Chb

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Poem: Tagalog · Categories: Erotic · Tags:
Date: September 4, 2019 (2 months ago)


It will always be a lie.
It will always be - for
it always be the sorrow
of truth.

You are leaving with me
hanging in these feelings -
playing with fortune.

Someday, I am hoping.
A mile away,
with miles away - I'll see
you.

Somewhere - to the place
we always wanted to be.
No, to the place where our paths
meet,
Where we shared our tears.
Where we unfolds the lies we have
kept.

Where our Pinky's have these promises -
that someday if all of these have overcome,
where our choice is to be with each other's arm,
where we spent these nights and days unending.

It will always...

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Enoch
Status: Suspended

September 4, 2019 (2 months ago)

I tried hard to dissect each line, how each line relates to other lines, how the lines are glued together or associate with each other as a whole, but still.. I don't get it.

Yes, somehow I get the gist of what you are trying to express (albeit vaguely) but your word choices and structure muddied the coherence of thoughts.  The overall meaning of the poem eluded me and left me dumbfounded.

It must be something you drank, smoked or ate.  How I would love to sample whatever it is that you are having. (Kidding)

Still .....  I appreciate your work.  Thanks !


PS :
Enlighten me please.
What is CHB  ?
Cold Hearted B ? Curly Haired Boyfriend ? Cant Hold Back ?  What does it mean ?

"If you are insane you are unpredictable and if you are unpredictable you are never boring."

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Kimbie101
September 6, 2019 (2 months ago)

ChB is "Bachelor of Surgery"
(Medical Dictionary)
But for me it's
"Concrete Hollow Block"

"Don't HURT the HEART that doesn't HURT your HEART. But HURT the HEART that HURT your HEART" ____________________________________________________________♥ReD_Days♥

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Enoch
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September 6, 2019 (2 months ago)

Yun pala yun . hahaha ! Thanks !

But .. REALLY ?!  LOL

"If you are insane you are unpredictable and if you are unpredictable you are never boring."

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Kimbie101
September 6, 2019 (2 months ago)

Akala ko nga "Concentrated Henergy Ball" ang norny whaha Nani!!!

"Don't HURT the HEART that doesn't HURT your HEART. But HURT the HEART that HURT your HEART" ____________________________________________________________♥ReD_Days♥

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Enoch
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September 6, 2019 (2 months ago)

Korni Friday naman ngayon eh .. Keri lang. Hahahaha

"If you are insane you are unpredictable and if you are unpredictable you are never boring."

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