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Poem: English · Categories: Non-Erotic · Tags: , ,
Date: September 30, 2014 (8 years ago)


...for a very long time I tried to hold still
I contained myself, frozen stiff, unmoving

Then one day a warm wind spun itself around me
Defrosting me and throwing...

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Seduce my mind and you can have my body...find my soul and I am yours forever...
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September 30, 2014 (8 years ago)

nice one, EJ :)

It’s okay if you don’t like me. I was not born to impress you.

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emilia_jane
October 2, 2014 (8 years ago)

Thanks mid :)

Seduce my mind and you can have my body...find my soul and I am yours forever...

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September 30, 2014 (8 years ago)

Super like, EJ... just in tune with time...

“I'm a fool to become a writer. My only compensation is absolute freedom. I've no master except my own soul, and that, I'm sure, is why I do it.” (R. Dahl)

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emilia_jane
October 2, 2014 (8 years ago)

Yeah, ito sana ang accompanying poem nung confession ko...di ko agad naipost....

Seduce my mind and you can have my body...find my soul and I am yours forever...

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kentot
September 30, 2014 (8 years ago)

more ej! galing nman...

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emilia_jane
October 2, 2014 (8 years ago)

Salamat ken..

Seduce my mind and you can have my body...find my soul and I am yours forever...

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darkcipher
October 1, 2014 (8 years ago)

capt. america?

nah. just kiddin.

ganda nyang irecite. lalo na pag mahina sa umpisa tapos pagdating dun sa 3rd stanza ay may excitement na.

yep. yep. maganda.

"The character's attitude is more important than plot." - Stephen J. Cannell

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emilia_jane
October 2, 2014 (8 years ago)

Yoo think so?

Try ko kaya gawin, hmmmm....anyway salamat sa comment..appreciate it :)

Seduce my mind and you can have my body...find my soul and I am yours forever...

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darkcipher
October 2, 2014 (8 years ago)

try mo dito... lagyan ko ng "/" para magrepresent ng comma... "//" para sa period. tapos "_" sa pagitan ng line para mejo mabilis at rising na... at "[" at "]" para sa pag emphasis...

for/ a very long time/ I tried to hold still/
I contained myself,/ frozen stiff,/ unmoving//

Then one day/  a warm wind spun itself around me/
Defrosting me/ and throwing me off balance//

I was moving,/ stumbling,/ turning/ _and with each changing motion_/
   Came [new freedom] and surprises/
I am no stone structure...I AM ALIVE.....

"The character's attitude is more important than plot." - Stephen J. Cannell

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