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Joined: December 22, 2015 (2 years old)
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DulcineaJill
April 10, 2016 (2 years ago)

maraming salamat po sa mga sumubaybay, sa mga komento, sa puna at compliments from readers and admins. Inayos ko po maigi yan bago i-post If ever na may mali pa rin paki PM or i-comment, alin man ,okay lang po sakin, Thank you po,

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MidLifeCrisis
April 10, 2016 (2 years ago)

Indention: Mga 5 spaces from the left ay okay na. Kapag ganyan kalayo from the left end parang galit ka sa spaces :)

Capitalization of ALL first letter ng first word ng sentence. That includes first letter ng first word sa conversation. It's a must.

Avoid ALL CAPS especially kung part ng narration.

Pakiayos and let's see kung ano output kapag nagawa mo na. Thank you.

And.I.Care.Not.

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vruno.marz
April 10, 2016 (2 years ago)

ang ganda ms jill. gawa ka.pa na ganitong tema pa din, isang magandang at highclass na babae at pinagbigyan ang isang pangakaraniwan na juan hehehehe more power

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antoinette
April 10, 2016 (2 years ago)

yes. effective ang story sa pampainit.

i hope nakatulong nga yong pag pa gamit kay warden sa maagang pag laya. may naalala akong ganitong japanese movie i forgot the title.  para di maconsider as traitor si hubby, kusang ibinigay ng asawa yong katawan nya to some government official. i dont know why women would do that. i just dont understand the psychology behind it.

yeah more stories author.

i wanna run to you... ohhhh

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DulcineaJill
April 10, 2016 (2 years ago)

thank you sa compliment mo, nakaka unawa ka ng magandang kwento ,hehe antoinette

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jakeoff
April 10, 2016 (2 years ago)

ang pagmamahal nga naman,,,, congrats otor sa wagas mong puso

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a.-_cessyl999
April 10, 2016 (2 years ago)

Sana sinabi mo sa kanya ang totoo,  tanggapin nya man iyon o hindi, basta maluwag sa dibdib mo.  Ang masaklap nun malaman niya sa iba at makita nya sex video. Binigyan mo lng sya ng dahilan galit at sama ng loob.

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DulcineaJill
April 10, 2016 (2 years ago)

Thank you sa payo.a.-_cessyI999 may action din akong ginawa, pero sakin na yun. I want to make the story Tragic despites of the Hot plot! hehe

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