"Dyuskupu, ang habaaa!"

Brain freeze si Kukay. Tanging yung linyang yun lang ang nagregister sa utak niya. Pero naheightened naman ang senses niya. Ang amoy, ang texture, ang size, ramdam na ramdam niya na naglalaro pa rin sa pisngi niya.

Gustong-gusto na niyang ilabas ang dila at lawayan ang ulo ng makulit na titi. Pero sa kabila ng labo-labong pakiramdam, nangingibabaw ang pagtataka. Bakit parang ayaw makisama ng dila niya sa isip niya. Nagka-lock jaw na ba siya dahil sa nerbiyos?

Hinawakan niya ang titi. Naka-steady lang ang kanyang kamay. Tiningala ang lalake.

"Puwede bang kayo muna ni Mau?"

"Sure. Come here Kukay. I want you to sit beside us. Watch us pleasure each other."


Binitiwan niya ang hawak at nagpahila dito sa gilid ng kama. Nakahiga na si Mau. Binitiwan ni Levi ang kamay niya at padapang lumapit kay Mau. Walang sabi-sabi, isinubsob nito ang mukha sa pagitan ng hita ng babae. Halos sabay umangat ang balakang ni Mau sa pagbuka naman ng bibig ni Kukay. Kitang kita niya kung pano lapain ni Levi ang kapirasong karne ng kaibigan niya.

Humahalinghing na parang umiiyak si Mau sa sarap. Levi is one hungry beast. Lapa. Laplap. Ngasab. Himod. Nauubusan ng hangin ang babae sa ipinararanas nito sa kanya.

"Nakuppp Leviiii!!!"

Napasigaw si Mau sa magkahalong kirot at sarap ng kagatin nito ang kanyang mani. Pagkatapos ay sinupsop. Dinilaan. At kinagat ulit.

"Tangina Levi!!!"

Hindi kinaya ng babae ang sarap, sumabog ang unang orgasmo.

Sa dila at bibig pa lang ni Levi, umakyat na si Mau sa langit.

Napatayo si Kukay. Nag-iinit ang buong katawan niya. Pumasok siya sa banyo at doon naghubad ng jeans at simpleng sport shirt na suot niya. Isinunod niya ang bra at bikini. Sinuot ang shower cap at tumapat sa shower.

Hinawakan niya ang sarili. Ang triyangulo sa pagitan ng kanyang mga hita. Ramdam pa rin niya ang init. At alam niya hindi tubig ang makakapagpahupa nito.

Paglabas niya sa banyo, nasa ibabaw si Mau, kinakabayo ang katalik. Napangiwi siya ng hampas-hampasin ni Levi sa puwitan ang kaibigan. Lumalatay ang kamay. Pero rinig niya ang boses ni Mau, nagmamakaawa.

"Leviii please, spank mo more! Make me cum! Make me cum!"

Nakabalot ng tuwalya, lumapit siya sa dalawa. Binitiwan ni Levi ang balakang ni Mau. Umupo ito habang nakatuwid ang mga binti at nasa ibabaw pa rin ang babae. Hinila ni Levi ang braso ni Kukay. Lumapat ang suso niya sa likod ni Mau. Hinila ni Levi patalikod ang buhok niya at pagahamang dinilaan ang leeg niya. Gumapang ang kiliti pababa.

Umalis si Mau sa ibabaw ni Levi at humiga katabi nito. Ihiniga naman siya ng lalake. Naramdaman niya ang kamay ni Mau na humila sa isang braso niya. Si Levi naman ay pinaliguan ng laway ang kanyang tenga.

"Kukayyy, lamasin mo ang suso ko pleaseee."

Hindi siya sumagot. Pero nilaro niya ng daliri ang tuktok ng suso nito. Pinaikot niya sa kanyang mga daliri. Habang umiikot sa kabuuan ng dibdib ang kanyang buong palad.

Malambot. Masarap palang paglaruan ang suso. Hindi niya kasi nakagawiang paglaruan ang sariling katawan.

Napatigil sandali ang ginagawa niya ng maramdamang gumapang mula sa tenga niya papunta sa suso ang labi ni Levi. Hindi niya napigilan ang umungol.

Tamang libog na rin si Kukay, pero ramdam pa rin niya ang ilang sa ginagawa ng lalake. Alam niya hindi siya papasang centerfold ng men's mag, ipinanganak siyang magkagalit ang dalawang bundok niya, parehas nakapaling, wala tuloy siya cleavage. At last time nagtimbang siya, she's 15 pounds overweight.

Pero madalas sabihin sa opisina na nakakainggit ang balakang niya. Siguro nga. Kasi ramdam niya ang kamay ni Levi na taas baba dito habang dinidilaan ang kanyang suso.

Pero maya-maya lang ramdam niya gumapang pababa si Levi. Napigil ang hininga niya ng dumampi sa hiyas niya ang dila nito.

Ramdam na ramdam niya ang init. Kumakalikot sa loob niya. Sumusungkal. Pumipitik. Ramdm niya din ang mga daliring lumalapirot sa kanyang tinggil.

Sinakop din ng kamay ni Mau ang kanyang dibdib. Nilaro ang utong niya. Habang humahaplos sa kanyang tiyan pababa sa puson. Napaungol siya sa sarap na nararamdaman.

Masarap. Ramdam niya. Pero bakit ganon? Kulang. Hanggang puson lang ang init, kahit katiting na ningas hindi umabot sa puso.

Napaliyad siya ng hinithit ni Levi ang kanyang tinggil. Pero sa kabila ng libog, pinigilan niya ito, hinawakan niya sa magkabilang pisngi. Tiningnan siya nito. Maging si Mau ay tumigil sa ginagawang paglalaro sa kanyang suso.

"Fuck her again."

Levi and Mau didn't say anything. They understood.

Pagkatapos ay tumayo siya. Hinagilap ang tuwalya at binalot ang katawan. Dinampot niya ang cellphone. Nasa linya pa rin si Kulas. Pumasok siya sa banyo.

"Hello Key?"

"Key! Tapos na kayo?"

Mahina ang boses ng nobyo. Malungkot. Ramdam niya ang pagbuhos ng emosyon. Alam niya, mali ang relasyon nila. Pero hinding-hindi niya ituturing na mali ang kanilang nararamdaman.

At hindi na niya dadagdagan pa ang mali sa kung ano mang meron sila.

"Key..."

"Key, ok lang. Alam ko galit ka eh. At ako rin ang nagtulak sayo para subukan ang ganyan. Sobrang nakakalibog ka kasi Key. Gusto kong ipagmalaki sa ibang lalake kung gano ka kasarap. Akala ko wala ng mas nakakalibog pa kundi makita kang kinakantot ng iba."

"Key..."

"Pero kanina, nung sinabi mong itutuloy mo at makinig na lang ako, gusto kong suntukin ang sarili ko. Naisip ko anong klaseng gago ako."

"Key..."

"It's ok key, no need to say anything. Pero una at huli na yan key. Akin ka lang. Hinding hindi ko na hahayaang umabot pa tayo ulit sa ganyan."

"Key..."

"Listen key, I know I should tell you this personally, but I guess there's no better time than now. My wife and I, we are separating. Andito kami sa Batangas, sa bahay ng mga magulang niya kasi gusto niyang ipaalam ng maayos."

"Key!"

"Let me finish key. She admitted she's fallen out of love. Kahit yung mga bibihirang pagkakataon na sinusubukan namin to make love, hindi niya magawa kasi pakiramdam daw niya, hindi ako ang pinagtataksilan niya but her lover. And I totally relate key."

"Key.."

"We are filing an annulment key. It will take time. But I'm willing to wait so I can make things right for us key. Are you with me?"

Umiiyak na si Kukay. Sinubukan niyang magsalita pero pumiyok ang boses niya.

"Key, bago ka pa dumating, ilang pekpek na din ang dinilaan ko at tinikman. Sabi ko pare-pareho lang naman ang lasa. Ang amoy. Ang sarap. Nagtataka ako bakit nung nakilala kita, bakit iba ang sarap pag ikaw ang kinakain ko. Pag ikaw ang kinakantot ko."

"Key, wala...walang nangyari sa amin. He...he...ate me, and it was good key...but I was waiting to feel the warmth I feel everytime you do it, and there was nothing."

"Key?"

"Dialog ko yan key eh hahahaha. I love you keykey. Ikaw lang."

"No more threesome?"

"No more threesome. Just me and you."


"I love you key. Wait for me key. Just wait for me."

"I will key. And I know you won't take long.

The End.

A/N: Finally! This last part has tested my patience to the hilt...

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BellaVictoria
January 7, 2016 (2 years ago)

Short and sweet. And even though naghahanap ako ng mas marami pang eksena in writing, yung part na ako na ang bahalang gumawa ng sarili kong kwento kung ano ang nangyari sa ending makes it exciting and interesting.

At Ate Sam, saan ko mahahanap si Levi? Pakisabi may kapirasong laman din na naghihintay sa kanya dito sa SG :D

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somebodyuused2know
January 7, 2016 (2 years ago)

Bell putolll hahaha. Kanina pa kong umaga naiiyak. Countless drafts saved and for some reason di masave ang full draft. Need to request to have this placed on hold.

Salamat sa comment. Ulitin mo na lang hahaha. Muahs!

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BellaVictoria
January 7, 2016 (2 years ago)

Hahahaha! Akala ko deliberate :) sige lang, hihintayin ko yung full. Magpapaka zoned out muna ulit ako.

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BellaVictoria
January 7, 2016 (2 years ago)

Whew! Siguro, screwed lang din minsan ang pag-iisip ko. To be honest, di ko ineexpect yung twist na yun. And like I said earlier, akala ko deliberate na parang "make your own ending".

Sa isip ko, natuloy ang threesome; Dahil wala namang ibang dapat na magpa experience sa kanya nun kundi si Mau whom Kukay trusts deeply. And sa isip ko rin, naulit pa with Kulas naman. But it was a good ending, superb actually. And sa part na may legal separation thing, medyo (as in medyo lang) naka relate ako.

Virtual hugs and kisses, Ate Sam :)

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somebodyuused2know
January 8, 2016 (2 years ago)

My dear Bell,

Glad I have found a smart and beautiful virtual younger sister.

Love,

Ate Sam

P.S. Tamad magcheck ng inbox ang lola, ipagpapasensha na ha. :-D

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wickd.witz
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January 7, 2016 (2 years ago)

Yun ! The End na din sa wakas FFL. Babasahin ko na.

THE FACT THAT THERE IS A HIGHWAY TO HELL BUT ONLY A STAIRWAY TO HEAVEN, SAYS A LOT ABOUT THE ANTICIPATED TRAFFIC NUMBERS.

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somebodyuused2know
January 7, 2016 (2 years ago)

Wahhh di pa rin pala deleted! Nirequest ko na for deletion eh. Pano ba ihold to?

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wickd.witz
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January 7, 2016 (2 years ago)

hold ? pwede volunteer?

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somebodyuused2know
January 7, 2016 (2 years ago)

Baliw mo. Walang admin huhu. Tama na muna sa comment. Hahaba ang thread walang sense yung wento hahaha.

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wickd.witz
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January 7, 2016 (2 years ago)

anong "hold" ba?! Eh gusto ko mag comment eh  :D

... kidding ... Will be reading your masterpieces soon boss... In exchange for the rhum and smoke that is.

At your expense boss.

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somebodyuused2know
January 8, 2016 (2 years ago)

Rhum...tama na gin tonic. At smoke, you want weed? Lol. You are always wasted ffl. Doesn't matter thou, I'm stuck with our friendship, don't have much of a choice eh. :-D

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starst1949
January 7, 2016 (2 years ago)

Some will find it somewhat bitin,  but for me, I like the not so ordinary ending. It is more exciting and stimulating. Iba ang impact from the traditional ending.

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starst1949
January 7, 2016 (2 years ago)

Sige nga dugtong mo yun kaputol. Inisip ko na tapos na at naexperience na nya threesome and that was all that mattered.:-)

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somebodyuused2know
January 7, 2016 (2 years ago)

Lolo I'm trying to post the missing part lo. Ayaw talaga. :-(

No lo, the essence of the whole threesome was missing. Andun sa missing part eh.

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BellaVictoria
January 7, 2016 (2 years ago)

At birthday mo pala! Happy Beerday, Starst!

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starst1949
January 8, 2016 (2 years ago)

Thanks Bella.. Bukas yun. Invited kayo lahat sa Quiapo

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somebodyuused2know
January 8, 2016 (2 years ago)

Bwahahahaha!

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somebodyuused2know
January 8, 2016 (2 years ago)

Kalain mo sa sobrang inis ko na kagabi kasi di ko talaga masave ng buo, redundant to the highest level na pala ako sa reply ko dito hahaha.

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somebodyuused2know
January 7, 2016 (2 years ago)

FINALLY!  Na-edit din!

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wickd.witz
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January 7, 2016 (2 years ago)

ang alin kasi FFL ang na-edit ? :D

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somebodyuused2know
January 7, 2016 (2 years ago)

Kasi nga po putol yung napost. At hindi ko ma-edit. Dunno if it was my data connection, my cp, or an issue with the site itself. Pero ok na. Kaya basahin mo na hehehe.

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January 7, 2016 (2 years ago)

Binasa ko na yung kay Ace .. bukas basahin ko to yung sayo FFL.. Dami kasi arte .. may (?) pa sa title nalalaman :D ... I'm sooo drunk and wasted FFL. Bukas ulit..

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Regalia
January 7, 2016 (2 years ago)

Ah kaya pala parang putol at super duper bitin kagabi hindi pa tapos ang story, buti na lang at okay na.  

Unexpected - I never thought na ang Batanggas trip ni Kulas ay magiging isang important plot twist. Buong akala ko magiging bigay na bigay si Kukay sa trisam with Mau and Levi.

Heartwarming - Yung pagmamahalan ni Kulas at Kukay. Tama, mas mahalaga ang love. Mas masarap ang lovemaking.

Maraming salamat sa story Sam :))

More! More!

Certified Daydreamer

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somebodyuused2know
January 8, 2016 (2 years ago)

Thanksss Reg!

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inang.grasya
January 7, 2016 (2 years ago)

Ayos! Ito na ang iniiyakan dahil 100 times ang pag edit. Bilib ako sa patience mo sissy. Kung ako yan tinapon ko n ang cp, nawala pa ang flow of thoughts.

Masarap talaga ang gerger kung may feelings involved. Bigay todo si Mau kay Levi pero hanggsng puson lang pagdating kay Kukay. Hindi umabot sa puso.

Carino brutal si Levi ah.

Teka bakit legal separation lang ipafile ng mag asawa? Annulment na para pwede sila pakasal. Hehehehe

Amazona kung tagurian pero malambing naman.

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somebodyuused2know
January 7, 2016 (2 years ago)

Sissy hahaha, even before nabasa ko ang comment mo, yung viber message ni lola Midz, about unres' take. At dun ko lang narealize yung mali. Got it changed, then eto nga, yung comment mo. Salamat sa free legal advice.

At oo, sukdulang pikon na pikon na ako, tyinagaan ko. Yung ending na ito kasi ang isang bagay  na hanggang ilusyon na lang talaga mangyayari kung sa aking buhay ia-apply lols.

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lexine00
January 7, 2016 (2 years ago)

hang-ganda, hang-ganda ganda tulad ni miss author hang-ganda.its like an ordinary erotic story my romance at my lesson.
thank you sa ud at sa pagtatapos ng story niyo po. You didn't leave us hanging until the end.
God bless po!

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lexine00
January 7, 2016 (2 years ago)

*it's not*..

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somebodyuused2know
January 8, 2016 (2 years ago)

Hi Lexine, thanksss muchs!

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Bebeko
January 7, 2016 (2 years ago)

The result of steadfastness in achieving the final cut. I enjoyed the flow of scenes that happened inside the steamy room. The twist was finely crafted and used words that can moist your eyes that speaks about love over lust. Not too long to bore me and I guess I'm just a sucker for short stories, series or not.

Good job!

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somebodyuused2know
January 8, 2016 (2 years ago)

Lo, natapos ko haha, akalain mo! Salamat ng madami ulit.

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Layla-L.
January 7, 2016 (2 years ago)

Love the way it turned out in the end. Kitang kita sa story yung highlights ng bawat character. Not just Keykey na isang curious fellow pagdating sa sexual diviancies, willing to try, tried but found out that its not for her. Kulas to - a cheating husband, na nakahanap ng katapat kay keykey, a man willing to share at first, but mukhang natauhan. Sana he and key would satisfy each other na lang. At least thats the conclusion I deduced based on their phone call convo.

And then, there is Mau - A matured woman who knew what she wants and not afraid to get it, indulge in it and spread the pleasure of the experience with others. A brave woman. Love her character the most. She's the most honest one in this story.

I'd say congratulations for a well written story, but, i'd rather say... MORE like this one.

P.s. - and the pacing was just right. The time lapse between each post was good. Parang nagabang ng good miniseries na hindi naman nainip. (haruuuu, ang habaaaa na pala)

Cogito, ergo, sum.

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Layla-L.
January 7, 2016 (2 years ago)

*Kulas too
And for all the other wrong syntax and spellings... (:D.. my folly) churry for that.

Cogito, ergo, sum.

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somebodyuused2know
January 8, 2016 (2 years ago)

I like your observation on each character. Maraming thank you layla.

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MidLifeCrisis
January 7, 2016 (2 years ago)

Sistah, pacomment bago ako lumarga sa opisina.

Ang sarap ng cover pic! Hahaha ta*na namiss ko both! Pero di anal ha? Yan pa ang gusto kong gawin one of these effing days ;)

O sya bukas na ako magmamarathon nito. Tong trabaho talaga istorbo sa social life :D

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somebodyuused2know
January 8, 2016 (2 years ago)

Ikaw lang at walang iba ang nagkocomment na kahit di pa nababasa sissy, lol. Salamat sa abala, ako naka-loa pa kaya tambay mode on hehe.

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sincereLIAR
January 7, 2016 (2 years ago)

*hikbi grabe ganda ng ending naiyak ako 😭 😍 👏👏👏👏👏

Thank you somebody for sharing a beautiful story 💜💜💜

#mayforever

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somebodyuused2know
January 8, 2016 (2 years ago)

SL, hugs! Yup, kahit marami kokontra, sama tayo sa paniniwala na may forever! (Pero dati duda din ako kung meron nga. :-D)

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dina76
January 7, 2016 (2 years ago)

Sarap ng kainan scene hehe. Like. Basta galing sayo Sis, alam ng malupet. Salamat sa mga kwento mo at sa mga darating pa.

I don't think that you even realize the joy that you make me feel when I'm inside your universe.

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somebodyuused2know
January 8, 2016 (2 years ago)

Sissy masarap magpakain di ba? Hahaha. Salamuch din sa palaging pagdaan sa mga wento ko sis!

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antoinette
January 8, 2016 (2 years ago)

Ganda! Nakakaluha talaga yong kwento mo sam. lagi itong may puso. sayang wala talagang threesome. i like the happy ending though. sana ganun para walang ibang pusong nasasaktan.

some lines caught my attention...
Yong feeling mo pinagtaksilan mo sya pag iba katalik mo,   ibig sabihin ba nun sya mahal mo?

what if pag sya naman katalik mo feeling mo pinagtaksilan mo rin yong isa. waaah hope things are as simple as the happy ending in this story

i wanna run to you... ohhhh

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somebodyuused2know
January 8, 2016 (2 years ago)

Tonet, glad I did not disappoint you hehe.

Nalito ako sa tanong mo, I'll presume you were talking about "your" lover. Kung halimbawa ba, I am married or committed with someone then I'm having an affair outside marriage, do I love my lover if I feel like cheating on him whenever I make love with my husband?  Yes. There could be no other logical reason there.

Salamat ulit Tonet, your time is much appreciated.

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clayde
January 8, 2016 (2 years ago)

ang galing po ng story :) keep it up

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somebodyuused2know
January 8, 2016 (2 years ago)

Clayde, maraming salamat!

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sushicat009
January 8, 2016 (2 years ago)

Good work sis

キミは幸せでしたか? とても幸せでした。

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somebodyuused2know
January 8, 2016 (2 years ago)

Thanks much sushi!

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candace
January 8, 2016 (2 years ago)

Ay tengene, ang touching ng finale. I can totally see your personal views on these matters, lalo na yung hindi naganap ang supposedly threesome. I love the ending, Mommy. :)

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somebodyuused2know
January 8, 2016 (2 years ago)

Hahaha, hush bebe, don't drop too many hints about momsie's personality, para kang si inang eh hahahaha.

Thank you beh, so glad you liked it. Mmuahs!

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candace
January 8, 2016 (2 years ago)

Hahahahaha. First time ko kayang minention yan. Kasi naman, ah basta. I was pleased by the ending, thank you!

Next story na agad. :D

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somebodyuused2know
January 8, 2016 (2 years ago)

Hahaha. Oo na nga po, may natumbok ka lang kasi. Dami ko tawa sayo bata ka!

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shobe.sheen
January 8, 2016 (2 years ago)

I've just finished reading it in it's entirety, laomoms. Mamaya hapon pa kasi class ko. :)

I love this line, "Alam niya, mali ang relasyon nila. Pero hinding-hindi niya ituturing na mali ang nararamdaman nila." May kurot lang. Haha.

I also love how the story turned out, although  I can't help but be bugged by the idea of the success or failure of Kulas' and his wife's annulment. I just can't see any viable ground for it to succeed, so kawawa naman si Kukay. :(

But anyhoooooooo, I love it, laomoms. ;)

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somebodyuused2know
January 8, 2016 (2 years ago)

Hahaha, the lawyer in you just cant resist. Admittedly, shob, I did not dwell on the grounds for annulment, letting the readers deal with the questions. In my very limited knowledge of our laws , I did not dare inject any more pretexts leading to Kulas' and wife's separation, it was just the ever reliable "up to the readers"  thingie that I had in mind in that particular aspect. :-D

Gawan mo kaya ng wento si Kulas at si wifey bunso  so we can establish more viable grounds for annulment other than infidelity. :-D  

Muahs!

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antoinette
January 8, 2016 (2 years ago)

My cousin got annulment on the ground of 'presumption of death'.  the guy was living with her the whole time of the annulment case and need not appear in court. Both became free in 6 months. They dont have any kids.  Just sharing.

i wanna run to you... ohhhh

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somebodyuused2know
January 8, 2016 (2 years ago)

Thanks Tonet. Truth be told, no kids were ever mentioned here purposely due to the plot twist I had in mind. I just thought, no kids, less complicated, easier to build up the annulment part. :-D

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shobe.sheen
January 9, 2016 (2 years ago)

Hmmmmm interesting. I'm considering that moms! :D

I'll work on that spin-off this summer along with my pending stories. Hahaha :)) Mwah!

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anastasiagrey
January 8, 2016 (2 years ago)

May kurot ung ending, ung tatagos tlg. :) good job :)

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somebodyuused2know
January 8, 2016 (2 years ago)

Salamat sa pagdaan ana.

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tarantula_0913
January 8, 2016 (2 years ago)

nice one

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somebodyuused2know
January 8, 2016 (2 years ago)

Appreciate the comment tarantula. :-)

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MidLifeCrisis
January 9, 2016 (2 years ago)

And I soooo loveeee how the story ends! May kurot at may sundot. Parang kilala ko si Kukz ah hahaha! At ang balakang na wala ako sows! Penge konti nyan, Kukz :D

Pero yeah totoo yan, kapag wala kang naramdaman for a guy, iba talaga ang feeling kaya nga puro nalang tayo salita kasi kapag andun na talaga ang offer may hinahanap tayong ibang kiliti eh.

O dba? Sabi ko i-marathon ko this weekend ang kwento mo sistah. At eto talaga ang inuna kong basahing kwento.

Saludo! As always muahhh!

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somebodyuused2know
January 9, 2016 (2 years ago)

Lolaaa hahaha, sabi ni inang at Candace para daw kilala nila si Kukz, ikaw din parang kilala mo? Buti pa kayo, aba, wala talaga ako maisip na kakilalang kapareho ni Kukay eh. :-D

Salamuch sa pagbasa lola. Namimiss na namin ang mga walang katulad mong hirit sa comments. Abala kasi work mo talaga. Buti si inang nakakadaan pa. Mmuahs!

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wickd.witz
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January 14, 2016 (2 years ago)

:D Hooooooooooooooooooooy !  I like it ! ... pero.. di ikaw to FFL... pero andun pa din yung "ikaw"
1. "Lockjaw" ... shit this... :D
2. "Hinawakan niya ang sarili. Ang triyangulo sa pagitan ng kanyang mga hita. " ... huwat ! ayus!
3. "..hinithit ni Levi ang kanyang tinggil" ... hithit ha.. :D
4. ".. lumalapirot sa kanyang tinggil..." .. highlight "lapirot sh-it

FFL naman ! Hehehehe!

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somebodyuused2know
January 24, 2016 (2 years ago)

Now ko lang nasagot to FFL. Hindi pa rin ba ako ito?  Hinahanap mo ang dating writing style ko? Flattered that you really like those old stories I wrote wang, but I'd like to believe I have improved for the better,having tried to come up with something out of my comfort zone.

Salamat ng marami sa pagbasa kasi alam kong hindi mo peg mga series.

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wickd.witz
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January 24, 2016 (2 years ago)

... or maybe need ko din lawakan ang mga binabasa ko para maka-adjust ako sa transition ng writing prowess mo FFL..

In time cguro maa-appreciate ko din. Napag-iwanan na nga cguro ako. Hahahaha !

Nag-uumpisa na ako magbasa ng series. Makakalimutin ako sa details kaya inaantay ko na lang matapos. Or maybe read the 1st installment then if it piqued my interest, I'd add it sa Favorites and maybe... just maybe read it pag napansin ko tapos na .. If di interesting, dedma-comatose.

Welcome some !

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