Her Share of Ghost

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Date: August 8, 2015 (3 years ago)


her share of ghost

do you know the mystery of a girl in misery?
who's afraid of a ghost who rendered her weary.
her looks is divine, in a truely angelic face,
she carry herself nice, but come a day, she lost her grace.

there was once a time she held dear, this bud,
so precious that if lost, her mom would be mad,
her looks is divine, the times of girlie craze,
she carried herself nice, but lost her subtle ways.

heavy eyes went close on her first ever lip kiss,
she was delirious and lost, hence, started to miss,
a fine hand's sweet caress on her young delicate breast,
as she fill her memory with lies of a drowned protest.

then a kiss trailed from neck down to her nipples
like a delicious toss in a steady wave of ripples,
somebody's licked her bosom, tho she wont let,
she tried to carry herself nice, but way down she got wet.

A hand tickled her legs, crawled to a first touch,
on to something between her legs that itched no match,
she's never been unsure as fine fingers frolicked her core,
if she can carry her loins wise in such tormenting pleasure.

her weary legs trembled, she can't keep it closed,
as a probing tongue licked her midst, her mind got lost,
she looked divine while her groin shoots in fiery spasm,
as she cry and bury her nails tight, she convulsed to orgasm.

well, this is the misery of the girl in the story,
who's afraid of her ghost, she's almost teary,
tho her looks is divine, she's in a fighting rage,
and she tries to overcome her ghost with prayers and courage.

but who knows? and who cares?
just as where the wind blows your hair,
whether every girl w...

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graccubus
August 8, 2015 (3 years ago)

many girls possess her own share of "ghost".  they maybe are afraid of it...

but some are strong... they just leave it behind.

some fight... upfront!  how about you?...

if you frequent fss...you have less time for sex...unless, you're in it now...

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User Not Found
August 8, 2015 (3 years ago)

Hirap sabihin sa tagalog eh. Mahirap kasi pag ganitong klaseng "multo" ang haharapin ng mga babae. Laging may posibilidad na hindi maging katanggap-tanggap para sa isang lipunan na katulad ng sa atin. Laging may banta na tataasan ng kilay. Pagtsitsimisan. Huhusgahan. More than the sexual restraints,  those I guess are the more scarier "ghosts" almost every woman would have to face. Improving yata ang comments ko ah, pansin ko lang hihihi.

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graccubus
August 8, 2015 (3 years ago)

thank you, for the comment, and the length too...

actually, i'm afraid to publish this poem because of the fss restrictions...[must be 18 or
above] you see i mentioned "girl" and by interpretaion her age could be in teens or much younger...

but "woman" or "female" i feel would diminish the impact to the readers.

i don't have any further purpose but to bring some enlightenment or discernment of this "ghost" that some women face but, somehow we just don't care about their feelings. tho i think  i could be right to think that they[subject] may have derive some lesson or knowledge from these experiences  and probably sexual pleasure and gratitude of discovery of an entirely new sensation in their body that points to guilt hence, the "ghost".

and the last part is some form of salute to brave girls carrying this ghosts but was able to overcome by relying on their own efforts.

i can see from your comment you have a clear perception of the poem. thank you.

if you frequent fss...you have less time for sex...unless, you're in it now...

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User Not Found
August 9, 2015 (3 years ago)

Correction po: more scarier hihihi. Wrong comparative degree. Dapat scarier lang hihihi. Need ko ikorek baka masoplak ako ng grammar nazis dito hihihi.

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August 8, 2015 (3 years ago)

Hirap sa english kaya sa tagalog ako. Paano naging multo ito sa isang babae, eh lalo kung nag-eenjoy naman siya? Nasarapan pa nga. Saka baka di lang iisang beses niyang gagawin yung multong kinakatakutan niya. Tapos na ang dekada maria clara, tapos na ang virginity issue..sa panahon ngayon, grade one na lang ang siguradong babantayan mo, para sure virgin siya paglaki niya..

Wake up, girls. Di yun ghost,  kung ghost man yun, aba masarap siya hulihin!

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graccubus
August 8, 2015 (3 years ago)

i know you may not believe that somehow i expect this kind of comment.  because me, myself have this opinion until i discovered someone having this ghost in her life.  you're right again... it is a "delicious" experience to some.  however, with this poem i wanted to address some "girls" who are going thru this dilemma.  but what inspired me really to write this poem is her courage to fight amidst her fear and guilt.

thanks bro...

this "masarap siya hulihin" really made me laugh.

if you frequent fss...you have less time for sex...unless, you're in it now...

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antoinette
August 9, 2015 (3 years ago)

In my case, my ghost was more on the conflict between what I was taught was right (lust is one of the deadliest sin so it must be restrained) as against the urges of sex that I feel.  I actually grew up feeling guilty after every time I relieved myself.  Strictly speaking premarital sex, adultery, fornication, etc. are all sins.  My guilt stopped after I experienced sex for real. The guy patiently waited for me to be ready and explained that sex is as natural as breathing.  I felt silly feeling guilty when the guy was thoroughly enjoying the deed and was having fun.  Since more than half of my brain is composed of sex, I kind of separated religion and sex.

i wanna run to you... ohhhh

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graccubus
August 9, 2015 (3 years ago)

how are you friend!  i hit the fss keys again...

i believe you conquered this ghost in your life already.  if ever there were left, it should be few traces to the most by now.  what is remarkable or commendable if we could say so, is the slow process of "killing" this ghost and finally embracing it as part of a life plan.  it is just unfortunate for others that this started as a trauma, or shock but i imagine that the healing process would be lovely and enjoyable if given a proper perspective coupled with learning and thereby, acceptance.

you're now more of a "ghostbuster" than a victim... this, i believe.

but, listen... can there be a separation of church and sex when they always say "oh my god!" when they're cumming?   ---just a thought ha-ha!

if you frequent fss...you have less time for sex...unless, you're in it now...

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antoinette
August 9, 2015 (3 years ago)

Happy to see your old handle again and your erotic poem my dear friend.  I hope you make your presence felt more often.

You are right, it is difficult not to pray after reaching the gates of heaven.

i wanna run to you... ohhhh

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