I Wish I Could Die (Hyperbole of Living)

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Date: April 16, 2018 (5 months ago)


I wish I could die and live as an air,
Without feeling hurt i can bump everywhere.
I wish i could die and live as a rose,
Appreciated at its simplicity without making a pose.

I wish i could die and live as a feather,
No matter what object it will be compared to, it will still weigh lighter
I wish i could die and live as an ocean,
Feeling no pain as it crashes the sand.

But no

I am still alive, breathing...
There are instances that i could've died but i continued living.
I cannot die while the world covers its ears,
As well as I want to witness individuals to overcome their fears.

Silently, i sit at the corner watching the sun disappear,
Understanding untold stories as i drink a beer,
Hearing people judge while they wash their hands
As to the tune of pretension they dance.

So no,

I need not to die to witness evolution,
Though i could have upon meeting depression.
Rather than end up defining the line between reality and fantasy,
I looked at the options life can offer; ending the pain and hostility,

Or

I can be an air,
Which anyone can breathe to, without dare.
I can be a rose,
Looking beautiful in a crowd no matter who host.

I can be a feather,
With a heart that can be lighten with a prayer.
I can be an ocean,
That can watch the sun rest as the day is gone....

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User Not Found
April 16, 2018 (5 months ago)

Well-thought poetry.. Deep and dark allegory... and I like it !  I saw what you did there with the structure and the word-plays..  I'm amused !

*winks*

"Virtual is like everything else. Assume nothing. Only then can you truly see what you're dealing with." - Quellcrist Falconer , Altered Carbon

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cunTrina01
April 17, 2018 (5 months ago)

Awww. Salamat. Glad you like it :)

Smile :)

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starst1949
April 17, 2018 (5 months ago)

isa ka sa mga sa mga mabibilang sa daliri ng mga manunulat dito ng mga tula.

Malalim man o mababaw ay sadyang makahulugan at  makabuluhan .

thought-provoking.....

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cunTrina01
April 17, 2018 (5 months ago)

Thank you po :) that means a lot

Smile :)

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layo_edad
April 17, 2018 (5 months ago)

Ang galing... nakakaantig ng puso at isip.

Bakit nga ba kailangan mabuhay kung tila paghihirap lang mararanasan at mararamdaman? Buti pa maging hangin... d man nakikita, nakakarating kahit saan, malaya.. at higit na importante kesa sa isang nilalang na nabubuhay nga ngunit para ano... para saan... para kanino?

Hehehe, ganda cunTrina01 :)

If life's a joke, then why aren't you laughing :))

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User Not Found
April 17, 2018 (5 months ago)

humugot ka na naman dyan Melencio..  lalo mo ginulo dati ko nang magulong isip .. di ko na sana binasa comment mo . sumakit ulo ko lalo... hahahaha

"Virtual is like everything else. Assume nothing. Only then can you truly see what you're dealing with." - Quellcrist Falconer , Altered Carbon

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cunTrina01
April 17, 2018 (5 months ago)

Ayeeeee. Salamat uncle :)

Smile :)

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cunTrina01
April 17, 2018 (5 months ago)

Para kanino ka nga ba bumabangon? Haha

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Pusanggala
April 19, 2018 (5 months ago)

Tol englishy yung tula, sinagot mo sana in englishy hahaha..
Anyway dugo ilong ko.

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cunTrina01
April 19, 2018 (5 months ago)

Loko ka PG. Haha

Smile :)

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RoashDf
April 17, 2018 (5 months ago)

Wala pa yata akong nababasang poem mo na hindi ako naapektuhan. Mahusay ka talaga ate ger. Lahat ng sulat mo siksik, liglig, umaapaw ang feels kaya kita favorite. Pagpatuloy mo lang, you inspire me a lot. ☺️💛💛

Hey there, smile! 💛

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cunTrina01
April 17, 2018 (5 months ago)

Pressure here na bebe ger. Haha
Awwww. For readers to feel whatever I'm trying to express... that's always my goal, guess it's achieved. Thank you!

Smile :)

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BoboyAlega
April 17, 2018 (5 months ago)

Dream, Believe, Survive.... +1 as usual Marj!

Carpe Diem

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cunTrina01
April 18, 2018 (5 months ago)

Starstruck! Salamat alulod :)

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sexymom07
April 18, 2018 (5 months ago)

I wish iwish iwish..... Ang gnda na talented pa....Galing... 😘

Im a sweet person n sincere to be ur real friends....

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cunTrina01
April 18, 2018 (5 months ago)

Awwww. Mana sayo mama na maganda😘

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sexymom07
April 19, 2018 (5 months ago)

Sssshhhhh  bka sugurin ako ng mga fans  mo magalit pag cnbi mong mana ka sa akin... Ha ha ha
More  poem pa...

Im a sweet person n sincere to be ur real friends....

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cunTrina01
April 19, 2018 (5 months ago)

Hehehehe hanapin k ma. Papaautograph sayo. Char!

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somebodyuused2know
April 18, 2018 (5 months ago)

I love the hope and the positivity, the willingness to beat the odds. To put it in a nutshell, it's telling us that life happens and it brings with it some shit,  doesn't mean thou we can't flush 'em.

Amazing mind you got there.

I'M A NICE PERSON. JUST DON'T PRESS THE BITCH BUTTON.

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cunTrina01
April 18, 2018 (5 months ago)

Hihi Thank you po :)

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User Not Found
April 18, 2018 (5 months ago)

We will.survive

Ako'y para kay Alejandro

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cunTrina01
April 18, 2018 (5 months ago)

thanks for dropping by.

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layo_edad
April 19, 2018 (5 months ago)

Ipost ko sana kaso naunahan ako.. kaya dito nalang hehe

Life Is Overrated

.
We only got one life
That's it! You cant live another
Live it to the fullest
'Cause we cant live forever

But for what cause?
To strive for greatness.. for success?
Or to be happy.., be content?
And die... nonetheless

Do we have a purpose,
In this, supposed to be, paradise?
Or just passing by
Like sunset, like sunrise?

Dont you think life is overrated
Especially, if youre living for yourself
But we're here.. we have to do what we gotta do
And what ever faith you have,  dont forget to seek for "His" help

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Inspired by a thought provoking poem by cunTrina01 :)

If life's a joke, then why aren't you laughing :))

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User Not Found
April 19, 2018 (5 months ago)

This daydream musings deserve to be posted.
On its own and be bloody murdered
Oh I'm so prepared to have this piece slighted
Dissect every inch and leave nothing uncovered.

Nice one LE !

"Virtual is like everything else. Assume nothing. Only then can you truly see what you're dealing with." - Quellcrist Falconer , Altered Carbon

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SeniorCitizen50
April 19, 2018 (5 months ago)

Uhum si Melencio humihiret hugot nanaman

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cunTrina01
April 19, 2018 (5 months ago)

Isa pa to. Kaibigan ng kayo ni paul. Haha pero sayo understood kase may nauna nagpost :)
Another comment that deserves an entry.

Glad that you were inspired with this life realization ink :) nakakatuwa naman uncle...  thank you

Smile :)

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cunTrina01
April 19, 2018 (5 months ago)

Nga*... typo nu ba yan. Nagalak masyado magcomment. Abangan ko mga sulat niyo magkaibigan

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User Not Found
April 19, 2018 (5 months ago)

I know that trademark though.. The last lines.. Oh well .. Too full well..

"Virtual is like everything else. Assume nothing. Only then can you truly see what you're dealing with." - Quellcrist Falconer , Altered Carbon

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