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Red's Sex Farm (Mae The Working Student) Ch.1

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Story: Fiction, Tagalog · Categories: Anal, BDSM, First Time, Group Sex, Mature, Mind Control, Toys and Masturbation · Tags: , ,
Date: June 3, 2020 (1 month ago)


Paalala:

Ang kwentong ito kay produkto ng aking imahinasyon lamang ang pangyarari, okasyon, pangalan ay nagkataoon lamang at hindi sinasadya pasesya na po bagohan lang din ako sa pag susulat at kung may napansin kaung mga mali pag pasensahan nyo na po akoy bagohan lang sa larangan ng pagsusulat sana maunawaan nyo po.

Author note:

Pag may nabasa kayo na may kudlit ang ibig sabihin na parang ganito ( " " ) ay ibig sabihin ay ang inisip or emosyon ng sino mang karakter o taohan sa kwento salamat po.

Ako nga pla si Red Elric 19 yrs. old anak mayaman sa murang edad namulat na ako sa mundo ng mga mafia at sa murang edad natuto akong mang lamang sa kapwa, pumatay sa sinumang magtaksil sakin simulan natin ang kwentong ito sa aking ginagawang sex farm sa ngayon ay may 7 babae na sila Mae 19, Jhen 26, Jinky 19, Trisha 21, Joyce 22, Eunice 24, Abby 20 simulan natin sa working student na si Mae.

Wala akong balak manahin ang organisayon ng aking ama pero dahil sa aksidententeng nayari noon ika 3 ng Disyembre taong 2017 ng paliguan ng bala ang bahay bakasyonan namin sa batanagas sa kasawiang palad nmatay ang naakabata kong kapatid aking ina at kritikal ang aking ama mga isang lingo nakalipas binawiaan din siya ng buhay.

Sir eto po ang sched nyo ngaun at binigay ang tablet sa akin sekritarya ko
Red: and you are?

Secretary: sir Mae po

Red: I see where is Erika?

Mae: sir nasa Cebu po sya kasama po si Lily for convention and I'm the reliever po

Red: ok prepare the conference room my meeting ako 9 tell to the department heads na need ko sila makausap asap including hr and head of security and prepare my coffee I want black ok

Mae: ok sir "badtrip ata si sir ah bakit kaya"

Red: mae right ano pa hinihintay mo pasko kilos na

Mae: sorry po sir "sungit pala buti natagal si ate Erika at ate Lily sa kanya"
Conference room

Red: I really disappointed to all of you bakit ganto report this quarter bakit paarang walang nagtratrabaho sa Inyo!!!

All: sorry sir it won't happen again

Red: IT department bakit hindi ko alam na infiltrate ng hackers yung system files natin?

IT Head: sir we already fixed it I already sent on your mail regarding of this matter I'm sorry sir we will tighten our system security sorry for this.

Red: ok, head of security I want you to go in our armory and check weapons, security details and also I need all security personnel got background check also HR do same on our employees and I need your report within 48hours.

Security head and HR: yes, sir.

Red: meeting adjourned, Mae what is my next schedule.

Mae: 1 pm sir you need to meet Mr. Smith regarding the cars you order last month.

Red: ok we will go there I need you accompany me and where formal we will go to auction after the meeting ok.

Mae: ok sir but sir I need to attend my class on 3pm

Red: no buts ditch your classes I don't need lame excuses "he roared".

Mae: ok sir "patay defense ko pa naman baka ma sisante ako nito lagot ako sa parents ko bakit kasi ang init ng ulo niya nayon pati ako napagdiskitahan".

Author note:

Parents tawag nila kay Mr. and Mrs. Yang jinky's parents dahil sila kumopkop kay Mae simula nung namatay mama at coma ung dad ni mae

Phone conversation of jinky and mae

Mae: hello bes pasabi kila sir d ko mkakapasok alam kong mag is aka sa pre def natin bawi ako sau bukas emergency kay work high blood ang boss at ako lagi nabubugahan need ko work na ito para kay papa at need ko malaking pera para sa hospital alam mo naman nagyari dba. Kakahiya naman kung uutang na naman ako sayo, Laki na nga utang ko sayo.

Jinky: bes hay naku, ok lang yun hindi ka na iba sa akin bes if makakahabol ka punta ka wala ka bang ka-relieve dyan?

Mae: wala eh nasa convention sa cebu bukas pa balik.

Jinky: ok bes bye.

Mae: bye.

"lingid sa kaalaman ni Mae nirecord ni red ang usupan nila na sa telepono ng naiwan si Mae sa opisina ni Red may balak kasing I blackmail ni red si Mae."

Mr. Smith: Mr. Elric good to see you and who is this fine lady can I take a bite.

Red: Hey Mr. Smith stop staring my assistant or I shoot you right here right now?

"sabay hugot at kasa ng kanyang .45cal pistol."

Mr. Smith: relax dude im just joking. "damn that girl looks yummy those this and that fine ass I want her."

Red: well I'm not.

Mr. Smith: your armored Humvees and SUV's will deliver at the pier 52 10pm.

Red: "he dialed his phone" hey Matt bring some reapers and add to your men and pick the package for me they know what to do.

Mr. Smith: and the payment??

Red: I sent my 2 men on your condo and I have surprise for you there some local delicacy. "with devilish grin"

Mr. Smith: ok thanks man can I get this fine woman. "I hope the whore he gave me is good but I like that woman."

Red: stop pissing me off or I gave you some lead on your head.

Mr. Smith: ok I surrender. "hands up and smiling."

Red: Mae lets go.

Mae: yes, sir "malamig parin ang pawis nya sa nagyari pero ng papasalamat syasa ginawa ng amo nya."

Mae: sir thank you for saving me to that pervert.

Red: stop talking non sense we need to go.

Mae: ok sir.

Authors note

Reapers = highly trained assassins of Elrics syndicate.

Auction night

Auctioneer: this the last item for tonight a 30 hectares a barn and a mansion for 100million

Red: "raised his number" 120m

Auctioneer: there want 125 125?

Someone: 130m

Someone 2: 135m

Someone 3: 135m + my Ferrari 488 spider

Auctioneer: can we have a higher bidder?

Red: 150m.

Audience: oohhhh!!!

Auctioneer: going twice going trice sold for the young man holding a number 155.

Mae: "grabe sila parang bariya lang sa kanila ang mga bentahan dito grabi din si sir 150m parang bariya lang sa kanya wow just wow sana all."

Red: Mae lets go.

Next Day

Mae successfully defend her thesis and going a mid-shift schedule for her job as a secretary, on office of Red she notice a gold coin on the floor near a doorstep and she picks up and put in to her bag she thinks is a 5-peso coin but security cam capture.

Mae: "nakatapak ng 5peso look like na coin" baka kay sir to malagay sa table niya.

"without her knowledge red is on security room looking at the screen and tell Bruno to edit the footage to frame her."

Red: Erika who else can access on my office except you?

Erika: sir Mae, Me and Lily why sir something wrong? a problem perhaps?

Red: yes, someone took the Valkyrie coin.

Erika: "her eyes widen" sir I can call them for proper questioning.

Red: also call security guy for tell him to bring laptop. "serious and firm"

Erika: yes, sir "all of things why the Valkyrie coin shit we 3 is screwed"

Author note

Valkyrie Coin = proof of being a Elric you can't duplicate that coin because of a hidden specification even that only Elric family members can do.

Meanwhile

Lily and Mae eating their lunch when Erika comes to them and tell them what happen.

Lily: hi Erika you can join us for lunch?

Erika: I can't big boss is fuming mad because of the coin of Valkyrie is missing

Without...

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t0t0ybat0
June 3, 2020 (1 month ago)

Helloworld, pwede po paki-edit.

Di ko sinasabing pangit o walang kwenta ang iyong akda. Ok ang premise. Very promising.

Ngunit.....

Paltos ang ibang mga spelling, mapa-Tagalog o Ingles. Maaaring dahil sa autocorrection.

Paltos din ang tenses, at punctuations.

Maganda sana ang premise ng kuwento pero nakaka-distract yung mga paltos na nabanggit ko sa taas. Baka pwede deretsong Tagalog na lang lahat.

Masakit sa matang basahin.

As a matter of principle, I don't pay for sex 😎

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helloworld06
June 4, 2020 (1 month ago)

salamat po sa pag puna hayaan nyo po i try ko ayusin as soon as posible

helloworld06

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littlekitty
June 4, 2020 (1 month ago)

At least nawarningan ang readers haha. To be honest, interesante siya at nakukyuryus ako sa kasunod. Okay yung concept. Pero yun nga, gaya ng napoint out earlier sa comment, kailangan ng editing lalo na sa mga bahaging naisulat sa Inggles.

Nawawala yung basic punctuation minsan. Gaya sa umpisa na diri-diretso ang mga sentences, walang (,) or (.) man lang. Yung quotation marks (") ay reserba para sa dialog, quotes, at special terms.

[ Ana: Hello. ] or ["Hello," bati ni Ana.]

Don't be shy to press Enter =)
[Ngumiti siya sa'kin.

Ana: Hello, Kitty.]

Yung tenses, mahirap matutunan in one sitting. Kailangan talagang pag-aralan yon. Pero okay lang. Pag nagbasa basa ka rin ng mga akdang may Inggles ay matututo ka din.

Hindi po ito pang-iinsulto kundi constructive criticism lang. Familiarize yourself with some fundamental grammar kasi hindi mo lang naman sa FSS mapapakinabangan yan. Looking forward po sa kasunod! Focus on your storytelling. Maiimprove mo din yung structure ;)

My inbox is for feedback and general inquiries only char

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helloworld06
June 4, 2020 (1 month ago)

salamat po i try my best pra maedit agad po

helloworld06

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luminous35
June 4, 2020 (1 month ago)

Konting proofread pa sir, pero storywise wala tayong problema

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helloworld06
June 4, 2020 (1 month ago)

salamat po i try my best to make it better next time

helloworld06

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helloworld06
June 4, 2020 (1 month ago)

salamat po ung mga comments nyo po ay makakatulong sakin pra sa mga susunod kong kwento

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Bryan001
June 4, 2020 (1 month ago)

Parang may katulad syang kwento. Carnal?

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