What's With You?

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Poem: English · Categories: Erotic · Tags: , , , ,
Date: September 6, 2017 (11 months ago)


What's with you, daughters of Eve?
That sons of Adam crave.
The face of beauty ornamented with smiles,
Could launch a thousand warships across the miles.
Enticing curves enchantingly display
The temptuous challenge to pious' dismay.
The lustful look and luscious lips
Of soft skinned maiden is a welcome bliss.

What's with you, daughters of Eve?
Even sons of God to sin embark.
Contiguous mountains of pleasure
Their peaks promise delight without measure.
Hidden valley of ecstasy between mounds of pleasance
Brings man to the apex of his mountainous passion.

So what's with you daughters of Eve?
That even I do crav...

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"I never saw a wild thing sorry for itself. A small bird will drop frozen dead from a bough without ever having felt sorry for itself." -D. H. Lawrence
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HudasInChains
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September 6, 2017 (11 months ago)

kilala ko si Helen... taga Troy .. kalapit baryo.

Labyu !

"Your Weak Will Won't Help Her Heal Her Heart." - Layne Staley (Alice in Chains)

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socratens
September 7, 2017 (11 months ago)

Korek! Hehehe :D

A wild thing is never sorry

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Akela143
September 7, 2017 (11 months ago)

May talent...hmmm...Isa pa Kuya hahawahan din kita Ng AIDS ko lels...

No inhibition. Less depression.

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loona_chan
September 8, 2017 (11 months ago)

A woman. A wife. A mother. A daughter. A friend.
We can lead a man to destruction or success. Here us roar! :P

If you can't say something nice, say something witty and sarcastic.

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MavyBee
September 8, 2017 (11 months ago)

Don't ever mess with the daughters of Eve

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socratens
September 8, 2017 (11 months ago)

Hehehe... couldn't agree more. ;)

A wild thing is never sorry

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Iammhi35
September 9, 2017 (11 months ago)

It was good...couldnt ask for anything,sexy but not bastos..."The lustful look and luscious lips"dito lang yata ako pumasa hahaha....great job!!!!!

Mhi35

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socratens
September 9, 2017 (11 months ago)

Weeh, I think pumasa ka rin sa ibang part, hehe ;)

A wild thing is never sorry

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sisterchastity
September 9, 2017 (11 months ago)

channeling Frost, Elizabeth Barret Browning with a dash of Edgar Allan Poe? lol, cheers!

CHEERS!

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socratens
September 9, 2017 (11 months ago)

wow. i consider this as a complement. thank you! :D

A wild thing is never sorry

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MsKrump
September 10, 2017 (11 months ago)

Nice piece!

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sincereLIAR
September 13, 2017 (11 months ago)

Whats with me??? Nothing much but fats and kaartehan :)

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starst1949
September 13, 2017 (11 months ago)

SincereLIAR, but you seems to be a woman with a good sense of humor and that's enough for many a good guy.

I still can remember your "tsinelas" story. Lol

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HudasInChains
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September 13, 2017 (11 months ago)

I made her change it (the title).. btw.. Sorry to poop-drop.  XD

"Your Weak Will Won't Help Her Heal Her Heart." - Layne Staley (Alice in Chains)

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sincereLIAR
September 13, 2017 (11 months ago)

Ikr! :p

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sincereLIAR
September 13, 2017 (11 months ago)

Talaga ba? May naging impact naman pala ko kahit pano at kay starst pa na knowing naman ng lahat ang husay at talento sa pagsusulat. I thank you sir starst muaaah :*

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starst1949
September 13, 2017 (11 months ago)

yes  you seem to be  not only  funny  but one who is honest to herself.  
Now, more tsinelas story.  hhahahahaha

Yes HudasInChains   , i also remember  reading about your having something to do with said change of title .but the handle then was different.  LOL

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sincereLIAR
September 13, 2017 (11 months ago)

Mismo sir starst :) kaya nga sincere achuchu :p

Ayan kase nagtatago pa amoy na amoy naman din :p @hudas

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socratens
September 13, 2017 (11 months ago)

Nabasa ko na, hehehe... Ayos, masaysayang tsinelas. Hehehe :-)

A wild thing is never sorry

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socratens
September 13, 2017 (11 months ago)

Other than beauty (fats and all, hehe), what really counts is personality. I hope to read the "Tsinelas," is it a poem too?

A wild thing is never sorry

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sincereLIAR
September 13, 2017 (11 months ago)

Sir socratens big word it is "personality" :)

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socratens
September 13, 2017 (11 months ago)

Other than beauty (fats and all, hehe), what really counts is personality. I hope to read the "Tsinelas," is it a poem too?

A wild thing is never sorry

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gary_lising
September 18, 2017 (11 months ago)

wow! i miss your poem big time soc! glad you found again your pen😁   to answer your question .. i have an extra woe man .. ;)

life is beautiful!!

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socratens
September 19, 2017 (11 months ago)

That extra "woe" should be changed to extra "awe" para mas masaya, hehehe ;)

A wild thing is never sorry

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