Sabayan Mo Ang Pagluha Ng Langit 2

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Date: October 17, 2019 (28 days ago)


I have a secret hobby aside from being a TH (trying hard) guitarist… Mahilig din akong magsulat ng istorya ng kalibugan. Of course, obviously I don't use my real name. Ewan ko. Nahalina na lang ako one time nang makapagbasa ako ng mga erotic stories sa isang site. I was challenged to write stories na although fiction, ang iba'y eksena na rin sa mismo kong karanasan. Mabilis ako magsulat. Especially pag nasa mood lang…or inspired.

Needless to say, since matagal na rin akong walang naisa submit na story, at di mawala sa isip ko ang pantasya kong kalibugan, I thought maybe I'll just write a fictionalized account about Lilian and me. Since malabong matuloy sa katotohanan, at least natuloy sa kuwento man lang. Napailing na lang ako sa justification ko.

So it was one of those slow nights sa bilyaran. Wala din si Marco. Wala akong makakuwentuhan. So iniwan ko muna kay Suwabe, ang medyo salaula kong alalay, ang pagbabantay sa bilyaran. Trustworthy naman kahit medyo mahina ang kukote.

I got into my car bitbit ang laptop ko. I needed a place to relax . Naisip ko rin na mabuti pang isulat ko na lang ang pantasya ko ang maybe get it out of my system. Binagtas ko ang kahabaan ng Quezon Avenue. Binagalan ko pa lalo nang mapatapat ako sa BK sa welcome Rotonda. It's 1am on a Sunday. Walang masyadong tao. Ah well…What better place to start this fictional story kundi sa mismong pinag-ugatan nito?

Matapos kong ngitian at tanguan ang guard na nagbukas ng pinto, Mabilis akong nakaorder ng burger, fries and coffee. I found a nice place sa gilid. Wala namang tao sa bakanteng mesa sa likod ko so kampante akong naupo. Fully charged naman ang laptop ko. I ate quickly dahil na rin sa medyo gutom then slowed down on the coffee part. Lumabas ako sandali while not taking my eyes off sa laptop ko to do my vaping shit for awhile. Maaliwalas ang langit. Walang masyadong traffic although marami pa ring mga taong naghihintay ng masasakyan sa labas at ilang mga taong naglalakad sa bangketa.

Umorder pa uli ako ng another set of fries and a large coffee. Black na talaga this time. Although I prefer my coffee with 2 teaspoons of sugar and a certain amount of milk to make it moderately brown, I decided to be more unconventional. I need my senses to be fully awake. Im planning to write a beautiful story (at least para sa sarili kong panlasa). And so I started…

Mabilis akong magsulat this time. Inspired. Although mabagal ang pacing ng mga stories na naisulat ko na. Ayokong nagmamadali. Somehow I want my characters to be as real as possible and the trigger factors resulting into sex can at least be emotionally or psychologically possible. One thing more, I can get caught up and be too engrossed sa sinusulat ko that I become oblivious to what's happening around me. Lalo pa nga't nasa kainitan na ng sex scenes between her and me (in this fiction, of course!). Big mistake!

Napansin ko ang guard na tinging-tingin sa kin at napapangiti. I was puzzled by the way he looked at me. Then I realized pati mga crew sa counter nakatingin sa direksyon ko. Natatawa. May bumangong nerbyos sa dibdib ko. Bigla akong lumingon sa likuran ko. Si Lilian. Nakatapat ang hintuturo sa labi. The universal sign of Shhh, wag kayong maingay.

Mabilis kong tiniklop ang laptop.

"Hi," bati ko,"kanina ka pa dyan?"

"Hindi naman. Mga 15 minutes siguro give or take a few," sagot niya.

"Bakit ka naman napapunta dito?" I was trying to be as casual as possible although lumilindol yata sa loob ng dibdib ko.

"Bakit? Ikaw lang ba marunong kumain ng burger at fries? At uminom ng kape?"

Pagkasabi nun ay hinagip ni Lilian ang kape ko at humigop dun.

"Yuck! Ang pait na anlamig pa!" reklamo niya

Napahalakhak akong mabuti. It was so funny the way she said and she looked so cute with that facial expression of hers. Its so natural. Walang arte. Fuck, lalo lang nahuhulog loob ko sa batang to.

"What kind of a man you are?" may pag aakusa ang kanyang boses.

"What do you mean?" I asked.

Medyo natakot ako. Siguro nabasa nya ng husto ang sinusulat ko. Patay! Manyakis to da max ang magiging peg ko nito sa kanya.

"Ni hindi mo man lang ako ioorder ng makakain. Susko pagod ang tao galing sa work. Exposed sa radiation tapos wala ka man lang malasakit na mararamdaman sa ka chat mo? Tell me? Kuripot ka ba?"

I found myself shaking my head and smiling at the same time. Ansarap niyang pakinggan maglitanya lalo pa nga't nagtataray. Lalo lang siyang gumaganda sa paningin ko.

"O ano?" pinandilatan pa ko ng singkit na mata.

"Oorder na. Burgers and fries? Coffee with cream or hot choco?" tanong ko.

"Hot choco, dear," may halong landi ng mata ang pagkakasabi nito.

Napapatawa ang crew sa counter habang umoorder ako. Hindi siguro maitago ng mukha ko yung saya na nararamdaman ko while ordering. She was smiling at me. Malisyosa. A knowing smile, ika nga. Napailing na lang ako.

Inilapag ko ang mga inorder ko sa harapan niya while she's till on her phone. I didn't ask her about it. Good manners require me not to be too inquisitive lalo pa nga't its her own business anyway. Then she put down the phone and looked at me.

"My mom. I said sa hospital na ko matutulog," she explained nonetheless.

Tumango lang ako. It was about 3am, and of course, kung magkakahabaan ang chikahan namin, aabutin kami ng sikat ng araw dito. Ah, the stars are probably aligning with my fate. Masaya ako.At least I get to see her. Be near her. Talk to her. Mababaw na kaligayahan but all worth it. Thank God for people who likes burger and fries. All hail to the ones who started the 24 hour fastfood chain!

"What's on your mind?" she asked in between munches|. She caught me looking at her.

"You know you're beautiful…"

Damn!Too late. Di ko napigil sabihin what's on my mind. Uh-oh.Big boo-boo. Too fresh! Call 911! Stupid Idiot on the loose! Sunoggggg!

And she became the all in one rescue team with her answer.

"I know," kibit balikat niya sabay tingin sa kin. "Kaya nga andyan ka and you keep staring at me tapos inilibre mo pa ko. What more proof do I need? Hehehe."

"Sige. Kain ka na muna. Mukhang gutom nga lang yan."

Napatingin sa min ang ilang mga tao, staff and customers alike, dahil na rin sa magkasabay naming paghalakhak. But we didn't care. At that moment, at least for me, all is right in the world.

Masarap ang haplos ng hangin while im vaping. Nakasandal ako sa car door waiting for her. She needed the toilet. It's about 4am. Medyo dumadami na ang tao sa paligid. People ready to start their day already while I was about to end mine. Although, deep within, I really don't want it to end. Napalalim ang hithit ko sa vape. Really liked it. Got me off the cigarette. I like vaping although I'm really annoyed sa mga nagvi-vape with those cloud of smoke. Mine was like a cigarette na naka set lang sa low wattage and a small tip on the top unlike those they use na pag hinithit mo e para kang adik na lumulubog ang pisngi.

I was lost in the pros and cons of vapes, different types and reasons when she walked out of the door. Fuck Vapes! Just like that, she occupied my being. Like magic. Sigh.

"Tara let's," she said.

"Sure,Kid," pagsang-ayon ko.

"Tseh! Told you I'm not a kid."

"Sorry, I forgot. Never again. Promise."

Then she smiled and we both went inside the car. As per usual, after the backing up maneuver and the 20 peso ritual with the guard, we're finally cruising along Quezon Avenue. I turned on the radio. A soft sweet love song filled the car.

"Words and music make a song
For our hearts to sing along
Like a choir within the air
There'll be music everywhere…"

"You don't like it?" Tanong ko.

"It's good. Nice lyrics. Soothing melody," sagot niya.

Yet somehow I know her mind is on another thing. Like may iniisiip siyang malalim ba. Probably a problem at work? Family?

"Problem?" I ventured.

"Not really. Don't mind me. Pagod lang siguro," kaswal niyang sagot.

So I focused on my driving ang hummed along with the song.

"A bitter tear across your cheek.
A smile from you is all I need.
We'll give them cause to breathe the air.
There'll be lover's everywhere,"

"You know, I like reading stories," panimula niya.

Napaubo ako bigla. She read it! OMG! Now im in deep shit. Di ko alam kung paano ako magsasalita but lamely I tried.

"Look, it's just a story,Ok? No harm intended."

"E, bakit namumutla ka yata?" pang aasar nito

"It's pretty embarrassing ok? Im really sorry. I didn't know what came into my mind."

Hindi ko na alam kung may sense ang pinagsasabi ko. I didn't mean it? No! I was fantasizing it. How could I not mean it?

"Ah, you don't mean it? I find it rather insulting, to be honest," medyo sumimangot pa si Lilian.

"What im trying to say was it's not supposed to be read by you," I said with my the most apologetic voice I can muster.

"Too late. I read it," pagtatapos niya.

I stopped talking. Whats the point? Bistado na ang kamanyakan ko…ang pagpapantasya ko. |This will probably be the end of it. All I can do is pretend to be concentrating with my driving…and a barely audible sigh habang patuloy ang kanta sa car radio.

"I'll be your singer and your song
For all the love you brought along
I'll be your day, I'll be your night
I'll see that everything's all right"

"Pero you know, in fairness, I think you write good," pagbasag niya uli sa katahimikan.

"What? Oh...Thanks," mahinahon na ang boses ko.

"Much as I like reading a fictional story,"

She was looking at me, like reading something in my face.

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cpp6473
October 17, 2019 (27 days ago)

Just finished the first part may kasunod na agad....Salamat SNS....  I am enjoying your work... Keep it up... 🙂🙂🙂

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sweetNslow
October 18, 2019 (27 days ago)

Salamat uli tol Cpp...medyo hintay muna sa next chapter...pero sinusulat na

Sometimes you just need to take it over and over again...Until you're all numb...and then in your eyes it'll lose its meaning...

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mackoisky
October 17, 2019 (27 days ago)

Eto ung mga story na kaabang abang... Salamat sa mga ganitong story.. Looking forward sa susunod na part

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sweetNslow
October 18, 2019 (27 days ago)

Salamat mac...its a good boost knowing people appreciate this kind of work...keep on reading!

Sometimes you just need to take it over and over again...Until you're all numb...and then in your eyes it'll lose its meaning...

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janno16
October 17, 2019 (27 days ago)

Gusto ko ma compile stories mo sir into a book. Bibilin ko haha

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sweetNslow
October 18, 2019 (27 days ago)

Thats a big compliment and heartwarming to know you've been reading all my works. thanks...

Sometimes you just need to take it over and over again...Until you're all numb...and then in your eyes it'll lose its meaning...

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Procorpio999
October 17, 2019 (27 days ago)

Me matino ding nabasa.. It's been a while

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sweetNslow
October 18, 2019 (27 days ago)

Medyo i stopped writing muna to catch a break . Hopefully this will satisfy readers who follow my work. Salamat pre.

Sometimes you just need to take it over and over again...Until you're all numb...and then in your eyes it'll lose its meaning...

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Shymalandi
October 17, 2019 (27 days ago)

Bakit nga ba ang lakas ng appeal ng mga magaling magsulat, magsalita, maggitara, magdrums, kumanta at magluto?

Patong-patong pa ang pogi points if responsible, may sense of humor, matured mag-isip at kumilos pero may playfulness pa din like a child.

Higit sa lahat ay yung bistado na nga na maginoo pero medyo bastos pero trying so hard to still be a true gentleman...not giving in...to be a scary manyak knowing may chance na kasi si girl na nagbigay motibo.

Another character na mamahalin ng ladies kuya. A dreamy in the making 👏👏👏

To love is a decision.

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sweetNslow
October 18, 2019 (27 days ago)

Most probably dahil mas sensible and realistic sila mag isip so they don't really expect much? Pragmatism? As for the guitar, well, we all have our romantic sides...thanks for reading and a nice commentary

Sometimes you just need to take it over and over again...Until you're all numb...and then in your eyes it'll lose its meaning...

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Istupher
October 17, 2019 (27 days ago)

Darn... you're good! Got me hooked at the first paragraph... maybe because I can relate to the story... :p keep writing please.

Nemo Dat Quod Non Habent

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sweetNslow
October 18, 2019 (27 days ago)

That was a very, very nice comment and appreciation from a reader. Salamat ng marami

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ramza34
October 17, 2019 (27 days ago)

Sweetnslow walang kupas! Matagal na ako nag-iintay ng story na masusubaybayan, at eto na yun!

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sweetNslow
October 18, 2019 (27 days ago)

I do hope you'll like it hanggang sa dulo. Salamat Ramza34

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ella.
October 17, 2019 (27 days ago)

Burger and fries ^_______^
Catchy. At ang smooth lang ng flow ng story.
Looking forward sa next update kuya.

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sweetNslow
October 18, 2019 (27 days ago)

I just tried to do really have simple and natural conversations between them.  And probably the way i would talk if i'm with a woman in the same situation. Salamat sa pagbabasa Ella

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Boy_Sisid_69
October 17, 2019 (27 days ago)

More sir, next next next

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sweetNslow
October 18, 2019 (27 days ago)

I cant promise but hopefully i can finish a chapter this weekend. Salamat sa pagsubaybay tol

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akocjenn
October 18, 2019 (27 days ago)

nice story ang ganda ng pag kagawa mo nakakakilig basahin

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sweetNslow
October 18, 2019 (27 days ago)

Salamat, Jenn...yeah, medyo romantic nga. Please do continue reading the series and I hope you will like it as a whole.

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Hot2handle2
October 18, 2019 (27 days ago)

Ang ganda po sir. Nakakadala...waiting n po ako sa nxt chapter..

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sweetNslow
October 18, 2019 (27 days ago)

again, salamat. About the next chapter, I'm already on it.  Di ko lang alam kung matatapos ko this weekend. Aa i've said, hindi ako ang tipong magmamadaling magsulat for the fear of losing the consistency of the story...again, thanks

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Jacum
October 18, 2019 (27 days ago)

Nice build.up bossing. Nakakabata ng puso. Nadala ako e. Haha. Sana mas mahaba pa next time kahit wala pang bakbakan. Hehe

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sweetNslow
October 18, 2019 (27 days ago)

Salamat for appreciating the style of this work. Hopefully it wont be too far dragging para sa mga readers. Salamat uli sa pagbabasa.

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