3 Years Incest Kasama Si Ate

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Confession: True Story, Tagalog · Categories: Taboo · Tags: ,
Date: September 20, 2019 (1 month ago)


Hi,ako si Zenon real name ko 26,si ate Chona kapatid ko 33,tatlong taon na itong incest relationship naming dalawa,mula nung mapadpad ako sa site na to maraming akong nabasa ibat ibang uri ng kwento hanggang nakabasa ako ng incest at doon nagsimula pagnanasa ko kay ate.
Tatlo lang kaming magkakapatid yung isa naming kapatid nasa ibang bansa nagwowork yung mga magulang namin nasa probinsya kaming dalawa lang magkasama dito sa maynila at sa totoo lang para na kaming mag asawa,buong akala ng mga kapitbahay namin mag asawa kami di nila alam magkapatid kami.
Gusto ko sana ikwento pano kami nagsimula ni ate...

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PTmaharot
September 20, 2019 (1 month ago)

kwento kana po...

PTmaharot

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DadiNoli
September 20, 2019 (1 month ago)

sexcited, ma'm? hehehe

carpe diem! make that moment count!

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DadiNoli
September 20, 2019 (1 month ago)

umpisahan mo lang na parang kinukwento mo sa bff mo o ktropa, o kaya gawa k muna ng outline pra guide sa pgksunod.sunod ng istorya mo..

subokan mo ung tatlohan na pattern tulad ng:

1. opening/beginning
2. body of d story
3. closing/ending

..o kaya:

1. background info ng cast of characters
2. 1st sexperience (chapter 1)
3. short intro to 2nd sexperience (chapter 2)
..etc., etc., etc..

huwag mong madaliin..bago mo ipublish ung draft copy mo eh basahin mo muna ng at least 2-3x para makorek mo ung dapat ikorek at bagohin ung dapat bagohin..(pareview mo dn sa Ate para mavalidate niya ung cnulat mo)..hingi ka rin ng POV nya pra dagdag kwento din from her perspective..in her own words din kung maari..

just do it, 'ika nga..write on, brad!

carpe diem! make that moment count!

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cheper
September 20, 2019 (1 month ago)

Way back when I was in college and a writter in our school organ I will never forget the advice that was given to me by one of renown newspaper columnist/editor in our province. He said " always remember this you write to express not to impress" since then it was my guiding principle regardless what was the reason behind my writting. Write as if your expressing yourself to your reader by telling your stories. Hope that helps. Good luck and be waiting for your post. πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€

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Maricar.13
September 22, 2019 (1 month ago)

I hope you won't get offended. Your advice is sound but you committed several errors with what you've replied.

Writter - writer (wrong spelling, probably typo)
Renown - renowned (renown is a noun. In the context of what you've written, you need an adjective which is "renowned")
"...your expressing yourself..." - you're expressing (your is a possessive pronoun)

Peace 😊

Nasa performance yan!

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Puyat21
September 22, 2019 (1 month ago)

Ouch. Ako ung nasaktan para kay kuya haha medyo brutal. Buti nalang sabi ng signature mo nasa performance yan

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Daditi
September 22, 2019 (1 month ago)

Kaya mo yan sir

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vp_15
October 18, 2019 (30 days ago)

Go on lang, try!

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