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Date: June 30, 2018 (1 year ago)


Tonight I felt our fire
already burning low.
We're in an emotional quagmire,
should we stay or should we go?
Can I still woo you,
to please hold on,
when every part of you is shouting no?

Remember when we sat under the clouds
the heavens in sight?
Under the moon we swore,
Honey you'll be my Aphrodite.
And I'll be your Apollo,
your source of light.
We kissed, souls locked,
our hearts bonded tight.

Tonight even your kiss is perfunctory,
tasting like a lie.
Your deep breaths when we touch
are now just heaves of sigh.
So as our love song's end draws nigh,
Tell me darling please,
is this goodbye?

What have I done for this comeuppance?
When did your lustful, longing eyes
become an empty glance?
Baby tonight, let me share with you
one last maudlin dance.
...

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SeniorCitizen50
June 30, 2018 (1 year ago)

Ay si Jack humuhugot

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JacktheStripper
June 30, 2018 (1 year ago)

Inihanda ko na agad sir. haha

Quam Bene vivas, non quam diu.

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thesiren16
June 30, 2018 (1 year ago)

Deep, and heart-wrenching poem. Nicely written sir.

"Nothing wrong with a good woman having a naughty side."

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JacktheStripper
June 30, 2018 (1 year ago)

Uy, coming from a good writer as you, feedback is greatly appreciated.

PM mo na lang ako sa mga areas of improvement na makita mo. hahaha!

Thanks for reading ;)

Quam Bene vivas, non quam diu.

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Gurlahs
June 30, 2018 (1 year ago)

Wooh lalim boss...very nice one....

Im unique in my own way...

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JacktheStripper
June 30, 2018 (1 year ago)

Thanks gurl ;)

Quam Bene vivas, non quam diu.

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User Not Found
June 30, 2018 (1 year ago)

This poem has much soul than I. Lurve et ๐Ÿ’›

Hey there, smile! ๐Ÿ’›

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JacktheStripper
June 30, 2018 (1 year ago)

Shoutout to Jilian for the help na linisin ang poem. haha

Thanks for dropping by to read ;)

Quam Bene vivas, non quam diu.

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jokerxky
June 30, 2018 (1 year ago)

Nice but sad. Tumatagos sa dibdib lalo Kung ikaw ay may pinagdadaanan

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JacktheStripper
July 1, 2018 (1 year ago)

Thanks for the read boss

Quam Bene vivas, non quam diu.

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starst1949
July 3, 2018 (1 year ago)

Poignant..bittersweet
Rage,ย ย rage against the dying of a love.
.its always sad ro see good love goes bad.

Good poem..written to express. Not to impress

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Pusanggala
July 4, 2018 (1 year ago)

Goodbyes doesn't mean Forever
As what a popular song says
Goodbyes can be a disaster
As what other people tells

Goodbyes are heartbreaking
For two hearts loving each other
Goodbyes are welcoming
For a new chapter may unfold

What ever goodbyes it was
Surely your tears will fall....

wala lang english eh... dugo ilong

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JacktheStripper
July 8, 2018 (1 year ago)

Haha!
Ngayon ko lang nabasa sir.

Salamat sa pag-take ng time to read and respond with your writing.

Quam Bene vivas, non quam diu.

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socratens
September 20, 2019 (1 month ago)

Nice bro. You have a command with words ;)

A wild thing is never sorry

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JacktheStripper
October 6, 2019 (16 days ago)

Salamat sa pagbasa ser!

Quam Bene vivas, non quam diu.

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