Manatili Kang Magandang Ala-ala

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Poem: Tagalog · Categories: Erotic · Tags:
Date: March 21, 2018 (6 months ago)


Huwag ka munang lumingon, pinagmamasdan pa kita
Kinakabisado ko lang naman bawat sulok ng iyong mukha,
Napabuntong hininga, napapikit mata... jusko! mahal na nga kita
Napangiti nalang ako nung pagdilat ko nakatingin ka na.

Mga tingin na yan na para kong nilulunod sa kilig,
Mga tingin na yan na para kong inangat at nilaglag din sa sahig,
Dahil sa mga tingin na yan wala akong maaninag na pag-ibig
Kaya pasensya, tinaboy kita dahil di makita maging parte ka ng aking daigdig.

Huwag mag-alala di ko hinihiling mahalin mo rin ako,
Ni hindi ko nga gusto may sambitin mga labi mo,
Kaya pwede makinig ka nalang at hayaan mo ako,
Hayaan akong makuntentong pagmasdan ka ng ilang segundo.

Ilang segundo na puno lang ng biruan at saya,
Pagtingin ko sayo'y pakisantabi mo muna at 'wag patulan pa
Hayaang maging maligaya sa pansamantalang kasama ka
Dahil sa ganitong paraan... Sa ganitong paraan kita gustong m...

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YankumiOh
March 21, 2018 (6 months ago)

Babygirl, I can't hold back my tears. Hahaha Sapul na sapul eh. Salamat sobra!  Salamat!

"People my age can afford a spontaneous travel to Thailand. While I can't even afford a spontaneous soft pretzel." (c) to the owner

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cunTrina01
March 21, 2018 (6 months ago)

Ayeeeeee! I'm glad you like it :) no biggie ate. You're welcome. Mwaaah

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YankumiOh
March 21, 2018 (6 months ago)

Salamat sobra! I appreciate it so so much. muwah

"People my age can afford a spontaneous travel to Thailand. While I can't even afford a spontaneous soft pretzel." (c) to the owner

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cunTrina01
March 21, 2018 (6 months ago)

:*

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starst1949
March 21, 2018 (6 months ago)

"remember him this way.."

as always great  play with words...it touches the heart, reaches the soul....thanks for sharing.

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cunTrina01
March 21, 2018 (6 months ago)

Aww. I appreciate it. Glad you like it sir :)

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gary_lising
March 21, 2018 (6 months ago)

sweet cuntrina.. write more poems pls

life is beautiful!!

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cunTrina01
March 22, 2018 (6 months ago)

Kilig here ate :) will do.... thank you

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sexymom07
March 22, 2018 (6 months ago)

Ang sweet.....  Ang gandaaaaaa..

Bet ko yung "hwag kang mag alala di ko hinihiling na akoy mahalin mo rin...

Im a sweet person n sincere to be ur real friends....

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cunTrina01
March 22, 2018 (6 months ago)

Ayeee.. thank you mama! Loveyou.

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BoboyAlega
March 22, 2018 (6 months ago)

+1

Carpe Diem

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cunTrina01
March 22, 2018 (6 months ago)

Thanks alulod :)

Smile :)

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Rex_Jones
March 22, 2018 (6 months ago)

It's never easy to write a poem based on someone else's story. Even more challenging for that someone to give a feedback and give a comment that every word is perfect on the dot. Well it's never easy for most... but our Author here just proven time and again that her talent is far from our expectations. As always, readers are never short of being awed at the end of every read. Thank u ;) Looking forward for more to come!

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cunTrina01
March 22, 2018 (6 months ago)

Can't help smiling while reading your comment... thank you again for the effort in putting lengthy and detailed comment :)

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User Not Found
March 22, 2018 (6 months ago)

Not until I read your comment.

"Virtual is like everything else. Assume nothing. Only then can you truly see what you're dealing with." - Quellcrist Falconer , Altered Carbon

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cunTrina01
March 22, 2018 (6 months ago)

What comment po?

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