In Response to a Poem : Love Me Like You Do by sushicat009

November 30, 2015 (1 year ago)
Posted in Poem: English | Categories: Non-Erotic | Tags: , , ,

In Response to http://www.filipinosexstories.com/item/love-me-like-you-do by sushicat009
Got nothing to do kasi lasing. Grammar .. Tenses .. lines used in this poem open to criticism. Thanks.
Special Thanks to NawawalangBata for corrections. and taking the time to read and adjust.
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I have always loved you... and the sweetest lines can never match the love I have for you
I can be just a pauper but with your love I'd be the richest pauper across the land

You'd always be warm on cold nights... this fiery heart that loves you will keep the cold at bay
I have always loved your imperfections... and it's your imperfections that drove me closer to you
I would always see to it that your days with me would be as happy as you expected... as long as you are happy, I'd be as happy as I can be.

I will cook for you and love you for the rest of my mortal life
And will try my best until my very last breath to make you happy and content with what we share.

You can paint my face if that's what you like and it doesn't have to be perfect ..
But I know I will have a vivid memory of your face and I will remember it to the last of my days

If I loved and this is true... there would be but no one except you
If the love we have would b... Read More

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