A Symphony Of Restraint

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Poem: Tagalog · Categories: Erotic · Tags:
Date: Wednesday, 5 December 2018 (5 days ago)


I find myself making messages,
They won't be sent and are hostages.
I know that this will cause damages,
It will incur more breakages.

I am a fool thinking we'll be together,
Close and within the arms of one another.
Storms may pass and may change weather,
but my feelings for you will never wither.

I can see you from a distance,
But there are a lot of hindrance.
The space between us is due to my ignorance,
That I want to erase my own existence.

When will it happen that you'll be mine again.
like a treasure gift of my grandmother's porcelain....

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arkie
Wednesday, 5 December 2018 (5 days ago)

More poem please...
Ang lulungkot Sir but I love it. Please kung sino man yung nasa poem mo try to talk to her. Nalukungkot lang ako...hay how i wish...


Captcha: pare us.hahhahaha

The best way to ignore you is by pretending i did'nt see you.

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Subnerubian
Thursday, 6 December 2018 (5 days ago)

Thank you, but I think it is a bad idea to reach out to her. It will cause a lot of problems.

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arkie
Thursday, 6 December 2018 (5 days ago)

no harm in trying Sir talk lang naman maybe that's all you both need. You don't know baka miserable sya and waiting for you to reach out :)

The best way to ignore you is by pretending i did'nt see you.

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RockNCrawl
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Friday, 7 December 2018 (3 days ago)

Again .. You are pushing the lines to suit and to fit a "rhyme" and a "poem".
It is a poem yes... but... BUT.. well... BUT

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Subnerubian
Sunday, 9 December 2018 (1 day ago)

Thank you for your feedback. I look forward to seeing your work too. :)

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