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What If...part 6

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Story: Fiction, Taglish · Categories: Romance · Tags:
Date: October 1, 2019 (9 months ago)


"Noooooooo!"

"I have to leave. How'd he find me?"

Sunod na sunod na sigaw ko sa pagpapanic sa loob ng room.

Then sinigawan ako ng boses sa isip ko...

"Tanga ka ba or tanga-tangahan? Maglalaho ka immediately after isang success dahil sa isang basket of candies...tapos pumunta ka sa lugar kung san kayo dapat pupunta dati. Hindi ba parang you are wishing him back and be with you again?"

Napatigil ako sa paglalakad at nagsalita ng malakas kausap ang sarili.

"Oo nga naman!!"

"Arghhhh!!!"

"Now, all you have to do is just take a quick shower then pack your bags and go....hindi ka nya dapat abutan pa dito....sure yan na hindi nya alam exact room number mo kasi sa reception nya lang iniwan ang sweets para madala sa room mo. Diba?!"

"Or not?"

"Whaaaaaa!!!"

Nagpapanic na at pinaghahagis mga gamit sa maleta...naghubad ng pinangtulog at pumasok na sa bathroom upang maligo.

In 30 mins ay nasa labas na ako ng hotel. Buti na lang at hindi pa expired ang membership namin dito as frequent visitors. Kahit pa tagal na since last ako pumunta. At salamat sa over the phone check out kaya no need dumaan pa sa reception. Baka nasa lobby si Voltaire.

While waiting for the valet, may kumalabit sa balikat ko at inaalok ako ng Choc-nut. Sa taranta at I'm at my wits end ay mamalditahan ko na sana...

"Voltaire?!..."

"Alam kong galit ka pa...Choc-nut as peace offering?" Sabay ngisi na nagaalinlangan at nakikiramdam.

Maglalakad na sana ako papalayo para umiwas nang kunin ni Voltaire ang aking kamay at lumuhod sa isa nitong tuhod. Dun ko lang nakita na puno ng bulaklak ang entrance ng hotel at may banner na may nakalagay na "Will you marry me?". Nagtakip ako ng mukha sa sobrang hiya. Ang daming tao! At may nagvivideo at picture pa. Pati ibang guests ay nagvivideo gamit ang kanilang phones! Pagtingin ko ulit kay Voltaire...maamo syang nakatingin hawak ang nakabukas na box na nagpapakita ng isang singsing na may malaking amethyst. Hindi yun ang birthstone ni ko pero yun ang b...

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True love stories never have endings. Richard Bach
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To love is a decision.
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HoneySuckle
October 2, 2019 (9 months ago)

Where are the comments?  Where are the likes?...and the hearts?

It will be an injustice, if stories like this, will be left unrated or underrated. No, atleast, not in my part.

The title itself piqued my attention for those two words combined, are just too personal. It reminds me of “somebody”, a special someone from this site.

This chapter may not be as steamy as the third part, but obviously it is wonderfully  written. The story manifests the devotion, and the author’s hidden love. It is even free from errors, which often gives sore to the eyes.

Medyo natagalan man nasundan, but it worth the wait, the story in full, is overflowing with wisdom.

Romantic, not the usual erotic type of story which the readers may like. But for me this is more than enough. Kaya naman, even if it’s me alone, in this shoutbox:

“I-POST NA ANG KASUNOD!”

Two-thumbs up! 👍🏻👍🏻

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Shymalandi
October 15, 2019 (8 months ago)

Thank you for a review that I wasn't expecting. It was a pleasant surprise, thanks again.

Currently writing the next part, kung kailan matatapos ay di ko alam hahaha

To love is a decision.

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Bebeko
October 2, 2019 (9 months ago)

Yung mga side comments ang mas affected. Hindi naman automatic ang YES sa proposal.  Pero kapag ako ang lumuhod hmmm.., iba ang gagawin ko HAHAHAHA

"Freedom is absolutely necessary for the progress in science and the liberal arts." - Baruch Spinoza

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Shymalandi
October 15, 2019 (8 months ago)

Iba ka talaga magcomment bossing hahahaha

To love is a decision.

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