Oblivion

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Poem: English · Categories: Non-Erotic · Tags: , ,
Date: September 11, 2014 (4 years ago)


So this was the deal
One day I'll set you free
You'll call and say
"I did it I did it
I finally did it
He asked me
I said yes
I'll make it perfect"
Your voice giddy with excitement
Oh you will
Of course you will
I'll say
Smiling bravely through my tears
And you'll get dressed
And dazzle him with your wit
And I'll be home
While he drink in your beauty
Your night would be perfect
Mine would be hell
But you wouldn't know it
You'd call
Still basking in the rays of his perfection
And say
"I'm so happy
We're meant to be
I want to marry him
But wait
How was your night?
What did you do?"
It was fine
I'...

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The mind maybe the center of all your thoughts, but your heart is the reason for all your actions.

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somebodyuused2know
September 11, 2014 (4 years ago)

Painfully hit home. :-( Kudos.

I'M A NICE PERSON. JUST DON'T PRESS THE BITCH BUTTON.

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erosdvirus2015
September 11, 2014 (4 years ago)

Thanks..based on experience :(

The mind maybe the center of all your thoughts, but your heart is the reason for all your actions.

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CatchMeIfUCan
September 11, 2014 (4 years ago)

Ouch... what a pity. Another poem that falls under the category of what ifs and might have beens...  saklap bro. Time heals all wounds ika nga. Time will come you'll get over her and find someone better..

Carpe diem

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MidLifeCrisis
September 11, 2014 (4 years ago)

What's the "deal" with the deal? Why did you have to let her go?

Wala lang, napaisip lang... Medyo naka-relate kasi ako sa pain :(

Nice one, eros...

Welcum to FSS and welcum to the writers' club :)

And.I.Care.Not.

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erosdvirus2015
September 11, 2014 (4 years ago)

Thanks. We already broke up and decided to be friends. That's the problem with lovers becoming friends. I just wanted to be civil and at the same time would want sana to have a good relationship with exes. But the pain was unbearable pala if you still love her.

The mind maybe the center of all your thoughts, but your heart is the reason for all your actions.

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iamcarla
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September 11, 2014 (4 years ago)

kalurkey ang ganyang feeling...;(

Anything worth having for is worth waiting for.., even it takes a lifetime.

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