… Isang malaking baby..." Bulong sakin ni Grac...

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acuxieonig
August 12, 2020 (1 month ago)

1st.

Natuloy din

i love listening to lies when i know the truth

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

Thank you!

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jojowszxckie
August 12, 2020 (1 month ago)

Its been a long timr author, thanks sa update

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

opo mejo napatagal. Salamat po!

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quazar
August 12, 2020 (1 month ago)

At long last. Thanks sa update

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

oo nga sir salamat po sa pag intay!

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Johnfloyd12
August 12, 2020 (1 month ago)

continuebpa boss😁😁😁

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

Yup wala pong bibitaw

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Lhezter15
August 12, 2020 (1 month ago)

Tagal ko inabangan to..nalulungkot lang ako para kay jess kc nagustuhan na din nya...

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

Salamat po Lhezter! Sensya na po muna!

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otkep
August 12, 2020 (1 month ago)

salamat sa update, otor. i hope you won't mind and if i may just give an honest reaction from an avid fan of the Perfect GF series (at maging na iba mong mga obra). nakakalungkot ang nangyari at nangyayari sa karakter ni Jess, mula sa pedestal from the Perfect GF J series eh napunta sa putikan. hindi na Perfect GF or wife si Jess. I had hoped na may pambawi ng twist ulit kagaya nuong sa Perfect GF J, pero mukhang wala na. nanghinayang lang talaga ako sa na-buid up na karakter ni Jess at sa sex-love story nila ni Ned sa Perfect GF J series. nakakapagtaka na nawala ung tikas ni Jess, eh kayang kaya nya bugbugin si Blake,hehe. honestly nilalaktawan ko na kapag nabasa ko anything about Blake, Lamar, medyo heartbreaking kasi to see the Ned-Jess being broken, lalo na the karakter of Jess being violated. sori Team Jess here, hehe. sana madinig ung clamor ng fans (even sa fb) to bring back the orig Jess!

muli, salamat, at nawa'y wag po masamain ng ibang fans o maging ni otor ang aking feedbak

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Mike--67
August 12, 2020 (1 month ago)

Parihas tau Brad... Nd kuna din binabasa pag sa Blake na.. Nakaka ouch kasi.. Subrang sinusubaybayan ko tung kwento na tuh.. Mmmmm tsaka parang may mga mali na na nd tugma sa o mag connect sa ibang kwento..

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

Again maraming salamat po sa mga feedback nyo

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Ceekei13
August 12, 2020 (1 month ago)

Ganyan din nasa isip ko hahahaha kala ko ako lang 😂

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

thanks for the comments

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killer_thugs
August 12, 2020 (1 month ago)

kaya nga S na e

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beep108
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

guys the second book of perfect gf changed/ switched from J TO S
The love story of ned n jess turned 180 deg completely so the main character here is sofia and jess is a support, since jess n ned was married, the author need to destroy
the personality of jess to be able to switch J TO S, Honestly from the start i am expecting a bloody end for jess and sofia may come in
don't forget guys the Title is Ang aking perfect girlfriend S (from J TO S) unless otherwise the S is not sofia and a new character will appear sooner maybe sandra, sandara,sunshine,samantha or worst Sandro, Santiago,simon


keep it up author, your masterpiece still one of the best and you are one of the best writer here
from the bottom of my heart, thank you very much for sharing your talent to entertain us your reader esp this time of pandemic
God bless author sir cloud9791

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otkep
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

@beep - well i know naman na Sophia series ito, but did not expect na ganun mangyayari sa karakter ni Jess, again, my perspective is coming from the almost sacred character ni Jess sa Perfect GF J. I had expected na hindi naman aabot sa mababoy ung karakter ni Jess.
yes nagpapasalamat ako sa otor sa patuloy nyang pagsusulat, at bilang suporta ay nagbigay lang din ako ng isang reader perspective as a way of appreciation. this is no way a hate post.

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

Salamat-salamat po sa isang napakagandang comment. Thanks for the time of sharing your minds to me dear readers!

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

hint ba sir? Salamat po!

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Alcymus
August 12, 2020 (1 month ago)

agree here medyo nasira ang kwento

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

abang lang sensya po for this episode

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beep108
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

@otkep - i am not seeing any wrong from your perspective sir i feel you
since jess character in perfect gf j series is wholesome plus a karate black belt holder that she might  snap blake and lamar neck in one chop
jess is a student and temptation/s is all over, i think sir cloud wanted to intensify on it and sir cloud purpose to make jess wild so we readers be hook and carried away and sir cloud succeeded  on that. he intentionally aggravated jess character to make the story better if not best
Peace to all, i respect everybody opinion/s but we can deliver it in a nicer way that nobody get  hurt like how sir otkep share his thoughts-salute to you sir oktep

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

Wala pong problema sakin to sir otkep. I appreciate your honest feedback to the story po

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magalin_ako_peksman
August 12, 2020 (1 month ago)

comment myna bago basa. At last nasundan din

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

thank yu! enjoy po!

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singledad
August 12, 2020 (1 month ago)

Thanks boss for the update. Tagal din naming hinintay to! Sana tuloy tuloy na po at sana mas maganda na sana maging sitwasyon ni Jess.

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

Sabi nga po nila ang gulong ng buhay ay umiikot. Salamat po sir!

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kiteksmagic36
August 12, 2020 (1 month ago)

Is this perhaps a royal??

From a princess to cuncubines?? Welcome back!! Ned!!

properties dont matter, but performanced is really much better

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

Maraming salamat po sa pag-iintay! oo nga po after a 1 year hiatus ng story

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nher1989
August 12, 2020 (1 month ago)

isa ako sa nalulungkot para kay ned nabitin pa sya kay jess tapos sila blake ang bumababoy sa ka kanya pero ang inaabangan ko talaga ay si sofia mukang sya ang kasangga ng ating bida ka si ned. team sofia na ako quit ako kay jess pera lang kung may mga twist pang lalabas. abang pa din ako sana marami pang mabago. salamay sa update boss cloud.

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

Salamat po sa hindi pagbitaw mga dear readers!

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badace316
August 12, 2020 (1 month ago)

well ganun tlaga d nmn n c jess ang bida d2 c sophia n kya cla ned and sophia n ang bagong loveteam

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

Maraming salamat sir Bad-ace!

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singkit
August 12, 2020 (1 month ago)

May tae k n sa ulo ned...

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

naiputan na salamat po!!

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diegomadara
August 12, 2020 (1 month ago)

Mapapahamak na naman si idol jess, sir cloud akala ko na genjutso lang si ned ng masama,, true na pala yun

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

abang lang po sir. Salamat po sa lahat!

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Hulyo122
August 12, 2020 (1 month ago)

Sana maka Isa c Carl Kay jess

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

aha ganun ba sir. noted po

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jhessvhince21
August 12, 2020 (1 month ago)

itong story n to nag pasakit nang puso namin hype n yan bumalik n nmn
haha

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

Ahahaha Maraming salamat po sa pag hintay!

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Emme2626
August 12, 2020 (1 month ago)

Boss sa wakas mag upload kadin

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

oo nga po sir lagpas din isang taon

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AkitoIno
August 12, 2020 (1 month ago)

I hope we can all agree that whatever happens or not to Jess here that we can all appreciate na may bagong lumabas na chapter rather than this being eternally in limbo. I have some suspicions that the difficulty of releasing this one was due to perceived backlash and the other goodies accompanied by it.

Woof

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

Sir you caught part of my mind. Salamat

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stevex8520
August 12, 2020 (1 month ago)

my perfect gf S (sophia) sana masundan author.. Yung mahaba haba.. Hehe yan twisted at marami pang mangyayari.. Gandan..

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

YEs will do my best po salamat!

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tami0125
August 12, 2020 (1 month ago)

Andami nagalt dati dito dahil sa nangyari kay jess haha pero buti tinuloy ni author.
The story must go on no matter what happens.

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

Thanks sa support sir!

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Kakaldac
August 12, 2020 (1 month ago)

Sir paki bigyan ng pambawi c ned..

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zidlez
August 12, 2020 (1 month ago)

Mukhang incest ang pambawi kay ned right .

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

pwede :-)

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

noted po sir kakaldac

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sharmfaker
August 12, 2020 (1 month ago)

Wala ng perfect na babae dito sa istorya n ito puro basura na..si sofia nagpapakantot pala sa tatay yung si jess nagpapagangbang..si ned lang matino halos lahat ng character mga malibog..dapat mapunta si ned sa mabuting babae na virgin at hindi puro kantot ang nasa isip

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beep108
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

hindi rin matino si ned brod nalilibugan sya kay grace, sideline nya din bestfriend niya nun sila pa ni jess. the first book portrayed ned family as an ideal one pero lumabas lahat ang libog nila nung ikinasal na sina ned n jess, ang family ni jess sadyang active sa sex dahil parausan na ni victor yung 2 anak niya liban si jess wala ako nabasa pinaki alaman ni victor
SKL

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

Sa book 1 mysterious pa ang family avibar dito po sa book 2 nalalahad na. Salamat po mga sir!

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

Ang lihim ng pamilya avibar sir ay malalim

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Hindot68
August 12, 2020 (1 month ago)

Just an observation lang idol, I don’t know if that is the effect of his injury or stupid lang si Ned but there is no indication that he knows he sustain a physical injury considering he was hospitalized. Sa last chapter kasi he was made to believe na bangungot yung nangyari sa kanya. And now parang di man lang sya nagtataka kung ano talaga ang totoong nangyari considering he is already questioning his reflex which is connected on his supposed physical injury. Just want you to clarify those things. Thanks and welcome back.

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

Thanks for the observation and feedback sir. Everything will slowly be cleared as the story goes on po

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skyblade009
August 12, 2020 (1 month ago)

parang hindi ko na kayang basahin yung part ni Jess. pero ganon talaga story line eh. pero hindi parin ako maka move on hanggang ngayon dahil sa nangyari kay baby Jess. hindi nalang sana siya sinali huhu

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

Sorry po muna for the hurt on this chapter

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freak_me
August 12, 2020 (1 month ago)

Putek! Ito na yun! Sunod-sunod na 'to! Makakarami di ako sayo, Celia. Hahahaha! More on Celia, please??

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

Celia coming up

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Leamanuel1234
August 12, 2020 (1 month ago)

Sana wag masamain ni author, but yeah, same sentiments tulad ng iba. Perfect gf J was one of the best i've read, maybe because lovestory siya and portrays a somewhat perfect, honest relationship bet ned and jess that grew on us readers. Kung mabasa ni author, maybe maconsider na maiba yung route or totally ibahin after J hehe.

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

Duly noted po sir. Again salamat po sa pag-intay nyo

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freak_me
August 12, 2020 (1 month ago)

Putek! Ito na yun! Sunod-sunod na 'to! Makakarami di ako sayo, Celia. Hahahaha! More on Celia, please???

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paulcaleb103106
August 12, 2020 (1 month ago)

honestly
nasira image ni jess sa akin :(

nawala na thrill haha
pero go lang author

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

thank you po for the feedback sir

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raztaboy
August 12, 2020 (1 month ago)

Nakakalungkot lang na si jess and daddy nya. Kawawa naman si ned parang wala ng natira sa kanya. Idol author waiting ako sa revenge of ned kay jess and family nito. Sana mabasa mo.

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

You never know where the story will go sir

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Negan
August 12, 2020 (1 month ago)

JUST LIKE THE MAJORITY, I COULD NOT LET MYSELF BE DEAF TO WHAT THE CLAMOR IS. BRING BACK THE SWEET LOVING AND PROTECTIVE JESSY THAT WE USED TO LOVE. NOTHING MORE, NOTHING LESS. MAKE IT A BAD DREAM.

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beep108
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

huhh ano daw yun bold letters pa lahat


we are reading a free story na pinag isipan at pinaghirapan ng otor
chapter 11 is a comeback write up of sir cloud for this series after a very long idle for this book 2, nauna pa eto sa pang akit ng maynila if i am not mistaken pero yung pang akit ng maynila chapter 28 na. we are all adults here so we need to understand, be patient and be nice to everyone, i know this is erotic story site and we are here as human being so we should be acting being human

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

Sir thank you sa support. Appreciate ko po talaga

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August 14, 2020 (1 month ago)

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9791cloud
August 14, 2020 (1 month ago)

Guys-guys relax lang wag kayo mag-away.  Let's just respect each other's opinions and comments. Cool lang!! Lahat tayo andito para mag-enjoy lang ng mga stories.  Kaya bati-bati lang ha :-)

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

MAraming salamat po sa request sir. I also miss the early Jess

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mr.shortdick
August 12, 2020 (1 month ago)

guys pwede hayaan nyo na lang si boss cloud kung anong gusto nya mangyari sa story nya. kaya tinatamad ng ituloy to eh dahil sa mga reader na kagaya nyo na gusto ay yung gusto nyo ang masunod. pasalamat na lang tayo at nag update uli. magbasa na lang kayo at appreciate natin ang gawa nya. huwag nyong pakialamanan ang takbo ng story. si boss cloud lang makakapagsabi kung anong mangyayari kay jess, kung anong mangyari sa character nya. goodluck.

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

Thank you thank you sir. Malaking bagay saming mga writers ang support nyo

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Dosuno
August 12, 2020 (1 month ago)

Actually nung nag ka sequel to, yung from J to S, sobrang natuwa ako, kasi team Sofia talaga ako eversince. #Teamsofiaftw

Hindi na ako atabs.

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

Marami din pala maka-Sofia. Thank you sir sa comment

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mrnicolopez
August 12, 2020 (1 month ago)

Boss cloud continue mo lang. Despite sa kung ano man ang comment ng tao, this is still your story. Go lang! Avid fan here. Sana tuloy tuloy na.

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quazar
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

Kaya nga. Your story your decision. Sa title palang dapat halata na nila. Perfect gf J to S

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beep108
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

@quazar tama ka bro, 2nd book title comes J to S..basic
as i mentioned earlier, akala ko jess will end up bloodily and remember na may sakit siya hika,, i do hooked up also with ned-jess love story n my tears dropped too like those who felt inlove by ned n jess. sofia character in perfect gf j is more playful but remember the tears of sofia during the wedding


the title of this book 2 is ang aking perfect girlfriend S (J TO S), latest writing is chapter 11 already so move on guys, book 2 will not be created if no S, sir cloud did not give book 2 title "ang aking perfect wife J (JESS)" but gave ang aking perfect GF S,,,Basic diba

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

Thank you po! Napansin mo pala yn sir salamat po!

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

Thank youu sir quazar

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

Thanks boss! energizer ang mga comments nyo po!

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rxxx1005
August 12, 2020 (1 month ago)

I love jess and i love ned, dun sa naunang book talagang, gusto ko siya pero dito, talagang halos nadurog ang puso ko para kay ned
Pero sir i respect your story pag aari mo yan eh likha mo yan kahit ano ang mangyari ikaw lang may hawak niyan keep on writing at sana po mahaba na sa susunod
More power author, at salamat for sharing your writings...

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

Salamat po sir sa pag-intindi nyo

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Rednahz0910
August 12, 2020 (1 month ago)

Sakto ksama n ni ned c grace s bahay. Pde n yn idol.. Hehe

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

Nice! salamat naeenjoy mo po

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quazar
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

Sana may anal scene din nung Kay Jess. Lumaktaw kc from Lamar to double penetration agad... Ang daming di sanay SA NTR theme talaga...

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quazar
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

Nung last par na daming di sanay SA NTR theme para SA mga negative comments

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

Marami talagang NTR na kakaiba ang mga twist sir tama po kayo dyan

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earl1925
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

Taka lng ako palaban si jess bkit nging sunud sunuran kay blake maski pa sbihin may pang black mail.

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

malilinawan na po ang lahat sa mga next chapters

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cpaul22
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

Thank you sir cloud. Been waiting for this for a long time .. basahin ko to dto at saka sa Wattpad haha .

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

salamat po cpaul sa pagsubaybay di lang dito pati sa WP

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beep108
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

sir cpaul22 - pati na rin sa dreame.com

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lanzlot
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

Una, bumalik na si Round Girl, tapos ngayon naman si Perfect Girlfriend...Ano ba meron at nagbalbalikan mga henyo sa sex stories?

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

NAgkataon lang po siguro sir. Round girl grabe sa p** dinadala dito ang lupit sa FSS naman

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beep108
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

sir cloud, lanzlot is one of your longtime follower
from pang akit ng probinsya, i am seeing him a lot nun dipa ako marunong mag comment till naging anonymous folower mo na ako

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juan.pederico
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

salamat sir cloud. pero medyo parang malabo yung pag gunita ni Jess sa nakaraan. kasi sa Book 1, virgin si Jess dun sa first night nila (birthday ni Ned). Pwede mo pa nman edit boss para consistent lang.

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beep108
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

i think my typo error dun instead of sofia, jess ang nalagay ni sir cloud
but you can notice sa sontent ng pov, sofia ang binabanggit ni victor kasi sofia is the eldest and sofia name also appeared on that pov
SKL

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

I salute you sir beep

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juan.pederico
August 17, 2020 (1 month ago)

sana nga ganun. kasi nabanggit ni victor na "you're a good daughter, my eldest is the best"... mas maganda cguro maitama ni Sir Cloud kung kay sofia nga itong POV. medyo malapot kasi biglang tumawag sina blake kaya naputol ung balik-tanaw nya. pag binalikan mo yung chapter bday ni Ned eh malinawa nman first time ni jess yun

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

Sir salamat sa advise. Hinatyin nyo lang po sa next chapter

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nhywleck
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

Yun.. Thanks boss!!

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nhywleck
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

Yun thanks boss

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

thanks din po sir nhywleck

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Astrid1010
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

Bat parang may mali? May Amnesia ba si Ned? nkita niya mismo si Jess at si Blake bago siya napalaban at nawalan ng malay.

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

will do my best to clear everything po in the next chapters

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Astrid1010
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

ok lang yan boss, tiwala pa rin ako sa story telling capability mo. Medyo heartbroken lang matapos kung subaybayan ang J-series.

Unforeseeable Fate tragic ending din.
Yung Roundgirl naman nag update din si tirador1020 pero parang iba na rin ang timpla ng story, hindi na teasing/cuckolding parang bdsm na.

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HelRaiser25
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

Salamat sir cloud sa update! Its been a long time coming and yet fresh parin sa alaala ko yung chapter 10! Nauunawaan ko ang sentimiento ng mga tagasubaybay sa iyong obra. Katulad din nila nanghinayang ako sa umpisa kay jess (dahil bitin ang cuckold scenes) joke! Pero sa aking pangalawang pagbasa, narealize ko, hindi ko masisisi si jess at si sophia.. lalo na at hindi pa nalalahad ang lahat ng kanilang 'nakaraan'.. ang ganda ng pagmamature mo sa mga main characters, kapanapanabik ang bagong plot! Kaninong character kaya ang may point of view sa title na perfect girlfriend? Ang daming aabangan! Job well done po.. looking forward for more vivid description of jess the slut and her hubby the cuck.

"The Universe is not made of atoms, but of tiny stories."

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

Thank you sir Helraiser! Sa paghimay mo po sa mga ugali ng mga main characters. I appreciate yung observations!

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brugzkie
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

Shit bakit ngaun lang ako ngbasa to..last comment ko sa isa kong account march 19,2019 pa kala ko talaga di na masusunodan..pero ito my karogtong na at my mga susunod pa..pero my isa lang akong tanong talaga totoo bang na iyot si jess ni blake or panaginip lang ni ned un..pero salute kay sir cloud na di nya pa din to nakalimotan i update..more werpa sayo sir..ingats lage..masyado talagang misteryoso ang sulat mo sir..hahahaha

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

May date pa sir brugskie ah! Huli ako kelan pa last update haha. Marami pong salamat sainyo lahat!

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Ryan09
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

Welcome back lods antagal napahinga nito pero ung impack swabe p rin ..salamat ..standby lang s next post

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

Thank you ryan09!Oo nga po salamat andyan pa rin kayo!

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gg7152
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

Sir Cloud thank you!!! next na please i’ve been waiting for this for a long long time =D

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

gg7152 Oo nga po lagpas 1 year na salamat po sa pag-iintay!

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Misterbozo
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August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

Yun oh! Tagal ko hinintay to, lalo na pagdating kay jess at ang kanyang sikreto GAHAHAHA. NICE WORK AUTHOR

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

Thank you Misterbozo! Im excited din po

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badace316
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

excited to the max s mga lihim ng familya avibar n mabubunyag

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

salamat salamat sir bad-ace!

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nightbringer
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

Una sa lahat welcome back sir cloud! Thank you so much at nag update ka na nitong GF S, araw araw ko binibisita tong FSS hoping na may update kna nito at sa wakas meron na din. Isa ako sa mga nasaktan din pra kay Jess pero ironically nagugustuhan ko din yung kwento. Sofia is my favorite character sa series na ito at ngayon sya na ang bida, aabangan ko kung paano mo pa I bibuild up si ate Sofia at syempre si beb Jess. I don't care how you do it but I hope you dont stop and hoping it's not too long of waiting time sir Hahaha.  It's all up to you. Light or dark side I'm all in on this story. All in support!
Lastly, I'm leaving a qoute from one of my favorite series franchise:
"The dark side of the force is a pathway to many abilities some considered unnatural"

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

Naku maraming sir nightbringer sa iyong pang-unawa at uplifting words! Maganda po ang quote mo fan din po ako ng movie series ng starwars

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nightbringer
August 14, 2020 (1 month ago)

Same din pla tayo star wars fanatic. Hahaha.  Pero ako fan mo, yung GF J masterpiece mo at itong upcoming GF S is my most awaited and anticipated story of all ko Pati na rin yung other stories mo.  Hahaha. Basta all in support ako at trust na matatapos mo itong GF S. I can't wait for ate Sofia and beb Jess! God bless sir!

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dragneel143
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

Ayun natuloy din sana magtuloy tuloy na salamat sa update boss!

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

Walang anuman po dragneel! Salamat din po sa pag intay!

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SisigAdobo
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

HETOOOOO NAAAAAA! san ka ba nagsusuot boss cloud antagal ko hinintay kasunod inisip ko baka nalintikan kana ng paniki buti naman safe ka sana naman tuloy tuloy na to mala henyo mong obra. keep up the good work boss  kaming mga abangers excited lagi hehe

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9791cloud
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

Thank you! Sisigadobo! Andyan lang sa tabi-tabi haha

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BoyTulog
August 13, 2020 (1 month ago)

Mapapatigil kaya si Jess? Maghihiwalay kaya sila?

Welcome back, Author!

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9791cloud
August 14, 2020 (1 month ago)

Thank you po sir Boytulog! Abangan po ang susunod na kabanata

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gainax_jin
August 14, 2020 (1 month ago)

Thanks sa update SirCloud.  Tagal din since nung huli. Dami reaction at madami talaga naapektuhan. Haha. Meaning madami talaga sumubaybay at nag-invest sa story. Keep it up sir. Godbless and stay safe.

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9791cloud
August 14, 2020 (1 month ago)

oo nga sir gainax-jin halos lagpas 1 year. Pero maraming salamat po sayo at sa inyong lahat sa patuloy na pagtangkilik at pag-iintay

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darkcipher
August 14, 2020 (1 month ago)

Wew... For a moment nung nabasa ko ung title eh gaya nung sa kabilang site dati. May nagpost ng title nung isang kaabang abang na story. Tapos pag binasa na, naghahanap lang pala ng update. Hahaha...

Anyway...

Mukhang no turning back na ung story. Kala ko dahil sa mga nagcomments na negative, eh iisipan mo ng paraan para matwist (dream, parallel universe, balintataw etc).

Well... Mainam na itunuloy mo na nga. Kudos. Kahit ano maging reaksyon ng mga nagbabasa, dapat yung gusto pa din ng author ang masunod.

That being said...


More Grace pleaaaasssee....

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Thanks boss!

"The character's attitude is more important than plot." - Stephen J. Cannell

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9791cloud
August 14, 2020 (1 month ago)

MAraming salamat sir DArkcipher! Opo marami pang eksena si Grace :-)

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delacruz1270
August 14, 2020 (1 month ago)

bossing thanks at itinuloy mo uli
do you remember me, active pba gmail acct mo?

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9791cloud
August 14, 2020 (1 month ago)

sir ikaw ba yun? Oo naman sir active pa rin yun.

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keynonethought
August 15, 2020 (1 month ago)

sad talaga masyadong napamahal talaga samin si jess eh ang cute kasi talaga ng chemistry nila ni ned pero ganun talaga eh si sofia na bida dito sana masundan agad boss cloud hehehe btw si jedanngapala to nakalimuntan ko password ko dati eh kaya gumawa ako bago

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9791cloud
August 15, 2020 (1 month ago)

JEdangpala ano nangyari sa account mo sir? Pero maraming salamat andyan ka pa rin :-)

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08954001
August 16, 2020 (1 month ago)

Sana masundan agad ito author

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Misterbozo
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August 17, 2020 (1 month ago)

I like the jess now hahaha

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jolly143
August 18, 2020 (1 month ago)

boss update mo din c tintin at tito Oscar.. taz c Celia at edward.. salamat!

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jolly143
August 18, 2020 (1 month ago)

boss update din kay tin tin at tito Oscar taz celia at edward

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iam.jef.free
August 20, 2020 (1 month ago)

update boss tsaka sinong kamukha ni jess and sofia, curious lang ahhaha

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