a dream cum thru

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Poem: English · Categories: Non-Erotic · Tags:
Date: June 6, 2014 (4 years ago)


some women feel the guilt during a d-i-y
that becomes a barrier to cum
i wish this poem can help...

dream cum thru

i dreamed of falling...
...of falling in love,
a kind of longing,
a pain, a throb.

nearly believing,
i'm with you, making love,
dizzy, wet and soaking,
crazy over kneading my bud.

while pleasure is mounting,
and breaking a moan,
suddenly, all mean nothin'
i'm cummin' along...ooh...

...

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somebodyuused2know
June 6, 2014 (4 years ago)

Whoa! This should be posted under the erotic category Sir. Super like.

I'M A NICE PERSON. JUST DON'T PRESS THE BITCH BUTTON.

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User Not Found
June 6, 2014 (4 years ago)

nice, sir G... tama si sis some, you may categorize it now as erotic poem... : )

"The erotic is rarely nudity. It is subtle, a feeling, a gesture, mood, a story frozen in the moment that holds you breathless waiting for the next moment. Understand this & you understand erotic."

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MidLifeCrisis
June 6, 2014 (4 years ago)

Welcum back, graccubus.. Been a while since you posted an erotic poem...

I third the motion to move this to the erotic category ;)

And.I.Care.Not.

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Fiction-Factory
June 6, 2014 (4 years ago)

welcum back poet! We miss you here! Cheers! :)

To be honest, i'm a liar. ♥♞♬♂⚄☜†∇

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daffodil
June 6, 2014 (4 years ago)

Sir G for galing!:)

"I prefer to be crazy and happy rather than normal and bitter" -Paulo Coelho

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graccubus
June 6, 2014 (4 years ago)

it took me a little longer posting this...

my mouse kept hitting double-click...i didn't see it jumped to non-erotic.

and i don't keep a herd of mouse...so, it's time to buy a new one...

to the readers, so, if you feel some eroticism, its because it should be categorized as..

erotic.

thank you.

if you frequent fss...you have less time for sex...unless, you're in it now...

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antoinette
June 6, 2014 (4 years ago)

Dear graccubus this is a good work of art as usual.. i do feel ashamed sometimes doing it, started since 6 years old.... i dont know why... but it is the best, mind blowing, incomparable O ever (nobody can do it better for me).  The act itself is so tastefully and delicately described in your poem.  I have a similar poem ...  someday will publish it.  You are so back. I have lots of mouse here.  I cannot survive without a good mouse.  So I have 4 spares.

i wanna run to you... ohhhh

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Aboitiz
June 6, 2014 (4 years ago)

Napaisip lang ako on guilt during diy... It is comparable in a mouse keep ok doulble clicking... In a way... Parang yung guilt yung barrier on diy thing... And the mouse on posting.. Hehehe.. Nice poem kuya...

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