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Her Awakening

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Poem: English · Categories: Erotic · Tags: , , , ,
Date: July 18, 2014 (8 years ago)


"And now, following many conversations,
you're vastly awake and holding your fingers between your legs
and wanting to feel again the spark you lost so long ago.
You throb, so hot, needing, wanting, the desire is there
but your fingers are just not enough."

- The Bride Stripped Bare

You have ruined me.

I no longer want tender moves.

I do not want sweet blissful kisses dancing across my skin.

I do not want your hand to tenderly stroke my face as you sensually devour my body.

I have had that.

But it no longer aroused me.

It no longer gets me off.

It no longer makes me scream and cream.

Deep down… I knew what I truly desired but I have never spoken these desires out loud.

I want to feel you dominate me. Control me.

I want you to take me. All of me. In every possible way.

I want you to strip me down on the bed.

I want my hands tied up to the posts and rendered useless, helpless, immobile.

I want my body pinned under yours. To feel the weight of you on top of me. Y...

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What is a Writer? A good writer is also a good storyteller. He/she must ensnare the minds of the readers, trap them in a mind world that would make them believe what is happening is real, make them feel every stroke, feel every kiss, feel that final blow, and feel that explosion. THE MIND IS A VERY POWERFUL THING.A CREATIVE MIND, well now that’s A DEADLY TOOL.
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Let there be pleasure on earth and let it begin with me.
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July 18, 2014 (8 years ago)

"So take me, I'm yours."

Really? You're mine?

Ahaha. JOKE.

(Wala lang magawa kaya napapa-comment na lang ng mga writings. Pasensiya na, naughtiness kicks in. :P)

They said my head is big. I asked them back, "Which HEAD?"

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July 23, 2014 (8 years ago)

Scie, so sorry for the late reply Bro. Ngayon lang ako ulit nagkaroon ng chance magbrowse-browse dito.

Let naughtiness kick in whenever it can.

Let there be pleasure on earth and let it begin with me.

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July 23, 2014 (8 years ago)

Don't worry, I'm not expecting a reply anyway. :P

They said my head is big. I asked them back, "Which HEAD?"

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July 23, 2014 (8 years ago)

Now you made me feel bad. Hahaha...

Let there be pleasure on earth and let it begin with me.

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July 23, 2014 (8 years ago)

Honestly, hindi naman talaga ako nag-expect ng reply. So, cheer up, Ate! ;)

They said my head is big. I asked them back, "Which HEAD?"

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July 18, 2014 (8 years ago)

Buti pa yung blogs, stories at poems mo sis, may mga partner. Tayo kaya?

Dare me and I'll make you pay.

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July 23, 2014 (8 years ago)

Sis Sweet, darating din yung para sa atin. Sabi nga ng kuya ko, wag ipilit pag hindi pa sa oras.

Let there be pleasure on earth and let it begin with me.

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July 22, 2014 (8 years ago)

upon seeing the pic pa lang, i remember na agad dito yung prominent scenes sa fave movie ko, yung The General's Daughter... pero the poem itself is more than that pala... hmm, ganun pala yun...

"The erotic is rarely nudity. It is subtle, a feeling, a gesture, mood, a story frozen in the moment that holds you breathless waiting for the next moment. Understand this & you understand erotic."

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July 23, 2014 (8 years ago)

TPM, is that the movie with John Travolta in it? I remember watching that with my mom years ago. I love that movie. Thank you for mentioning it. I'll download it and watch it over the weekend.

Let there be pleasure on earth and let it begin with me.

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