Layo 2 (LDR 2)

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Poem: Tagalog · Categories: Non-Erotic · Tags: , , , ,
Date: August 14, 2014 (3 years ago)


Nakatingin sa kalangitan,
At umaasa na mapadaan,
Ang bulalakaw na mahingan,
Hari nawa ako'y mapagbigyan.

Ibig ko sanang makasama,
Aking nag-iisang sinisinta.
Na ang layo ay milya milya,
Ngunit sa puso ko nakatira.

Huwag nawang maging balakid,
Ang pagmamahala'y wag mapatid.
Pangakong di makikiapid,
Ito'y dusa lang ang ihahatid.

Onting tiis na lang oh mahal,
Matatapos din ang pagpapagal.
Mawawala din ang sagabal,
Paghihintay di na magtatagal.

Hintayin mo aking pagbalik,
Ako ma'y lubos na nasasabik.
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MidLifeCrisis
August 14, 2014 (3 years ago)

Wow! Ang galing uli :) Pero teka ano ang "pagpapagal"?

And.I.Care.Not.

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LibrongUod
August 15, 2014 (3 years ago)

Paghihirap?

I Master, I Universalize, I Believe.

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somebodyuused2know
August 15, 2014 (3 years ago)

Bakit yung mga best poems in FSS, so far, puro guys ang writers? Ang gagaling, kakabilib.

I'M A NICE PERSON. JUST DON'T PRESS THE BITCH BUTTON.

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User Not Found
August 15, 2014 (3 years ago)

hmmm....

"The erotic is rarely nudity. It is subtle, a feeling, a gesture, mood, a story frozen in the moment that holds you breathless waiting for the next moment. Understand this & you understand erotic."

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User Not Found
August 15, 2014 (3 years ago)

iba ang paraan ng kanilang expression sis, pero iba rin at unique ang isip ng mga kababaihan...

"The erotic is rarely nudity. It is subtle, a feeling, a gesture, mood, a story frozen in the moment that holds you breathless waiting for the next moment. Understand this & you understand erotic."

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darkcipher
August 15, 2014 (3 years ago)

muli po, salamat.

ung kagalakan sa puso ko ay di matatawaran kapag may nakakaappreciate ng mga nasusulat kong tula.

pagpapagal is related to paghihirap o pagpapagod.

mejo capangpangan un.


ummmm. . .may request pa po ba?

pasenxa na kung twing gabi lang ako OL.

pag may gusto po kayong topic, paki comment. subukan ko pong gawan ng tula.

"The character's attitude is more important than plot." - Stephen J. Cannell

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MidLifeCrisis
August 15, 2014 (3 years ago)

Ahhhhh kapampangan pala.... Nakalimutan ko na tuloy yong kapampangan 101 ko ;) a miss danaka lang ata naalala ko :D

Hmmm.... Next request ---- letting go not because you don't love her/him anymore but because he/she is taking you for granted.... Hehe! Walang ibang maisip for now ;)

And.I.Care.Not.

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darkcipher
August 15, 2014 (3 years ago)

cge po.

try ko.

letting go because being taken for granted. . .

challenging dn ah. . .

"The character's attitude is more important than plot." - Stephen J. Cannell

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MidLifeCrisis
August 15, 2014 (3 years ago)

Owrite! Aabangan uli namin ;) Tenk you!

And.I.Care.Not.

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