My First Time

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Story: True Story, Taglish · Categories: Erotic Couplings, Romance, One Night Stand · Tags:
Date: November 28, 2017 (8 months ago)


Hey guys! This is my first story please bear with me!

One: flight

Im Jana, this happened for real and i will never forget this....

"Ohh......im so drunk, my head hurts shit!" I cursed while holding mtpy head and massaging it softly,

"JANA!!!! COME DOWN RIGHT NOW!" My mom's loud voice boomed my whole room, i hurriedly ran to the bathroom and fixed myself,

"Mom! Im coming! Waitt!!" I shouted

My mom is strict and she has the same attitude with my older sister, Jamilla, My bitxpch sister, i ran down the stairs and saw a couple kissing torridly, watching their salivas pouring down their necks,oh god

"Get a room you guys!!" I shouted at them that caused them to flinch, and i received daggers from her, i mean a glare from my bitch sister

"Oh i think baby sis is jealous, come on baby kiss me" she taunted him but i didnt mind them and carry on walking, to the kitchen to eat breakfast

"Young lady! You are drunk again?! You are wasting our money! Buti pa ate mo mas matino sayo!" She shouted and gripped my wrist tightly

"Mom! Ouch!" I screamed in pain but she slapped me

"You never learned! You just go and get wasted! Whats happening to you?! Nasan na yung anak na pinalaki ko?!" She said and cried and ran upstairs

I smiled bitterly for making my own mother cry.....

"You bitch! How dare you make mommy cry!" She acted as if shes an angel, she gripped my hair and pulled it with all the force she had, i think my hair and my head is going to tear apart

"Jamilla baby, stop now, thats enough" Richard said and pulled her away from me

See? They are the same? Hah! They are demons!

"Jamilla! Joana! What is happening here?!" My dad jolted inside and went to my side to carress my head

My dad, the only angel left to me.....the only family who matters to me

"Daddy! She made mommy cry!" She said and acted nice again, what a bitch

She walked to mom's side and hugged her, fucking bitch

"Is that true Joana? Jana *sigh* i have no choice but this is your mother's choice" he teary eyed said...

Wait what's going on?!

"But dad! Mom hitted me first!" I showed him my swollen cheek and my bruised wrist

He looked surprised but he sighed again and nodded

"Pack your things Joana, you're flying to philippines" dad said and turned around to walk away

I was too astonished to his manner of speaking, no! I cant let that demon take over their attention, i cant.....

"Dad no! This is not happening right?" I asked pleading
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palaiyouth
November 28, 2017 (8 months ago)

Otor tuloy mo lang ang ganda ng umpisa!

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starst1949
November 28, 2017 (8 months ago)

nice start for a first timer.   just a few editing of typos and grammar. notably the  present and past tenses. and it will be ok.

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PioloAzkal
November 28, 2017 (8 months ago)

When i open fss, other than browsing on the public chats and who are online at the moment (because many are also invi), i also look on the stories currently being read. More often, i don't have the time to read but at least i look on the recent posted stories and automatically look also who the authors are.

The title "My First Time" is common title being used in erotic stories. But what caught my attention is the name of the author "JoanaMarie" - the new fss member that i was chatting with a few hours ago, and the new member also who was put on the hot seat by the fss guys yesterday afternoon.

The twist for me in this story is that, i happen to chance upon this afternoon the popping up to the fss chatroom of Jamilla (JoanaMarie's older sister), a character in this story.  From my understanding, Jamilla logged to fss to check if her baby sister is in the room, when at that time Jana is.

The sisters got into some verbal commotion in the chatroom and got witnessed by some...

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JoanaMarie
December 1, 2017 (8 months ago)

Awww. You care.....thanks by the way

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PioloAzkal
November 28, 2017 (8 months ago)

...got witnessed by some fss regular chatters like ms Akela who was i think got curious or maybe got irked on what's going on between sisters Joana and Jamilla. Some elder chatters have also given their unsolicited advice on the chatroom. I didn't exactly caught the blow by blow account, because i was also into email reading at that time. My attention was caught lang by that unusual chat exchanges by the siblings.

From my understanding the younger Jana, retreated from the chatroom to halt the brewing word war against her ate Jamilla, which i think is a good move to difuse the tension between them.

I was just reading then and did not participate in the chatroom chats (which i usually do naman).  And when Jamilla logged off from fss, Jana resurfaced and saw her name among the active list again. Maybe still catching her breath, i didn't see her chatting on the public chat then. At that point, i tried to ask from Jana (whis) what was that earlier commotion all about. Well, ...

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PioloAzkal
November 28, 2017 (8 months ago)

.... Well, what happened in the chatroom might only be the tip of the iceberg, based on this JoanaMarie's story. In the chatroom, it was only Jamilla vs Jana, but in the story, mom is another main protagonist.  And all three ladies are all vying for the attention and love of dad.

The chatroom, particularly the story scenes are worthy of an MMK story.  But i'm not really here for the theatricals, but more on the questions and panghihinayang on why these acts (verbal and physical) have to happen on what seems an ideal family - a father, a mother and two educated sisters (and most likely good looking too)...ask the fss guys maybe...hehehe.

I don't know if there will be a continuation for this story of JoanaMarie, or there will be a big twist to happen in its continuation. Hindi po namin napag-usapan yun kanina, and i don't even know that she'll come up with this story a few hours lang after we chat.

I salute you mam Jana for coming up with this story of yours in such a very short...

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PioloAzkal
November 28, 2017 (8 months ago)

...short period of time, and you surprised me man.  Buti na lang, sumilip ulit ako sa fss after my emails and saw this post by JoanaMarie.  If i did not witness that chatroom commotion between the sisters, you will not definitely see me writing what seems to be the longest comment posted here in FSS...possibly sort of an FSS record for a long comment that is even longer than the story itself...hehehe.

I know the anguish that you have gone through or maybe still going through until now, but you can only hope and pray that things will all be ironed out between you and your beloved family.  

May you enjoy your remaining days in Pinas and bring with you there sa malayo some fond memories you had here... kasama na rin siguro ang very short fss memories...hehehe.

Ingat ka na lang on your way back there, and hope to still chat with you again, if circumstances permit.  God bless...

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JoanaMarie
December 1, 2017 (8 months ago)

Thanks, ill miss you VERY stay safe😊

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Bebeko
November 28, 2017 (8 months ago)

Please continue writing. Good luck.

Good job!

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rednaxel947
November 28, 2017 (8 months ago)

Keep intouch jana. Goodluck in travelling back to jersey city.hoping u have time visiting here.just communicate me at the mailbox.thanx for replying earlier

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makisig381
November 28, 2017 (8 months ago)

Good start author!

ain't bitter, it's BETTER!

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raystorm711
November 29, 2017 (8 months ago)

Ay english

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SeniorCitizen50
November 29, 2017 (8 months ago)

Hmmmm...A family issue.Lets see if this continues or just ends right here.

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