Distance

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Poem: English · Categories: Non-Erotic · Tags:
Date: September 10, 2014 (4 years ago)


You are there -
sitting in the corner,
absorbed with your work.

While I gaze -
at lost in your beauty
enthralled by your presence.

You are there -
few feet away
just so near -
...

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I'm a mutant, I have two heads: one up, the other one down. Now, the question is: Which head is bigger?
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darkcipher
September 10, 2014 (4 years ago)

hehe. . . asymptote!

nice.

"The character's attitude is more important than plot." - Stephen J. Cannell

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LibrongUod
September 11, 2014 (4 years ago)

Definitely asymptote. Haha.

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Mr.M
September 10, 2014 (4 years ago)

Ano?Lapitan mo na kasi.Yan tuloy hirap kang magsabi.

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LibrongUod
September 11, 2014 (4 years ago)

Hmmm...

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a.bit.innocent
September 11, 2014 (4 years ago)

"so near yet so far..."

Why does it always have to be like that????? lol. hahaha Lagi nalang eh... tsk tsk tsk..

Sometimes my alone time is for your own safety

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LibrongUod
September 11, 2014 (4 years ago)

Because of REASONS. Pinipigilan natin ang ating mga sarili to bridge the gap because of certain reasons.

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CatchMeIfUCan
September 11, 2014 (4 years ago)

Hmmm saklap...why does it always have to be another " what if"?

Carpe diem

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LibrongUod
September 11, 2014 (4 years ago)

Because we're afraid. :(

I Master, I Universalize, I Believe.

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User Not Found
September 11, 2014 (4 years ago)

NIce, lolo... captcha = art (aba, dictator na si captcha, lol)

“I'm a fool to become a writer. My only compensation is absolute freedom. I've no master except my own soul, and that, I'm sure, is why I do it.” (R. Dahl)

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LibrongUod
September 11, 2014 (4 years ago)

Hehe. Thanks. ;)

I Master, I Universalize, I Believe.

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Jazmine
September 11, 2014 (4 years ago)

So ganon na lang?..." So near yet so far" na lang ang peg?

Tsk tsk.....

Hayyssttt....brad kapag ka ganyan lagi nganga ang labas mo...
Dapat sabihin mo na agad ang nafefeel mo...walang kemi kemi...mapupunta lang yan sa kangkungan....hahahaha
Kaya kapag mahal mo yung tao sabihin mo mahal mo sya..
Kasi sayang naman kapag di mo sinabi nasasaloob mo....na mahal mo sya.....malay mo mahal ka din pala nung taong yun..naghihintay lang din sya sayo...diba?
At tama wag matakot na mawala..atleast sinubukan mo...mas malala pa sa frustration ng feeling na natalo dahil hindi lumaban o sinubukan... :)

"You don't get to choose if you get hurt in this world...but you do have some say in who hurts you"

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LibrongUod
September 11, 2014 (4 years ago)

I agree. It's easier said than done though. Kaso in a relationship na siya eh.

I Master, I Universalize, I Believe.

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Eroticus
September 11, 2014 (4 years ago)

There are plenty of fish in the ocean. Especially sa isang uod like you, madali kang makakabingwit ika nga.

Ang problema lang kasi, yung isda na nakita mo, nasilo na ng pamingwit ng iba. It's  best to let go of her and find other fishes. Now kung siya mismo ang umalis sa bingwit sa kanya, then it is fairplay. Lam ko naman dude na nilulugar mo yung sarili mo and that's a good thing. Walang masamang humanga. Ilagay lang ang sarili sa lugar.

Do what you love and the rest will fall in its place.

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LibrongUod
September 11, 2014 (4 years ago)

Thanks for the advice. :)

I Master, I Universalize, I Believe.

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Eroticus
September 11, 2014 (4 years ago)

ganda ng post mo libro :) btw, it's so ramdam.

Maigsi pero puno ng emosyon.

Do what you love and the rest will fall in its place.

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LibrongUod
September 11, 2014 (4 years ago)

Produkto yan ng night shift duty ko. LOL. Walang magawa, and then the idea just popped out. Nakita ko kasi siya eh. So, ayun, I went to one of the computers and typed what I am feeling.

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shobe.sheen
September 11, 2014 (4 years ago)

Here, you can utilize your crawling ability to its full potential, Sliced. Haha :)) go na! ;)

Imperfect understanding is often more dangerous than ignorance.

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LibrongUod
September 11, 2014 (4 years ago)

Haha, as if naman gusto kong maging third party sa isang relationship. Ayoko nga. :P

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shobe.sheen
September 11, 2014 (4 years ago)

Oh, so she's in a relationship na pala. Tsk. Yeah, for that, your poem's aptly written. Sad but, yeah, keep distance. -_-

Captcha: noosed

OMG. Bad suggestion, captcha. Bad. Haha:))

Imperfect understanding is often more dangerous than ignorance.

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LibrongUod
September 11, 2014 (4 years ago)

Hehe. Pero, malay mo naman, bigla silang maghiwalay. LOL.

Ikaw na lang kaya? Tutal single ka naman. Hahahaha. Just kidding.

Hindi ka naman nananakit kapag naiinis, ano? Baka kasi saktan mo ako. Haha.

I Master, I Universalize, I Believe.

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shobe.sheen
September 11, 2014 (4 years ago)

Wag ka namang magwish na maghiwalay sila. :D

Hmmm. Baka pag nainis ako i-slice kita into cubes and ipasok sa juicer? juiced uod. Yumyum. Haha eeeww

Donr fret, i'll let you know if my wildcard. Hahaha:))

Imperfect understanding is often more dangerous than ignorance.

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shobe.sheen
September 11, 2014 (4 years ago)

*Don't fret

Imperfect understanding is often more dangerous than ignorance.

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LibrongUod
September 11, 2014 (4 years ago)

Tapos iinumin mo yung juice uod, and then, we are finally ONE? Bound forever as ONE? Haha.

Never mind my application. LOL. Alam ko naman I'm not your type. :))

I Master, I Universalize, I Believe.

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Mr.M
September 11, 2014 (4 years ago)

Ayun...Uod if you don't want to be the 3rd in theirs then its best to stop.Way I see it karma happens.So best to be distant yet if you can't help it then I wish all the luck that fate be kind and not let it happen.

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shobe.sheen
September 11, 2014 (4 years ago)

Hahaha seems like deja vu huh. :))

Just be patient. In time you'll find her. By her, i meant the right girl. ;)

Imperfect understanding is often more dangerous than ignorance.

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LibrongUod
September 11, 2014 (4 years ago)

I'll take note of that. :)

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Eroticus
September 11, 2014 (4 years ago)

Tama sis.

Keep Distance. Do the right thing.

Hindi naman lahat ng gusto natin o attracted tayo, pwede na nating kunin, lalo pa yung mga taken na. That behavior separates us from savage creatures.

Do what you love and the rest will fall in its place.

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shobe.sheen
September 11, 2014 (4 years ago)

Indeed, kuyth. We are rational beings. Apart from id, we also have ego and superego which enable us to set aside irrational impulses. :)

Imperfect understanding is often more dangerous than ignorance.

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LibrongUod
September 11, 2014 (4 years ago)

Shobe, may banat ako. Since you're into Psychology, here's my lines.

You must be tired, because you’ve been running through my passive-aggressive-libido-suppressed mind all night.


BOOM!

LOL.

:P

I Master, I Universalize, I Believe.

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shobe.sheen
September 11, 2014 (4 years ago)

BOOM!

Pwede. Good, good. Although, be reminded that in it's truest sense, libido is not confined to sexual drive alone. It's basically one's driving force in almost everything.

But nontheless, thumbs up. I'd really be impressed if its not plagiarized. ;)

Imperfect understanding is often more dangerous than ignorance.

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LibrongUod
September 11, 2014 (4 years ago)

It is plagiarized. Hahaha. :P Sorry to disappoint.

I'm no psychologist eh. LOL.

I Master, I Universalize, I Believe.

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shobe.sheen
September 11, 2014 (4 years ago)

Hahaha :))

I admire your honesty. A good quality that your future girl would definitely appreciate. ;)

Imperfect understanding is often more dangerous than ignorance.

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LibrongUod
September 11, 2014 (4 years ago)

And I expect the same quality with her. ;)

I Master, I Universalize, I Believe.

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