Take Me To You

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Date: December 5, 2017 (8 months ago)



Do not take me to the make-believe paradise
Where happiness is fleeting and made up of unforgiving lies
Do not give in to insincere promises of just bliss
We will only end up in maudlin self-pity, I tell you this

Do not take me high up to the clouds
Only to be brought back down to the ground
Our fall will be inevitable as clouds turn into rain
The earth will laugh from our unsettling cries of pain

Do not take me to the stars nor the moon
There, where no trees or grass, not even flowers bloom
They only twinkle and shine in mere pretense
Luring you to their dark blanket of deafening silence

Instead, take me to the whirling wonders of your dreams
Sing to me about your cherished novels and films
Free the spirit imprisoned behind your facade and disguise
Even just a glimpse of your truth for now will suffice

Take me to the untold stories of your troubled mind
My grip will not loosen whatever fiasco I may find
Pull me down to the deepest parts of your sea of thoughts
Walk me through the frontiers of the scars from the battles you've fought

Take me to the complexity of the depths of your soul
Let my senses be kissed and needled by your crystals of amphibole
Uncover the contours of your anguish and sorrow
Allow me to be your solace and hold you till it be morrow

Take me to the corners of your skin where no one ha...

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Calooh09
December 5, 2017 (8 months ago)

That was beautiful, nice work.

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singingintherain
December 5, 2017 (8 months ago)

Why, thank you. ☺️

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xmarco
December 5, 2017 (8 months ago)

:clap:

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unresponsive
December 5, 2017 (8 months ago)

Let me take you to a place that is scary
Where monsters are perceived as a fairy
Open your eyes as i take you to a place where everything is colorful
Don't be afraid everything will be wonderful

Take my hand and let me guide you through this labyrinth of darkness and despair
Allow me to show you that this world is a breathe of fresh air
Here you must not show you are meek nor shy
I will promise you will never cry

Allow me through your walls and barriers of fear
I promise you, i will be sincere
Let me bare to you my soul as a reassurance of my promise to you

I was born a god.. raised as a king.. i bow down to no one..

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singingintherain
December 6, 2017 (8 months ago)

Masyado mo ginagalinga beshie 😂 but

I am not afraid
and I don’t need everything to be wonderful
I am craving to taste the truth
no matter how ungentle or awful
I do not need to be promised that no tears would fall
Because after all,
If I don’t show emotions,
how can I let anyone through my wall?

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unresponsive
December 6, 2017 (8 months ago)

Allow me to strip down your walls as i show you my truth
A raw truth i have feared to show a soul..
A truth i have stopped believing for so long..
The one thing that turns my logic and rationality upside down..

I was born a god.. raised as a king.. i bow down to no one..

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angeleyes.sky
December 5, 2017 (8 months ago)

I love it sis

😇

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owlzen
December 5, 2017 (8 months ago)

naks...nice piece my lady :)

nocturnal coffee...

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Iammhi35
December 6, 2017 (8 months ago)

Nice.....

Mhi35

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starst1949
December 6, 2017 (8 months ago)

beautiful...one of the best poems here.  

you should be writing more.

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singingintherain
December 6, 2017 (8 months ago)

I was actually reluctant to post this poem here because it’s my first try in writing one and it might not be good enough but your comment is very encouraging. Thank you, kind sir! ❤️

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starst1949
December 10, 2017 (8 months ago)

you and your poem are very much welcome

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lightnhue
December 6, 2017 (8 months ago)

oh wow how come it’s the first time I see this,
I never expect from you that on some kind of bliss.
a gorgeous lady who is more than lovely,
her heart is singing in such melody.

hey sweet girl that I always see in the lobby room,
would he be the one your future groom?
whatever the case just enjoy what's right now,
show it to the world and take a bow.

This piece of your is so frieking awesome,
Can't wait the next for about to come.
We got your back and always feel free,
From an admiring reader someone like me.

causey

every light eventually will become a shadow

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singingintherain
December 7, 2017 (8 months ago)

Through your simple and kind words, young lady,
You have filled a beginner’s heart with glee
I have read your marvelous compositions as well
I am an admirer and Im flattered you’ve find mine swell

❤️

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DadiNoli
July 24, 2018 (25 days ago)

wow! it rhymes!

carpe diem!

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gitrog
December 7, 2017 (8 months ago)

di naintindihan ng frog dugo ilong

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singingintherain
December 7, 2017 (8 months ago)

Oh no. Come here, froggy. Explain ko sa’yo 😂

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ChardCute
December 7, 2017 (8 months ago)

A very nice piece..

One way to forget about PAIN is to do something you will be in, completely..

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singingintherain
December 7, 2017 (8 months ago)

Gracias ❤️

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ladyfaceboy
December 7, 2017 (8 months ago)

wb.and nice poem!

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sexymom07
December 7, 2017 (8 months ago)

Nice pretty lady...

Im a sweet person n sincere to be ur real friends....

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singingintherain
January 17, 2018 (7 months ago)

Thank you momma 😘

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BoboyAlega
December 11, 2017 (8 months ago)

Isang pambihirang likha.
Nagiiwan ng malikmata sa aking balintataw ang mga salitang iyong binitawan.
+1 Neko

Carpe Diem

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User Not Found
January 17, 2018 (7 months ago)

wow !

Let my senses be kissed and needled by your crystals of amphibole

The F is amphibole ?

Maganda yung kalahatan. Wow !

"Virtual is like everything else. Assume nothing. Only then can you truly see what you're dealing with." - Quellcrist Falconer , Altered Carbon

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singingintherain
January 17, 2018 (7 months ago)

Bato. Panghilod, ganon. Hahahahahahaha char
Thank you pa-kiss mwa

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