Ang Aking Perfect Girlfriend S (chapter 8)
by: cloud9791

Names and persons in this story are entirely fictional. They bear no resemblance to anyone living or dead.

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Kay Grace...

Di ko alam anong meron, pero may napapansin ako kina Itay at Inay. Sabay-sabay kami kumain, pero parang may kulang. Parang di na masyado nag-iimikan si Tatay at Nanay ko. Kahit naman nun nawala si Kuya Ned, maingay pa rin naman silang dalawa nagbibiruan kasama kaming dalawa ni Kuya Nino. Pero ngayon... Parang may nangyari sa kanilang dalawa.

Sinubukan kong lagyan ng buhay ang hapag-kainan.

"Kuya... Balita ko may girlfriend ka na daw ah! UUY!!" Ambiro ko sa Kuya
Nino ko.

"Tumigil ka nga! Wala ah..." Ang simangot ni Kuya sakin.

Tapos yun... Sina Tatay at Nanay... Parang... Wala lang. Tuloy lang silang dalawa sa pagkain. Pati tuloy si Kuya Nino parang nahawa na. Ayun kanya-kanyang kain na naman kami. Pagkatapos namin kumain. Liligpit na ni Nanay ang mga pinagkainanan namin. Si Tatay naman maghahanda na uli pumasok sa trabaho nya. Naiiwan nalang ako dito mag-isa sa lamesa. Di ko na talaga alam ano nangyayari. Ganun na ba kalaki ang pagkawala ni Kuya Ned ko dito sa bahay?

Na-miss ko tuloy lalo si Kuya Ned. Pero miya-maya nalang ako napangiti! Naalala ko kasi ang lakad namin mamaya ni Tito Viktor... Ang Daddy ni Ate Jessica. Manunuod kami nung latest na palabas sa sine!! Ewan ko ba!! Nitong mga nakaraang linggo... Nilo-look forward ko na ang mga pagkikita namin ni Tito!

Napaka-maalaga nya kasi! Parang si Tatay Rogelio ko rin, pero mas maalaga pa! Di ko nga alam bakit... Pero parang napapalapit na ang loob ko kay Tito Viktor!

Lagi nya akong niaaya kumain sa labas! Di ko rin naman matanggihan kasi bukod sa nahihiya ako huminde... Duon kami kumakain sa mga masasarap at mamahalin na kainan! Sayang din naman... Kaya GO!!

"Saay Ahhh..." Ang subo nya sakin ng isang kutsara ng kanin at ulam.

Namula ang mukha ko... Pero nahiya rin naman akong tumanggi. Kaya yun nasubuan nya ako ng pagkain.

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Kay Ned...

NAnginginig ang mga kamay ko. Anhigpit ng hawak ko sa pamalong hawak ko!! Tangina!! Nakatitig ako sa likod ng ulo lalaking papaluin ko!! Dahan-dahan akong lumapit... Nakahanda na sa isip ko ang mga gagawin ko!! NAkabuwelo na ang kanang kamay ko para hampasin ng ubod lakas ang Hayup na to!!

Papaluin ko nalang... Nang makita ko nakatingin na pala sakin si Jess. Si JESS!! Ang aking si JEss!! Ang mabait at mala-diyosa kong asawa!! Heto pinagpapasaan ngayon ng ibang lalaki ang kayganda kong misis na to!

Napapaiyak tuloy ako. Bakit!? Bakit Beb!!? Bakit naggawa mo sakin to!!? Ang malakas na hiyaw na bulong sa isip ko papunta asawa ko!

Ang mga mata ni Jess parang nangungusap na hindi malaman. Napapa-ungol pa sya habang lumulusong yung mahabang batuta ng lalaki sa lagusan nya!! Yung kahabaan tumutuhog sa basal na puke nya! Basang-basa ang naglalawang hiyas ng misis ko!! Parang di ko na tuloy alam ang gagawin ko! Bakit parang nasasarapan pa si Jess!?

Di ko na tuloy napansin nakatayo na pala yung lalaki. Papasuntok na yung kaliwang kamao ni Gago sa mukha ko!! Dapat sapol nako!! PEro di ko alam, mas matalas na talaga ako kesa dati! Naka-yuko na ko agad!! Nailagan ko ang suntok nya! Kahit sya rin nagulat!

Sumuntok pala uli si Gago!! Yung kaliwa naman!!

Wala!! Lagpas!! Nailagan ko pa rin!! Nakakuha ako ng buwelo... Inihampas ko sa kaliwang hita nya yung kahoy ko na pamalo!!

"AAAAAHHHH!!!" Ang sigaw ni Gago.

AMPFUTAH KA!! Sigaw ng isip ko!

Napa-atras si Ungas sa sakit! Hubo't-hubad pa rin ang ulopong! Ang katawan nya mukhang matigas. Yung katawang madalas sa gym! Pero sa kahoy na hawak ko... Di sya umubra! Nanlambot si Tanga!

Lalo pa humigpit ang hawak ko sa pamalo! Papalambutin pa kita lalo hayup ka!! Yung etits nya pakaway-kaway pa sa ere. Ang etits na ginamit nya kay Jess ko! Yun ang sunod ko hahampasin!

Nang biglang magsalita si Kumag...

"You just brave because of your weapon..." Ang sabi pa sakin ni Gago,

nang umasta na akong papaluin ko uli sya.

Ampfs ka!! Anlaki mo at muscle-muscle yang katawan mo! Mas matangkad ka pa sakin gago!! Tapos ako pa sasabihan mo ng ganyan!??

Pero umiral ang pride ko!! Pagbibigyan kita! Binitawan ko ang pamalo ko!! Malaki na ang tiwala ko sa kakayahan ko!

Sige... Halika rito!! LAPIT!! Pag-porma ko palang ng style na muay-thai.

Agad akong dinaluhong ni Gago!! TRadyor AMPFS!!!

Pero isang side-step ko lang... Isang-malupit na judo throw ang natikman nya sakin!!

BAGRREESSHHH!!! Ang malakas na tunog ng ilang gamit namin ni Jess ng dalawang kamay ko naihagis si Tarantado sa may tolkador!!

Di ko pa sya tinigilan... Sipa ko pa sya sa may hita!!

"EYAAAHHH!!!" Ang sigaw ni gago na parang binabae na si Tanga!

NArinig ko napatili rin si JEss. Di ko alam kung concerned pa sya sa lalaking to o sakin? PEro ang tili ng asawa ko... Natabunan ng malakas na tili ng lalaking to!! TAnginang mong Ka!! Bading!!!

Tayu!! Tumayo ka dyan!! Ang sigaw ng isip ko sa kanya! Sumesenyas pa ako na parang naghahamon!! Sa gilid ng mga mata nakikita ko si Jess... Parang pinapakita ko pa sa kanya...

Eto ba!?? Eto lang ba ang ipapalit mo sakin!!??

Pero nakita ko si Ungas tumayo nanaman! Di ka pa nadala ha!? Pero ok lang saking yun!! Gulpi ka sakin!! Di kita titigilan hanggan di ka nagmamakaawa hayup ka!!

Dumaluhong uli si Gago!! Puntirya nya siguro ang mga hita ko! Siguro alam nya wala syang laban sakin sa suntukan at sipa... Kaya nya yun ginawa.

Pero... Hindi pa rin uubra sakin yan!!

Nung malapit na sya... Tinuhod ko ang baba nya!! Sakto! Dun sa pagdaluhong nya ang malakas na TOG!! Sapol sa baba ang Tanga ng tuhod ko!! Parang nakita ko pa kung paanong tumalsik ang laway nya sa ere!!

Sabay dalawang mabilis na 1-2 punch sa mukha ng Gago!! TATAG!!! Duguan agad ang gwapo nyang mukha!! Kita na ang hilu-talilong na sya sa Sakit!

"UGGHHH!!" Ungol nya.

Lalo akong ginanahan!! Lalo akong nakaramdam ng lupit!! Ang mga kamao ko nangangatal sa sobrang gusto pang maka-suntok...

Susuntok palang ako nang... TOG!! Nanlambot ang tuhod ko... Ang huling naalala ko nalang... Papalapit si Jess dun sa lalaki... Tapos may isa pang lalaking... Parang maitim ng unti...

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Viktor Avibar...

I cant wait!The anticipation is soo high!! I am about to deflower a very young... Fresh... Succulent... Highschool coed... I Like sexing them at a very young age!! Just the way I love it!! I remembered the first time I fucked my very beautiful daughter Bianca...

And now... Grace... She kinda reminds me of my daughter too...

After weeks of courting... DAting... She didnt know what hit her... I know She's gonna succumb to my seductions!!

"Tito... Wag..." She pleaded.

As I slowly parted her legs... Showing her glistening young labia... Covered only by her thin pussyhair...

I parted her pussy lips with my two deft fingers... And slowly licked my thick tongue upwards her hot, sweet pussy!

"UUnnggghhh!! Titoohh!" She sighed to the air filled with desire...

Bawat hagod ng dila ko sa masabaw na puki nya... Napapasayaw din ang balakang at puwit nang dalagang estudyante to sa pagsalisol ng mahabang dila ko!!

Ansaraap!! Iba talaga ang lasa ng mga ganitong edad!! At habang pinaparusahan ko ng aking dila ang hiwa ng kepyas nya... Nilamas-lamas ko ang mga sariwa nyang mga dalagitang mga dedeng tayung-tayo pa!!

"UUUNGGHHH!!! UUNGGHHH!! HUMMPP!!" Ang mga impit na ungol ng bata na ito

na pamangkin ko na rin maituturing!

O How i grinned with delight... As young beautiful Grace writhed in pleasure with my constant barrage of sexual-inducing machinations... It took only a short while, as her young cunt overflowed her hot juices to my wriggling tongue!!

"UUNGGH... OOOOWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!" As young Grace finally came!

"MALIBOG DIN!!" As they say, I silently said in my mind.

Yung puki nya dumidiin pa sa mga labi at dila ko! Napa-ngisi ako sa sarili ko. Hindi ko pa rin sya tinigilan! Like my other young victims from before...

I got to get this young Girl addicted to me! I will fill her young mind only with sweet addicting sex! So after I got her hooked to me... I will slowly use her young body with every lust and debauchery I can think of!

Then I slowly positioned myself between this young, beautiful girl's legs. I aimed the head of my big, throbbing hot cock in front of her wet, tight slit!!

"Ti-titoo... Wa-wag po..." She said as I looked at her pretty face.

Ang ganda ng mukha ni Grace habang parang nagmamakaawa, pero alam mong libog na rin. I can see it in her face!! Kayganda nyang pagmasdan!! Habang papalusong pa ang malaking ulo ng titi ko... NApag-masdan ko pa rin ang itsura ng dalagang pamangkin kong to... Ang pang-itaas nya... Suot pa rin nya ang pang-itaas na uniform nila sa school.

Humagod ang paningin ko pababa... Dun naka-ngiti ang puke niya sa pagkaka-buka ng husto ng mga mapuputi nyang hita!! MY GHOD!! Yung balahibong-pusang puki talaga ang pinaka-gustong-gusto ko!! Dun sa pinkish nyang mga pussy lips... Pinaghihiwalay na mga malaking tarugo ko...

"UHUMMMPPP..." Kagat-labi ni Grace nang lumusot ang pinakang-ulo ng titi ko sa

kadulasan ng kepyas nya!!

I smiled wickedly again!! Eto ang mga itsurang gigil na gigil ako!! Yung mga batang dalagang kakantutin ko na... No better age to fuck a young girl but this age!!

I slowly fucked her nice... sweet... juicy hole with slow strokes!! Just half of my big, long cock for now...

AT first i could see the pain in her face... Yung pabaling-baling ang ulo nya habang kinakantot ko ang birhen nyang hiyas...

Pero just as they say... Sa una lang talaga yan!! Maya-maya nakita ko kung paanong napapaliguan ng maputi-puting katas ng dalaga ang palibot ng kahabaan ng kalahati ng titi ko!!

"OOOHHH!! AHHH!! AHHH!!" Ang panay na mga ungol ni Grace.

Kitang-kita ko sa pagkakabukaka nya... Sumasalubong na ang batang pekpek nya sa bawat lusong ng malaki at mahabang pantuhog ko!!

This girl is a natural-borne-fucker!!!

"UUNGGHHH!!!" As the black's in her eyes rolled! As I slammed my 7-inches long

dick all the way in now inside her small tight-slit!!

She came as I grinded her sweet hot-hole with my long Dick!! I can feel how she orgasmed and shuddered with pleasure!! Her sweet-fucking-cunt milking my thick-long cock as I shot my load deep inside her virgin-pussy!!

"UUUHHH!!!" As I heard myself while I came!

I could feel my cum as it shot itself and flowed deep inside her pussy!! All the way into her young uterus...

"Ti-tito... Ba-bakit sa loob po... Ba-baka po... " She asked.

But before she could finish what she's gonna say... I kissed her pinkish, warm young lips... My Long cock still deep inside her hot pussy hole...

There's more of that where that came from young Girl. I couldnt stop my excitement as I was thinking of ways ahead, of how to fuck and suck this young Girl's body... In any way imaginable in the days to come!!

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Jess... Jessica Olivia Avibar...

I didnt know what happened... I woke up face down on bed!! With nothin on!??

I'm NUDE!! What the hell happened!?

The last thing I remember was drinking with my groupmates at Leila's house. Leila, with Blake, Rose and Lamar were my groupmates for a school project! Now I'm in a Large Room, on a bed with little light, coming from a small lampshade and a few light bulbs overhead!

"Hi babe..." A voice beside me greeted.

I tried to turn around, but I could barely move! But on the side's... I knew who it was... It was Blake!! Blake Sanders!! My Good looking-hotly built college of a hunk!!

I shuddered as he touched my bare breast with his warm hands! I could feel his Long cock slid into the softness in between my ass.

"Umm... UMPFS!!" I whimpered.

I almost cried!! No one other than NEddie was able to touch my breasts and lay nude with me!! I tried to struggle but he held me with two stronger hands!!

"The drug's wearin off... Hmmm... iba ka talaga Jess... It's still to early but..." He

said.

Then he let me go and stood up. He's butt naked!! He has this stud body, too fit like a model guy.

Its my chance!! I told myself.

I tried too stand but suddenly I felt weak and dizzy. WHY!? I tried to remember what happened earlier. We were drinking!! OH MY GHOD!! Neddie would be angry at me!! But why am I unable to stand!? All i could remember drinking was just 3 shots of tequila and a beer... And that's it! But...

Then I saw Blake coming back. He's really naked for fucks sake! He had this model body that a lot of girls would really love. But my eyes only belong to Neddie. My husband has a more natural, tight mixed fighters body!

I started to struggle as Blake approached. He was holding this vaccine looking thing... It sucked something from this container... Filled with liquid of something I dont know...

"Whammpp are you doin!!?" I shouted but strangely it came out as a whimper.

"Relax... You will love it baby... After i'm done with you... Promise youre gonna

want some more!" He smiled wickedly.

He held out my left arm and started to bore-inject me with this... I could feel the warmth flow through my body! Then I started to shudder!! My eyes rolled out... My vision got blurred. I felt myself going numb and hot.

Now i couldnt move. But my body was on fire!!!

"See... Youre gonna love it Jess... It's like ecstacy but much more potent!"

He started carressing my body from behind. All the while kissing my neck. I started to protest but I couldnt move!! What's surprising is... My body responded!! I felt myself getting wet!!

"Yeah baby! That's it..." As he shoved his finger and started caressing my clit!

My pussy lips getting sloppy wet as he circled his long fingers in the canal. I could feel my hips and ass circling with his fingers!!

"Youre wet already Jess? I'm gonna make you mine bitch!"

"NOO! HUMPFS!" I screamed but like before It's like I whispered to a scream!

I couldnt do anything as he turned me around. He started licking my ears... down too my neck...

OHH SHITT!! I screamed inside my mind.

I was loving it!! I'm angry but my body is soo fuckin loving it!! I cried desperately as Blake started sucking my nipples! OHH MY GHOD!! My nips are getting erect!! My fucking cunt meeting and sucking each long strokes by Blake's finger!!

"OOWWOOOHHH!!!" I screamed with excitement as Blake started sopping up my

cunt!

I stared at the ceiling... All I could see was the face of my lovin-husband... But I couldnt do anything. I felt tears flowing from the sides of my eyes. How could this happen!??

But all the while... My body was aching to meet Blake's long tongue as it slid in and out of my sobbing wet pussy!!

"UUNHHHH FUCKK!!!" I shuddered with delight as he tongued me non-stop!

SLUP!SLUP!!!SLUP!! The sound of his long tongue in and out of my slobbing pussy!!

"Please... please Blake... I'm MArried... Please" I heard myself plead one more time.

Probably the first time in my life I beg someone. It's because I was reaching climax!! He's tongue reaching the deepest orifice of my insides!! I hate to admit it but Im gonna cum!!

"OOOHH FUCK!!!!' As I shuddered and screamed again.

I felt myself cum with an intensity soo strong. I couldnt stop myself from sighing and cumming as Blake sucked and licked my well erect clit!! I even found myself... My two hands pushing the back of his head to suck and lick my pussy lips more!! Until I saw Blake positioned himself between my legs.

"Here i come Babe... I'm gonna fuck you like you never been fucked before Jess..."

I could see his long pinkish-foreigner dick in the soft light... His pointed dick head positioned at my slightly opened smiling love hole!! His penis... Noticeably longer than my husband Neddie's!!

"AHHHHH..." As my mouth hung open when the big,hard head of his dick started to

slide in my wet slippery tight hole!!

I cried!! I only surrendered my love-hole to only one man and to be used by none other than my husband Ned... I was crying deep inside... But here... My Ass lifted itelf high in the air... Trying to get the whole length of his dick inside!! I wondered how it would feel like, too be fucked by a much longer dick than my husband's!?

"OHH YEAHHH!! So Tight!! So Hot!! Ghod youre soo beautiful Jess!! And you PuSsy!! So FUCKIN

GOOD!!!" As he stuck out his tongue for me.

I didnt know but my body moved. I opened my mouth and i started licking his long hot tongue. His long cock started to slide in... Inch by inch... As we suck each other's tongue!! Until I could feel his long Dick was all the way inside!!

"OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH" I sighed with pleasure as the whole length hit rock

bottom... Deep inside my pussy!!

"OH YEAH!! Youre Cunt feels soo Good!! I could fuck you all day!! You know that

baby dont you... " He said as he slowly slid in and out the length of his long cock.

"Ye-yes..." I heard myself said.

I know I should be angry. I know I should be mad. But I didnt know what to do... Its like my body had a mind of its own. I started grinding and pounding... As Blake fucked me like I've never been fucked before!! My pussy meeting the long white dick sliding in and out of my soaking wet cunt!! I could see the length of his dick soaked with my juices. I was loving it!!

PAK!! PAKK!! PAKK!!PAK!! The loud and lewd sound of my pussy mound and his

pubic mound smashing into each other!!

My body bouncing back and forth the bed as Blake fucked me like a beast lover!! I cried and cried with fantasm!! I even lost count how much I came!! I know... Because underneath the bed... I could feel how wet it is underneath!! Soaked with my soaking cum!!

MORE!! MORE!! DONT STOP!! HARDER!!FUCK ME MORE!! HARDER!! WITH THAT LONG

FUCKING
COCK!! As i heard my mind shouted.

Until...

"I'M Cumming Babe!!" As I heard Blake screamed to my EAr.

"Pull out!!" I heard myself scream.

I knew what was gonna happen. My cunt is only for my Neddie!! I dont want to get pregnant by another man beside my Husband! Im already gettin fucked my brains out!! At least I dont want to get myself cummed on inside all the way in!!

But the other thing happened.... I tried to push him away but instead.... I felt my arms and legs hugged him more. My sexy-ass... My pussy-hole meeting his Long manhood all 8 inches Long Dick!!

I know I might get pregnant with his seed... But I dont want to miss another climax building up... I screamed as his long white-dick slammed all the way inside my pussy... I could the feel the whole 8 inches length deep inside! The large hot head of his penis almost piercing my cervix as...

OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! I sighed loudly.... As Waves and waves of pleasure

escaped my lips as I felt his cum sprayed the insides of my pussy!!

"OOHH!!OHH!! OHH!!GHODD!!!" I shouted and screamed continously as I came

again.

His hot liquidy sperm splashed all the wall inside my uterus as I shuddered with intensity!! As we lay... Blake tightly huggin me. He's Long Dick still all the way in. my traitourous pussy milking his manhood!

This was probably the best fuck of my life!! As Blake started pounding me again with Long strokes!! I Love it!! I anticipated with pleasure... Everytime... He lifts his ass... High up in the air... And plunges his long, fat cock Deep inside my longing pussy!!

"OHH!! FUCKK!!!" I screamed again!!

My clouded-drenched-mind shouted... I wanna fuck this Long white cock forever!!!

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Kay Carl...

Pag-uwi ko sa bahay tuwang-tuwa ako! Dalawang dalagang batambata ang sabay ko dinedate!! Wow!! Iba ka na Teng!! Si Karl Taba... Ngayon playboy na!??

Pasipol-sipol pa ko habang papauwi... At hindi lang basta dinedate. Sabay pa natitikman ni Manoy ko ang mga puke ng dalawang batam-dalaga!! Dalawang pekpek... Sabay sinawsawan ng tarugo ko!! Bigat mo Teng!! Ano ka Fucboi ka na!??

Mejo pagod pa ko... kasi kanina... Ilang beses pinagpasasaan ni alaga ko ang masarap na lungga rin ni Venus!!

PAgtapos ba naman namin manuod ng sine... NAg-aya ba naman sa motel!! E syempre ako ba naman tatanggi!?? Kepyas na lumalapit... Di ko pa ba titirahin!!?

"Sige pa Karl!! Sige pa!! Ansaaraap! Ansarrap... SARAPPP!!" Panay ang anas ni

Venus sa kama!

Ang kahabaan ng manoy ko labas masok sa madulas at mainit nyang lagusan!! BAwat lusong ko ng titi kong ga-tigas parang hinihigop ng masikip nyang puke!!

"OHH!! ANSARRAP MO RIN VENUS!! Ansaraap mong Kantutin!!"Ang bastos ko na

ring bunganga!

Di ko alam dahil ba sa dalawa na girlfriend ko o dalawang babae na kinakakalantari ko natuto na akong bumastos ng babae!!

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Ikoy619
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

sakit sa puso boss cloud!..

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riddlemind
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

I'm kinda disappointed to this. Tagal ko nagintay ng kasunod and yet na disappoint ako. Yes I know this might not be a happy story. But still I expected. Sana talaga d nagalaw ng iba si jess. Medyo nawala excitement ko. I know this is your story but you let me down. Well thanks for the update.

bugtong isip... "nakatago si pedro, labas ang ulo?"

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riddlemind
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

And sana wag kang mainis sa comment ko. Opinion ko lanh to. Talagang nasaktan lang ako lol. I'm a hopeless romantic guy kahit na malibog. I'm just hoping nalang talaga na d nagalaw si jess ng iba.

bugtong isip... "nakatago si pedro, labas ang ulo?"

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phoenixdragon
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

you're not alone, bro. Di ko na nga tinapos basahin kasi na turn-off na ako...lol

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Bongsoon_na.park
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

Same here

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quazar
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

Thanks sa update. Para sa disappointed di lahat ng story ay puro lalake lang ang nakaka score sa lahat at lovingly loyal parati ang partner. So what kng mala NTR nangyari. Story po ito ni author antayin natin ang mga susunod na chapters para malaman ang the rest. Everything happens in the story depende sa creativity ni author. Whether gusto ng reader man o hindi ang patutunguhan.

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cheesecakes
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

I'm sorry, Sir Cloud. I think I'm gonna drop your story. I respect your decision and such, I even admire the way you twisted things up in your story, but what's happening with this is way too much for me to handle. Honestly, ang hot ng chapter at kung ibang storya 'to walang magiging problema. Masyado lang kasing malapit sa akin yung una part nito na parang ang maling basahin ng mga susunod na mangyayari. This is way too real in a sense that life might be good, but something can fuck it up somehow.

Galing mo, sir. Masyado akong invested dito na di ko kinaya yung nangyari, na kahit ang hot nung mga sex scenes nanlumo ako dun sa nangyari kay Jess. I'll still keep an eye on your other work, sir! More power, boss!

Ang sakit lang talaga sa akin ng nangyayari. Kudos for you for illiciting this kind of reaction from me and your other readers. I also applaud your bravery. I feel na alam mong maraming madidisappoint but you still follow through what you planned with the story. Thanks sir!

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Michelangelo
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

Me too. Sobrang laki ng impact sakin ng 1st series tapos magiging ganito ung nangyari. But then, it’s the author’s call. Ganun talaga lyf :(

Sana makabawi na lang sa lovestory ni Ned at Sophia.

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cheesecakes
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

Honestly, kahit kay ate Sophia ayoko ng ipair up si Ned. Ang fucked up na masyado ng mga Avibar... I mean, fucked up naman na sila right from the start, but things are getting darker or maybe since for me they're tearing apart Ned's family. :(

Anyways, yun nga. Sobrang nadala tayo sa first part na ngayong may nangyaring ganto hindi na natin matanggap.

Lol, ang galing ni sir Cloud eh. Ang cruel din at the same time. (Peace, sir!)

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narutobie
October 4, 2018 (18 days ago)

True to this. I got disappointed too thinking of dropping it. After ko mabasa na may nakaisap pang ibang lalaki kay jess i started skimming until the end of the story. Parang nag tatalo yung utak ko to read and finish it or stop.

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phoenixdragon
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

me too...lol.....team jess ako kaso pinatira na sa iba si jess kaya nawalan na ako gana...di ko na nga tinapos basahin eh...masyado din akong nahook sa unang series na si jess ang prinsesa...sa paghihintay ko sa chapter na ito, ang inaasahan ko sana panaginip lang yun ni ned.

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Malaki
October 5, 2018 (17 days ago)

Akala ko nga rin talaga eh panaginip lang yun, parang nanginginig nga yung katawan ko habang binabasa ito..sayang at ang ganda pa naman nung una..

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Allenpaul
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

Im not interested anymore on this story. Nag-iba na ba ng tema ang author. Sayang...

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LordTamako08
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

Iba tlga pag sex drugs hayss. Salamat sa update sir cloud! Waiting po ako sa love story nila ned at ate shopia hihihi. Ang galing mo tlga sir cloud!

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akosimakulit
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

the long wait is over..at least alm n nten kng bkt nakantot c jess ng ibang lalake. its kinda heartbreakin' though! kudos sir cloud.

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riddlemind
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

Siguro masyado lang tayo nainvest sa first part ng story. Nasanay tayo sa first part na yun. Sayang but still disappointed

bugtong isip... "nakatago si pedro, labas ang ulo?"

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Michelangelo
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

I thought this is gonna turn out to be another sex adventure of Ms. Sophia. But then, I was wrong. I’m so heartbroken since I waited for too long in the previous story to preserve Jess only to be fucked by whosoever in the next series. Disappointing turn of events, yes but respect to the author for sticking to erotica.

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Captain_Dats
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

Nasaktan ako idol sakit sa.dbdib nangyari Kay Ned :-(

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Smaegol2
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

Hahaha, prng d ko kayang basahin ung kay ned, nampunga!

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jhessvhince21
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

sorry sir cloud pero drop ko na rin story na ito for a better reason, hope namin na hindi mangyari yung ganitong scene im just  dissapointed on outcome of the story. but thanks anyway we will just cherish the ending of you first story and leave it like that.

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freezer3
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

Boss cloud kailan mo pla susundan ung pang aakit ng probinsya!! Miss ko na sila Romeo at Jasmine!!

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quazar
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

Ang story ay parang isang painting. Ang daming nagsasabi na ayaw nila magbasa. Antayin sana matapos lahat para makita ang buong picture si lang dahil sa isang part or chapter ganun na kaagad maka comment. Kalma lang malay nyo panaginip lang diba?

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raztaboy
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

idol author. nagulat ako sa nangyari. pero ang sabi nga ng iba walang forever. tyka hindi deserve ni jess ang pagmamahal ni ned. nalungkot lang ako ngaun sa nangyari. hopefully sana may mabilis na follow-up update galing sa inyo boss idol.

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Lester015
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

Keep it up boss cloud!!! Maraming nagulat sa turn of events ng story pero maganda ang execution maybe sa part ni jess nakakadissapoint pero cguro nde pa naten alam twist of events na mangyayari...maybe may mga nakakaexcite pa na mga mangyayari!!! Tagal ko inabangan to author!!! Sundan agad!!! Godbless...

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Smaegol2
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

Boss cloud ituloy mo n lng ung pang-akit ng probinsya,.

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riddlemind
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

Siguro dagdag na din kung bakit nadisappoint ang mga reader kasi....


Una. Masyado tayong natuwa sa first series nito.
Nasanay tayo sa d masyadong dark na story sa first series
Pangalawa. Umaasa na may forever hahaha

Pangatlo. Naawa tayo kay ned. Umaasa tayo sa ibang tema naman ng story na d manloloko ang babae

Lastly. Matagal na update then ganito ang mangyayari. Almost 2months bago nasundan and ganito ang nangyari. So nadisappoint tayo.

But still its the author work and opinion. But still nasaktan lang tayong mga viewer. For the viewer perspective sumagwa ang story. Biglang nagtwist ng ibang genre kaya d natin nagustuhan. Para san pa ang title na "PERFECT GIRLFRIEND" kung ganyan ang nangyari. But kudos to the writer. Ang laking impact ang nagawa mo sa FSS hahaha. But still disappointed pa din ako hahaha

bugtong isip... "nakatago si pedro, labas ang ulo?"

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Lester015
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

Keep it up boss cloud..Maraming nagulat sa turn of events ng story pero maganda ang execution maybe sa part ni jess nakakadissapoint pero cguro nde pa naten alam twist of events na mangyayari...maybe may mga nakakaexcite pa na mga mangyayari!!! Tagal ko inabangan to author..Sundan agad..Godbless...

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babytsina
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

in reality ... i almost feel disappointed sa mga nagyari while taking you're sweet and slow update, with this, naliwanagan ako na things doesn't always go you're way, this is reality kahit na gaano ka perfect ang pagsasama, with hindrances coming from other parties, this would really happen, salute sir... can't wait for the next update.... basta sir isa lang po ang wish ko, make ate  sophia, ned, jess or whoever grind this a**hole's dick at ipakain mismo sa ugok na ito....kakagigil....grrrrrrrrr
-peace

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Venatus.R
October 4, 2018 (18 days ago)

Parehas tayo Jan na sisinget si ate sophia hahahaha

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lanzlot
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

Keep it up Boss. Dont worry about those negative comments... I'm sure magbabasa pa rin mga yan. Mas Ok yung ginawa mong twist. It will make your stories unpredictable. Ganyan naman ang buhay, unpredictable din:)

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Edzone
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

Hay sad life naman si pareng neddie boy.. Naisahan si jess dun ah..bumigay sa abs haha.. Maghihintay kami lodi sa update.. Godbless...

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SisigAdobo
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

Ganda ng series mo pre no wonder youre genius author pero keep your update story earliest pra ganahan mga readers you are one of the ideal of other authors kaya gumagawa din sila ng story. Just keep it up !

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HelRaiser25
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

A piece of heaven sir!! I love it...
I noticed how subtlely you guide jess towards the easiest route she can escape the "situation", I must say it was done magnificently po! (But for me, don't. lol) Im always a fan of jess no matter how slutty she will become.. I only ask now, what happens next?? Please sir, break her! Show jess what she was made for ever since series one... P.S. Sino yung second guy? Drug supplier? I sense double NTR is in the air.

"The Universe is not made of atoms, but of tiny stories."

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Astitig123
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

Sophia will enter here hehehe

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nher1989
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

tama! sana bro perfect S na to..

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Astitig123
October 4, 2018 (18 days ago)

iba din kasi tama ni sophia skanya eh nung mga unang chapter plang

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Astitig123
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

lesson learned ito pra sa mga babaeng mahilig mkipag inuman, galing mo tlga sir cloud, may aral ung mga obra mo

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Archie198727
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

nasobraan nmn ata ang kalayaan mo sa pagsulat cloud..d mo mn lng naiisip ang reaction ng readers mo.. kantotin na lahat ng babae maliban lng kai jess.. nakakadisappoint lng tlaga kc cla ung bida ni ned eh.k lng mangantot si ned ng iba pero wag nmn c jess.. its a constructive criticism author.. sana pweding panaginip lng yun.. ampangit na kasi.. kawawa naman si ned.. ayosin mo yan author

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SisigAdobo
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

Masyado ka ata naging fairytale sa buhay mo lets accept the fact the reality. Maganda pagkakatwist  in terms relationship nothing will know what future will come to us either positive or negatve. Kaya keept it up na lang sa author the best story ever lets be matured guys sa story na to its more on learning our mistakes to make it right

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Astitig123
October 4, 2018 (18 days ago)

Yeah thats right,pra may matutunan tyo, lalo n mga girls, kahit gaano kayo ka loyal sa partbers nyo, pag may alak may balak, kaya always say no to alcohols girls!

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jero1978
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

PANAGINIP 😂😂😂

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aserovan
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

para sa mga mambabasa sorry in advanced kung anung masasabi ko dito po
the best ang story super tlaga alam ko merung plat ito at aabang ntng lahat
alam ko po nakaka disappoint parin kng anu ang nangyare pero kng iisipin ntn kailangan ng story na ng ganito para may mapulot tayong lesson
pero The best ka tlaga SIR CLOUD sana ma meet kita in person papa autohraph ako sa nuo hehe the best ka tlaga sir

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ecchimanga
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

natawa ako sa pa autograph sa nuo ahahahahhaha pero tama ka sila SWEET N SLOW AT SIR CLOUD PINAKA DA BEST NA AUTHOR PARA SAKIN

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godz1994
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

kapit lang mga kapatid xD ..

nablackmail na cguro to/

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patREKT
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

Oh well....anak nga tlga ni Nimfa si Jess...nagmuka lng syang iba kasi di pa sya nakakatikim ng ganung sex....kahit fucked up ang mga Avibar, gusto ko malaman kung pano pupulutin at aayusin ni Sophia ang bida...gusto ko dn makita kung bat sya maiiba sa mga Avibar

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darius
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

Ang ganda tlg idol.. .kaso parang nwalan ako ng gana nung may mangyari Kay Jess eh.. .Kasi feel na feel ko Yung story mu idol..

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rodian
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

Para saken idol OK to kaya siguro madameng naging negative comments kasi msyado kasi naging effective na writer.. Kaya maraming nag react sinasabi lang nila na hnd nanila babasahin Yung Nxt eps. Pero Tgnan mo pg update una pasila mg babasa hahaha thanks sa story keep it up

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nher1989
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

mejo masakit author. pero mukang kay sophia na ang bagsak ng ating bida. perfect S na pala to hindi na perfect J... sana tama para may pambawi naman..

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ecchimanga
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

tama ka pre yun then na isip ko S na siya ky sophia na bagsak pero pwdi rin pag sabayin hahahahha

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akosimakulit
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

dme negative comments. pro kudos p dn aq sau sir cloud. mxdo kcng ng expect ung reader tpoz nung hnd ngyre ung  ineexpect nla ssbhin nla panget n..mahusay ang pagkakasulat at my aral dn..d lng puro libog..somehow near in reality dn xa..sna mgkron agd ng update sir cloud!!

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ladysay
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

hayss nakakaiyak simula umpisa laging hintay ng update pero ngaun skip talaga ako sa part ni jess dehins kinaya haha

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E-bong
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

Thanks sir sa update.pero gaya ng ibang comments medyo na turn off din ako sa kinahinatnan ng story.maybe masyado lang kaming nahook sa 1st series ng story.but kudos pa rin sayo!

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ecchimanga
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

daming na saktan tlga sa update at isa na ako dun hahaha lol pero maganda pa rin nmn yung story para sakin at tatapusin ko pa rin ang stoyra na to aabang ako sa susunod na update thumbs up pa rin ako sayo sir cloud

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Zhaiii___
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

Nooooooooooooooooo.............. Sakit sa mata.... Sorry sir cloud, pero di ko kayang tapusin itong story na to. Going darker and darker and darker and darker. Halos lahat sila nilukuban na ng pagtataksil. Sayang itong story na to. All this time na sinubaybayan ko ang story na ito mula umpisa, akala ko masayang ending ang mangyayari. Nalinlang tayo sa title ng story ni sir cloud hahaha. Itong story na to, para sa mga mahihilig sa mga ganitong genre. Cuckolding at its finest. Damn.... SMH...

I'm so high. I could eat a star

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SisigAdobo
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

In reality not all the time happy lang theres no perfect thing on what will happen to us negative man o positive just accept the fact hndi fairytale ang story. Its a twist may relationship talaga ganito turned

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Nobody
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

Well at least tama hinala ko and now sex slave na so jess which is yea I'm really hurt on why it had to happened but now I'm just waiting on how ate Sophia will kill this motherfucker for enslaving her sister... Also looking forward for more grace time

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freak_me
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

Tanggapin niyo na guys, na nakantot si jess ng iba. Dati ayaw ko din siya na may makasex ma iba. Pero iba na ngayon. Hot wife na siya e. Haha.

Sana masundan agad boss cloud! Salamat!

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killersmile
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

Kahit na nakaka badtrip ang nangyari,  still salamat sa Pag update idol.  Sana nman wag kawawain si NED.  more updates please.😊😊

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otkep
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

i would be so sad kung hindi bangungot lang itong kay jess.

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memo_10
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

Galing ng author.... Talo ang kwento o ginawa n pelikula na galing sa isang libro...kaya lang pag English yan patok sa ibang bansa....ung kay romeo at jasmine bka pwd n ung book 2........

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jerikho
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

Aww man...this will gonna leave a nasty "emotional scar" on Ned tsk!tsk! So the unblemished image of Jess is no more huh, but who's to blame? Kawawa naman si alak kung sa kanya na naman ang bagsak ng sisi, malamang sa alamang eh hindi alam ni Jess ang kasabihang "Kapag me alak, me mawawasak" err...may balak pala. At sa kasamaang palad eh nagtagumpay na nga ang
tinamaan ng lintek na si Blake, ang paka-aabangan dito ay ang resbak nang naagrabyadong si Ned at kung sino ang tutulong sa kanya...
                This could get more "darker" as the story unfolds, because you know the term in science which is " In every action, there is an equal and opposite reaction". The last thing we want is a family feud here folks and the two families is on the verge of it. Yeah, andaming nadismaya kung laano umikot ang istorya...pero ganun talaga kasi wala talagang perpekto sa mundong- ito ang realidad na hindi talaga patas ang buhay at matagumpay na nailahad ito ni Boss Cloud...-----

Retiradong Playboy...pwedeng TUMINGIN pero never ang TUMIKIM ;)

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jerikho
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

This is no doubt a heart shattering update but still a very good job Boss Cloud, kung paano mo "nilikot" ang mga imahinasyon at damdamin ng bawat mambabasa mo, saludo ako sayo maraming salamat!

Retiradong Playboy...pwedeng TUMINGIN pero never ang TUMIKIM ;)

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Tazman_ic
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

Congrats kay sir cloud. The fact na apektado ang readers ibig sabihin tumatak talaga ang kwento sa kanila.

This series took a sudden dark turn and I love the change! I can’t wait to see how things will turn around.

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johnkevin2012
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

ang sakit sa dibdib idol. bat ganon. bakit si jess pa.haha

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envy1
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

my own opinion lang, I don't usually comment but compared to the first part medyo nagiging predictable na itong second part.  - peace bro

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sakojoe
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

sana panaginip nalang ang nangyari. 😥😥😥

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Chinito31
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

Siguro guys may plot twist yan wag kayong magalala HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH

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shady
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

Yung mga nag co-comment dito na kesyo ganto kesyo ganun  katulad nila yung kasabay mo manuod ng tv na nakaka badtrip na kala mo derector o yung nag sulat ng script . Mga ate kuya alam ko pong meron tayong kanya kanyang panlasa sa kwento pero intindihin naman po naten na ang kwentong ito ay ginawa ni idol para sa lahat at hindi para sa inyo lang . At sa ating idol salamat po naway laging maganda ang inyong kalusugan para makagawa pa po kayo ng maraming magagandang kwento tulad nito at thankz po sa U.D 🙌🙌

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orbiter
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

Little disappoited pero salamat sa update sir.
Magkakalabuan kaya si jess at ned?
Tuloy lng sir at sana magiging ok an health mo lagi
Naaaliw ako sa mga comments haha

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orbiter
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

Sir tuloy nyo po ang pan-akit ng probinsya kung pwede

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xmod1
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

wala nmn pagkakaiba yan sa nangyari din kay Ned @ kristine .. pero si Ned nkita mismo nya na kinantot asawa nya .. I think malapit na ending nito .. ubos na ata gas ng author  ... mukang minamadali ng tapusin ..

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Jayem00
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

Haha wag na magsalita ng patapos,

Kung baga, Cover pa lang yan..

Di mo ata binasa yung Title:
"Perfect GF 'S' ", di pa nga nalabas yung si "S"

nalimitahan ata ikaw mag isip.. dapat advanced Haha

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Mike--67
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

Ang pangit Na shit..anong nangyari sir..tsk wala Na..adik kna ata

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algerandrum
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

Wow. Everyone's getting hurt, getting fucked. I admire how you mobilized halos lahat ng characters sir cloud, everyone has its own story.  Dark chapter it is. Kudos awtor. Hanggang sa susunod.

Pati buto, balbon.

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markallEn
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

Dba perfect gf ang pamagat tpos naging isa lng siyang brutal sex story ok lng sa ibang character pero kay jess nasa laula yata ang kwento anyway salamat pa rin sa magagandang stories nio po pero ito na pinaka worst na nbsa q

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Jayem00
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

Dont judge a book


cover up  palang yan kung bakit  "Perfect GF 'S' "

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Jayem00
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

Good Job, idol, author cloud9791..

I have nothing to say but "Thank You", para sa isang nakapahusay na istorya.

Don't mind them muna, 'yung mga masyadong na-'broken'
Kesyo daw ganito, dapat daw ganiyon.. masyadong pa perfect-fairy taled mag isip (limited eh vs advance mag isip).. haha


Well, this is more than I expected. Hehe
Good luck sa new part, very complicated yung twist.. and still great
I know na mabibigyan mo ng hustisya yung mga umiiyak,
kung bakit "Perfect GF S"


Keep it up!

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mortfling
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

keep it up sir, i also upset for what happen, but who know what happen next.. :D

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Luigi.132231
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

Oncr again, you stirred a pool of emotions. My empathy is with Ned. The other readers got it right. Jess's family did plant the seed of destruction in Ned's life. The most horrendous is what happened with Grace. Even she didn't escape the grasp of lust and wanton abandon.
Grace's fall from grace is the most disappointing and unacceptable here. My prayers went to naught from the time I read the development of Ned's bestfriend, Tin.
It was devastating to know she gave in to Ned's lecherous uncle.
Now, Grace is part of this disgraceful act.

I would rather live and redeem myself than die in shame!

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jedanngapala
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

Grabe idol dami nag react hahhaha sabagay ako din naman ehh matindi talaga yung sakit sa feeling nung part ni jess kasi akala talaga namin forever na talaga sila kaso ito talaga ang reality lahat ng yayari pero nung binalikan ko yung part ni ned potta  dapat winasak na ni ned yung betlog nun at ng mabaog si gago

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pilosopo_999
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

idol i am an avid reader, matagal n rin akong sumusubaybay sa mga akda mo, salamat s pag Update kaso im hoping n sana panaginip lang yun kaso na drugs pla, anyway good update still looking forward sa adventure ni idol ned at jess, btw s tgal ko ng member ngaun lang ako na pa comment

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ecchimanga
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

cant wait sa nxt chapter na ma ga gang bang si jess ahahaah

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Astitig123
October 4, 2018 (18 days ago)

Ou nga eh, may isa png lalaki sa room na medyo maitim, cnu kaya un?at nanlambot n daw tuhod ni ned eh haha

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florenzong30
October 3, 2018 (19 days ago)

Woooah!!! Ansaket sir Cloud. But nonethless. The twist and turns... Bravo!

I know this chapter was needed for the the grand finale. Keep it coming sir cloud! I am deeply invested in this story and the characters. And nakakarelate ako kay Ned. This happened to me with my ex before. Please keep the story coming sir.

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mrnicolopez
October 3, 2018 (18 days ago)

Boss cloud, alam kong maraming nasaktan sa story mo. But what the heck, ibig sabihin lang niyan ang ganda ng writing style niyo sir na napaantig ang puso ng mga mambabasa. Ayaw man nila ang nangyari, still its your peice of art na tinatapos niyo pa. I believe that since the story is in an adult site, dapat talaga mas bigyan pansin ang kalibugan. But your story sir cloud is so amazing na napaghalo niyo ang dalawang tema, romance and adult theme.
Kaya, ano man ang sabihin ng mga mambabasa, ituloy niyo lang sir ang obra niyo. For me, nakakapanabik talaga ang daloy ng story, sa mga gustong magstop magbasa, wala naman pumipigil sa kanila. Hayaan mo sila. Pero sana sir cloud tuloy tuloy lang kayo sa inyong sulat.
Iisa lang request ko, sana may update agad, hahahaha! Ayaw ko ng maghintay ng more than a month. Hahahaha! Good job po on the story.

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zelus93
October 3, 2018 (18 days ago)

Nooo!
Maghihintay nanaman ako ng matagal hahaha kabitin pero iba na si jess :(
Kala ko panaginip lng ni ned

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spiker102
October 3, 2018 (18 days ago)

shakit bess!!!! tsk... im just kinda disappointed... but sir... your still the best...
i dont know if i will love this sequel... as much as i love the prequel...
cause i just remembered how my 1st love dumped me 5 years ago..tagal na nun... but still i cant forget the pain...
😭😭😭😭
pero ok lng.. ngayon... who you sya sakin.. 😂😂😂😂😂
anyways... kept it up sir cloud.. still hoping for the best way how will you change my perception bout the story...😄😯😯😯👌👈

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Escanor
October 3, 2018 (18 days ago)

Goodjob sir cloud .mas marami sanang pov ky jess kung bakit sya humantong sa ganito. Tsaka sana wag na aabutin ng months yung susunod na update. Well done sir. Salamat sa update

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Mheize
October 3, 2018 (18 days ago)

From the start ng kwento na to naging fav ko at inaabangan ko pero nadisappoint ako ngayun :'( sad pero parang nawalan ako ng gana sa nangyare buong akala ko safe lang si jess kaso wala eh sayang. Keep it up pa din dami nag susubaybay neto for sure.

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lurkerAko
October 4, 2018 (18 days ago)

Lol ang topic ng stoya ay Perfect gf S hindi na J-S.. hahah buti na lang ndi based on true story or is it🤔🤔 parang damang dama ang sakit

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jakespeed11
October 4, 2018 (18 days ago)

katulad nang una kong nasabi, it is a roller coaster ride, and talagang nadala mo kami sa ituktok at biglang bagsak dito sa sumunod mong chapter.
well sabi nga nila bilog ang mundo... what comes up, must come down, spinning wheel round-and-round
ahhh... the anxiety of waiting... lakas makadagdag sa takbo ng story
more power to you sir!

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sfish1977
October 4, 2018 (18 days ago)

bigat... maganda pagkakasulat pero masyadong binagsak ang damdamin ng mambabasa... great writing but i think you're that good I won't be reading this story anymore... got too invested in Ned and Jess... thanks.

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zOrdic09
October 4, 2018 (18 days ago)

NAIYAK AKO PARA KAY NED....SANA LUMPUHIN NYA YUNG BLAKE NA YUN AT IWAN NYA NA SI JESS DUN NALNG SYA KAY ATE SOFIA

I dont make love, i just fuck hard

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stevex8520
October 4, 2018 (18 days ago)

Dito malalama kung paano magiging matatag ang isang relation sa gitna ng unos... Dapat lumpuhin talaga ni ned.. Waiting for next  author... Sana rin masundan na yung book 2 ng pangaakit sa probinsyana.. Miss na namin c jasmine

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akosimakulit
October 4, 2018 (18 days ago)

iba nman ung ky ned..c ndd nadala tlga s tukso at libog..c jess dinaan s sex drug kya nagkagnun..pro sna nga makaganti c ned..nanggigil aq ky blake..haha..sana tadtarin ng pino ung tukmol n un

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triple_ti
October 4, 2018 (18 days ago)

Boss Cloud

Una sa lahat salamat sa update na to. matagal din namin inabangan to. Tulad din ng sinabi ng iba, nakakadisappoint yung nangyari kay Jess. Siguro nga masyado rin akong na-hook sa unang part ng story ni Ned at Jess. ang sakit sakit bes. Nababasa ko rin ung ibang works mo tulad ng "Iiputan ka nyan sa ulo series mo", sana  hindi mo na lang dinala ung ganung stories sa buhay nina ned at jess. Ang ganda ng pagkakabuild-up mo sa characters and storyline nilang dalawa, tapus sa ganun lang din magkakatapos. But that is life. I still respect you as an author.

P.S. Please lang wag mo ng idamay sina Romeo at Jasmine. Peace out

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godz1994
October 4, 2018 (17 days ago)

haha ang totoong perfect girlfriend J(jasmine)

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Noodlenoodlenoodle29
October 11, 2018 (11 days ago)

Hahaha Sana nga.. Pero mukang NASA darkside na si author..

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nightbringer
October 4, 2018 (18 days ago)

BOSS CLOUD!!! maraming salamat at nkpag update ka na. hindi ko pa binabasa pero nag iinit na ung mga tenga ko sa mga comments pa lang ng iba. alam kong maraming nasaktan sa nangyari pero para sakin hindi gaano kasi natupad din ung gusto ko sanang mangyari this time. maraming salamat at hindi bitin (siguro) itong chap na ito tungkol kay jess. nakaka excite grabe. may tiwala ako sayo na alam kong hindi mawawala ung fire at ung flow ng kwento na nuon pa ay sinusubaybayan ko na. Salamat muli IDOL!!!

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paulcaleb103106
October 4, 2018 (18 days ago)

pre salamat sa update

pero nasaktan ako para kay ned pota ..

napakaperfect ni jess tapos ganun nangyari sa kanya .. sakit pota.. napakalinis ng isip ko kay jess

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louie_14
October 4, 2018 (18 days ago)

from perfect girlfriend J To Perfect girlfriend S inabangan at masugid kong tinangkilik etong nobela na eto.. masaya. may malungkot. may nkakalitong mga twist. sobrang mixed emotion. pero isa yun nagbgay ng kulay pra skin dto yun tatag ng relasyon ni Jess at ni Neddie.. but then this time it failed me. it failed me big time. pagdating s part n eto nging cliche na sya... wala e. nging sex na lang tlga focus na wala na magandang romance niya. masyado din twisted un mind ng mga avibar.. so yun lang.. alam ko libre lang eto at wla kming binabayaran pero nkkalungkot.. kase isa eto s tinatangkilik tlga namin... d q alam ano twist if lalabas ba nanaginip lng c neddie or c jess.. or magppliwanag c jess kay neddie anyare tas lalabas n pakana ni sophia yan or may glit kay jess mga kaklase nya. pero disappointing tlga.. sorry dropping it now.. and thanks for the great memories of neddie and jess in perfect girlfriend J

just always do the right thing in a right way,

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tami0125
October 4, 2018 (18 days ago)

ganda nung story , sinibaybayan ko mula part 1 kaso masyado masakit para kay ned nangyari eh pero good job pa rin sa mga ibang story . support pa rin more power and god bless

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Shadowxx18
October 4, 2018 (18 days ago)

Sana po Sir medyo mabilis Yung Next Update. Muntik ko na kaseng Makalimutan Sa sobrang Tagal nito e. Hahha Peace
✌️✌️

3 Cheers For Sweet Revenge

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peejaytetz9693
October 4, 2018 (18 days ago)

Paupdate po ng storya ng CARNAL ser anino!😂😂

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ipopoy10
October 4, 2018 (18 days ago)

You drop the bomb sir cloud ,lakas maka twist .,.,sana magka update soon para malaman ang buong kwento ,.,.

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Tipaklong2015
October 4, 2018 (18 days ago)

well the new title suggest this "Bomb" will happen.  From J to S right? Hoping na di totoo, We love Ned and Jess story.

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Clankx
October 4, 2018 (18 days ago)

Sna sundan mo agad sir.. Excyted n aq sa kasunod.. Khit mrming nag sbing bbtaw n story mo.. Mrmi pdin kaming nag hhntay sa ssunod n chapter ng kwento mo.. More powers lodi..

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tmas14m
October 4, 2018 (18 days ago)

Haysss kalungkot.

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Archie198727
October 4, 2018 (18 days ago)

parang ang title ng story hindi na akma sa plot ng story,, may perfect gf bang nagpapakantot sa iba tas nilabasan pa tlaga amputa!! bwisit awang awa ako kai need! perfect gf pba tlaga twag kai jess nian?!  just saying author

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Jayem00
October 4, 2018 (18 days ago)

Basahin mo nga ulit..

Perfect GF "S"  

?

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Kaztangbadjoke
October 4, 2018 (18 days ago)

hnd araw araw pasko

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Jayem00
October 4, 2018 (18 days ago)

TOO GOOD TO BE TRUE*  
Perfect GF-Book 2

Haha 'yan ang ibig sabihin ng mga umiiyak dahil sa nangyare kay Jess.


Now is Ate Sophia's turn..

(Nangangamoy Book 3, peace bro)

Keep it up!!!

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Amew1234
October 4, 2018 (18 days ago)

Parang familiar ang plot ng story! Parang Ang Probinsyano. Ganyan b Sir Cloud? Hehe

Pero if totoo ito, sayang lg!

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zidlez
October 4, 2018 (18 days ago)

fuck

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Gonzo
October 4, 2018 (18 days ago)

Mlamang si lamar pumalo kay ned at 3 sum si jess habang nanunuod ang nkataling si ned haha

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Riot..haus
October 4, 2018 (17 days ago)

Mukhang marami talaga ang mataas ang tingin kayJess at inaasahan na she will be unscathed. Pero marami ngang bagay ang pwedeng mangyari.

Medyo agree aki dun sa mga nag sabi na baka nga si Sofie ang magiging susi sa huli. Baka nga kwento nya to pero sa hindi inaasahang paraan

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tmas14m
October 4, 2018 (17 days ago)

Marami talaga ang di akalaing aanot ang story sa ganito, perfect girlfriend J nga un title nun una. Kaya ayun malungkot.

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CookiMonster
October 4, 2018 (17 days ago)

Bossing, ang galing ng pagkakagawa ang taba ng utak mo to elicit that kind of reaction from the readers proves that you are truly indeed one of the best writers we have. Thank you for sharing your stories. We, who about to jerk off, salute you!!!

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peejaytetz9693
October 4, 2018 (17 days ago)

Nah, I won't jerk on Jess while being raped!😢😢

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quierx16
October 5, 2018 (17 days ago)

Grabe napaka twisted nitong story na to. Nakakalungkot lang yung nangyare kay ned tapos si jess mukhang naadik na hays.

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darkcipher
October 5, 2018 (17 days ago)

Nakakalungkot.

Pero okay lang. Kay grace naman ako intersted heh

"The character's attitude is more important than plot." - Stephen J. Cannell

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cornets23
October 5, 2018 (17 days ago)

Hindi lang pala si blake ang kasama sa loob ng bahay ni ned at jess kasi may pumalo sa likod ni ned.
Kahit na dissapoited ako boss cloud. I countinue to read your stories.
At syempre dun natin malalaman sa susunod na chapter kung bakit nagalaw si jess ni blake. More power boss cloud sana ma sundan na yung book 2 ng PNP.

Jefferson

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akosimakulit
October 5, 2018 (17 days ago)

actually po nsbe n s chapter n to kng bkt nakantot c jess ni blake

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leonard
October 5, 2018 (17 days ago)

This is a little heart breaking really... No I can't fucking sleep bcause of it. Haha

Leonard,

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Booosh30
October 5, 2018 (17 days ago)

Ang sakit. Hahahaha

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painscartears
October 5, 2018 (17 days ago)

Ang sakit tlga.. Ok na saken na niloko ako nung ex ko dati naka move-on na ako dun perk itong ginawa ni jess di ko alam paano ko to makakalimutan. Ang sakit tagus hanggang boto.  Wala tlgang forever '  kahit na kai ned at jess.   Ang dumi dumi na ni jess mas madumi pa cya sa ex ko..  Putcha! '   sakit tlga!  Nakakadsapoint! '

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DragonBlood
October 5, 2018 (17 days ago)

Analfuck next

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Riot..haus
October 6, 2018 (16 days ago)

Isang theory sa pwedeng mangyari:

Pag gising ni Ned, wala na si Jess at naitakbo na ni Blake. Sumama sya kasi nag bago na nang tuluyan dala ng mga drugs na ginamit sa kanya.

Si Ned naman ay mababaon sa depression at tanging si Sofie ang makakapag dala sa kanya pa balik sa normal

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jerikho
October 6, 2018 (16 days ago)

Hmm...this is a nice theory, probably kasi magtataka ka dahil sa story  imbes na ang asawang si Ned ang daluhan niya eh yung hayupakis na Blake ang inaalo- which leaves a    
"bad taste in the mouth" nakakalungkot kung ito nga possibility na mangyari...well some good things never lasts. Much worse I'm afraid of a forced cuckold scene that will bring Ned to be in "berserk mode"
          Sorry for this but seeing Jess being raped and she's liking it- really breaks my heart and for that these "scenes" keep popping in my head...

Retiradong Playboy...pwedeng TUMINGIN pero never ang TUMIKIM ;)

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Riot..haus
October 7, 2018 (15 days ago)

Pero may na pansin ako. Ang usual style ni sir Vloud eh ang mga POV sa isang chapter eh magkaka sabay nangyayari or di kaya mag kasunod.

Na sabi ko lang to kasi na una sa sequence ang pagka- "discover" ni Ned kesa sa "rape" scene ni Jess.

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quierx16
October 7, 2018 (14 days ago)

oo nga eh. ibig sabihin yung nakita ni ned hindi yun yung unang may nangyare kila jess tsaka dun sa blake. tapos meron pa sila isang kasama pa.
Sofia na talaga to. binasa ko ulit yung unang part ng perfect girlfriend S parang si ate sofia talaga ang magiging bida.

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akosimakulit
October 8, 2018 (14 days ago)

so possible kya ung POV ni jess s chapter n toh eh ung unang beses xang nakantot ni blake??ung hinatid xa ng madaling araw tpoz hinawakan p xa s pwet?? tpoz ung nkta ni ned is tlgang nagpakantot n xa ky blake kc ms mahaba titi nun??

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snoorlax
October 6, 2018 (16 days ago)

Honestly? parang hindi ito un gusto ko or natin mangyari sa love story nila ned at jess.. Siguro kahit sabihin pa ni Jess na nadrugs sya nun mokong na yun, things will never be the same again. Not unless ganun kamahal ni ned si jess at patawarin nya.. Or maybe magkaron ng trauma si jess at tuluyan ng iwan si Ned.. And ned will probably will be  in a very dark place until Sofia comes to the rescue, remember the title? ANG AKING PERFECT GIRLFRIEND "S" .. S stands for... SOFIA hehehe.. pero sana maging maayos transition ulet.. at sana hindi na masyadong maging busy si boss cloud.. hahaha salamat po.. sundan nyo ulit.. sobrang hinintay namin ito, 2months ishhh din yun.. salamat po...

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9791cloud
October 8, 2018 (14 days ago)

Maraming MAraming Salamat po sa mga support at Comments nyo! Lahat po yan Na-appreciate ko! Lahat po yan binabasa ko!! Again Pasensya na kung minsan di ako makapag-update mabilis ha, mejo busy kasi minsan. Muli Thank you very much too all the Readers and followers!!

9791cloud9791

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shady
October 9, 2018 (13 days ago)

Naiintindihan namin yan idol dito lang kami nag hihintay hehehe salamat uli sa UD .

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Aeolus
October 8, 2018 (14 days ago)

Thanks sa update sir cloud! Book 1 is still the best. Very sad turn of events here in book 2. Kind of ruined the build up of the first story. I'll just wait for pang akit ng probinsya book 2

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Taga.masid
October 9, 2018 (13 days ago)

Ang sakit naman nun! This series ruined the first series. Sa tingin ko lang naman.. I guess wala talagang perfect..

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aj_05
October 9, 2018 (13 days ago)

Ndisappoint Ako s tnakbo ng story n ned at jes..sobrang sinubaybayan ko p nmn Imo. Mgkandaletse n lahat wag lng ang s kanila.i hope it was just a dream.

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Jayem00
October 10, 2018 (12 days ago)

Malay mo naman baka may Book3 xD

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SandAccess
October 11, 2018 (11 days ago)

Sad lang ako author kasi parang na-heartbreak ako sa naging kwento now nila neddie at jess.. Na hook kasi ako sa fantasy lovestory na heartwarming story nila noong last book.. So parang nawalan din ako nang gana to read it.. Maganda yung pagkakasulat kasi nata-touch mo yung feelings namin.. Pero nkaka-sad kasi dahil negative effect naman na.. Siguro read ko na lang yung next book.. Thanks.

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Noodlenoodlenoodle29
October 11, 2018 (11 days ago)

Un lang.. Isang storya nanaman ang nawala..
Bye bye Jessiebear .
Eto PA nman Sana ung pinaka magandang story dito..

Ung pinaka karisma PA ng story ung winasak. Tsk

Boss Cloud kudos sau. Lalo na sa mga una Mong likha..  

Sayang ung story mo na to

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jmvillegas
October 13, 2018 (9 days ago)

I don't know why but Jess should be punish at least not for the rest of her life. I feel sorry for Ned, yeah she made love to other girl and wala sya sa wisyo, pero he can control himself when necessary. Please make it fast the day that Jess will be punish.

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akosimakulit
October 13, 2018 (9 days ago)

so possible kya ung POV ni jess s chapter n toh eh ung unang beses xang nakantot ni blake??ung hinatid xa ng madaling araw tpoz hinawakan p xa s pwet?? tpoz ung nkta ni ned is tlgang nagpakantot n xa ky blake kc ms mahaba titi nun??

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