Writings about hubad (2)
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Ay, Mani

Submitted by on February 13, 2016 (9 months ago)
Posted in Poem: Tagalog | Categories: Erotic | Tags: , , , ,

ay, mani...

may aleng magmamani nadaan sa amin,
nang aming natanong hindi alam sabihin,
kung paano ang ingles sa maning Malate,
at kung paano sa Latin ang maning Makati.

napilitan kaming sa kanya ipaliwanag,
may mani sa dilim, may mani sa liwanag,
ang mani sa dilim ay malapot at namamasa,
ang mani sa liwanag ay kimi at nahihiya.

napilitan din kaming sa kanya ipagtapat,
may maning hubad na, ang iba'y may balat,
may maning naluto, kulang sa salat,
may kulang sa hugas, sobra ang alat.

sa bandang dulo kami'y nagkatawanan,
nang nadako sa amoy ng mani ang usapan,
may maning ang amoy ay nakapagpapasaya,
may maning ang amoy daw ay nakakadismaya.

mayroon din palang maning pinakatago-tago,
kwarentang taon na, di pa nahipo,
nang unang beses na madilaan,
ala ey, masarap daw, ba't di siya nasabihan?

mayroon mani namang napaaga ang pag-ani,
habang niluluto nagkakanda- ngiwi,
sa mainit na mantika umaangat na ang puwet,
habang idinuduyan ng dilang malupet.

ha-ha! mani pa more...

graccubus original

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Long vs Short ----- Stories

Submitted by on March 3, 2015 (1 year ago)
Posted in Blog: Taglish | Categories: Erotic | Tags: , , ,

Long vs Short ----- StoriesI've read a number of adequately long stories here. What I mean are chapters that consist of multiple scenes.

I'ts makes me wonder how they - the writers - put a specific pace for each scene wherein it won't be so rigorous that the whole chapter could be one steamy pile of humping on one corner of a room, which brings me to short stories.

Short stories on the other hand, I've read alot of this that makes use of scene by scene chapters. Every chapter is a specific setting, a room, a car, a long conversation somewhere - which always caps off with a loud "Uuummfffpp!". laughing

I've been reading my manuscripts, "Confirm Friend Request #1" for example is an amalgamation of brain-fudging scene jumping horror of a story - FYI: di po horror yung istorya, erotic din po iyon. LOL. laughing

On the otherhand, the prologue "Confirm Friend Request" is a correctly paced single scene structure. Which I would say, is my first and foremost best write-up. 

Badtrip lang yung chapter 1, akala ko makakagawa ako ng isang medium sized chapter. html>...

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