Posted in Blog: Taglish | Categories: Erotic | Tags: writer, rants, manuscripts, hubad
I've read a number of adequately long stories here. What I mean are chapters that consist of multiple scenes.
I'ts makes me wonder how they - the writers - put a specific pace for each scene wherein it won't be so rigorous that the whole chapter could be one steamy pile of humping on one corner of a room, which brings me to short stories.
Short stories on the other hand, I've read alot of this that makes use of scene by scene chapters. Every chapter is a specific setting, a room, a car, a long conversation somewhere - which always caps off with a loud "Uuummfffpp!".
I've been reading my manuscripts, "Confirm Friend Request #1" for example is an amalgamation of brain-fudging scene jumping horror of a story - FYI: di po horror yung istorya, erotic din po iyon. LOL.
On the otherhand, the prologue "Confirm Friend Request" is a correctly paced single scene structure. Which I would say, is my first and foremost best write-up.
Badtrip lang yung chapter 1, akala ko makakagawa ako ng isang medium sized chapter. ...