a sweeter way

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Date: January 29, 2015 (3 years ago)


a sweeter way

a soft caress in my head melted my heart,
a set of fingernails trailing my back is a profound art,
my chest's been pounding in joyous tears,
i'm in your room, while you're in underwears.

oh, what a rattling nerve and dizzying anxiety,
whilst you let me sniff the gusset of your panty,
drooling and ogling , i did not hear what you said,
when you spread your legs, and your back is on your bed.

your hand started kneading something in your underwear,
as i lay watch tongue-hanging in a temperature sear,
a smell of wet pussy carefully cling in the air,
then you howled in ohhs, convulsed in ahhs, ended in shiver.

now you rest in a still, savoring what have been so dear,
when i got up, there's a soaking wet underwear,
i tried to sniff and lick, but you shoo me away,
i think if i'm human, i...

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antoinette
January 29, 2015 (3 years ago)

my dear old friend, so happy to be able to read one of your poems again.

i wanna run to you... ohhhh

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graccubus
January 29, 2015 (3 years ago)

i said to myself,

the first to comment... is the bravest!

i really took care in writing this poem [almost an hour]

becoz i don't want it to be branded as... bestiality...

i forgot the name of the figure of speech giving human qualities to

non-human entities...

i'm glad to find out you're still here...

i still write poem when i find time....

thank you for taking time scratching you k-board/glass pad[tablet]

with an endearing comment...

if you frequent fss...you have less time for sex...unless, you're in it now...

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antoinette
January 29, 2015 (3 years ago)

I too was careful in the comment.. yeah the poem is suggesting to that direction.  It creates vivid picture of what she is doing and you, whoever you choose to be. I still cant get over the art you created, was referring the green cover of that pussy. Whew!  I miss you master graccubus

i wanna run to you... ohhhh

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graccubus
January 29, 2015 (3 years ago)

the former title actually is "key 9" [canine]

i chose to depart from the obvious... to embrace some romance...

and.. yes you zero in "whoever you choose to be"...

and it would seem she finished her daily 'chore.'

but the first person, who is not actually a person,

thinks he could be of help if he is somehow, is in human form.

actually, this is supposed to be a novel... but i can't find time

to write it down at the moment... a rare love story that cannot thrive

here in fss, no less.  the chills crept up to me... spilled over to poem...

omg...

if you frequent fss...you have less time for sex...unless, you're in it now...

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graccubus
January 29, 2015 (3 years ago)

i wonder what happened... the asterisk should be "zero"

completed as "zero in"  meaning direct hit!

if you frequent fss...you have less time for sex...unless, you're in it now...

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graccubus
January 29, 2015 (3 years ago)

i dont know this... i'm in another planet....i tried to

correct the words but it was mess... it acts like i hit a html

code.  sorry...

if you frequent fss...you have less time for sex...unless, you're in it now...

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antoinette
January 29, 2015 (3 years ago)

aha reminding me of my paranoia. Its ok i can understand. If the creative juices are flowing write them all down. Let me read your thoughts don't forget to drop clues along the way.

i wanna run to you... ohhhh

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somebodyuused2know
January 29, 2015 (3 years ago)

My clock says t'was past eleven,
And still my mind won't stop wanderin,
Fin'lly giving up to the cravin,
I visited FSS hopin I'd read somethin
Which would assauge the longin,
Lo and behold, the "name" I have been missin
Was starin out at me, invitin,
And upon reading the last few lines
That's when it hit, friggin stupid me:
Nasa labas pa mag-isa ang aking doggie, si Chokita baby!

Pardon the term, but hell yeah, IDOL, I missed your posts.

I'M A NICE PERSON. JUST DON'T PRESS THE BITCH BUTTON.

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graccubus
January 30, 2015 (3 years ago)

hello...

i'll try to make some more...

my posts now are like nitrates... they are produced only

when lightning strikes...

but it should be a valuable nutrient for life...

if you frequent fss...you have less time for sex...unless, you're in it now...

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LibrongUod
January 29, 2015 (3 years ago)

Indeed, a poet!

I Master, I Universalize, I Believe.

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graccubus
January 30, 2015 (3 years ago)

i'm not used to answering comments...

but, i'm elated, nevertheless...

if you frequent fss...you have less time for sex...unless, you're in it now...

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shobe.sheen
January 30, 2015 (3 years ago)

Hail to The Great Graccubus! Make way for he has resurfaced again! Yey! ^_^

Imperfect understanding is often more dangerous than ignorance.

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graccubus
January 30, 2015 (3 years ago)

you lifted the stake on my chest...

now i arise from the dead...

maybe i need some dirges...

to extract the nail in this casket...

swarming goosebumps slowly creep...

i visit only when you're asleep...

if you frequent fss...you have less time for sex...unless, you're in it now...

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