From Heavens To Oblivion

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Date: February 16, 2016 (2 years ago)


Along the epoch of thy acquaintance
Triggered a ripple on my continuum
a weight beyond infinite balance
Whisper you at may
Sending chills to thy momentum

Yet beyond the passage
your naked body echoed my sight
Yearning for more
beyond thy grasp of air
Eagerly awaiting my heavens delight

Just as I was about to give up
You opened with a moan
tremors reverberate my ear
After a frenzy of ecstasies
Echoed along my shaft to thy moon

But each heaven
seemed harder to grasp
Count be the days
Of yonder flight
Teasing eager flowers like a wasp

And now as I look at my back
Pains the skies, offered thy rant
Agonized as it slowly fades to black
Counting my fingers
Either at you, but I cant

Slowly aching
I bid my pa...

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owlzen
February 16, 2016 (2 years ago)

who-o-o .. who-o-o
very spontaneous...just a few minutes finished agad 'thumbs up'
gee you made me pee with your poem bro...
need to change my diaper muna...
ahahahaha :)))))

nocturnal coffee...

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recoil03
February 16, 2016 (2 years ago)

hahaha ang bilis din ng comment... It was our "heavens" topic a few minutes ago that sparked the idea for the poem... I've been wanting to try to write a poem here on FSS but based on real situation that I've been through here on FSS hehehe...

By the way bro, you need to see you doctor about the diaper issue hahaha :P

Thank you

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chubby_horny
February 16, 2016 (2 years ago)

Applause , applause Sir Recoil03.. 👏👏👏
Heaven's Delight. (Naiimagine ko na naman ang Ave Maria)

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recoil03
February 17, 2016 (2 years ago)

Chubby_horny thank you... Dapat ko na talaga eh sulat ang Ave Maria na yan hehehe :P soon...

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chubby_horny
February 19, 2016 (2 years ago)

aabangan ko yung Ave Maria.

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safari
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February 17, 2016 (2 years ago)

Confetti for your first poem Recoil!

Memoirs was thy acknowledged
A room for loneliness was provided in the end
But surely the eager flowers had left its scent
And into your head i guess it stained.
Nice poem sir! :)

Call me a curse or just call me blessed. If you can't handle my worst, you ain't getting my best.

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recoil03
February 17, 2016 (2 years ago)

Thank you maam safari... :D

It was just something out of the blue... Spontaneous...

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sincereLIAR
February 17, 2016 (2 years ago)

Ang ganda po...

Kahit di ko naintindihan hahaha at least honest ako diba mahirap naman magkunyari :P

Binasa ko...nagandahan ako sa tunog hahaha madulas bigkasin  eh kaya cge 👍👍
Kwento mo na lang sakin mamaya ang story sa likod ng poem na to :)

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recoil03
February 17, 2016 (2 years ago)

hahahaha Salamat sa pag appreciate sa tunog hehehe :D

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Layla-L.
February 17, 2016 (2 years ago)

Shakespeare of fss, ikaw ba yan?
Ganda promise.
Yung message malinaw
Kahit yung words nakaka-nosebleed.
4 thumbs up (damay ko na rin yung sa katabi ko)
How's your eyes btw?

Cogito, ergo, sum.

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recoil03
February 17, 2016 (2 years ago)

Thank you for that Layla-L... My eye is a bit fine na...

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pilyangpasaway
February 17, 2016 (2 years ago)

Poetic ka po rin pala.... Tagus sa laman ko parang ang lalim ng hugot mo sir lol... But it as nice poem sir :)

You never know how Strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have.

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recoil03
February 17, 2016 (2 years ago)

Ewan ko what happened maam Pilyangpasaway at bigla naging peotic ako hehehe... Thank you po...

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Trixxie_Belle2
February 18, 2016 (2 years ago)

Lucky  muse.  It  takes a lot,  or something special to be one.

Teka  lang,  wala pala akong  naintindihan :)

When an Angel drops her wings.... Heaven is not far behind.

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recoil03
February 19, 2016 (2 years ago)

echus nito as if... :P hehehehe thanks Trixxie_belle2 at nag log in ka muli sa FSS just to comment :D

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Trixxie_Belle2
February 20, 2016 (2 years ago)

Aba,  you seem pleased.  Glad   to see you're  having a ball of a time.  

Ikaw  na  inspired  uy  :)

When an Angel drops her wings.... Heaven is not far behind.

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YankumiOh
February 18, 2016 (2 years ago)

Props! :-)5

"People my age can afford a spontaneous travel to Thailand. While I can't even afford a spontaneous soft pretzel." (c) to the owner

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recoil03
February 19, 2016 (2 years ago)

Props? what does that mean maam YankumiOh?

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YankumiOh
February 19, 2016 (2 years ago)

Parang kudos. Di ako sure. Hehehehe

"People my age can afford a spontaneous travel to Thailand. While I can't even afford a spontaneous soft pretzel." (c) to the owner

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dee27
March 21, 2016 (2 years ago)

this is torture!.. hahaha

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