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Farewell, My Pieng Yiu

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Poem: English · Categories: Non-Erotic · Tags: , ,
Date: September 4, 2014 (8 years ago)


Just as I got home,
I received a phone call.
A call which prompted me to sit
`coz if not, I might just fall.

"What?!" I tried to keep calm,
Yet I ended up screaming.
The shaky response was,
"We'll pick you up, Mimi's dying."

We rushed to the hospital,
Praying that she'd be fine.
But what awaits us
Is a monitor with a flat line.

Oh, what sorrow it is
To be left by a friend so dear.
Our sobs echoed through the hallway;
So heartfelt, so sincere.

A fatal car accident,
That's what took her life.
Remembering her sweet smile
Felt lik...

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graccubus
September 4, 2014 (8 years ago)

you wrote this?

it's very good...

if you frequent fss...you have less time for sex...unless, you're in it now...

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shobe.sheen
September 4, 2014 (8 years ago)

Yes, sir Grac. Thank you. I don't wanna be subject to plagiarism. Besides, its my first time to post a poem in here. Idk. I guess it's the sudden outburst of emotion that made me write this as a tribute to my friend..

Shobe❤

Imperfect understanding is often more dangerous than ignorance.

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September 4, 2014 (8 years ago)

poignant yet beautiful...

“I'm a fool to become a writer. My only compensation is absolute freedom. I've no master except my own soul, and that, I'm sure, is why I do it.” (R. Dahl)

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shobe.sheen
September 5, 2014 (8 years ago)

Achi BFTDM.. :(

Imperfect understanding is often more dangerous than ignorance.

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somebodyuused2know
September 5, 2014 (8 years ago)

Hugs wo de yangnu. Remember, siwang shi you shengmìng de. Surely, she's happier where she is now.

I'M A NICE PERSON. JUST DON'T PRESS THE BITCH BUTTON.

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shobe.sheen
September 5, 2014 (8 years ago)

Uh lao ma. Indeed. I understand. Its just that..Xing ying Xiang diao. 😭

Imperfect understanding is often more dangerous than ignorance.

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Eroticus
September 5, 2014 (8 years ago)

Losing a person you love or close to your heart is very painful.

Condolence :(

Do what you love and the rest will fall in its place.

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Boy_Bastos12
September 5, 2014 (8 years ago)

...maganda!...

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chinese1987
September 5, 2014 (8 years ago)

My Condolences...

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