Phoenix

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Date: February 20, 2018 (7 months ago)


Let me die even just for now
Let me die that everything
Will shutdown
Let me die that I may not feel
Nor see, nor hear
Let me die, and burn
That i may turn
Into ashes
Incognito, irrelevant, nothingness
From nothingness then I shall rise
Like a Phoenix
Little by little, I shall have
My glorious wings
My flurry of feathers
and my tea...

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unit01
February 20, 2018 (7 months ago)

All those words when you could say ctrl atl del

Allow me.

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gary_lising
February 20, 2018 (7 months ago)

Too slow of me unit ;) thanks for reading

life is beautiful!!

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starst1949
February 21, 2018 (7 months ago)

the death-like solitude   with the  darkness embracing you,  healing your hurt, easing your pain, mending your broken spirit until you are ready to face the dawning of the new light.

nice  emo....just be sure to rise from the ashes of your excess baggage and not wallow in self pity.

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gary_lising
February 21, 2018 (7 months ago)

Thanks sir ! It seems that for me recognition of my emotion is my catharsis. And today is a new day. Thanks again for your kind words.

life is beautiful!!

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SeniorCitizen50
February 21, 2018 (7 months ago)

Haaaaaaaiiisstt.....at muli nagparamdam ang Lising

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gary_lising
February 21, 2018 (7 months ago)

And I did... thanks for dropping by SC...

life is beautiful!!

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daddijames
February 21, 2018 (7 months ago)

from the ashes you will rise......

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gary_lising
February 21, 2018 (7 months ago)

Thanks daddijames

life is beautiful!!

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angeleyes.sky
February 25, 2018 (7 months ago)

Shutdown for a moment. Nice poem sis damang dama ko i love it 😇

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gary_lising
February 25, 2018 (7 months ago)

Thanks angel! I’m glad you like it..

life is beautiful!!

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frozenwars
March 1, 2018 (7 months ago)

sounds like "leave me alone for a while and I will be okay tomorrow"

By the time you learn the rules of life, you’re too old to play the game.

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gary_lising
March 2, 2018 (7 months ago)

Well to be ok after what seems to ba devastation . Thanks for reading

life is beautiful!!

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User Not Found
March 13, 2018 (7 months ago)

"...we started dying the moment we are born.. " dunno san ko narinig yan na movie.. recent lang yun .. i'd check my browser history..

die for now and be reborn anew .. nice ink.

"Virtual is like everything else. Assume nothing. Only then can you truly see what you're dealing with." - Quellcrist Falconer , Altered Carbon

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gary_lising
March 16, 2018 (7 months ago)

Yeah Paul.. being dismembered from a source of life is dying... yet able to Survive.. better to acknowledge the loss than forever search for what has vanished.. thanks for reading

life is beautiful!!

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User Not Found
March 16, 2018 (7 months ago)

ha ???  LOL

"Virtual is like everything else. Assume nothing. Only then can you truly see what you're dealing with." - Quellcrist Falconer , Altered Carbon

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